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1、优点英语 专题 05 读后续写之精彩结尾 -新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破好的开端需要精彩的结尾，精彩的结尾可以吸引读者的眼球，这是获取高分的关键。一 主题升华1 名言警句式结尾升华主题使用名言结尾往往能给文章增添文采和说服力，同时也能起到深化主旨的作用，这样的结尾可以抒发感情和渲染氛围，合理运用名言警句可以为读后续写起到画龙点睛的作用。同时也应当注意具体文本具体分析，使用名言警句合理得当。【2022年高考浙江卷1月】One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. I felt so sorr
2、y to hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case. He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits. I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it. We began to work as a fine team and finally fini
3、shed our project on time. Our hard work paid off and Dr. Hendersons was very satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.【译文】有一天，我得到消息，他因重病入院。听到这个消息，
4、我感到非常遗憾，我想无论如何我都应该去看他。当我带着一些鲜花和水果走进他的病房时，他有点惊讶。我提出做我们项目的其余工作，他邀请我分享我的想法以完善它。我们开始作为一个优秀的团队工作，最终按时完成了我们的项目。我们的辛勤工作得到了回报，亨德森博士对我们精彩的发现非常满意。从这个项目中，我们也了解到了队友的重要性。俗话说，一个人可以走得更远，但一群人可以走得更远。【结尾升华】Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.2 特殊句型结尾升华主题（强调句、倒装句、虚
5、拟语气等）【2022年新高考全国1卷】I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the other runners. The race started. It seemed that the runway was extremely long for young children, not to mention a child with a brain disease. David insisted on running as if he had forgotten all his weaknesses, though he w
6、as tripped over within the a few kilometers. It didnt take long before he picked himself up again and continued his mission. Classmates all appeared on the racing track, cheering for him. “Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you!” they shouted enthusiastically. To everyones joy, he reached the
7、 final line and ranked the 20th. It was no more important whether he won the first place or not. It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.【译文】我看着大卫和其他跑步者一起走到起跑线上。比赛开始了。对于年幼的孩子来说，跑道似乎非常长，更不用说患有脑病的孩子了。大卫坚持要跑，好像他忘记了他所有的弱点，尽管他在几公里内被绊倒了。没过多久，他又重新振作起来，继续他的使命
8、。同学们都出现在赛道上，为他加油。“来吧！你可以做到！我们为你感到骄傲！“他们热情地喊道。令所有人高兴的是，他到达了最后一条线，排名第 20 位。他是否获得第一名并不重要。正是他勇敢的心和坚定的信念，才能让不寻常的事情最终发生。【结尾升华】It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally.3 情感升华法 【2022年高考浙江卷6月】I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way. This e
9、xperience made me realize that there are so many people in this world who need our help. It also made me realize that our small act of kindness can make them feel warm and make a great difference to them. I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food. I am anxious to urge t
10、he world to do everything possible to help those in need.【译文】我很高兴我以这种方式赢得了我的服务时间。这次经历让我意识到，这个世界上有这么多人需要我们的帮助。这也让我意识到，我们的小善举可以让他们感到温暖，并对他们产生巨大的影响。我永远不会忘记他们得到食物时看着我的样子。我急于敦促世界尽一切可能帮助那些有需要的人。【结尾升华】I am anxious to urge the world to do everything possible to help those in need.二 画面定格1. 人物动作的画面定格1.【2021年高
11、考浙江卷6月】I understood immediately what my parents wereworried about. They were worried that I was too selfish to give. I realized that my labor was very hard, but my growth and our whole family had been depending on the hard work of my parents! Dad never complained about unfairness! He even seemed to
12、think that was fair. I thought, “Ive only worked for two weeks, but how many years my father has worked!” In the evening, Dad came back. I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad. 【译文】我立刻明白了父母在担心什么。他们担心我太自私了，不能给予。我意识到我的劳动非常辛苦，但我的成长和我们整个家庭一直依赖于我父母的辛勤工作！爸爸从不抱怨不公平！他甚至似乎认为这是公平的。我想：“我只工作了两个星期，
