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1、变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分我们一起研究高考我们一起研究高考英语高考第英语高考第II卷卷 第二节第二节 书面表达（书面表达（25分）分）To strive for your success in writing 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分2002007-20177-2017十年高考全国卷作文体裁分析十年高考全国卷作文体裁分析类类 型型次次 数数 我省考卷时间我省考卷时间邀请信邀请
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3、。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分高考英语评分原则：高考英语评分原则：1. 本题总分为本题总分为25分，按分，按5个档次个档次给分。给分。2. 评分时，先根据文章的评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言内容和语言初步确初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数词数少于少于80和和多于多于120的，从总分中的，从总分中减去减去2分。分。4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点内容要点，应用词汇应用词汇和和语法结构语法结构的的丰富性丰富性和和准确性准确性及上下
4、文的及上下文的连贯性连贯性。变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分高考英语评分原则：高考英语评分原则：5. 拼写与标点符号拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英，美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6. 如如书写较差书写较差以至影响交际，将其以至影响交际，将其分数降低分数降低一个档次一个档次。7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。语言首先要求准确通顺。8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接
5、和复杂结构。鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分英语各档次的给分范围和要求英语各档次的给分范围和要求第五档第五档(很好很好);(21-25分分)1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全完成了试题规定的任务。2. 覆盖所有内容要点。覆盖所有内容要点。3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备具备较强
6、的语言运用能力。较强的语言运用能力。5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档第四档(好好)：(16-20分分)1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全完成了试题规定的任务。2. 虽漏掉虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结
7、构或词汇所致。致。5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6. 达到了预期的写作目的。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档第三档(适当适当)：(11-15分分)1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。基本完成了试题规定的任务。2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。应用简单的语句间的连接成分，
8、使全文内容连贯。6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分第二档第二档(较差较差)：(6-10分分)1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作
9、内容的理解。5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档第一档(差差)：(1-5分分)1. 1. 未完成试题规定的任务。未完成试题规定的任务。2. 2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。要求。3. 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4. 4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。5. 5. 缺乏语句间的连接
10、成分，内容不连贯。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。6. 6. 信息未能传达给读者。信息未能传达给读者。变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分What is a good writing？A good composition1.neat writing书写书写2. content内容内容3. structure结构结构4. language语言语言Good first impressionEverything required includedWell organized and smoothly
11、 developedNo ChinglishNoGrammatical mistakes 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 句式复杂多样句式复杂多样 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分structure1.称呼称呼:Dear Sir or Madam, 2.开头语开头语 the beginning （空四个（空四个字母的距离）字母的距离） (自我介绍或问候，自我介绍或问候，
12、写信的目的写信的目的)sentence)3.正文正文 body具体问题具体问题+具体分析具体分析4. 结束语结束语 客套话客套话（complimentary close） 5.签名签名 （signature）(右下角右下角) 口诀：开门见山说意图口诀：开门见山说意图 咨询建议咨询建议123 感谢客气不可少感谢客气不可少 期待回信成老套期待回信成老套 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分I.【审题谋篇审题谋篇】How to design a composition 1.文体（文体（书信或邮件书信或
13、邮件）。）。 2. 人称：人称：第一人称第一人称 first person 3. 时态：时态：一般现在时一般现在时 present tense 4. 写作要点写作要点 （列提纲列提纲） 1.认真审题认真审题2. 词汇准备词汇准备定关键词，短语，定关键词，短语， 关联词关联词3. 定句式定句式，多种句式，如强调句、倒装句、各种，多种句式，如强调句、倒装句、各种名词性从句、名词性从句、定语从句定语从句、状语从句和固定句型，、状语从句和固定句型，非谓语动词非谓语动词4.三段式三段式1.写信目的写信目的2. 要点（要点（1，2，3）3.总述总述/客套用语（期望客套用语（期望/请求请求/感激）感激）变电
14、站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分Ways of embellishing the sentences1.他昨天下午来的。他昨天下午来的。2.令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力1. He came here yesterday afternoon.2. He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon.3. Not until yesterday afternoo
15、n did he come here.4. It was yesterday afternoon that he came here.1. He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things.2. To his surprise , the little girl knows so many things.3. What astonished him is that the little girl knows so many things.变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站
16、的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 1. Susan was ill in hospital. She couldnt go to the concert. 2. The professor entered the hall. His students followed him. 3. He wants to improve his spoken English. He often talks with the native speakers.(一一) 、非谓语动词的使用、非谓语动词的使用Being ill in hospital, Susan couldnt go to the c
17、oncert.The professor entered the hall,followed by his stduents. In order to improve his spoken English, he often talks with the native speakers. Aimed at improving变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 4. They havent completed the program. They have to stay there for an
18、other two weeks . 5. We are faced with so much trouble , so we failed to complete the task on time . Not having completed the program, they have to stay there for two weeksFaced with so much trouble, we failed to complete the task on time . 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连
