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1、专题05读后续写之精彩结尾新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破好的开端需要精彩的结尾，精彩的结尾可以吸引读者的眼球，这是获取高分的关键。名言警句主题升华特殊句式情感升华法人物动作画面定格、画面定格读后续写高分结尾首尾0乎应对话结尾结尾留白一主题升华1名言警句式结尾升华主题使用名言结尾往往能给文章增添文采和说服力，同时也能起到深化主旨的作用，这样的结尾可以抒发 感情和渲染氛围，合理运用名言警句可以为读后续写起到画龙点睛的作用。同时也应当注意具体文本具体 分析，使用名言警句合理得当。2022年高考浙江卷1月】One day I got word that he was admitted to hospi
2、tal for a serious disease. I felt so sorry to hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case. He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits. I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it. We bega
3、nwork as a fine team and finally finished our project on time. Our hard work paid off and Dr. Hendersons was very satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel
4、 farther.【译文】有一天，我得到消息，他因重病入院。听到这个消息，我感到非常遗憾，我想无论如何我都应该 去看他。当我带着一些鲜花和水果走进他的病房时，他有点惊讶。我提出做我们项目的其余工作，他邀请 我分享我的想法以完善它。我们开始作为一个优秀的团队工作，最终按时完成了我们的项目。我们的辛勤 工作得到了回报，亨德森博上对我们精彩的发现非常满意。从这个项目中，我们也了解到了队友的重要性。We started out with a small group of hikers. But as the word spread, the number of participants increas
5、ed. One day on campus, I met a girl in a wheelchair and we started talking. Her name was Grace. I asked her if she had ever been to the top of the mountain. She said she hadnt. I told her that my friends and I would carry her if she were up fbr it. Grace accepted (he offer. The next lime when we wen
6、t up the mounlain, we took tums to carry her in her chair all the way to the mountain top.This was probably one of (he most meaningful things I did during the campaign. By the end, we had over seventy-five people climbing the mountain on Thursdays, including Grace. All of us who participated felt li
7、ke we were part of something much bigger than we were. We were building a community and it felt great and no one was surprised that 1 had won the election.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。But I was so proud of my accomplishment (hat I let my pride out of control.When I realized I had made a mist
8、ake. I decided to change.【答案】But I was so proud of my accomplishment that I let my pride out of control. I began speaking down to people, demanding (hey listen to me. My friends and supporters (ried (o communicate to me that I had changed and that I was abusing my position, but I wasnt listening. It
9、 wasnt long before the very people who had trusted me began to turn against me. But I still wasnt paying attention and even had public conflicts with them.When I realized I had made a mistake, I decided to change. I used to think that I had to pretend to know what I was doing and that I was in charg
10、e. It was that kind of thinking that got me into trouble in the first place. Now, I was finding that the easiest way to gain other peoples respect was to admit to them what I did not know. I felt greatly ashamed. Eventually, I finished my term as president.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者通过努力，克服困难，成功当上了学生会主席。但很
11、快作者 被胜利冲昏了头脑，骄傲自满，滥用职权，最后遭到了众人的反对。最后，作者认识到自己的错误，并且 改过自新。【详解】1.段落续写：由第i段首句内容“但我对自己的成就太骄傲了，以至于我的骄傲失去了控制。”可知，第一段可描写作 者居高临下，滥用职权，甚至引发冲突。由第二段首句内容“当我意识到我犯了一个错误时，我决定改变。”可知，第二段可描写作者为改变做出 的行动，认识自己的不足，去赢得别人尊重。2 .续写线索：被指货不对发生冲突突然意识到问题愧疚改变感悟.词汇激活 行为类 滥用：abuse/misuse某人陷入麻烦：get sb. into trouble/sb. be stuck in tr
12、ouble承认：admit/acknowledge情绪类羞愧：feel ashamed/feel guilty【点睛】高分句型 1. It wasnt long before the very people who had trusted me began to turn against me.（句中 使用who引导的定语从句）身分句型 21. Now, I was finding that the easiest way to gain other peoples respect was to admit to them what I did not know.（句中使用that引导的宾语从
13、句以及what引导的宾语从句）3.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。One fall, my wife EHi and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world-the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also danger
14、ous. Polar bears-like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance. When Im face （o face with a polar bear, I like i（ to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male pola
15、r bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified. Elli and I tried all the bear
16、defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not （his polar bear though-he just kept trying to tear down （he fence with his massive paws（爪子）.I radioed the camp manager fbr help. He t
17、old me a helicopter was on its way, but i（ would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter（相遇），I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The
18、spray bums the bears eyes, but doesn*t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through ihe fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar（吼叫），ihe bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意:I.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语7Par
