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1、2023年雅思写作 第一篇：雅思写作 School teachers used to be the source of information.However，some people argue that teachers are not as important as before because there is an increasing variety of information resources.What is your opinion?(08年4月24日考题)要对上面的句子进行重新描述，最简洁的就是用同义词替换，请看下表： Know: recognize comprehend
2、grasp understand realize 3.运用短语进行替换 Some say that building more roads will help reduce the traffic congestion in big cities.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.Do you support or oppose this statement? 在这一段话里，可以替换的短语如下所示: 英特网对我们的日常生活带来很大的影响。这句话我们可以写出不同的搭配。比方: 一、并列结构的运用 通过对官方范文的探讨觉察，考生在用并
3、列结构提高句型档次的时候可以从以下几个层面入手： 1.名词并列: n1，n2，n3， 这种并列又可以具体通过以下2种结构实现： a).A，B，C， and other Xs b).X，such Y as A，B，C， i.Reading，writing，listening and other academic subjects could be learned from books，or primarily from books.ii.Some knowledge，such academic subjects as reading，writing，listening，could be lear
4、ned from books，or primarily from books.iii.It is of great importance for people to read imaginative literature，such as poetry，novels or mythology.iv.It is of great importance for people to read novels and other types of imaginative literature such as poetry and mythology.2.名词性成分并列: n.+ what/how/whet
5、her/if 这种并列又可以具体通过以下2种结构实现： a).what=something that b).how=the way/manner in which i.Most parents educate their children merely by instinct rather than proper pedagogy，and usually do not care about their relationship with children and how much neglect influences the future development of their childr
6、en.ii.Most students are eager to obtain knowledge，but they lack the sense of what is good，or what is necessary and how much a deficiency in the concept of viewing the situation as a whole would mislead them.iii.My fellow Americans，ask not what your country can do for you，ask what you can do for your
7、 country.My fellow citizen of the world，ask not what American will do for you，but what together we can do for the freedom of man.(John Kennedy)3.形容词成分并列: a).a1 and a2+n b).a1+yet/but+a2+n c).a1，a2+n+that d).a1，a2，so a3 that/as to i.a small town a small and peaceful town a good teacher a good and ver
8、y impressive teacher a stupid decision a stupid and incorrigible decision ii.a simple yet effective method a direct and simple yet magically effective method an irrational yet understandable decision a fair and balance，yet undesirable decision an obvious yet not the most significant reason iii.Most
9、students can hardly stand for his typically dry and dull lectures that would normally continue at least several quarters without giving any essential information.iv.The impact that technology has had on our daily life and society in general，is undeniable.It will become even greater as computers get
10、faster，smaller，smarter，and so inexpensive that virtually everyone will be able to own one.v.A class led by a lethargic teacher could be extremely dull，and so boring that drives everybody in the class into sleep.vi.Learning in essence is a process that is time-consuming，painstaking，and so hard that v
11、irtually only persistent few can finally have a sense of real achievement.4.副词成分并列: a).ad1 and ad2+n b).ad1+yet/but+ad2+n c).ad1，ad2+prep d).ad1，ad2，so ad3 that/as to i.A conscientious teacher always prepares his lecture carefully，intelligently，and with the full consideration of all possible aspects
12、 concerning the subject.ii.Apart from energizing the athletes, physical strength helps them plough into the games enthusiastically and with confidence and even act as a deterrent force to their rivals to some extent.5.动词并列: a).v1，v2+ing，v3+ing b).s1+v1+ing，s2+v2 i.An absent-minded teacher lacks driv
13、e to make class intensely focused，often preparing nothing in advance，wandering among random topics，thus wasting and killing times of industrial students.ii.As a result of this, food dealers have made huge profit from it, thereby promoting the sector as well as creating more jobs.6.句子并列: a)., and the
14、refore/thus/consequently b).not only/simply/merelybut also/as well/even c).neithernor d).not thatbut that e).that引导的宾语从句 f).that引导的定语从句 g).that引导的主语从句 i.Books keep records of thoughts and ideas, and are therefore the major source from which people obtain knowledge.ii.Chinese children unfortunately h
15、ave few rights to make their own decisions, and consequently often have to do things that they do not enjoy doing at all.iii.Modern vehicles have extended the range of peoples activity, and thus made much more goods available to local markets.iv.Computers have not only brought convenience, but they
16、have also made people learn more.v.Not that emails or telephones have made people less personal, but that people themselves have become less personal.One of several possible reasons is that people usually lack of adequate communicating skills.vi.However, sports salaries are not determined by conside
17、ring the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds.二、从句的运用 从句的运用是提高写作得分最有效的一种手段，雅思写作中主要涉及的从句主要是名词性从句，状语从句和定语从句，朗阁海外考试探讨中心建议考生既可以单独运用这些从句来组织句子，还可以接受从句套从句的方式来提高句型的困难度。7.从句套从句: i.Those who feel that sports stars salaries are justified might argue that the nu
18、mber of professionals with real talent is very few, and the money is the recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful.宾语从句+定语从句+表语从句 ii.This has been driven by technological and scientific breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we view the world on an almost daily
19、basis.定语从句+状语从句 iii.The reasons for this trend may involve the recognition that a young adult who passes directly from school to university is rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and experience of the world.宾语从句+定语从句 iv.But overall, I think that this is less likely today, when academic q
20、ualifications are essential for getting a reasonable career.宾语从句+非限制性定语从句 v.Unfortunately, it is not always the case that new things are promoted because they have good impacts for the majority of people.名词性从句+状语从句 三、倒装句的运用 倒装句的运用主要包括否认词位于句首时的倒装，比较句中第2个句子的倒装和虚拟语气条件句中的倒装。 i.Not only should the parent
21、 spent more time with their children, they should also try to communicate with their children more often.ii.Only in this way can this issue be effectively solved.iii.Nor a bad environment will make people healthier.iv.Only in very few regions do the residents have enough water for their daily needs.
