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1、2023年雅思写作犯罪类 雅思写作教育类范文 1.In many countries, crime is increasing.What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situation? Although it is arguably impoible to pinpoint a single cause for the recent rise in global crime, the main culprits are thought to be poverty and political op
2、preion.A commonality between the two appears to be the diatisfaction of a people.Thus, it is argued that global crime can be reduced through measures that promote public feelings of well-being and security.To prove this, strategies that reduce poverty and oppreion will be analyzed.Firstly, encouragi
3、ng prosperity among poverty-stricken areas can be a very powerful tool when combating crime.For example, a once dangerous area of my hometown in Ottawa has undergone major infrastructural development over the past twenty years.The addition of schools, libraries and quality health facilities led to t
4、he establishment of a new economical status for the people who lived there.With the rise of this new affluence came a major fall in crime rates.This clearly shows how tackling the iue of poverty creates inroads against violations of the law.In addition to this, providing people more political freedo
5、m can also reduce crime.For instance, over the past ten years China has increasingly allowed critical comment of its ruling party to appear in local newspapers.Despite the fact that this level of freedom pales in comparison with many other countries, it is felt this thawing of political control has
6、done a lot to reduce crime rates acro the country.Thus, providing increasing levels of political freedom can be seen as a measure to combat crime.After analyzing the reduction of poverty and political oppreion, it is felt that crime is best tackled by reducing the causes of unrest among people.By fo
7、llowing this course of action, major reductions in global crime rates are expected. 2.Giving detailed descriptions of crime by newspaper and television, someone says it could make bad consequence; this kind of media should be restricted.To what extent do you agree or not agree? There is no doubt tha
8、t the detailed descriptions of crimes have been given by most of newspapers and television programs these days.Based on this, some people think that this is adverse for the children.This is partly because such kind of descriptions will give them a deep negative impreion.Surely, I agree that detailed
9、 descriptions of crimes should be limited by the government.Also, I believe that the detailed descriptions of crimes will increase the incidence of crimes.They point out that thousands of criminals learn how to commit a crime from TVs or films.It is well aware that the crimes in young children are i
10、ncreasing annually, and it would aociate with a wide range of crimes which children watch every day.For example, the same means, as the films show, is similar to the crimes in the actual society, such as robbery, sexual crimes and murders.On the other hand, other people argue that it is pointle to r
11、estrict this kind of media.They probably think that the detailed descriptions of crimes are beneficial for people to prevent crimes.It seems that people will improve alert sense, when they see the crime means as TV programs show.However, they hardly realize that the negatives outnumber the positives
12、.In the meanwhile, people can learn how to prevent crimes by the other means such as Internet and books.In conclusion, I would like to expre that the detailed descriptions of crimes should be restricted, but also that the government should appeal to people to learn how to keep away from crimes or da
13、ngers. 3.Prison is not a cure for crime.To reduce crime in the long-term, courts should significantly reduce prison sentences and focus on education and community work to help criminals not to re-offend.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? There are many different opinions on t
14、he best way to reduce crime.The traditional solution is to be hard on criminals and put them in prison for a very long time.An opposing view is expreed by people with more modern ideas.They think that education and job training are the long-term solutions to cutting crime.So who is rightIt is import
15、ant to understand that some people are a real danger to society and need to stay in prison for a very long time. 4.问题同上 As a punishment for criminals paed down generation after generation, imprisonment seems an effective deterrence.However, this is not true in dealing with the problem of soaring cri
16、me rate.So some people begin to challenge the existing practice, and suggest that education and job training should be offered to them.Personally, I am in favor of this proposal.To start with, there is no evidence showing a direct link between the imprisonment of criminals and the decline of crime r