19、接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分He didnt realize his danger until he was left alone. 2.We can save the animals by changing the plants we eat. 3.She is clever but she never works hard.4. The clock tower stands on the other side of the street. Not until, he was left alone did he realize his dange
20、r.Only by changing the plants we eat can we saveClever as she is, she never works hard.二、倒装句的使用二、倒装句的使用On the other side of the street stands the clock tower.将陈述句改为倒装句。将陈述句改为倒装句。5. I could hardly understand the importance of English at that time. Hardly could I understand the importance of English a
21、t that time. 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分He didnt realize his danger until he was left alone.The teachers words encouraged her greatly. 三、强调句的使用三、强调句的使用It was not until he was left alone that he realised his danger.It was the teachers words that encouraged her
22、 greatly.It is the Super Girl Competition that makes girls gain confidence. 3 The Super Girl Competition makes girls gain confidence三、将简单句改为强调句三、将简单句改为强调句变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分Smoking did great harm to his health. It was smoking that did great harm to hi
23、s health. 2. Our money is earned through hard work by our parents. It is through hard work that our money is earned by our parents.3. He went there yesterday. He did go there yesterday.变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分1. To our surprise, he refused to take the posi
24、tion.2.I wont believe what he says. What surprised us was that he refused to take No matter what he say, I wont believe.四、从句的使用四、从句的使用3.When he climbed up higher, he felt more breathless.The higher he climbed up , the more breathless he felt.4. We all know that China will host the 2008 Olympic Games
25、.As is known to all, China will host the 2008 Olympic Games.变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分1. The manager had many problems to solve. He looked worried. (with)2. When he arrived home , he found his house freshly painted.(on)With many problems to solve, the manage
26、r looked worried.五、介词短语的使用五、介词短语的使用On his arrival home , he found his house freshly painted. 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分1. People grow rice in the south of China. Rice is grown in the south of China. 2. They have printed one and a half million copies of the d
27、ictionary since 1986. One and a half million copies of the dictionary have been printed since 1986.六六、主动句与被动句的互换。、主动句与被动句的互换。变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采 1. The tourists had to ask the villagers for help.The tourists had no choice b
28、ut to ask the villagers for help.2The car was expensive .I cant afford it The car was so expensive that it was beyond my reach.3. I had a good idea. A good idea struck me./ I came up with a good idea./A good idea occurred to me./A good idea came to me.变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主
29、接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分4.An interview is important to both the employer and the applicant5.Im sure our school is worth visiting 6.The building is being built.7. This is a difficult job.Great importance has been attached to an interview by both the employer and the applicant.Im sure our school will offe
30、r a feast for your eyes.The building is under construction.This is a challenging job.变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分1. Some of the students think it is no use going to college because it is _difficult to get _ jobs形容词和副词的使用形容词和副词的使用extremely satisfactory 2. It is
31、 _ recommended that we should cultivate the good habit of taking _ exercise3 we should not drink too much wine ,which will do _ harm to us regular stronglygreat变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分 4 We must pay attention to our appearance and good manners are importan
32、t. 5 With preparation and a _ confident and honest performance, our success will be ensured 6 In addition to the above ,taking part-time jobs is also a way for college student to get money to pay part of his tuition 7 She came _ to me, with a _ beautiful flower in her hand.equallycareful fairlycommo
33、n over pretty 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分一、表示进一步说明的过渡词一、表示进一步说明的过渡词 巧妙运用过渡词巧妙运用过渡词二、表示解释或说明二、表示解释或说明（）（）and,also(也，同样，另外）也，同样，另外）,too, as well（）（）besides（in addition) ，additionally, still, whats more, furthermore, moreover (3)whats worse/worse still (4) In th
34、at case（）（）for instance, for example, such as(2)In other words, that is (to say)(3)By the way(4)Strangely enough (说也奇怪，最奇怪的是）说也奇怪，最奇怪的是）变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分三、表示时间顺序三、表示时间顺序 (1)later, later on, after that, afterwards, sooner or later(2)now, nowadays, at