13、但我父亲工作了多少年！晚上，爸爸回来了。我自豪地拿出自己的钱递给爸爸。【动作画面定格】In the evening, Dad came back. I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad. 2. His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front doo
14、r and placed it in Doras hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.【译文】他的努力得到了回报！鲁本紧紧地握着汽水罐，冲向商店去买胸针。他一拿到那枚漂亮的胸针，就冲进前门，把它放在朵拉的手里。多拉从来没有收到过这样的礼物。她高兴得说不出话来，紧紧地把儿子抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来。【动作画面定格】Speechless and happy, s
15、he held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.3. 【2021年新高考全国I卷】The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of th
16、e children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didnt expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mothers Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.【译文】双胞胎把早餐端上楼，叫醒了妈妈。当他们的母亲看到眼前美味完美的早餐时，她非常惊讶。让她非常感动的不仅是礼物，还有孩子们对她的爱。两个孩子能做
17、完早餐，她没想到。孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！母亲紧紧地抱着他们，一次又一次地亲吻他们。【动作画面定格】Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.4.The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face，“No.” God felt a bit relieved and said，“Tomorrow you can become human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly fo
18、r the rest of my life.” Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.【译文】蝴蝶擦干了脸上的眼泪，说，“不。”上帝松了一口气，说。“明天你就可以变回人类了。”但她摇了摇头说，“不，我想做一辈子蝴蝶. ”然后蝴蝶就会永远和她的爱人在一起。在山顶上，她似乎和他们一起快乐地享受着日出和日落。【动作画面定格】On
19、the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them. 2. 写景画面定格1.【2021年新高考全国I卷】Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed c
20、alm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning.
21、Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.【译文】然后杰夫注意到蒸汽从锅里喷出来，盖子开始摇晃。下一分钟，粥沸腾了，灭火了。珍娜惊慌失措。值得庆幸的是，杰夫保持冷静，迅速关掉了煤气。但是炉子现在一团糟。珍娜告诉杰夫清理一下，这样他们就可以继续煮剩下的粥了。但是杰夫的手碰到了热火器，他发出了痛苦的叫声。珍娜让他把手放在冷水中。然后她闻到了燃烧的味道。哦，天啊！锅里的那块面包也变黑了。【场景画面定格】Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black a
22、s well. 2.【 湖南师范大学附属中学2022-2023学年高三上学期月考 】And so it was that George left all his painting equipment to me. “You have the best talent and are most likely to use it well,” he said. After considerable persuasion, I accepted this precious gift, insisting that he could reclaim it at any time. He never di
23、d, of course, and I still use much of his equipment today, more than 20 years later. As I paint, I often remember George, his sunny personality, generous spirit and unfailing encouragement. The red tool box witnessed a friendship that lasted for 25 years until the day he passed away.【译文】就这样，乔治把他所有的绘
24、画设备都留给了我。“你有最好的才能，最有可能很好地使用它，”他说。经过相当多的劝说，我接受了这份珍贵的礼物，坚持他可以随时收回它。当然，他从来没有这样做过，20多年后的今天，我仍然使用他的许多设备。当我画画时，我经常想起乔治，他阳光的个性，慷慨的精神和不懈的鼓励。红色工具箱见证了一段持续了25年的友谊直到他去世的那一天。【场景画面定格】The red tool box witnessed a friendship that lasted for 25 years until the day he passed away.3. Looking up, I saw the sun shine br
25、ighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the suns rays. My consciousness ebbed away with the heat. I took a few blinks before I landed with a thud. 【译文】抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。我的意识随着热度而衰退。我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。4. The sky
26、was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come. 【译文】天空像是十亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。黎明已经来临。（黎明到来的画面）5.Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to the ho
