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1、高考英语复习之读后续写高分突破写作素材:动作描写Stanley got in line behind Zero.斯坦利排在泽罗的后面。Igor expelled saliva as he spoke.伊戈尔一边说，一边吐出口水。Tom made room as Stanley sat down.斯坦利坐下时，汤姆腾出地方来。He stopped writing as he became aware that somebody was reading over his shoulder.当他意识到有人在他身后阅读时，他停止了写作。Magnet helped Stanley to his feet
2、.马涅特扶着斯坦利站了起来。Stanley was half asleep as he got in line for breakfast, but thesight of Mr Sir awakened him.4.完善关系链所以，现在我们的任务就是将我们所推论出来的句子进行关系 链的完善。这个过程可以是动作链的完善，也可以是心理历程的领会题型读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，旨在考查 语言综合运用能力。读后续写一给出前文，写后文。理论上来说， 前文用于阅读输入信息，信息经过大脑思维转换后，形成对前文的 理解。理解一定是建立在确定主旨大意，明确前文作者态度和关键 信息的前提下，在
3、大脑中建立一个对前文的理解框架和概括，在此 基础上，继续建立顺序思维，确定接下来如何安排继续可能或者应 该出现的内容。续写局部内容不仅要求词汇和语言框架的准确使用、 语言的润色等，更重要的是，要明白应该如何整理续写内容，以使 得其和前文统一连贯并能够表述完整的信息、。续写是读和写的统一, 之间穿插了对阅读能力、概括能力、思维转化能力、语言领悟能力、 语言组织能力、创造性思维能力以及对上下文逻辑关系等的考查。高质量地完成读后续写最重要的是要大量阅读，形成一定的阅 读思维能力。沉淀思维，归纳信息，梳理脉络，转换思维，那么阅 读的思维能力注定会迅速提升。理解续写前文的内容是这一题型的 最关键局部，否
4、那么后面的续写就不会有任何形成思维的信息输人， 也就谈不上输出了 1多读，多思维，多沉淀，多拓展，这是应对读 后续写的重要环节！熟悉题型特点读后续写的阅读材料一般以350同以内的记叙文和夹叙夹议 文为主，偶有少量议论文。要求在此文的后面续写150词左右的英 文与前文构成一个完整的故事。一般来说，记叙文浅显易懂，但故 事情节多曲折动人，故事线索的逻辑性也较强。要求续写的局部多 是故事开展的高潮或结局。续写时要抓住故事的叙事线索，依据原 文的写作思路续写文章，并适当发散。写作要求是在读懂原文的基 础上，在规定时间内展开合理的想象，并运用所学的英语知识完成 续写。续写局部分为两段，每段开头语已经给出
5、。续写局部要有创新性，不是原文的抄写或胡编乱造，同时，还 要带有原文色彩。续写一般分为两类：半开放性续写和完全开放性续写。半开放 性续写要求务必根据文章的逻辑推理续写。完全开放性续写那么要求 依据文章的思路自由发挥。续写时要尽可能与原文的中心思想和语 言风格保持一致。读后续写不是随心所欲地写，而是要在所给段落开头的帮助下 完成续写局部。其中，段落开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，在 某种程度上引导写作思路向某个方面开展，所续写局部不能脱离各 自的段落开头语另起炉灶，要在其基础上进行拓展发挥。读后续写要求读写并重，需要对给定材料精确理解，这样所续 写局部才不至于偏离主题，就这方面而言，读后续写有点
6、类似阅读 理解题中对文章后续开展的推断，如：What would happen next?续写局部的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的，可根据自己对原文 材料的理解，对文章的结尾做出不同的诠释。【写作语料】动作描写（一）Stanley got in line behind Zero.斯坦利排在泽罗的后面。Igor expelled saliva as he spoke.伊戈尔一边说，一边吐出口水。Tom made room as Stanley sat down.斯坦利坐下时，汤姆腾出地方来。He stopped writing as he became aware that somebody was
7、 reading over his shoulder.当他意识到有人在他身后阅读时，他停止了写作。Magnet helped Stanley to his feet.马涅特扶着斯坦利站了起来。Stanley was half asleep as he got in line for breakfast, but the sight of Mr Sir awakened him.斯坦利在排队吃早饭的时候还处于半睡半醒的状态，但一看见 西尔先生，他就醒了。Kate struggled to her feet.凯特挣扎着站起来。Stand straight. Raise your chin.站直。抬
8、起你的下巴。His knees crumpled beneath him.他一下子瘫倒在地。He kept an eye out for Zero, but Zero didn!t come back.他留意着泽罗，但泽罗没有回来。心理描写（一）What worried him the most was the thought of his parents not knowing what happened to him, not knowing whether he was dead or alive.他最担忧的是他的父母不知道他发生了什么事，不知道他是死是活。An even crazier
9、 idea kept popping into his head.一个更疯狂的想法不断地出现在他的脑海里。（3） Two nights later, Stanley lay awake staring up at the star-filled sky. He was too happy to fall asleep.两天后，斯坦利醒着躺在床上，望着满天繁星。他高兴得无法 人眠。They walked for what seemed like a very long time, and still never came across. They became anxious.他们走了很长一段时
10、间，仍然没有找到。他们开始焦急起来。A wave of terror rushed over him when he saw.当他看到时，一阵恐惧涌上心头。The fear made him dizzy. He took a breath, summoned his courage,and continued.他吓得头晕目眩。他吸了口气，鼓起勇气，继续（说）下去。He heard his own heart heat.他听到自己的心在发热。He felt the scream explode inside him.他感到那声尖叫在他心里爆发了。Stanley could hear his he
11、art beat. Each beat told him he was still alive, at least for one more second.斯坦利能听到自己的心跳。每一次心跳都告诉他自己还活着, 至少还能再活一秒钟。He felt as if he was walking in a dream, not quite able to comprehend what was going on around him.他觉得自己好像在梦中行走，不太明白周围发生的事情。环境描写Stanley had a poster of him hanging on the wall of his b
12、edroom.斯坦利把他的一张海报挂在卧室的墙上。The lake was so full of holes and mounds that it remindedStanley of pictures hed seen of the moon.湖水中满是洞，石堆成山，它提醒着斯坦利他曾看到过这样的月亮。The sun had only just come up over the horizon, but he already could feel its hot rays against his face.太阳刚从地平线升起，但他已经能感觉到热阳光照在脸上。The sun wasnt yet