17、ate.On the contrary, after being in prison for some time, some criminal recommit the same error, which indicates the failure of the very intention of imprisonment.Secondly, criminals, as human beings, may become very sensitive and self-abased for the prison record, they may even lose the confidence
18、to lead ordinary and law-abiding lives.As a result, they may write themselves off as hopele and resume the role of wrongdoers again.Last but not least, establishing and running too many prisons is a great financial strain for the government, which is a waste of money as well as human resources. In c
19、ontrast, education and job training is a practice embodying humanism.It gives the wrongdoers a chance to the correct their misconduct and turn over a new leaf.This is especially true for those who go astray under some negative influence.By receiving job training, criminals may make a proper living r
20、ather than gaining profit in an illegal way.It would not long before the wrongdoers realize that they are still a member of community and they are not discriminated, which helps rebuild their confidence as well as contribute to the society.In conclusion, sending criminals to prison may serve as a de
21、terrent rather than a solution to the problem, yet education and job training should be effective in the long run. 5.Should parents be responsible for the kids crime? A recent report showing a 14-year-old child has killed her grandmother.The incident itself is very stunning to the public.Just as sho
22、wn in the topic, crimes are not supposed to be done by younger people who are not legally responsible for what they did.What seems urgent to us is my appeals for those parents who should take the responsibility for any thing like this which should be prevented in advance.The most sounding reason for
23、 this is child should be supervised not only by school but also by his direct custody-his parents.No matter what blame we could put on child who has limited awarene of knowing what is correct to do and what is not, parents are not free from the duty that is already endowed by the society to watch th
24、eir kids growing healthily.Moreover, parents have inevitable duty to educate their kids, let them know more about legal iues and right behaviors which is their basic leon for life.We could be sure a kid is a good kid without any discipline of their parents.In terms of discipline, parents should also
25、 take the responsibility to face some punishment as they are supposed to be disciplined by the cruelty of society.Any kind of the crime indicated by the above itself means a lot to them and they should face the all around blames from the society and neighborhood.The lo of such a lawsuit will result
26、in both the lo of face of their dignity and the lo of money in order to cover the compensation for the victims. So far so good, as for the age of kids who should take legal responsibility to such crime, the law has already settled for it.Countries around the world vary greatly.There is no fixed line
27、, but one thing is sure, as soon as you grow into adult you should be responsible for what you do in society 6.Putting criminals into prisons is not an effective way to deal with them.Instead, education and job training should be offered.To what extent do you agree or disagree? How to handle crimina
28、ls is a problem that all countries and societies face.Traditionally, the approach has been to punish them by placing them in prisons to pay for what they have done.Some, however, advocate for trying to make them better with training and education and it seems they may have a good point.First of all,
29、 consider all the money that we have to spend to lock people up in jail.It doesnt seem like a good use of public money if the people dont actually get any better.Because most criminals eventually are let out of prison, our focus should be on making them better citizens.In fact, the reason why many p
30、eople end up in jail in the first place is because they didnt have a good education or happy family.So if they can learn job skills they perhaps can find work and feel they can contribute in a positive way.If they do this, they wont need crime.Surly everyone deserves a second chance.Of course this d
31、oes not mean that we should be too lenient on criminals.Those who commit crime should still be punished, but during their punishment they should also be treated.If we make an investment in them and show compaion, most will be able to make a new start.To summarize, we must make more of an effort to g
32、o to the root of the problem.We need to treat criminals as patients and give them the medicine they need: education and training.By giving people the skills for a second chance we can make our society safer and healthier.词汇：Punish Vt.惩罚，处罚 Advocate Vt.提倡 jail n.监狱=prison lenient adj.宽大的，仁慈的 compaion
33、 n.同情 patient n.病人 短语：in jail 监禁 end up 最后结果 commit crime 犯罪 make an investment in 投资于 make an effort to do 努力去做 三分钟熟读或背诵本文最实用的三个句子： In fact, the reason why many people end up in jail in the first place is because they didnt have a good education or happy family.We need to treat criminals as patient