27、rizon.【译文】黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。（黎明前的海面）6. The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.【译文】逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。（日落的美景）7. Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold under
28、 foot. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.【译文】潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。（雨后的清新）三 收尾呼应 首尾呼应不仅能强调主题，引起共鸣，也能使文章结构更加紧凑、严谨和自然。可以起到画龙点睛的功能，但是不一定照搬开头原词，可以使用词汇替换或者变换句式的方法做到收尾呼应。【开头典例1】 It was summer and my dad wanted t
29、o treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.【续写结尾1】Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind. 我从来没有过这么刺激又危险的假期。那次去西部的特别旅行，深深地印在我的脑海里。【开头典例2】I had an interesting chi
30、ldhood. It was filled with suprises and amusements, all because of my mother-loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange faimly trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.【续写结尾2】Despite moms being absent-minded and forgetful, she was still a kind and nice mom. 尽管妈妈总是心不在焉，健忘
31、，但她仍然是一个和蔼可亲的妈妈。【开头典例3】A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.【续写结尾3】What a funny day. Arthur couldnt stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious experience. 多么有趣的一天啊，每当亚瑟回想起这次欢乐的经历，他就忍不住笑个不停。四 对话结尾 以简单的对话形式结尾，适合记叙文续写，简单灵活，精心构建的对话可以感染读者，从而起到升华主题的作用。1.【202
32、2年新高考全国I卷】I watched as David moved up to the starting line.The starters gun sounded. But he had only gone a few metres before he tripped and fell flat on the ground. My heart sank. As I started to shout encouragement, other voices around me took up the call. “Come on David, you can do it!” David pic
33、ked himself up and started again until he crossed the finish line to wild cheers and applause. Then, when Davids coach slapped him on the back and said proudly, “Good job, David!” he caught my eye, flashed me a toothy grin and said, “That was easy!”【译文】我看着大卫走到起跑线上。发令枪响起。但他只走了几米，就被绊倒在地上。我的心沉了下去。当我开始大
34、声鼓励时，我周围的其他声音接听了电话。“来吧大卫，你可以做到的！”大卫振作起来，重新开始，直到他在疯狂的欢呼和掌声中越过终点线。然后，当大卫的教练拍打他的背，自豪地说：“干得好，大卫！”他吸引了我的视线，冲我露出一个露齿的笑容，说：“这很容易！”2.【2023届浙江省杭州第二中学新高三上学期适应性测试英语试题 】 Through its window, Edun saw faraway meadows and lakes, and many more mountains, a whole new world emerging before her eyes. That night, every
35、body stayed up late to see the stars. So many stars clustering up there, Edun proposed, “I need to take a picture of them.” “Click!” The camera froze the moment. Radiant with a smile, Edun approached Mom and hugged her, whispering, “Mom, thank you for having me come!”【译文】透过窗户，艾顿看到了遥远的草地和湖泊，还有更多的山脉，一
36、个全新的世界出现在她的眼前。那天晚上，大家都熬夜看星星。这么多星星聚集在那里，Edun提议，“我需要给它们拍照。“咔嚓！”镜头定格了这一刻。艾顿笑容满面，走近妈妈，拥抱她，低声说：“妈妈，谢谢你让我来！3. 【广东省汕头市金山中学2022-2023学年高三上学期第二次月考】As the music ended，thunderous applause filled the stadium. With the final marks announced，Mary knew she achieved her goal and tears began to well up in her eyes. A
37、s she headed back to the dressing room，Linda came up to her cheerfully and held her hand tightly，“Congratulations! Youve done an amazing performance! You win!” Mary smiled happily，“I win.”【译文】随着音乐的结束，雷鸣般的掌声充满了体育场。随着最后的分数宣布，玛丽知道她实现了自己的目标，泪水开始在她的眼睛里涌出。当她回到更衣室时，琳达高兴地走到她身边，紧紧地握住她的手，“恭喜！你做了一个惊人的表演！你赢了！玛丽
38、开心地笑了，“我赢了。4. Her husband spoke to the director of Heightvale, Dolores Haworth. Soon she offered him a job working for the company. She said，“He just had a brilliant working attitude and is definitely the type of employee we are looking for. I was told, If he does this for free, imagine his jobs if