19、agraph 1:A few minutes later, the bear headed back to ourcamp.Paragraph?:At that very moment, the helicopterarrived. 答案】 A few minutes later, (he bear headed back to our camp, then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, fbr he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fen
20、ce like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasnt long before he eat up all the bread and came back again.At that ve
21、ry moment, the helicopter arrived. tkThank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to the spot that the bear had finally tore down the fence and ran towards th
22、e food we left behind. 1 quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene- we were robbed by a polar bear.【解析】【分析】本文以事件为线索展开，讲述了作者和妻子前往被称为“北极熊之都”的加拿大丘吉尔镇拍摄北极 熊。夫妻二人做饭之时，一头饥饿的雄性幼熊跟着面包的蒜香味，靠近了营地，猛烈撞击营地边上的铁丝 围栏。作者和妻子使出浑身解数，想吓退这头熊，不料它“不破篱笆誓不归无奈之下，作者求助营地管 理员，被告知救援直升机要30分钟后才能赶到，只得先尝试用胡椒喷雾喷洒北极熊的
23、眼睛，不料这使熊 变得更加暴躁，在T钧一发之际直升机及时赶到，他们得救了的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：由笫一段首句内容“几分钟后，熊返回了我们的营地。“可知，第一段可描写作者夫妻二人如何再次对付熊 及两人在此过程中的紧张害怕。由第二段首句内容“就在那时，直升机赶到了。”可知，第二段可描写作者夫妻二人获救时的心情。2 .续写线索：熊返回营地紧张害怕用面包攻击直升机赶到快速登上飞机熊把篱笆推 到拍下熊“打劫”的画面.词汇激活行为类激怒：anger/provoke / enrage抓起：grah/snatch up拿出：lake out/fetch out情绪类疯狂的：mad/crazy兴奋的：ex
24、cited/thrilled【点睛】高分句型 1 then we realized the spray had only angered him even more, fbr he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, （for 引导的原因状语从句）高分句型 2j My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do.（现在分词作状语）高分句型 3 Once the helicopter landed, we
25、 got onto it in no （ime, excited and relieved, （once 引导时间状语从 句和形容词作状语）.（浙江省十校联盟2022-2023学年高三上学期10月联考）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Charles Rose lived in the country with his father, who taught him to read and to write. Mr. Rose told his son that, when his morning lessons were over, he might a
26、muse himself for one hour as he pleased.There was a river near by. On its bank stood the hut of a poor fisherman, who lived by selling fish. His careful wife kept her wheel going early and late. They both worked very hard to keep themselves above want. But they were greatly troubled for fear that th
27、eir only son should never learn to read and to write. They could not teach him themselves, and they were too poor to send him （o school.Charles called at the hut of this fisherman one day, to inquire about his dog, which was missing. He found the little boy. whose name was Joe, siting by the table,
28、on which he was making marks with a piece of chalk. Charles asked him whether he was drawing pictures.“No. I am trying to write,“ said little Joe, “but I know only two words. Those I saw upon a sign, and I am trying to write them.”“If I could only learn to read and write/ said he, “I should be the h
29、appiest boy in the world.”“Then I will make you happy said Charles. I am only a little boy, but 1 can teach you that.”“My father gives me an hour every day fbr myself. Now, if you will try to learn, you shall soon know how to read and to write.”Both Joe and his mother were ready to fall on their kne
30、es to thank Charles. They told him it was what they wished above all things.So, on the next day when the hour came, Charles put his book in his pocket, and went to teach Joe. Joe learned very fast, and Charles son began（o teach him how to write.Some time after, a gentleman called on Mr. Rose, and sa
31、id, “Charles did not always amuse himself. I often see him go to the house of the fisherman. I fear he goes out in their boat.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。The momeni the gentleman left, Mr. Rose went in search of his son.The next day, his father took him to (own, and gave him books for himse
32、lf and Joe, with writing paper, pens, and ink.【答案】The momeni the gentleman left, Mr. Rose went in search of his son. He went to the river, and walked up and clown, in hope of seeing the boat. Not seeing it, he grew uneasy. He thought Charles must have gone a long way off. Unwilling to leave without
33、learning something of him, he went to the hut. He put his head in at the window, which was open. There a pleasant sight met his eyes. Charles was at the table, ruling a copybook Joe was reading to him, while his mother was spinning in the corner. Charles was a little confused. He feared his father m
34、ight not be pleased; but he had no need to be uneasy, for his father was delighted.The next day, his father took him to town, and gave him books for himself and Joe, with writing paper, pens, and ink. Charles was the happiest boy in the world when he came home. He ran to Joe, his hands filled with p
