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1、How to write a composition?How to write a composition?单位单位 阿城区交界一中阿城区交界一中姓名姓名 邹静邹静1How to write a composition?How to write a composition?Teaching Aims:Teaching Aims:According to the form,teach students how to write a composition using theeffective sentences.Train the students writing ability.Teachin
2、g Important Points:Teaching Important Points:1.Improve the students writing ability.2.Teach the students how to get the key words and how to use effectivesentences to complete a coherent composition.Teaching Methods:Teaching Methods:DiscussionTeaching Aids:Teaching Aids:1.the multimedia2.the blackbo
3、ardTeaching Procedures:Teaching Procedures:Step 1:Introduction of the basic elementsStep 1:Introduction of the basic elementsSix steps to write a composition Analyzing the taskFinding out the main pointsThinking of key points/phrasesForming sentencesCombining the sentences into a passageCopying norm
4、allyStep 2 Discussing the compositionStep 2 Discussing the compositionPresent the writing materials to the class,ask students to do some brainstorming:目前，许多学校对学生采取封闭式管理，学生对此看法不一。请根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。（字数：150 左右）有的同学认为有的同学认为21学校限制我们的自由；2学生和社会接触少；充分的发展。因此你的看法：.Analyzing the task:1学校是学习知识的地方；2学生应该安
5、心在学校里学习；可能会3学生的兴趣和爱好得不能得到3学生缺乏自觉性，离开了老师，写作人称为第三人称和第一人称,词数 150 词左右,时态一般现在时.Finding out the main points第一段:有的同学认为:1.学校限制我们的自由.2.学生和社会接触少.3.学生的兴趣和爱好得不到充分的发展.因此第二段:有的同学认为:4.学校是学习知识的地方.5.学生应该安心在学校里学习.6.学生缺乏自觉性,离开了老师,可能会.第三段:你的看法:7.呈现观点:赞成哪一方?8.说明理由/提出措施Thinking of key points/phrases:1.Let the students wo
6、rk in groups of four to get the key words of each pointorally.2.Ask several students to report their answers to the rest of the class.Presentthese key words and phrases to the whole class.(Point 7&8 is flexible,encourage students to express whatever they want to say freely.If they can,Chinese is als
7、o allowed.Then help them to translate what they say into English.)要点序号1.2.3.关键单词和短语 Limit freedomHave little chance to get in touch with Interests and hobbies/fully developed34.5.6.7.8.The best place to get knowledge Put ones heart intoLack the ability to control/affect It is.to keep students at sch
8、ool/(dis)agree to Organize various activities/develop.Forming sentences(pay attention to the use of conjunction)Ask students to say sentences one by one according to the points given.Step 3 Presentation1.Three keys to improving your composition:A.learn to use superior phrases.B.learn to use abundant
9、 sentences.C.learn to use suitable conjunction.逻辑角度时间顺序空间顺序合适的过渡性词汇first,then,finally/at last,soon after,immediately,suddenly,nexthere,there,on one sideon the other side,in front of,at the back of,next to并列关系转折关系and,as well as,alsobut,however,yet,instead,though,otherwise,despite,on thecontrary,in sp
10、ite of因果关系条件关系对比关系递进关系because,since,as,thanks to,as a result,thus,owing to,due toas long as,so long as,on condition that,if,unlesssimilarly,like,unlike,on the contrary,on the other hand,Besides,in addition,moreover,whats more,furthermore,whats worse,to make matter worse举例让步关系总结归纳for example,for inst
11、ance,such as,in other words,that is to saythough,as,even if/though,whether,who/where/what/when+everin general,generally speaking,above all,after all,in short,in a word,in brief,in conclusion,all in all4过渡性插入语I think,Im afraid,you know,as we all know,as far as I know,in my opinion,personally2.Change
12、sentences:(Present some typical sentences written by the students tothe class.Ask students to use superior phrases or sentences to change thesentences).In addition,students dont have the ability to control themselves.In addition,students lack the ability to control themselves./In addition,students c
13、ant manage themselves well due to a lack of self-control.They may play computer games and forget to study.They may spend much time playing computer games instead of studying./They may get addicted to playing computer games instead of studying hard.In school we should study hard.In school we should c
14、oncentrate on/be absorbed in/devote our body and soulto studies.Keep students in school all day are bad for students.Its bad to keep students at school all day.School is the best place to get a lot of knowledge,students should put theirheart into their studies in school.School is the best place to g
15、et a lot of knowledge so that students should puttheir heart into their studies in school.Some students cant behave themselves well but for teachers remind us.Some students couldnt have behaved themselves well but for/withoutteachers help./Some students cant behave themselves well unless teachersrem
16、ind us to do so.Some students leave the school may do something unrelated to their studies.Once they leave school,they may do something unrelated to their studies.We can only enjoy ourselves when we have school holidays.Only when schools break up can we enjoy ourselves.3.Fill in the blanks:Present t
17、he model one(without some conjunction)to thewhole class,ask students to fill in suitable conjunction,Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long.5Students have different opinions about it.Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom,and have little chance toget in touc
18、h with society.They are not able to fully develop their interests andhobbies,_they have less interest in their studies.Some other think school is the best place to get knowledge _theyshould put their heart into their studies._,Some students lack the abilityto control themselves._out of school,they m
19、ay lose control ofthemselves and do something that will affect their studies._,it is necessary to keep students at school._at the sametime schools should organize various activities _ students can enjoy theirschool life.Step 4.FeedbackStep 4.Feedback1.Let the students work in groups to correct each
20、other s composition and try tofind out as many mistakes as they can.2.Classify the typical mistakes.Step 5.Suggestions:Step 5.Suggestions:1remember as many words and phrases as you can.2Have a good knowledge of language points.3Practise more4Recite good passages regularly.5Do a lot of readingStep 6.
21、AssignmentStep 6.AssignmentWrite another composition as homework.附：假如你叫李华，今年读初三。在下午的班会课上同学们展开了一场讨论，主题是初三学生要不要参加体育锻炼。请你根据下表提供的信息，给某英文报社写一封信，介绍讨论情况。55%的同学认为每天应该进行适量的体育锻炼间不要太长锻炼能增强体质、减少生病的机会645%的同学认为锻炼浪费时间可以做早操，打乒乓球、篮球，但时 锻炼使人疲劳运动后很兴奋，耽误学习时间运动能使大脑得到休息，学习效率更 运动时还有可能受伤高注意：词数 150 左右，开头已为你写好。Dear editor,Im writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether GradeThree students should take physical exercise or not7