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1、赏结构:段落快速导入话题: 火星报道。请用“ ”画出段落请用“”画出段落 的主题句。作者主要 通过描述食物,来说明 本段落的主题。段落与写作意图紧 密关联,起到了点题作 用。并对火星上人们的 生活予以美好的祝愿。Module 3 Writing作品赏析,以读促写Hello! r m a reporter from our school English newspaper. Now I am reporting from Mars.I have just flown from the earth to report what the life is like on Mars. People li
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3、they have already had their own schools. But the schools arc not as big as those on the earth. Another interesting thing is that they have just built a beautiful park. People can walk in the park.Although peoples life is like that on the earth, they have some trouble. First, they haven, t planted al
4、l kinds of vegetables yet. Lots of vegetables come from the earth. Second, they can t keep many animals either. Most food comes from the earth.(t is clear that people can t live more conveniently like living on the earth. I am sure everything will be better in the员l口口1 .合理的衔接词能使文本具有更强的连贯性与逻辑性。请圈出本文中
5、的衔接词。2 .巧用简单的extra words,也起到衔接作用。如文本中画线部分的extra wordso 一个是 Another interesting thing is that与 It is clear that,他们既起到很好的衔接作 用,又能起到丰富语言的作用。赏内容在段落中,作者运用了 1+1或1+2内容拓展策略,对衣服、食物、学校和公园都进行了合理的内容拓展。如 People living on Mars have to wear special clothes. Look! Theirclothes are different from ours on the earth.
6、There is a clothes factory on Mars, which can provide enough clothes for them.实战演练:中国载人航天工程总设计师周建平3月4日在全国政协十三届五次会议首场“委员通道”上说,神舟十三号航天员在轨道上飞行已将近140天,状态非常好,下个月将回到地球家园。假设你是你们学校英语报的记者,请根据下表提示,写一篇有关神舟十三号航天员太空之旅的报道。Shenzhou-13, s journey to spaceWhoZhaizhigang, Wangyaping, YeguangfuWhat they have already d
7、one in space.take Shenzhou-13 to space, enter the space station successfully, teach in space for the second time, do sports to keep healthy, celebrate Lunar New Year, do some experiments in weightless conditions(失重)What they haven t done.not find life in space, not see UFO in spaceHow (Feelings and expectations)excited, proud, do more scientific research要求:1.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息。2.词数100左右。