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1、中考英语书面表达高分突破 一，河南中招英语作文评分标准一，河南中招英语作文评分标准 书书面面表表达达，15分分。考考生生应应根根据据题题目目要要求求，采采用用适适当当的的时时态态、语语态态、句句式式和和词词语语，完完整整、准准确确地地表表达达所所要要求求的的内内容容。分四档评分。分四档评分。第第一一档档：符符合合题题目目要要求求，内内容容完完整整，层层次次结结构构清清晰晰，表表达达清楚，语言无误。清楚，语言无误。13-15分。分。第第二二档档：基基本本符符合合题题目目要要求求，内内容容较较完完整整，层层次次结结构构较较清清晰，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。晰，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。912分
2、。分。第第三三档档：部部分分内内容容符符合合题题目目要要求求，内内容容不不够够完完整整，层层次次结结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。构不够清晰，表达不够清楚，语言有较多错误。4-8分。分。第第四四档档：不不符符合合题题目目要要求求，整整篇篇表表达达不不清清楚楚，或或照照抄抄、拼拼凑几个词语。凑几个词语。0-3分。分。1.1.审题不清审题不清如有一年中考作文要求写如有一年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的一项最喜欢的课外活动课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了偏离了“一项、课外一项、课外活活动动”这一主题这一主题。依据作文的评
3、分原则，若文。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为三四类作文。如何准确，都会被判为三四类作文。中考英语作文常见问题分析 2.拼写问题拼写问题 拼拼写写是是考考生生应应该该具具备备的的最最起起码码的的基基本本功功，但但在在考考生生的的作作文文中中却却经经常常能能发发现现很很多多拼拼写写错错误误。有有拼拼写写错错误误的的作作文文肯肯定定会会被被酌酌情情扣扣分分，一一般般来来说说两两个个错错误误扣扣一一分分，而而且且有有大大量量拼拼写写错错误误存存在在的的作作文文不不仅仅体体现现出出语语言言基基本本功功差差，同同时时
4、也也直直接接影影响响内内容容的的表表达达，通通常会降低作文的档次。常会降低作文的档次。3，语法问题，语法问题 语语法法问问题题主主要要包包括括：名名词词单单复复数数,动动词词的的时时态态与与语语态态以以及及缺缺少少动动词词的的情情况况,形形容容词词和和副副词词的的等等级级形形式式,代代词词、介介词词、数数词词和和冠冠词词的的使使用用,主主谓谓一一致致等等等等方方面面的的错错误误。另另外外,还还有有诸诸多多常常见见的的固固定定句句式式的的错错误误。经经调调查查分分析析,学学生生的的语语法法错错误误主主要要是是受受母母语的负迁移影响。语的负迁移影响。语法问题之语法问题之 缺少动词缺少动词在汉语中没
5、有动词的句子是允许的，但在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但 英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成 如：如：“我累了。我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一 定要加上定要加上be动词，写成：动词，写成：Im tired.误误 I happy I can come to Beijing zoo.正正 I am happy I can come to Beijing zoo.误误 The apples cheap.Ill take some.正正 The apple
6、s are cheap.Ill take some.语法问题之语法问题之 代词的误用代词的误用英英语语中中代代词词的的形形式式很很多多，包包括括主主格格、宾宾格格、物物主主代代词词、反反身身代代词词等等。而而汉汉语语中中没没有有主主格格和和宾宾格格、形形容容词词性性物物主主代代词词和和名名次次性性物物主主代代词词之之分分；此此外外汉汉语语中中很很多多时时候候不不用用物物主主代代词词，而而英英语语中中物物主主代代词词是是不不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误误误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a p
7、resent for I father.正正 y mother and Iwent to the shop to buy a present for my father.减少失分，重在夯实基础减少失分，重在夯实基础 通通过过前前面面对对学学生生问问题题的的分分析析，不不难难看看出出如如果果能能学学好好英英语语这这八八类类词词：名名词词、动动词词、形形容容词词、副副词词、介介词词、数数词词、冠冠词词和和连连词词。能能正正确确使使用用5种种基基本本句句型型，两两种种语语态态，这这些些初初中中阶阶段段要要求求掌掌握握的的基基础础知知识，作文失分一定会大大减少。识，作文失分一定会大大减少。Head B
8、eginning Body TailEnding BeginningBody Ending Concluding sentence 结论句结论句Supporting sentence 支持句支持句（例子、实事、数据或引文）（例子、实事、数据或引文）topic sentence 主题句主题句开门见山，开门见山，紧扣主题紧扣主题总结观点，发表己见，总结观点，发表己见，首尾呼应首尾呼应总总分分总总结尾通常总结文章主要观点结尾通常总结文章主要观点结尾通常总结文章主要观点结尾通常总结文章主要观点,或者发表自或者发表自或者发表自或者发表自己的观点等等己的观点等等己的观点等等己的观点等等.1.Cross-q
9、uestion(审题审题)u Style(体裁体裁）u Person（人称人称）u Tense（时态时态）默读题目弄清要求默读题目弄清要求,抓取有效信息抓取有效信息,并适当分析。并适当分析。健康很重要。在学习和工作的健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告康组织写一篇完整的调
10、查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。并提倡大家进行假日休闲。牛刀小试牛刀小试Cross-question(审题审题)visit friends or parentstravelstay at homeworkStyle(体裁体裁）：）：_Person（人称人称）：）：_Tense（时态时态）:_调查报告，记叙文调查报告，记叙文第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时1.Cross-question(审题审题)据实描写：据实描写：适当发挥：适当发挥：度假方式度假方式细节及提倡假日休闲细节及提倡假日休闲2.An outline drawing（概略图）u List key points(列要点列要点)u