22、第一，定语从句。 这应当算是写作中最常用的一种句型之一。适当地运用定语从句可以给你的文章增色不少。例如，下面的这两个句子用上定语从句立即就变成了一个秀丽的困难句。Bad books contain evil much description thoughts.In them, there might be , and sex.about violence, superstition Bad books, in which there might be much description about violence, superstition, and sex, contain evil tho
23、ughts.其次，状语从句。 在写作当中运用的最多的是以下五种状语从句，即缘由状语从句，让步状语从句，条件状语从句，时间状语从句和目的状语从句。 1.缘由状语从句：常由because, as, since和for引导 Eg: Nonetheless demerits.尽管如此，我还是赞成太空探险，因为它的好处远远大于坏处。 2.让步状语从句：常由although, though, even though/ if, as long as和notwithstanding引导 Eg: Although this view is wildly held, this is little evidence
24、 be obtained at any age and at any place.尽管这一观点被广泛接受，很少有证据说明教化能够在任何地点、任何年龄进行。3.条件状语从句：常由if, on the condition that和providing that引导 Eg: If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions, you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared.假如你要取得成就或要实现你的雄心壮志，你必需努力工作、艰苦奋斗、准备好条件。
25、4.时间状语从句：常由when和while引导 Eg: When it comes to education, the majority of people believe that education is a lifetime study.说到教化，大部分人认为其是一个终生的学习。5.目的状语从句: 常由so that和in order that引导 Eg: Millions of people have to spend more time and energy on studying new skills andtechnology 保持优势。 so that they can kee
26、p a favorable position in job market.成千上万的人们不得不花费更多的精力和时间学习新的技术和学问，使得他们在就业市场能 that education can , I am still in favor of space travel, for its merits far outweigh 第三，宾语从句。Eg: Some people claim that government should be mainly responsible for the environmental pollution.一些人认为政府应对环境污染负主要责任。 Eg: Many
27、experts point out that, along with the development of modern society, it is aninevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.许多专家指出这是现代社会进展必定的结果，无法避开。第四，同位语从句。Eg: It is an undeniable increasingly serious.环境污染变得越来越严峻是不行否认的事实。 Eg: No one can deny the basic fact that it is impossible for average wor
28、kers to master those high-technology skills easily.没有人能否认这一基本事实：对于一般工人来讲，轻松驾驭这些技术是不行能的。第五，主语从句。 Eg: What has caught our attention is /It is noticeable that the environment in .fact that environmental pollution becomes both the rural and urban areas is deteriorating 值得留意的是农村和城市的生态环境都在不断恶化。 Eg: It is
29、universally acknowledged that environmental pollution becomes one of the most serious problems in China or even the world as a whole.众所周知，环境污染问题是中国乃至世界面临的最为严峻的问题之一。第六，强调句: It is 被强调的内容 that Eg: It is cars and factories that release environment.汽车和工厂排放大量的废气，使得环境被污染。第七，倒装句。 Eg: Only if the government
30、will take some appropriate this intractable problem be tackled.只有政府实行适当的措施，这个麻烦的问题才能被解决。第八，被动语态。 Eg: Every means should be tried to protect the environment on which people live.人们应全力以赴来爱惜我们赖以生存的环境。 measures, will a great deal of gases, polluting the 第九，分词结构：包括如今分词和过去分词。 Eg: Tourism, which is a risin
