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1、图表式作文写作图表式作文写作请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇题为请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇题为Changes in Chinese Peoples Diet的短文的短文,短文可分为三小节短文可分为三小节:1)state the changes in peoples diet in the past five years;2)give possible reasons for the changes;3)draw your own conclusions.注意注意:1.尽可能少引用数据尽可能少引用数据;2.词数词数100 左右左右19992000200120022003Grain43%42%41%
2、41%40%Milk13%14%14.5%14.5%15%Meat25%25%26%26.5%27.5%Fruit&Vegetables19%19%18.5%18%17.5%Total100%100%100%100%100%There have been some changes in the diet of the Chinese people.Grain,the main food of the most people in China,is now playing a less important role.The amount of fruit and vegetables in th
3、e average persons diet has also dropped by 1.5%from 1999 to 2003.The mount of milk and meat has increased.The changes in diet can be explained by several reasons.For one thing,with the development of the economy,people can afford to buy better foods.For another,people have realized the importance of
4、 a balanced diet.In a word,the changes are the signs of the improvement in peoples lives.There is no doubt that therell be greater changes in peoples diet in the future.第一步:第一步:点明主题点明主题第三步:归纳总结并得出结论第三步:归纳总结并得出结论第二步:观察图表中数据的第二步:观察图表中数据的增减总趋势,分类式阐明,增减总趋势,分类式阐明,并说明原因并说明原因.There have been some changes i
5、n the diet of the Chinese people.Grain,the main food of the most people in China,is now playing a less important role.The amount of fruit and vegetables in the average persons diet has also dropped by 1.5%from 1999 to 2003.The amount of milk and meat has increased.The changes in diet can be explaine
6、d by several reasons.For one thing,with the development of the economy,people can afford to buy better foods.For another,people have realized the importance of a balanced diet.In a word,the changes are the signs of the improvement in peoples lives.There is no doubt that therell be greater changes in
7、 peoples diet in the future.The amount of be explained byFor one thingFor anothereconomyrealizedplaying a less important roleIn a word总结规律总结规律 图表式作文写作分图表式作文写作分三步三步:一、开头一、开头 Starting 二、分析二、分析 数据数据 Analyzing 三、得出结论三、得出结论 Coming to a conclusion第一第一,开门见山开门见山地点名本图表所反映的主题地点名本图表所反映的主题常用的词汇有:常用的词汇有:1.table,
8、chart,figure,graph1.table,chart,figure,graph2.describe,tell,show,represent2.describe,tell,show,represent第二第二,分析分析数据间主要差异及趋势数据间主要差异及趋势,然后描写然后描写在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时,可采用在描写数据间变化及总趋势特征时,可采用分类式分类式或或对比对比式式以支持主题,并阐明必要的理由。要注意层次清楚。以支持主题,并阐明必要的理由。要注意层次清楚。1.上升:上升:rise,increase,more than2.下降:下降:drop,reduce,decrease,
9、fall,less than3.强化论点:强化论点:First,Second,ThirdFinallyFirstly,Secondly,ThirdlyFinallyFirst of all,Then,Next,At lastFurthermore;Besides;MoreoverWhats more,;At the same time,;What is worse,4.比较:比较:compare to/with,compared to/with,in contrast to5.相同:相同:asas,the same as,similar to6.不同:不同:different from,dif
10、ference between/among第三,第三,归纳总结归纳总结或发表评论或发表评论.(有时第三步可省略)有时第三步可省略)常用的词汇有:常用的词汇有:1.Finally;Therefore2.In a word;In short;In the end;In other words;As a result;In all;3.Generally speaking4.As I have shown;As has been stated;As you(we)all know 根据下面所给两幅图根据下面所给两幅图,完成完成100词左右的一篇短文词左右的一篇短文(首句已首句已给出给出).参考词汇参
11、考词汇:expenses(n.)支出,费用支出,费用25%housing 18%food&drink22%food&drink32%housingotherother (a)Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 1997 (b)Percentage of Average Family Expenses in 2002 The Average Family Expenses The average family income in the u.s.has increased._ The Average Family Expenses The avera
12、ge family income in the U.S.has increased.The way the average family spends its income has also changed.In 1997,25 percents of the income was spent on housing and 18%on food and drink.57%was used to meeting other expenses.In 2002,32%was spent on housing,a big increase.Food and drink consumed 22%.The
13、 remained expenses amount to 46%.Its clean from the charts that as incomes increase people can afford to live more comfortably and eat much.The Average Family Expenses The average family income in the U.S.has increased.The way the average family spends its income has also changed.In 1997,25 percents
14、 of the income was spent on housing and 18%on food and drink.57%used to meet other expenses.In 2002,32%was spent on house,a big increase.Food or drink consumed 22%.The remained expenses amount to 46%.Its clear from the charts that with incomes increase people can not afford to live more comfortably
15、and eat much.1_2_3_4_5_6_7_8_9_10_itspercentwashousingandremainingasmorenot根据所给图表,写一篇题为根据所给图表,写一篇题为“电影与电视电影与电视”的短文:的短文:短文须包括以下要求:短文须包括以下要求:A.电影观众人数呈下降趋势;电影观众人数呈下降趋势;B.电视观众人数越来越多电视观众人数越来越多(原因原因:方便方便,经济经济,选择范围选择范围);C.然而还是有人喜欢看电影然而还是有人喜欢看电影(原因原因:气氛气氛,娱乐娱乐)。注意注意:(1)短文须包括主要内短文须包括主要内容,可适当增减,使内容连容,可适当增减,使内容连贯;贯;(2)词数词数100左右左右;(3)开头开头已写好。已写好。From the table,we can see that film is giving way to TV in our city._Thank goodness,I had you today!See you later!