11、Arrange and Add (布局加首尾布局加首尾)如何度假如何度假调查报告调查报告倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。根据关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。List key pointsvisit friends or parentstravelstay at homework列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如有列要点时，内容、结构上不能有缺漏，如有漏点，扣分最多！漏点，扣分最多！List key points1.A lot of people travel.2.Some people stay at home.3.Some other peopl
12、e visit friends or parents.4.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.visit friends or parentstravelstay at homeworkHow do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning）A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few
13、people work.(the key points)Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）加加(add)加首尾加首尾 总分总总分总3.Sentence Making and Beautifying word word phrase phrase sentence sentence Beautifying内容和语言表达内容和语言表达内容全面，表达有新意或亮点内容全面，表达有新意或亮点3.Sentence Making and Beautifying（美化）word word phras
14、e phrase sentence sentence BeautifyingHow do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning)A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.(t
15、he ending)most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.美美(beautify)方法一方法一:善用意义相近的善用意义相近的 高级词汇，避免行文单调高级词汇，避免行文单调Which is better?1 1我希望你能帮助我。我希望你能帮助我。A I hope you can help me.B Im looking forward to your help.2 我不吃垃圾食品。我不吃垃圾食品。A I dont eat junk food.B I stay away fr
16、om junk food.3 3 我们应该努力取得好成绩。我们应该努力取得好成绩。A We should work hard to get good grades.B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.
17、some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or pare
18、nts.A few people have to work.方法二方法二 :活用多种句型活用多种句型,避避免重复和呆板免重复和呆板,增加文采增加文采尽量使用自己熟悉的句型尽量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正确、通顺为最基本要求以正确、通顺为最基本要求Which is better?1 1 雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。雨下得很大，所以他没赶上校车。A It rained heavily.So he didnt catch the school bus.B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.missedbecause of 2 我们应该
19、保护环境。我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends
20、 or parents.A few people have to work.(the key points)Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.（the ending）只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻Prover
21、b（谚语）（谚语）方法三方法三:妙用引文和例子，旁征博妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。引，丰富文章内容，增加说服力。加谚语加谚语(Proverb)集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate on our studies.加谚语加谚语(Proverb)加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to
22、 learn English.As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do.4.Do as the Romans do.7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.8.All roads lead to Rome.三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志
23、者事竟成。有志者事竟成。入乡随俗。入乡随俗。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。早起的鸟儿有虫吃。失败是成功之母。失败是成功之母。5.The early bird catches the worm.一天一个苹果，一天一个苹果，医生远离我。医生远离我。条条大路通罗马。条条大路通罗马。3.Where there is a will,there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environm
24、ent and save the earth.For example,we can use recycled bags instead of plastic bags,stop using napkins,plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子加例子4.Sentence connectionsentencespassageLinking words（连接词）（连接词）Try to use some Try to use some linking wordslinking words to make to make your writing
25、more fluentlyyour writing more fluently连连(connect)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning）As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People whorelax well work well.（the ending）Most people choose to tr