31、g industry, has become the major source of economy, playing crucial role in many Asian countries.旅游业是一个新兴的行业，它成为经济的主要来源, 在很多东南亚国家起着尤为重要的作用。 Eg: To be more specific , government should stage some relevant .laws or regulations to severely punish the factory producing a great number of pollutants and t
32、he people littering or spitting deliberately 人进行严惩。第十，插入语。 一种独立成分,与句子的其它成分一般没有语法上的关系,大都是对一句话作一些附加说明或说明。它通常由一个词、一个短语或一个句子构成,位置较为灵敏,可置于句首、句中或句末,一般用逗号或破折号与句子隔开。Eg: Computer, an indispensable conveniences.电脑，我们生活中必不行少的一部分，给我们带来了极大的便利。 Eg: College students, lacking social experience, are easily cheated.高
33、校生，没有社会阅历，简洁上当受骗。 part in our life, has brought us great 具体来说，政府应当出台相关法律法规对制造大量污染物的工厂及有意乱扔垃圾随地吐痰的 其次篇：雅思写作 翻开剑桥系列教材后面考官所给的范文评析，大家会觉察考官的评分标准一般都从如下四个方面绽开：内容(content)、组织结构(organization)、词汇(vocabulary)和句式(sentence structure)。同时，据笔者的长期视察，高分雅思作文无一例外地在这四方面有好的演绎才能获得考官亲睐。“好的作文大都是相像的，而不幸的作文却各有各的不幸。下面，笔者将从以上四方
34、面一一阐述烤鸭们写作时存在的盲点所在并提出相应的建议。 一、内容(content)：切中主题，自圆其说 盲点1：无话可说 这类考生在看到题目时，最初的感觉是脑袋中一片空白。雅思作文题材广泛，包括科技、教化、健康、环保、犯罪、文化传统、时尚、体育运动、动物爱惜等。而且由于文化差异以及学习工作的缘由，日常生活中考生极少接触到这类话题，更不用说对它有什么想法了。 盲点1击破：四多原则 多看范文；多关注时事，视察生活；多与人沟通；多记录自己的想法。比较极端的做法是花三天三夜沉醉在范文书当中，分领域熟识雅思索题及其观点。当感觉自己脑袋中涌现出多数ideas时，关上书，写出自己能够想出来的各个领域的观点，
35、假如某个领 域发生短路，翻开书重新阅读，直至能够写出来为止。 盲点2：千言万语 这类考生往往见多识广，看到话题时感到倚马千言。可是由于词汇量和规律方面有所欠缺。往往面临“满腹的心里话不知怎么说的尴尬。 盲点2击破：词以类记原则 此类考生要分领域积累雅思写作词汇，如在写肥胖问题时，考生需要积累(obese, overweight, coronary heart disease, stroke, heredity, inheritance, junk food, carnivorous, excessive drinking and smoking, couch potato, diabetes,
36、 a balanced diet, vegetarian等。) 盲点3：独树一帜 这类考生认为论点或论据越新颖越好，力求别出心裁。 盲点3击破：自圆其说原则 雅思索试终归是语言实力测试，词汇、语法和句式才是测试重点。况且，考官阅卷数载，见多识广，你的观点很有可能已经无法构成他的兴奋点，所以我们讲究论点论据 言之有理，能够自圆其说即可。 盲点4：真情流露 这类考生和“千言万语型考生神似，唯一的不同便是他们英文表达畅通无阻，写作时有“黄河之水，延绵不绝之势。但兴奋之时，有些忘乎所以，与主题渐行渐远。 盲点4击破：切中主题原则 这类考生必需建立自己的一套规律框架，并严格执行。如在写argumenta
37、tion类题型时，全文四段：“第一段为背景介绍和提出论点段；其次段为己方观点论证段；第三段为让步段；第四段总结段。切忌任何与主题无关或相悖的鸡肋出现。 二、组织结构(organization)：起承转合，行云流水 盲点1：天马行空 这类考生和“千言万语型考生神似，写作时缺乏自己的一套写作框架。有时，尽管有全文框架，段落框架又缺失，通常表现为主体段内部的分论点或分论据存在规律上的重复或冲突。 盲点1击破：起承转合原则 除了段落之间应存在“第一段(起)为背景介绍和提出论点段；其次段(承)为己方观点论证段；第三段(转)为让步段；第四段(合)总结段。的规律框架之外，段落内部每一句也需要有这样的规律框架
38、来约束，如让步段中：“some people may argue that (起);because they maintain that 。(承);However ,they are oversimplifying the situation, in fact .。(转);Therefore , I believe 。(合) 盲点2：单句游离 这类烤鸭写出来的句子与句子之间没有连接词，有时就算有，规律连词也运用错误。或者是标点不留意。最常见运用错误诸如on the other hand。它连接的是转折，却多数次被误会成递进。 盲点2击破：行云流水原则 考生应精确记忆并正确运用各种规律关系词，力
39、求做到行云流水，常见的规律连词有： 因果关系： 因：As since due to owning to 果：hence thus therefore as a consequence as a result 表目的：thereby 举例关系：Take for example, For instance, To illustrate, As an apt illustration ,对比关系：While ,whilst, whereas, by contrast。 让步关系：despite ,in spite of , not with standing , nonetheless, even