35、arcels, and his heart beating with joy.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了查尔斯罗斯和他的父亲住在乡下，父亲教他读书写字，查尔斯认 识了附近的渔夫的儿子乔，于是教他写字和阅读，这天父亲前来找罗斯，看到罗斯在教乔，感到很高兴。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“那位先生一走，罗斯先生就去找他的儿子“可知，第段可描写罗斯先生找到儿子后 的事情。由第二段首句内容“第二天，他的父亲带他到城里，给他自己和乔的书，还有信纸、笔和墨水“可知，第 二段可描写查尔斯拿到这些东西时的反应。2 .续写线索：陪走路一帮助感谢陪回家拒绝感悟.词汇激活 行为类 寻找：in se
36、arch of /look for 害怕：fear/scare装满：be filled with /be full of 情绪类担心：uneasy /concerned快乐：joy/happiness【点睛】高分句型1 He put his head in at the window, which was open.（运用了 which引导非限制性定语从 句）高分句型 2 He ran to Joe, his hands filled with parcels, and his heart beating with joy.（运用 了 独立主格结构） 5.（江苏省扬州中学2022-2023学年
37、高三上学期英语试题）阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Lucy was very nervous. She had a swimming competition in the morning and could not sleep. She tossed and turned all night. She was no stranger to competition. In fact, she loved it. Lucy was very athletic and was not only part of a swim team, but a soc
38、cer team as well. But this particular competition was important. She had made it all the way to the finals and didnt want to let her teammates down.When her alarm went off at 6: 00 am, she hit the snooze button and rolled onto her side, wishing she could just stay in bed all day. Having slept so poo
39、rly, Lucy was not at all ready for the day. After a few minutes, she stretched her arms above her head and yawned before throwing her covers back and climbing out of bed.She was terribly anxious about the competition, so much that she couldnt even eat breakfast. It felt as though her stomach was doi
40、ng somersaults （翻腾）.Lucys mother looked concerned. 4You have to eat something,“ she said. Its important to keep your strength up.” “I know, Pm just not hungry this morning,“ Lucy replied, picking at her eggs with a fork. All she could think about was facing the competition. What if she performed poo
41、rly? What if she disappointed her coach and teammates? She wouldnt be able to forgive herself.Lucys mom sensed her daughters worry and gave her a reassuring （令人宽慰的）pat on the back. YouH be great, dear. Just do your best. Thats all that matters.Lucy felt a bit of relief and appreciated her mothers ki
42、nd words. But by the time she got to the athletic club where the swim meet was being held, that feeling of comfort had dissolved （消融）.She went to the locker room to prepare for the competition, bu（ when she opened her gym bag, she was quite surprised.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragrap
43、h 1:She didnt expect to find a handwritten note.Paragraph 2:She saw her soccer uniform and realized she had grabbed the wrong bag.答案】She didnt expect to find a handwritten note. It was scribbled with signatures from members of the soccer team and a lovely hand-drawn smiley face, symbolizing optimism
44、 and victory. This inspiring note reminded her of the critical moment last year when the soccer team made it to the finals. Excited but anxious, everyone joined hands and decided to give it a shot. It turned out to be an unforgettable and fierce competition in which their team spirit led to a miracl
45、e. Lucy lost herself in this uplifting memory before she came back to reality with the gym bag in her hand.She saw her soccer unifbmi and realized she had grabbed the wrong bag. What shall I do? Without a swimsuit, I wont be allowed to enter the pool A fit of dizziness came over her, and she hardly
46、had the strength to stand firm. Lucy, heres your bag. It was her mother who arrived just in time, out of breath, stretching her arms with the bag. Never had Lucy felt so lucky to be blessed with care, encouragement and a devoted mother. Without hesitation, she headed fbr the swimming pool with a bri
47、lliant smile, anticipating the championship.【导语】本文以比赛为线索展开，讲述了 Lucy即将参加一场重要的游泳比赛，但她很紧张，担心会让教 练和队友失望，她误将足球包带到赛场，并发现足球队友鼓励她的纸条，这让她发现自己没带游泳包。正 在绝望时，母亲将游泳包送来，使Lucy意识到自己的幸运及母亲和朋友的鼓励，自信地参赛。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“她没想到能找到一张手写的纸条。”可知，第一段可描写纸条的内容及Lucy的回忆。 由第二段首句内容“她看到自己的足球服，意识到自己拿错了包。”可知，第二段可描写Lucy绝望时， 母亲及时送来游泳包
48、，使Lucy意识到自己的幸运，并带着鼓励和信心去比赛。2 .续写线索：发现字条足球队友的鼓励回忆意识到拿错包一母亲送来游泳包感悟 自信地参赛.词汇激活行为类使失望：let sb. down/ disappoint到达 get to/ reach表现：perform/ display情绪类担心的：concemed/ worried紧张焦虑的：anxious/ nervous/ tight【，点睛】高分句型 I This inspiring note reminded her of the critical moment last year when （he soccer team made it to the finals.（运用when引导定语从句）高分句型 2 It was her mother who arrived just in time, out of breath, stretching her arms with the bag.（运用 It was.who引导强调句）俗话说，一个人可以走得更远，但一群人可以走得更远。【结尾升华】Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.