26、avel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.A few people have to work.(the body)连连(connect)How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and h
27、ere is our report.According to it,most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents.However,a few people have to wor
28、k.As the saying goes,“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”Come and enjoy your vacation.People Who relax well work well.方法四方法四:妙用关联词，使行文连妙用关联词，使行文连贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。贯流畅，使文章富有层次感。1.表示并列表示并列:and,as well as,not onlybut also bothand,neithernor，2.表示递进表示递进:besides,whats more 3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,altho
29、ughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果:because,since,for,so,therefore,as a result5.表示条件表示条件:if,unless关联词关联词(connection words)6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,while,in the same way,on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words,to tell the truth8.表表示示
30、顺顺序序:to begin with,first(of all),firstly,second(ly),finally,in the end；next,later,since then,from then on9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,in fact10.表示结论表示结论:all in all,in a word,generally speaking,in short 关联词关联词(connection words)Lets try_ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He did
31、nt go to movies,he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then he got out._,he went back._,he smiled.()Its too late to invite any more people._,you know how Tim hates parties.A Besides B However C Still D InsteadThoughAlthoughinstead such asFi
32、rstNextFinallyAt lastA5.CheckinguSpelling(拼写拼写)uTense(时态时态)uGrammer(语法语法)uHandwriting(书写书写)uPunctuation marks(标点符号标点符号)通览全文仔细检查通览全文仔细检查1.名词的单复数问题名词的单复数问题More and more students use the mobile phone.mobile phones2.数的不一致、时态不一致、代词不一致以数的不一致、时态不一致、代词不一致以及主谓不一致等问题及主谓不一致等问题Some students said they will put t
33、he mobile phone at home.would their mobile phones3.3.时态和语态问题时态和语态问题Great changes were taken place there over the years.have taken place4.Chinglish 4.Chinglish 现象现象They often compare their mobile phone good and bad.I think we shouldnt take the mobile phone to school.5.5.行文的逻辑性问题行文的逻辑性问题6.6.词类错用词类错用7.
34、7.介词、动词等习惯搭配错误问题介词、动词等习惯搭配错误问题典型病例典型病例6.Copying out u书写规范，卷面整洁书写规范，卷面整洁解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用解决方法：平时认真规范书写，少用或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。或不用胶带或修正液，尽量减少涂改。认真誊写，书写规范，卷面整洁认真誊写，书写规范，卷面整洁誊誊改改连连列列审审书面书面表达表达Steps of writing认真审题，勾画出要点并认真审题，勾画出要点并适当分析适当分析.据据文章要点及中心思想文章要点及中心思想，列出主要句型、关键词，列出主要句型、关键词，加上加上首尾，首尾，形成提纲。形成提纲。根据写作提纲和
35、要点，根据写作提纲和要点，按步骤按步骤写出写出每一部分每一部分的具体内容，用的具体内容，用关关联词联词把文章各部分把文章各部分连连起来成文。起来成文。通览全文通览全文，检查并纠正文章中出现的检查并纠正文章中出现的语言语言错误。错误。认真誊写，认真誊写，书写规范书写规范，注意，注意卷面整洁卷面整洁巧用关联词巧用关联词necessary美美善善用用高高级级词词汇汇活活用用多多种种句句型型If possible妙妙用用引引文文和和例例子子 Writing skills不会表达，另辟蹊径不会表达，另辟蹊径个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，办法，化
36、难为易，化繁为简。化难为易，化繁为简。锦上添花，量力而行锦上添花，量力而行复习和强化训练要求复习和强化训练要求 热点热点1.记记。系统地系统地熟读和背诵熟读和背诵课文课文中关于话题的一中关于话题的一些些句子、句子、句型和短文句型和短文,积累写作素材积累写作素材。大量的。大量的背诵背诵和阅读和阅读是提高写作能力的是提高写作能力的有效办法有效办法。2.练。练。对考纲上和课本中列出的所有对考纲上和课本中列出的所有话题话题逐逐一进行写作训练。一进行写作训练。3.写。写。限时训练，提高应试能力限时训练，提高应试能力。要求要求20分钟内写出分钟内写出80字字.质量高、内容全、形式正质量高、内容全、形式正确确。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。这样形成习惯，考试时就能得心应手。Thank you for listening!