13、 up, but its rays arced over the horizon and brought light to the sky.太阳还没有升起来，但它的光芒在地平线上划出一道弧线，照 亮了天空。It was especially beautiful in the spring, when the peach trees, which lined the shore, bloomed with pink and rose-colored blossoms.这是特别美丽的春天，岸边的桃树盛开粉红色和玫瑰色的花朵。The air became unbearably humid. Stan
14、ley was drenched in sweat. Beads of moisture ran down the handle of his shovel. It was almost as if the temperature had gotten so hot that the air itself was sweating. A loud boom of thunder echoed across the empty lake.空气变得难以忍受的潮湿。斯坦利被汗水湿透了，汗珠从他的 铁锹柄上滚落下来，似乎温度变得如此之高以至于空气本身也在出 汗。雷声在空旷的湖面上回荡。The peak
15、 looked to him exactly like a giant fist, with the thumb sticking straight up.在他看来，山峰就像一个巨大的拳头，大拇指竖直向上。The storm moved off farther west, along with any hope of rain.暴风雨连同下雨的希望一起向西移动。The boat lay upside down, half buried in the dirt.船倒挂着，一半埋在泥土里。It was as if they had been walking across the flat bott
16、om of a giant frying pan, and now they had to somehow climb up out of it.这就好像他们一直在一个巨大的煎锅的底部行走，现在他们必 须想方法爬出来。Patches of weeds dotted the mountainside.一片片野草点缀着山坡。He was in a field of greenish white flowers that seemed toextend all the way around.他站在一片绿白花的田野里，这些花似乎向四周伸展开去。The sun cut through the cloud
17、, and Stanley felt its rays beating down on him. But soon more clouds filled the sky, shading Stanley.太阳穿过云层，斯坦利感到阳光正照射在他身上。但很快更多 的乌云布满天空，把斯坦利遮挡住了。人物描写Stanley weighed three times as much as the other boy.斯坦利的体重是那个男孩的三倍。Once he started a project he would work on it for years, often going days without
18、 sleep.一旦他开始做一个工程，他就会工作好几年，经常是几天不睡 觉。Elya blushed when Myra entered the room.迈拉进屋时，艾莉亚脸红了。His clothes were soaked with sweat.他的衣服被汗水湿透了。His throat felt as if it was coated with sandpaper.他觉得嗓子像被砂纸磨了一样。Even the people looked broken, with their worn-out bodies sprawled over the various chairs and sofa
19、s.就连那些人看起来也很疲惫，他们疲惫的身体躺在各种椅子和 沙发上。Every muscle and joint in his body ached as he tried to get out of bed.当他试图下床时，身体的每一块肌肉和关节都在疼痛。Now he had such a huge smile that it almost seemed too big for his face, like the smile on a jack-o-lantern.现在，他笑得那么灿烂，几乎超出了他的脸面，就像南瓜灯上 的笑容。 Zeros mouth was shut tight. As
20、 he glared at Mr Pendanski, his dark eyes seemed to expand.泽罗的嘴紧闭着。当他瞪着潘当斯基先生时，他的黑眼睛似乎睁大了。斯坦利在排队吃早饭的时候还处于半睡半醒的状态，但一看见西尔先生，他就醒了。Kate struggled to her feet.凯特挣扎着站起来。Stand straight. Raise your chin.站直。抬起你的下巴。His knees crumpled beneath him.他一下子瘫倒在地。He kept an eye out for Zero, but Zero didnt come back.他
21、留意着泽罗，但泽罗没有回来。心理描写What worried him the most was the thought of his parents not knowing what happened to him, not knowing whether he was dead or alive.他最担忧的是他的父母不知道他发生了什么事，不知道他是死 是活。An even crazier idea kept popping into his head.If he jerked too quickly, he felt a throbbing pain just above his neck
22、where Zigzags shovel had hit him.如果他用力太快，就会感到脖子上方之字形铁锹打到的地方一 阵刺痛。写作例如：A阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之 构成一篇完整的短文。（2022-T8 联考）A Run to RememberThirteen can be a challenging age. Not only did I have to adapt to my changing body, I also had to deal with my parents* bitter divorce, a new family and the upse
23、tting move from my country home to a crowded suburb.When we moved, my beloved companion, a small brown pony（小马），had to be sold. Feeling helpless and alone, I couldn!t eat or sleep, and I cried all of the time. I missed my family, my home and my pony. Finally, my father, realizing how much I missed m
24、y pony, purchased an old red horse for me at a local market.My horse, Cowboy, was without a doubt the ugliest horse in the world. He was pigeon-toed and knock-kneed. But I didnt care about his faults. I loved him beyond all reasons.I joined a riding club and faced rude comments and mean snickers abo
