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1、“英语高考英语高考系列之写系列之写作作(如何找到有效的增分点？如何找到有效的增分点？) 首先让我们来看近年来全国高考英首先让我们来看近年来全国高考英语书面表达的评分标准：第五档（很语书面表达的评分标准：第五档（很好）：好）：“覆盖所有主要内容；覆盖所有主要内容；应用了较应用了较多的语法结构和词汇多的语法结构和词汇；语法结构或词汇；语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致结构或较高级词汇所致；应用简单的语；应用简单的语句间的句间的连接成分连接成分，使全文结构紧凑；达，使全文结构紧凑；达到了预期的写作目的。到了预期的写作目的。”Beca
2、use the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. our journey was comfortable.（2）Suddenly I thought out a good idea. , （3） As a result the plan was a failure.（4）You can find my house easily.(5)In our school, there are twentysix classrooms. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型，要灵在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型，要灵活运用各种语法结构，运用得当的
3、句子结构可以活运用各种语法结构，运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用（使用V-ing形式）形式）To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）使用名词性从句） (5)She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (用过去分词用过去分词)(6)They sang and laughed a
4、s they went back to school.( 使用使用V-ing形式形式)(7)I wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句）（使用状语从句）(8)If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （使（使用并列句）用并列句）逻辑角度逻辑角度时间顺序时间顺序空间顺序空间顺序合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇逻辑角度逻辑角度对称顺序对称顺序转折顺序转折顺序因果顺序因果顺序条件顺序条件顺序让步顺序让步顺序合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇逻辑角度逻辑角度递进顺序递进顺序插入语过度插入语过度合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡
5、性词汇1. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building. _, where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library. 2. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. _, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.3. Some are in f
6、avor of staying at home. They think its both convenient and comfortable. _, they can save money for other purpose. _they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. _, others prefer to go out for traveling _ it can increase their knowledge.On the other sideBesidesWhats moreButHowevers
7、ince学会运用高级词汇及句式学会运用高级词汇及句式 Kate is a new student. She comes from a northern province. She speaks a dialect. We find it hard to understand her dialect. Kate, a new student from a northern province, speaks a dialect which we find hard to understand.用一句话表达用一句话表达 Not everyone is good at learning English
8、. Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study. 合并句子合并句子 That children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time will affect their Chinese study because not everyone is good at learning English. N
9、ot everyone is good at learning English. Children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time. This will affect their Chinese study.第三步：合并句子第三步：合并句子 If children from primary school start to learn English and Chinese at the same time, this will affect their Chinese study b
10、ecause not everyone is good at learning English. Yesterday I went to the Friendship Store. I saw a foreigner buying clothes. He spoke English. The shop assistant couldnt understand him. I translated for them. They said thanks to me. I think the shop assistant should know foreign language.I was doing
11、 some shopping when I happened to see that a foreigner was trying to buy some clothes.He tried what he could to make himself understood.But at allSeeing thisI went up to them andwhat the foreign guest said into Chinese or how they could work in such a big store without knowing any foreign language.I
12、 like English. I listen to English broadcast. I read English materials. I practise my spoken English. I won the English competition this year and published articles. I will work harder.I am very interested in EnglishIn my spare time, I keep on listening toBesides manyevery dayAnd often first place a
13、tin our schoolI often have my articles published in the English column of the school paper.to improve my English2012年新课标全国卷年新课标全国卷书面表达书面表达假定假定你是李华你是李华 ，从互联网上得知一个国际中从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，）举办夏令营， 欢迎各国学生参加欢迎各国学生参加 。请写。请写一封电子邮件一封电子邮件申申请参加。请参加。内容主要包括：内容主要包括：1. 自我介绍（自我介绍（包括英语能力包括
14、英语能力)2. 参加意图（介绍中国）参加意图（介绍中国）3. 希望获准。希望获准。注意：注意：1. 词数词数100左右；左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。(1)(2)(3)(4)(5)(6)2012年新课标全国卷年新课标全国卷书面表达书面表达One Possible Version Dear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua, I the of the summer camp that you have on the Internet and I am interested in
15、it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.a middle school student from China. 来自中国的一名中学生。来自中国的一名中学生。announcement 通告，告示通告，告示发布发布posted read 看到看到2012年新课标全国卷年新课标全国卷书面表达书面表达 , Ill be ab
16、le to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply. Regards, Li HuaWhat is more 此外此外be accepted as 被接受成为被接受成为needs remember remember At the same time think also useful r
17、equires keep in mind never forget Meanwhile regard as Not only make a difference but also Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our village! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than be
18、fore. Now it is taking on a new look.In the past, the school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching buildinghas 4 storeys and it is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.Welcome
19、 to our village! It used to be very poor. since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here have/live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look.Welcome to our village! This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor.I
20、t has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.However, it has changed a lotIn the past, the school here was very smalland most children couldnt afford to go to sc
21、hool.But now it has been rebuiltand the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more/Also, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here/May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you. In the past, the school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching buildinghas 4 storeys and it is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.