35、 present/presently, recently(3)while, menwhile, at the same time, just at that moment, here and now（眼下，立刻）（眼下，立刻）, at once(4)before, after, until/ till, before long, shortly, by and by, in the future, in the near future, in future. after a while(5) To begin with, firstly/first, secondly/second, at f
36、irst, first of all, then, next, finally,eventually, at last, in the end (6)gradually, suddenly, all of a sudden(7)from then on, from now on, (ever)since then变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分四、表示转折和对比关系四、表示转折和对比关系however, nevertheless, yet, while, whereas otherwise,
37、 on the contrary, instead, on the other hand, except for, unluckily, unfortunately（不幸的，令人遗憾的是）（不幸的，令人遗憾的是）五、表示条件关系五、表示条件关系as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless六、表六、表示因果关系示因果关系 now that, since, thanks to., due to., therefore, thus, as a result (of), then(那么，因而，于是）那么，因而，于是）变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输
38、电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分七、表示让步关系七、表示让步关系 as, even if, even though, whether .or. despite, in spite of, 八、表示强调八、表示强调 九、表示概括归纳九、表示概括归纳 indeed, in fact, as a matter of fact, in actual fact, actually, surely, certainly, no wonder, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, ab
39、ove all,(1)in a word, in short, in brief, (2)in general/generally speaking, on the whole(3)as far as I know, as we know, as is known to all, as has been stated(综上所述），综上所述），as has been said above（如上所述）（如上所述）(4)as far as I am concerned, in my opinion(5)in conclusion(最后，总之）最后，总之）变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎
40、样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分practiceLiu Xiang is an excellent athlete. He won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games. _, _, won the first prize in Mens 110 Hurdle Race in the 2004 Olympic Games.2) The word is true. The president will give our school a spee
41、ch. _ is true _ the president will give our school a speech.Liu Xiangan excellent athleteItthat变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分3) The 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing, and its slogan is One World, One Dream, The 2008 Olympic Games, _ _4) In my opinion, t
42、he Great Wall and the Summer Palace are well worth visiting. In my opinion, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace _5) Yesterday, we went to the East Gate, and we bought a lot of clothes. Yesterday, we went to the East Gate, _ _One Dream, will be held in Beijing.are the two places which are well worth
43、 visiting.where we bought aWhose slogan is One World,lot of clothes.变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分6) His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me. most was his wonderful performance on the stage.7) It satisfied me. The dining hall provides us with a large
44、 variety of kinds of dishes. _ the dining hall provides us with a large variety of kinds of dishes.8) I learned from the story that as long as we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our dreams. _ as long as we have patience, confidence and perseverance, we can realize our drea
45、ms.What satisfied me is thatWhat I have learnt from the story is thatWhat impressed me 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分9. Recently many students spend their money on unnecessary things. Different people have different opinions about it. Recently many students spen
46、d their money on unnecessary things, about different people have different opinions.10. Many boys learn to smoke. It does harm to their health. Many boys learn to smoke, _ _whichwhich does harm totheir health.变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分11. You pretend to know
47、 what you dont know. Its no good. Its no good pretending to know what you dont know.12. It is easy to get on with Pam. I find. I find it easy to get on with Pam.13.If you work harder, you will do better in the exam next time. _, you will do better in the exam next time.14. Because my friend was frig
48、htened of losing his job, he said nothing to the police. _, my friend said nothing to the police. Frightened of losing his job Working hard 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分15) 这个地区占地这个地区占地2000平方千米，人口平方千米，人口10万。万。 This area covers an area of 2000 square kilometers,
49、 _16)我们学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量的我们学校周围种了很多花，吸引了大量的学生来参观。学生来参观。 _, it attracts a large number of people.17) 我们学校是一所有我们学校是一所有100多年历史的名校。多年历史的名校。 Our school is a famous one _ _ with a population of 100,000. With many flowers surrounding our school with a history of over 100 years. 变电站电气主接线是指变电站的变压器、输电线路怎样与电力系统相
50、连接，从而完成输配电任务。变电站的主接线是电力系统接线组成中一个重要组成部分18）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。 _, the boy dared not go to school.19) 这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一晚上。这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一晚上。 The two men went to bed early, _ _.20) 他睡觉的时候嘴巴张得大大的。他睡觉的时候嘴巴张得大大的。 He sleep _.with candles burning a night long With homework not finished with h