25、ut Cowboys looks. I never let on how I felt, but deep down inside, my heart was breaking. The other members rode beautiful registered horses.When Cowboy and I entered the events where the horse is judged on appearance, we were quickly out of the game. I finally realized that my only chance to compet
26、e would be in the timed-speed events. I chose barrel racing（绕桶赛），an event in which a horse and its rider attempt to complete a triangular pattern around three barrels in the fastest time.One girl named Becky rode a big brown horse in the race events. She always won the blue ribbons. Needless to say,
27、 she didnt feel threatened when I competed against her at the next show. She didn!t need to. I came in next to last.The bitter memory of Beckys smirks（得意的笑）made me determined to beat her. For the whole next month, I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena（运动场地）。We practiced f
28、or hours in the hot sun and then I would walk Cowboy home. On the way home I would be so tired; those five miles seemed twice as long.All of our hard work didnt make me feel confident by the time the show came. I sat at the gate and sweated it out while I watched Becky and her horse charge through t
29、he pattern of barrels, finishing the course with ease.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。My turn finally came.No cheers filled the air when I finished my show.写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。作者十三岁时，生活上遇到了 很大的变故，父亲给作者买了一匹新的小马，希望作者重新振作起 来。在赛马比赛时，Becky（贝基）经常获胜，这让作者很不开心。 作者带着自己的小马驹Cowboy（牛仔）坚持训练，希望击败Becky. 在这次比赛中，作者的努力能否得到
30、回报？面对结果，作者收获了什么？精彩范文My turn finally came. As I urged Cowboy forward, he stumbled, and almost fell, much to the delight of the other riders. I jammed my hat down on my head, stroked Cowboys big red neck and entered the arena. At the signal, we dashed toward the first barrel, quickly whipped around it
31、 and with perfect precision rounded the second and thundered on to the third. We tore around the final curve and shot for the finish line.No cheers filled the air when I finished my show. The end of our run was met with surprised silence. With the sound of my heart pounding in my ears, I heard the a
32、nnouncer call our time. Cowboy and I had beaten Becky and her proud fancy horse! I gained much more than a blue ribbon that day. At thirteen, I realized that Id always come out a winner if I wanted something badly enough to work for it. I can be the master of my own destiny.B阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段
33、，使之 构成一篇完整的短文。（2022山东师大 附中高三摸底考试）Paula is a 55-year-old woman living in New Jersey. She lives a happy life without concern for financial or social problems and she constantly shares laughs with her family and friends. About ten years ago, her husband Michael gave her a gold ring with a diamond in it
34、 on their 20th wedding anniversary. She cherished it very much and wore it every day.Having been married for almost 30 years, Paula had everything set for herself, and knew that her life in New Jersey was a thrilling one. One day, Paula was in the bathroom cleaning everything up, from the sink to th
35、e floor. She wanted to keep her house clean and beautiful. As soon as Paula finished washing the bathtub, she moved on to the part she feared most: the toilet. Wanting to get it out of the way, she quickly cleaned the inside of the toilet with a brush, and flushed（冲走）the soap away. After finishing,
36、she felt there was something wrong, but she couldnt think of what it was.Paulas heart skipped a beat when she noticed that her left ring finger felt a bit lighter. She slowly looked down at her ring finger, hoping that her treasured anniversary gift was still on it. She was frightened to see that it
