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1、2015年高考英语年高考英语书面表达应急训练书面表达应急训练Themaintypesofthecomposition记叙文记叙文应用文应用文说明文说明文开放式作文开放式作文图表作文图表作文议论文议论文Howtomakeyourcomposition“LLL”Luxury,Large,Levelup第第29届奥运会在北京落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会届奥运会在北京落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设你叫李华，是该报的一名后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设你叫李华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由。内容包读者，请给该报编辑部写
2、一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由。内容包括括:向公众开放，用于健身向公众开放，用于健身租给体育公司，创造经济效益租给体育公司，创造经济效益开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客Dear Editor,I am Li Hua,a reader of your paper.Yours,Li Hua 审题审题 草稿草稿 定稿定稿体裁体裁人称人称时态时态 要求要求字数字数内容内容应用文（书信格式）应用文（书信格式）第一第一,三人称三人称一般现在时一般现在时/过去时过去时 1.列提纲列提纲/要点要点 2.连词成句连词成句 3.连句成篇连句成篇 4.润色修正润色修正第第29届奥运会在北京落幕，一家英文
3、报刊在其网站上征集奥运会届奥运会在北京落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设你叫李华，是该报的一名后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设你叫李华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由。内容包读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由。内容包括括:向公众开放，用于健身向公众开放，用于健身租给体育公司，创造经济效益租给体育公司，创造经济效益开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客Dear Editor,I am Li Hua,a reader of your paper.Yours,Li HuaThe29thBeijingOlym
4、picGames;over/finish/end/hold;Beijing;collect;advice;use/makeuseof/makethebestofthestadiums;contribute;suggestionsopento;thepeople/thepublic;beusedfor/as;bemadeto;fitnesscenter/dosomeexercise/buildourbodies/strengthenourbodies/keepfitgiveto/rentto/berentedtosportcompany/companieswhichorganizematches
5、/organizingmatchesmake/createmoney;bringinmoney/makemoreprofitsuseitas/beusedfor/as;takeitas;openitforplacesofinterest/touristattractionsattracttourists/appealto visitorsDear Editor I am lihua,a reader of your paper Several days ago,while I was looking through the website,I noticed this news,I think
6、 about it and I also have some ideas about that.Yeah,The 29th Olypic Games came to an end,which gived us a deep impression,But those stadiums which were built for the Olympics was a problem for us to think.Firstly,They can be opened for the public.The citizens can do exercise in them.and This is bet
7、ter for old people as well.Secondly,They may be rent to sport company.The government can charge stadiums into travel spots.I think it can appeal to more people who are from all over the world.Certainly,Every china all hope that they can be made a good use.They are symbols of chinas developing.These
8、are my personal opinion,thats all.Thank you.Yours lihua -申玉洁申玉洁 Dear Editor I am lihua,a reader of your paper.With the end of the 29th Olympic Games,we should make a good use of the stadium in time.In my opinion,the stadium could be free for people.On the one hand,people would like to go there more
9、times,on the other hand,everyone can exercise in it.But if you want to get some benefits.It should be rent to a company of P.E,a lot of money will be maken by this way.We can also turn it to travel sights,it will attract more and more tourists.In a result,we should protect our stadium,it has very im
10、portant meanings -吴霞吴霞Beijinghostedthe29thOlympicGameswithgreatsuccess._ The 29th Olympic Games;over/finish/end/hold/host;Beijing“主动不如被动巧主动不如被动巧”The29thOlympicGameswerehostedinBeijingwithgreatsuccess.（2006）“我们每次可以借五本书我们每次可以借五本书,最多借十天最多借十天”E.g.:“Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.”