34、s and give them the medicine they need: education and training.By giving people the skills for a second chance we can make our society safer and healthier. 7.Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public.To what extent do you agree or disagree? （8分） With the crime rat
35、e hovering at high level, the print media as well as the electronic media dedicate large proportions of their space or airtime to detailed crime coverage.Whether the media should present detailed accounts of crimes has triggered spirited debate.Many aert that the news media should stop giving detail
36、s of crimes.Speaking for myself, I totally agree with their views. In the first place, given the mercenary motives behind most detailed crime coverage, it is imperative that we discourage such coverage.The principal purpose of reporter covering criminal acts is to boost newspaper circulations or tel
37、evision ratings; much detailed crime coverage is biased or exaggerated.It only serves to leave a multitude of citizens constantly fearful about crime. In the second place, detailed reports of crimes by the pre afford the potential criminals very useful learning materials.Reporting crimes in graphic
38、detail helps those who are in the proce of plan some criminal act to perfect their plans.Drawing on the well-documented crime stories in the media, would-be criminals learn how to avoid the mistakes in their crime.And this may aggravate the already soaring crime rate. In the third place, detailed re
39、ports of heinous crimes may traumatize the victims of the reported crimes.The reporters rarely consult the victims before they describe details of horrific crimes to the public.Hence, such reports become nothing more than an attempt to satisfy the curiosity of some base minds.Without the victims con
40、sent, graphic accounts of crimes may become nightmares to them. In sum, detailed crime coverage in the media undermines our lives in several ways.I am convinced if such reports continue to go uncontrolled, it will exert even more baneful influence on individuals, communities and societies. 表示同意可替换：a
41、pprove of/ wholeheartedly support/ cannot agree with their view more/ consent to/ am for 不同意可替换：disagree with/ am against/ am opposed to/ object to/ disapprove of/ cannot go along with Sample 1: Prison is not a cure for crime.To reduce crime in the long-term, courts should significantly reduce priso
42、n sentences and focus on education and community work to help criminals not to re-offend.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? There are many different opinions on the best way to reduce crime.The traditional solution is to be hard on criminals and put them in prison for a very
43、long time.An opposing view is expreed by people with more modern ideas.They think that education and job training are the long-term solutions to cutting crime.So whoe is right the traditionalists or the modernists? People in favour of reducing prison sentences often argue that prisons should not sum
44、ply be places of punishment.In traditional prisons, people learn a lot about crime, so when they leave prison, they will commit more crimes.Education, however, gives people the skills to get a job when they leave prison, which means that they will probably not re-offend.Part-time work experience in
45、the community is also very helpful as it is a step back into everyday life in society.People can be in prison, but they can also feel they are doing useful work. On the other hand, some people argue that long prison sentences are right because the punishment should fit the crime.If, for example, som
46、eone commits a serious crime such as band robbery, they should go to prison for a long time.They also believe that reducing prison sentences significantly reduces peoples fear of prison and consequently, people will commit more crimes.People will not be frightened of going to a prison which is like
47、a university with learning and work experience opportunities. In short, I agree that education and community work can have an important role in helping reduce crime, but there should be strict controls on the type of community work prisoners can do It is important to understand that some people are
48、a rea danger to society and need to stay in prison for a very long time. Crime 类常用词汇 触犯法律break/ violate/ flout/ disobey the law 犯罪commit a crime 罪行offences/ crimes/ criminal acts 罪犯criminal/ offender/ culprit /perpetrator 从犯accomplice / acceory （noun）（后者指帮助犯罪单未直接参与的人） 憎恨社会resent society/ hold a grud
49、ge against society 囚犯inmate/convicts 受害者victim 心理创伤trauma 牢房cell 监禁imprison / incarcerate someone 被绳之以法be brought to justice 宽容的lenient 改造罪犯reform/ rehabilitate criminals 执法部门law enforcement agencies 重罪heinous crime/ flagitious crime/ felony 轻罪petty crime / misdemeanor 初犯的人first-time offender 惯犯hardened criminals/ repe