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1、认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目我我们一起研究高考一起研究高考英英语高考第高考第II卷卷第二第二节书面表达（面表达（25分）分）To strive for your success in writing 认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目高考英高考英语评分原分原则：1.本本题总分分为25分，按分，按5个档次个档次给分。分。2.评分分时，先根据文章的，先根据文章的内容和内容和语言言初步确初步确定其所属档次，然后以定其所属档次，然
2、后以该档次的要求来衡量，确档次的要求来衡量，确定或定或调整档次，最后整档次，最后给分。分。3.词数数少于少于80和和多于多于120的，从的，从总分中分中减去减去2分。分。4.评分分时应注意的主要内容注意的主要内容为：内容要点内容要点，应用用词汇和和语法法结构构的的丰富性丰富性和和准确性准确性及上下文的及上下文的连贯性性。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目高考英高考英语评分原分原则：5.拼写与拼写与标点符号点符号是是语言准确性的一个方面。言准确性的一个方面。评分分时，应视其其对交交际影响的程度予以考影响的程度予以
3、考虑。英，。英，美拼写及美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。用法均可接受。6.如如书写写较差差以至影响交以至影响交际，将其，将其分数降低分数降低一个档次一个档次。7.语言首先要求准确通言首先要求准确通顺。8.鼓励写出新鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复接和复杂结构。构。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目英英语各档次的各档次的给分范分范围和要求和要求第五档第五档(很好很好);(21-25分分)1.完全完成了完全完成了试题规定的任定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了用了较多的多的语法法结构和构和词汇。4.
4、语法法结构或构或词汇方面有些方面有些许错误，但，但为尽力使用尽力使用较复复杂结构或构或较高高级词汇所致所致;具具备较强的的语言运用能力。言运用能力。5.有效地使用了有效地使用了语句句间的的连接成分，使全文接成分，使全文结构构紧凑。凑。6.完全达到了完全达到了预期的写作目的。期的写作目的。第四档第四档(好好)：(16-20分分)1.完全完成了完全完成了试题规定的任定的任务。2.虽漏掉漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的用的语法法结构和构和词汇能能满足任足任务的要求。的要求。4.语法法结构或构或词汇方面方面应用基本准确，些用基本准确，些许错误主要是因主要
5、是因尝试较复复杂语法法结构或构或词汇所所致。致。5.应用用简单的的语句句间的的连接成分，使全文接成分，使全文结构构紧凑。凑。6.达到了达到了预期的写作目的。期的写作目的。第三档第三档(适当适当)：(11-15分分)1.基本完成了基本完成了试题规定的任定的任务。2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。3.应用的用的语法法结构和构和词汇能能满足任足任务的要求。的要求。4.有一些有一些语法法结构或构或词汇方面的方面的错误，但不影响理解。，但不影响理解。5.应用用简单的的语句句间的的连接成分，使全文内容接成分，使全文内容连贯。6.整体而言，基本达到了整体而言，基本达到
6、了预期的写作目的。期的写作目的。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目第二档第二档(较差差)：(6-10分分)1.未恰当完成未恰当完成试题规定的任定的任务。2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。3.语法法结构构单调、词汇项目有限。目有限。4.有一些有一些语法法结构或构或词汇方面的方面的错误，影响了，影响了对写作内容的理解。写作内容的理解。5.较少使用少使用语句句间的的连接成分，内容缺少接成分，内容缺少连贯性。性。6.信息未能清楚地信息未能清楚地传达达给读
7、者。者。第一档第一档(差差)：(1-5分分)1.1.未完成未完成试题规定的任定的任务。2.2.明明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。要求。3.3.语法法结构构单调、词汇项目有限。目有限。4.4.较多多语法法结构或构或词汇方面的方面的错误，影响，影响对写作内容的理解。写作内容的理解。5.5.缺乏缺乏语句句间的的连接成分，内容不接成分，内容不连贯。6.6.信息未能信息未能传达达给读者。者。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Whatisagood
8、writing？A good composition1.neat writing书写写2.content内容内容3.structure结构构4.language语言言Good first impressionEverything required includedWell organized and smoothly developedNo ChinglishNoGrammatical mistakes 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面无遗漏信息点，即要点全面篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词句式复杂多样句式复杂多样地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组认识到了贫困户贫
9、困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目structure1.称呼称呼:DearSirorMadam,2.开开头语thebeginning（空四个（空四个字母的距离）字母的距离）(自我介自我介绍或或问候，候，写信的目的写信的目的)sentence)3.正文正文body具体具体问题+具体分析具体分析4.结束束语客套客套话（complimentaryclose）5.签名名（signature）(右下角右下角)口诀：开门见山说意图口诀：开门见山说意图 咨询建议咨询建议123 感谢客气不可少感谢客气不可少 期待回信成老套期待回信成老套 认识
10、到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目I.【审题谋篇篇】Howtodesignacomposition 1.文体（文体（书信或信或邮件件）。）。2.人称：人称：第一人称第一人称 first person 3.时态：一般一般现在在时 present tense 4.写作要点写作要点（列提列提纲）1.认真真审题2.词汇准准备定关定关键词，短，短语，关关联词3.定句式定句式，多种句式，如，多种句式，如强调句、倒装句、各种句、倒装句、各种名名词性从句、性从句、定定语从句从句、状、状语从句和固定句型，从句和固定句型，非非谓语动词
11、4.三段式三段式1.写信目的写信目的2.要点（要点（1，2，3）3.总述述/客套用客套用语（期望（期望/请求求/感激）感激）认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Waysofembellishingthesentences1.他昨天下午来的。他昨天下午来的。2.令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。么多事情。巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力1.Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.2.Hedidntcomehereuntilyesterdayafte
12、rnoon.3.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.4.It was yesterday afternoon that he came here.1.He is surprised that thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.2.To his surprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.3.What astonished him is that thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作