11、改成改成Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.“宾语从句是活宝宾语从句是活宝”Ihearyouarecollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiums.(2014)中学生肥胖问题中学生肥胖问题一些学生认为肥胖对我们的健康有害。一些学生认为肥胖对我们的健康有害。collect some advice;how to use/make use of/make the best of the stadiums;Olympic GamesSomestudentsthi
12、nkfatnessdoesharmtoourhealth“一些模板要记牢一些模板要记牢”Iwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou.contribute;suggestions首首Imwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.首首Thankyouforyourlastletteraskingabout首首Imwritingformoreinformationabout首首Ireadinanewspapertodaythat首首Imwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussio
13、n首首Hownicetohearfromyouagain.尾尾 Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.尾尾IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,Iwouldbemorethangladtohelp.尾尾Bestwishes.书信常见首尾句书信常见首尾句第第29届奥运会在北京落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会届奥运会在北京落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设你叫李华，是该报的一名后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议。假设你叫李华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由。内容包读者，请给该报编辑
14、部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由。内容包括括:向公众开放，用于健身向公众开放，用于健身租给体育公司，创造经济效益租给体育公司，创造经济效益开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客Dear Editor,I am Li Hua,a reader of your paper.Yours,Li HuaThestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic.theycanstrengthentheirbodiesinthestadiums.“定语从句必须要定语从句必须要”（2014四川卷）描述可能的考试结果四川卷）描述可能的考试结果SoIsupposeIcangetagoodmark
15、whichwillenablemetoentermyidealcollege.open;people/public;be used for/as;be made to;do some exercise/build our body/strengthen our bodiesThestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic,theycanstrengthentheirbodies._where_Thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanieswhichorganizematches.Theycanbringinmoremoney/makemorepr
16、ofits“分词结构不能少分词结构不能少”Thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanieswhichorganizematches,_giveto/rentto/be rented to;sport companies which organize matches/organizing matches make/create money;bring in money/make more profitsthusbringinginmoremoney/makingmoreprofits.例：例：(2012)上海卷上海卷Thoughstandinginstarkcontr
17、ast,thetwopaintingsbothintriguedme.（2009）湖北卷湖北卷“Ataboutoneoclockthisafternoon,Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldntmeetyouatBoltonCoffeetomorrowmorningasshehassomethingimportanttoattendto.”Theycanbeusedastouristattractions.Andtheycanattractmanyvisitors.“肯定不如双否好肯定不如双否好”Theycanneverfailtobeusedastouristatt
18、ractionswhichcanattractmanyvisitors.use it as/be used for/take it as;places of interest/tourist attractionsattract tourists/appeal to visitors Frommypointofview,weshoulddowhatwecantomakefulluseofthestadiums.Webringabrightfuturetotheirvalue.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyouwouldtakemyadviceintodeepcons
19、ideration.In my opinion/as far as I am concerned./from my point of view；not waste/value/bring a bright future to their value;appreciate;“长句短句结合造长句短句结合造”Wecanletthestadiumsmakesense.Onlywhenwemakefulluseofthestadiums“陈述不如倒装妙陈述不如倒装妙”例（例（2013）安徽卷）安徽卷Iwillnotonlykeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,Iwil
20、lalsohelpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.Onlywhenwemakefulluseofthestadiumscanweletthestadiumsmakesense.Notonly will Ikeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,Iwillalsohelpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.高分口诀高分口诀“主动不如被动巧主动不如被动巧”“宾语从句是活宝宾语从句是活宝”“定语从句必须要定语从句必须要”“分词结构不能少分词结构不能少”“肯定不如双否好肯定
21、不如双否好”“陈述不如倒装妙陈述不如倒装妙”“长句短句结合造长句短句结合造”“一些模板要记牢一些模板要记牢”高考书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求高考书面表达各档次的给分范围和要求第五档（第五档（21-25分）分）完全完成了试题规定的任务完全完成了试题规定的任务:准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容，要点无遗漏应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方语法结构和词汇有少许错误，但为尽可能使用较复杂表达方式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力式所致；具备较强的语言应用能力有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑
22、有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全达到了预期的写作目的。第四档（第四档（16-20分）分）完成了试题规定的任务完成了试题规定的任务:比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容比较准确、清楚地表达了短文的内容应用应用语法结构和词汇语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求能满足任务的要求语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较语法结构和词汇应用基本准确，少许错误主要是因为尝试较复复使用较高级词汇使用较高级词汇1.Many people want to visit the stadium.2.The stadium is useful.Manypeoplearedyi
23、ngtovisitthestadium.Thestadiumisofgreatvalue.避免避免“中式英语中式英语”的问题的问题 这些体育馆场地可这些体育馆场地可向公众开放向公众开放用来健身用来健身My suggestion to public and open use for exercisingMy suggestion is that opening it to the public for taking exercise.The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with great success.I hear you are co
24、llecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums.I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.The stadiums can be opened to the public,where they can strengthen their bodies.The stadiums can be rented to sport companies which organize matches to make more profits.They can
25、never fail to be used as tourist attractions which can attract many visitors.From my point of view,we should do what we can to make full use of the stadium.I would appreciate it very much if you would take my advice into deep consideration.使用恰当的连接词使用恰当的连接词逻辑角度逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇合适的过渡性词汇排序关系排序关系 并列关系并列关系举例关
26、系举例关系转折关系转折关系因果关系因果关系归纳总结归纳总结递进关系递进关系first;firstly;second;secondly;last but not least and;too;as well as;along with;together withfor example;for instance;like;such as;as to but;however;while;though;on the contrarybecause;since;thanks to;as a result/consequence(of);thus;therefore in a word;in short;t
27、o sum up;in conclusionwhats more;besides;whats worse;worse still;furthermore;to make matters worse I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums _the 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with great success._I would like to contribute the following suggestions to
28、you.The 29th Olympic Games were hosted in Beijing with great success.I hear you are collecting some advice on how to make the best of the stadiums.I would like to contribute the following suggestions to you.afterHere_thestadiumscanbeopenedtothepublic,wheretheycanstrengthentheirbodies._thestadiumscan
29、berentedtosportcompanieswhichorganizematches,thusbringinginmuchmoreprofits._theycanbeusedastouristattractionswhichcanattractmanyvisitors.The stadiums can be opened to the public,where they can strengthen their bodies.The stadiums can be rented to sport companies which organize matches to make more p
30、rofits.They can never fail to be used as tourist attractions which can attract manyFirstofall,Secondly,Lastbutnotleast,visitors.Ihearyoucollectingsomeadviceonhowtomakethebestofthestadiumsafterthe29thOlympicgameswerehostedinBeijingwithgreatsuccess.ButIwouldliketocontributethefollowingsuggestionstoyou
31、.Firstofall,thestadiumscanbeopenedtopublic,theycanstrengthentheirbodies.Secondly,thestadiumscanberentedtosportcompanieswhichorganizematchesthusmoreprofits.Lastbutnotleast,theycanneverfailtobeusedastouristattractionswhichcanbeattractmanyvisitors.Frommypointofview,weshoulddowecantomakefullusethestadiu
32、ms.Iwouldappreciateverymuchifyouwouldtakemyintodeepconsideration.werearehappyhappilyawhichthethatwhatthemitadvicesadvicewhereofmakingmakes 问题小结：1.时态语态问题 2.介词短语问题 3.连词问题 4.词性混淆问题 5.冠词问题 6.定语从句关系词问题 7.非谓语动词问题 8.结构问题 9.固定搭配问题 10.代词问题 DearEditor,ImLiHua,areaderofyourpaper,Iseeyouarecollectingadviceabout
33、howtousethe.Forthis,Ihavesomeadvice.First,Ithinkitshouldbeopenedtothepublic,Andmakingkeepfit.Second,Ithinkyoushouldrentittosportscompany,canmakemoremoney.Whatsmore,Thesearemyadvice.Ihopetheycanhelpyou.gymnasticgymnasiumthemselvesthemAnditwhichyoucanmakeiteconomybenefit.Itcanmakemorepeopleknowit.youc
34、anmakeittouristattractionwhichwillappealtomanytouristshomeandabroad.IdappreciateitifDearEditor,ImLiHua,areaderofyourpaper,IhaveSeveralpiecesofadviceonhowtomakethemostofthegymnasiumtowanttodiscusswithyou.Firstly,thegymcanbecomeaplacewherepeopleplaysports.Makesurethatitcangiveeveryoneaccesstoit.Secondly,youcanrentittoacompanywhichisrelatedtosports.Itisabletocreatemorebenefit.Finally,itmaybechangedintoplacesofinterest,attractingmoretourists.Andpeoplecanalsoholdsomeactivitiesinit.Ihopeyoucantakeadvantageofthegym.