39、he was being paid. I met him and he was a lovely and polite young man and he has already started working for us.”【译文】她丈夫和 Heightvale 的主管 Dolores Haworth 谈过了。很快她就给了他一份为公司工作的工作。她说，“他的工作态度很好，绝对是我们要找的那种员工。有人告诉我，如果他这么做是免费的，想象一下他的工作是有报酬的。我见过他，他是个可爱又有礼貌的年轻人，他已经开始为我们工作了。”五 结尾留白 结尾留白，这样的结尾给读者留下思考的空间，引入入胜，从而起
40、到加深主题的作用。1.While she wrapped them, I took a deep breath and asked Joy, “Do you have dinner plans?” I explained that Id like to wait a bit before I went back to the hospital to give Grace and her husband some time alone with baby. “Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat?” I asked. “Id
41、 love to,” she replied, her eyes sparkling like diamonds. And, this was the beginning of the end to my months of heartbreak following Betsys death.【译文】当她把它们包起来的时候，我深吸了一口气，问 Joy：“你晚餐有安排吗? ”我解释说我想等一会儿再回医院让Grace 和她丈夫有时间单独和孩子在一起。“你有兴趣和我一起吃点东西吗? ”我问。“我很乐意，”她回答，她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光。而且，这是我在 Betsy 死后几个月心碎的结束的开始。2.
42、The beggar hesitated for a moment, then he decided to open it. He declared aloud, “Who cares? He wanted me to have it anyway. I might as well enjoy it now.” With that, he unwrapped the white tissue paper, but to his surprise, there was no hard rock candy inside. Instead, into his fingers fell a shin
43、y white pearl worth thousands of dollars.【译文】乞丐犹豫了一会儿，然后决定打开它。他大声宣布: “谁在乎呢？不管怎样，他还是想让我拥有它。我还不如现在就享受呢。”说着，他打开了白色的纸巾，但令他惊讶的是，里面没有硬糖。相反，一颗价值数千美元的闪亮的白珍珠掉进了他的手指里。 即时练一练 (广东省深圳市光明区2022-2023学年高三一模)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。A Mothers Heartfelt Note of LoveEverything seemed to have changed for me
44、when I entered high school. I never saw a single person I knew from middle school. At home I was just as lonely. “My brothers and sister all fit in.” I thought, coming in the door after another bad day at school. “Why cant I?”Mom was there waiting for me. “Karole, your bedrooms a disaster. Why cant
45、you keep it clean?” The last thing I needed was criticism from my mother. What had happened to the mother who used to snuggle (依偎) with me on the sofa, loving me with complete acceptance? Who thought everything I did was wonderful? I didnt bother trying to explain my unhappiness. It was easier to hi
46、de in my bedroom, without saying a word, like I did every afternoon.Clearing off some space, I sat down at my desk. Yet another thing I wasnt good at anymore. My grades had slipped along with my confidence. I turned to a new page in my notebook and started working out the first problem. Almost immed
47、iately, I saw Id made a mistake. “Wrong again!” I thought. “You cant do anything right!” I tore the paper out of my notebook, balled it up in my fist and threw it at the wastepaper basket. The ball landed on the floor. I heard my mothers voice in my head, “Why cant you keep your room clean?”By the t
48、ime I finished my homework, the floor was littered with crumpled (弄皱的) paper. It gave me a kind of satisfaction to see the mess Id made. Like it was proof of all my shortcomings. Every time I looked at those crumpled balls, I reminded myself what a failure I was. But my unhappiness stayed hidden awa
49、y, just like those mistakes. With my face a mask of indifference, no one knew what I was really feeling. Who would want to listen?One day, I came home to an empty house. It was a relief not to be met with Moms latest complaint. “Nothing I do is right in her eyes.” I thought. “Or anyone elses, including mine.”注意：1