13、高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目 1.Susan was ill in hospital.She couldnt go to the concert.2.The professor entered the hall.His students followed him.3.He wants to improve his spoken English.He often talks with the native speakers.(一一)、非谓语动词的使用、非谓语动词的使用Being ill in hospital,Susan couldnt go to the concert.The pro
14、fessor entered the hall,followed by his stduents.In order to improve his spoken English,he often talks with the native speakers.Aimed at improving认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目 4.They havent completed the program.They have to stay there for another two weeks.5.We are fac
15、ed with so much trouble,so we failed to complete the task on time.Not having completed the program,they have to stay there for two weeksFaced with so much trouble,we failed to complete the task on time.巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目1.He didnt
16、realize his danger until he was left alone.2.We can save the animals by changing the plants we eat.3.She is clever but she never works hard.4.The clock tower stands on the other side of the street.Not until,he was left alone did he realize his danger.Only by changing the plants we eat can we saveCle
17、ver as she is,she never works hard.二、倒装句的使用二、倒装句的使用On the other side of the street stands the clock tower.将将陈述句改述句改为倒装句。倒装句。5.I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time.Hardly could I understand the importance of English at that time.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重
18、视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目1.He didnt realize his danger until he was left alone.2.The teachers words encouraged her greatly.三、强调句的使用三、强调句的使用It was not until he was left alone that he realised his danger.It was the teachers words that encouraged her greatly.It is the Super Girl Competition that makes girls gain
19、 confidence.3 TheSuperGirlCompetitionmakesgirlsgainconfidence三、将三、将简单句改句改为强调句句认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目1.Smoking did great harm to his health.Itwassmokingthatdidgreatharmtohishealth.2.Our money is earned through hard work by our parents.Itisthroughhardworkthatourmon
20、eyisearnedbyourparents.3.He went there yesterday.Hedidgothereyesterday.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目1.To our surprise,he refused to take the position.2.I wont believe what he says.What surprised us was that he refused to take No matter what he say,I wont believe.四、从句的使用
21、四、从句的使用3.When he climbed up higher,he felt more breathless.The higher he climbed up,the more breathless he felt.4.We all know that China will host the 2008 Olympic Games.As is known to all,China will host the 2008 Olympic Games.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目1.The manager
22、 had many problems to solve.He looked worried.(with)2.When he arrived home,he found his house freshly painted.(on)With many problems to solve,the manager looked worried.五、介词短语的使用五、介词短语的使用On his arrival home,he found his house freshly painted.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项
23、目1.People grow rice in the south of China.Rice is grown in the south of China.2.They have printed one and a half million copies of the dictionary since 1986.One and a half million copies of the dictionary have been printed since 1986.六六、主、主动句与被句与被动句的互句的互换。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重
24、视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采 1.The tourists had to ask the villagers for help.The tourists had no choice but to ask the villagers for help.2The car was expensive.I cant afford it The car was so expensive that it was beyond my reach.3.I had a good idea.A good idea struck me./I came up