37、 was lost. She didnt notice that she flushed it down the toilet.Paula said, “I must have flushed it down. It had been a little big on my finger, because it was winter time and my hands were smaller. I felt so bad about it. Sad and embarrassed/She couldnt believe that she just let thousands of dollar
38、s go down the drain（下水道），literally, She searched the bathroom and even the house, hoping that she just dropped if somewhere and forgot about it. She even took apart the toilet and searched the inside pipes with a flashlight, but in vain. Paula had no idea how to explain this to her husband. To buy t
39、he ring, Michael worked extra hard before the anniversary, so to tell him the bad news wan unimaginable for Paula.注意:L续写间数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。She softly knocked on the door to their bedroom.After finishing her explanation, Paula wiped away her tears and waited for Michael to say something.写前导读：本
40、文是一篇记叙文。Paula（保拉）弄丢了丈夫Michael （迈克尔）努力赚钱给她买的戒指，怎么也找不到，很可能掉进马 桶里了。Paula该怎么告诉Michael这个坏消息？ Michael会有什么 反响？精彩范文She softly knocked on the door to their bedroom. When she came in, she saw Michael reading his favorite book on the bed. Visibly sweaty and nervous, Paula said that she had bad news to tell him
41、. Michael was worried, but listened. With her eyes looking away from embarrassment, Paula cried and told her husband the ring was flushed down the toilet. Paula had mentally prepared herself for what could possibly be the toughest conversation with her husband ever. But Michael was quiet through the
42、 entire explanation, and this put Paula off.After finishing her explanation, Paula wiped away her tears and waited for Michael to say something. She thought he would get mad at her. However, MichaeFs face didnft show any anger. Suddenly, he interrupted the silence by giving her a hug. Paula was comp
43、letely shocked by MichaeFs reaction to the situation. After all, she lost the ring he had given her to celebrate their anniversary. Michael told Paula that he would buy her another ring, exactly like the one she lost. Paula felt greatly moved.c阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之 构成篇完整的短文。（2022武汉市局部学校高三质量检测）
44、The easy way out isnt always easiest. I learned that lesson when I decided to treat my father to a special meal. I glanced through the cookbook and chose a menu which included homemade bread. Knowing the bread would take time, I started on it as soon as he left for work.As I was not experienced in c
45、ooking, I thought if a dozen was good, two dozen would be better, so I doubled everything. As Dad loved oranges, I also opened a can of orange and poured it all into the bowl. Soon there was sticky dough( U) covered with ugly yellowish marks. Realizing I had been defeated, I put the dough in the rub
46、bish bin outside so I wouldnt have to face him laughing at my work.I went on preparing the rest of the meal, and, when Dad got home, we sat down to Cornish chicken with rice. He tried to enjoy the meal but seemed disturbed. Twice he got up and went outside, saying he thought he heard a noise. The th
47、ird time he left, I went to the windows to see what he was doing.Looking out, I saw Dad standing about three feet from the rubbish bin, holding the lid up with a stick and looking into the container. When I came out of the house, he dropped the stick and explained that there was something alive in t
48、he rubbish bin. Picking up the stick again, he held the lid up enough for me to see. I felt cold. But I stepped closer and looked harder.Without doubt it was my work. The hot sun had caused the dough to double in size and the fermenting yeast(酵母)made the surface shake and sigh as though it were breathing. I had to admit what the “living thing wasand why it was there. I dont know who was more embarrassed by the whole thing, Dad or me.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。My d