40、though,Provided that , if 三、词汇(vocabulary)：同义改写，百花齐放 盲点1 ： 遭受生词 大部分考生苦恼的地方莫过于此，写作过程中多数次由于生词的关系而短路。 盲点1击破：同义改写原则 其实考生对不相识的词完全可以paraphrase，如望子成龙，望女成凤完全可以写成：All parents expect their children to have a promising further。 留意：对于各个领域内的专知名词我们激励大家履行词以类记原则，终归只有语言水平较高的烤鸭才可能做到用简洁的词汇说明难词。如有同学在说明寄生虫(parasite)在他笔下
41、成了 something that is very tiny and lives on my skin and sucks my blood without doing any work！这样的paraphrase 只能让考官啼笑皆非。 盲点2：同义重现 如在discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the internet时，有考生作文中曾出现了不下10次的advantages and disadvantages。这会让考官出现极严峻的审美疲乏，分数自然不高。 盲点2击破： 百花齐放原则 其实考生在平常的习作中应留意近义词、反义词、衍生词的积累，
42、并不断练习。如上面的advantages的同义词为benefits gains merits pros等；disadvantages的同义词有downsides ,weakness, drawbacks cons等。 盲点3：大词连篇 很多考生认为大词生僻词汇用得越多，得分就越高。 盲点3击破：整体协调原则 看到剑桥系列教材大家会觉察，考官给出的范文大词生词屈指可数，真正有劝服力的是你用的词能够精确无误的表达你的思想。试想一个语法错误连篇的考生盲目地运用各种生僻词汇来堆砌文章，这无疑给考官造成一种“爆发户般的剧烈视觉冲击，最终只能适得其反。所以，用词上我们讲究与内容以及句式结构整体协调的原则。
43、 三、句式(sentence structure)：长短结合，错落有致 盲点1：长篇累牍 和用词上的大词连篇一样，部分考生以能运用各种困难的长难句为荣。 盲点1击破：长短结合原则 事实上，假如大家有看剑桥后面的范文的话，会觉察长难句并不象绝大多数同学想象得那般高深。通常的状况是长短句结合运用，而且论点通常用短句，而论据则长句居多。 盲点2：短小精悍 和长篇累牍型考生相反的是短小精悍型考生，为了保险起见，这类考生作文中充溢了简洁的is/am/are的主系表和主谓宾句型。 盲点2击破：灵敏多变原则 这类考生假如能稍稍变得aggressive一些，他们将是考场上最大的“黑马。如以Parents an
44、d teachers often link childrens score to their academic ability这个简洁句为例，通过强调句型的包装我们得到： It is childrens score that parents and teachers often link to their academic ability rather than other qualifications。 通过倒装句的包装我们可以得到： So important is childrens score that parents and teachers often link them to ch
45、ildrens academic ability。 通过插入语的包装我们可以得到： Scores , as is known to everyone ,are often linked to childrens academic ability by teachers and parents。 通过分词短语的包装我们可以得到： Based on the conception that scores tells everything, parents and teachers often link childrens score to their academic ability。 通过如此灵敏
46、的加工和包装，你会觉察，简洁句经过稍稍润色原来也可以如此光彩照人，这要比多数大词生僻词堆砌形成的长难句更加赢得考官的青睐。 总之，驾驭了如上原则，再加上持之以恒的练习，考生确定能在Task 2中获得自己满足的分数。编 第三篇：雅思写作万能 说明一物的利弊 1、AAA has improved the quality of our lives and are playing an important role in our daily life.The benefits AAA brings to us are far more than its disadvantages.However, w
47、e cannot ignore its problem.2、On the positive side, AAA has enabled us to(1)此处填入 AAA 的优势之一。For instance,2举例说明优势之一。Besides,(3)AAA 的优势之二。Nowadays,(4)举例说明优势之二。In addition,5AAA 的优势之三。 3、On the negative side,(6)此处填入 AAA 的劣势之一。For example,(7)举例说明劣势之一。Besides,(8)AAA 的劣势之二。Furthermore,(9)AAA 的劣势之三。 4、All in all, we can not live without AAA for the conveniences it brings to us,