25、with a good idea./A good idea occurred to me./A good idea came to me.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目4.Aninterviewisimportanttoboththeemployerandtheapplicant5.Im sure our school is worth visiting 6.The building is being built.7.Thisisadifficultjob.Greatimportancehasbeenatt
26、achedtoaninterviewbyboththeemployerandtheapplicant.Im sure our school will offer a feast for your eyes.The building is under construction.This is a challenging job.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目1.Some of the students think it is no use going to college because it is _dif
27、ficult to get _ jobs形容词和副词的使用形容词和副词的使用extremely satisfactory 2.It is _ recommended that we should cultivate the good habit of taking _ exercise3 we should not drink too much wine,which will do _ harm to us regular stronglygreat认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目 4 We must pay
28、 attention to our appearance and good manners are important.5 With preparation and a _ confident and honest performance,our success will be ensured 6 In addition to the above,taking part-time jobs is also a way for college student to get money to pay part of his tuition 7 She came _ to me,with a _ b
29、eautiful flower in her hand.equallycarefulfairlycommonoverpretty认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目一、表示进一步说明的过渡词一、表示进一步说明的过渡词 巧妙运用过渡词巧妙运用过渡词二、表示解释或说明二、表示解释或说明（）（）and,also(也，同样，另外）也，同样，另外）,too,as well（）（）besides（in addition)，additionally,still,whats more,furthermore,moreover (
30、3)whats worse/worse still (4)In that case（）（）for instance,for example,such as(2)In other words,that is(to say)(3)By the way(4)Strangely enough(说也奇怪，最奇怪的是）说也奇怪，最奇怪的是）认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目三、表示时间顺序三、表示时间顺序(1)later,later on,after that,afterwards,sooner or later(2)no
31、w,nowadays,at present/presently,recently(3)while,menwhile,at the same time,just at that moment,here and now（眼下，立刻）（眼下，立刻）,at once(4)before,after,until/till,before long,shortly,by and by,in the future,in the near future,in future.after a while(5)To begin with,firstly/first,secondly/second,at first,fi
32、rst of all,then,next,finally,eventually,at last,in the end(6)gradually,suddenly,all of a sudden(7)from then on,from now on,(ever)since then认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目四、表示四、表示转折和折和对比关系比关系however,nevertheless,yet,while,whereas otherwise,on the contrary,instead,on the ot
33、her hand,except for,unluckily,unfortunately（不幸的，令人（不幸的，令人遗憾的是）憾的是）五、表示条件关系五、表示条件关系as(so)long as,on condition that,if,unless六、表六、表示因果关系示因果关系 now that,since,thanks to.,due to.,therefore,thus,as a result(of),then(那么，因而，于是）那么，因而，于是）认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目七、表示让步关系七、表示让
34、步关系 as,even if,even though,whether.or.despite,inspiteof,八、表示强调八、表示强调 九、表示概括归纳九、表示概括归纳 indeed,in fact,as a matter of fact,in actual fact,actually,surely,certainly,no wonder,no doubt,without any doubt,truly,obviously,above all,(1)in a word,in short,in brief,(2)in general/generally speaking,on the whol
35、e(3)as far as I know,as we know,as is known to all,as has been stated(综上所述），综上所述），as has been said above（如上所述）（如上所述）(4)as far as I am concerned,in my opinion(5)in conclusion(最后，总之）最后，总之）认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目practice1)Liu Xiang is an excellent athlete.He won the
36、first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games._,_,won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.2)The word is true.The president will give our school a speech._ is true _ the president will give our school a speech.LiuXiangan excellent athleteItthat认识到了贫困户贫困的根
37、本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目3)The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing,and its slogan is One World,One Dream,The 2008 Olympic Games,_ _4)In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting.In my opinion,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace _5)Yesterda
38、y,we went to the East Gate,and we bought a lot of clothes.Yesterday,we went to the East Gate,_ _One Dream,will be held in Beijing.are the two places which are well worth visiting.where we bought aWhose slogan is One World,lot of clothes.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目6)Hi
39、s wonderful performance on the stage impressed me.most was his wonderful performance on the stage.7)It satisfied me.The dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes._ the dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.8)I learned from the story that as long as we
40、have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams._ as long as we have patience,confidence and perseverance,we can realize our dreams.What satisfied me is thatWhat I have learnt from the story is thatWhat impressed me 认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目9.Rec
41、ently many students spend their money on unnecessary things.Different people have different opinions about it.Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things,about different people have different opinions.10.Many boys learn to smoke.It does harm to their health.Many boys learn to smok
42、e,_ _whichwhich does harm totheirhealth.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目11.You pretend to know what you dont know.Its no good.Its no good pretending to know what you dont know.12.It is easy to get on with Pam.I find.I find it easy to get on with Pam.13.If you work harder,y
43、ou will do better in the exam next time._,you will do better in the exam next time.14.Because my friend was frightened of losing his job,he said nothing to the police._,my friend said nothing to the police.Frightened of losing his job Working hard认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精
44、准扶贫”项目15)这个地区占地个地区占地2000平方千米，人口平方千米，人口10万。万。Thisareacoversanareaof2000squarekilometers,_16)我我们学校周学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量的种了很多花，吸引了大量的学生来参学生来参观。_,itattractsalargenumberofpeople.17)我我们学校是一所有学校是一所有100多年多年历史的名校。史的名校。Ourschoolisafamousone_with a population of 100,000.With many flowers surrounding our schoolwith
45、a history of over 100 years.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目18）没有做完作）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。个小孩不敢去上学。_,theboydarednotgotoschool.19)这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一晚上。了一晚上。Thetwomenwenttobedearly,_.20)他睡他睡觉的的时候嘴巴候嘴巴张得大大的。得大大的。Hesleep_.with candles burning a night longWith homework not
46、 finishedwith his mouth wide open认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目实战演练巩固1 请根据以下的情景根据以下的情景说明明,使用使用5个个规范的英范的英语句子描述全部所句子描述全部所给的信息内容。的信息内容。标题为 “My English Learning”注：所注：所给情景有情景有时是中文要点，有是中文要点，有时是表格。是表格。我学英我学英语已已经六年了，在英六年了，在英语学学习上有了上有了一定的一定的进步，但步，但总是是觉得英得英语难学，尤其是学，尤其是英英语中的一些中的一些习
47、惯用法。自己今后一定要努用法。自己今后一定要努力学力学习这门有用的外有用的外语，争取早日掌握争取早日掌握这门语言。言。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目我学英我学英语已已经六年了六年了I have been learning English for over 6 years.在英在英语学学习上有了一定的上有了一定的进步步I have made some progress in my English.但但总是是觉得英得英语难学，尤其是英学，尤其是英语中的一些中的一些习惯用法。用法。But I always fee
48、l English is hard to learn,especially some English idioms are difficult.自己今后一定要努力学自己今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外有用的外语I will work hard at this useful foreign language.争取早日掌握争取早日掌握这门语言。言。I will try hard to grasp this foreign language.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目 I have been learning
49、English for over 6 years.It is six years since I began to learn English.I have made some progress in my English.With the help of my teachers and classmates,I have made progress in my English.Now Im doing well both in writing and reading in English.But I always feel English is hard to learn,especiall
50、y some English idioms are difficult.But I still find it hard to learn English,such as some difficult idioms.I will try hard to master this foreign language.Difficult as it is,I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