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1、 图表式作文的几种形式图表式作文的几种形式:一是以一是以表格表格形式形式,将统计的数据或被说明的将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来事物直接用表格形式体现出来,即统计表。即统计表。二是以二是以图形图形形式形式 A 表示数据变化的表示数据变化的曲线图曲线图;B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异 的的柱状图柱状图;C 表示总体内部结构变化的表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图扇形图。Warming up根据所给图表根据所给图表,用用5句话描写近年来看句话描写近年来看电影与看电视的人数变化的短文。电影与看电视的人数变化的短文。(a):Number of TV watc
2、hers(b):Number of film goersNumber of People(in thousands)AB APercentage of Average Family Expense in 2000 BPercentage of Average Family Expense in2005Housing 25%other57%Housing32%other46%Fooddrink22%Fooddrink18%观察下列图表观察下列图表,根据图示描述该市住房产权的根据图示描述该市住房产权的变化变化;并说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的并说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响影响;%204060
3、80100199520002005State-ownedprivate图表式作文写作分三步图表式作文写作分三步:第一、开门见山地点明本图表所反映的第一、开门见山地点明本图表所反映的主题主题经常使用的词汇有经常使用的词汇有:table,chart,figure,graph,describe,tell,show,represent等等。等等。技巧指导技巧指导第二、第二、分析数据间的主要差异及趋势分析数据间的主要差异及趋势,然后描写然后描写compare.to/with in contrast to,as.as,the same as,similar to,different from,differ
4、ence between,among,more than,less than等等。等等。rise,drop,reduce,increase,decrease,fall,while,but,on the contrary,however,.,第三、第三、归纳总结或发表评论。有时第三步可省略归纳总结或发表评论。有时第三步可省略 In a word,In short,Generally speaking,Its clear from the chart that.,We can draw the conclusion that.,We can learn/know Its obvious that.
5、等等。等等。【例析】请你根据下表提供的信息例析】请你根据下表提供的信息描述近描述近5年人们饮食的变化年人们饮食的变化,并说明并说明变化的原因变化的原因.分析分析:本本统计表描述统计表描述中国人民从中国人民从2001年至年至2005年饮年饮食结构的变食结构的变化。化。20012002200320042005grain43%42%41%41%40%milk13%14%14.5%14.5%15%meat25%25%26%26.5%27.5%Fruit&vegetable19%19%18.5%18%17.5%total100%100%100%100%100%第一步第一步:点明此表格所表明的主题点明此表
6、格所表明的主题 Key words:changes,in the diet of 1 1 As can be seenAs can be seen from the table,from the table,there are a lot of changes in the there are a lot of changes in the peoples diet in the past five years.peoples diet in the past five years.第二步第二步:观察图表中数据的增减总趋势观察图表中数据的增减总趋势,阐明原因阐明原因 2 Grain,the m
7、ain food of the most people in China,is now playing a less important role and the amount of fruit and vegetables in the average peoples diet has also dropped by 1.5 percent from 2001 to 2005.3 The amount of milk and meat has increased.4 The changes are the signs of the improvement in peoples lives.第
8、三步第三步:归纳总结并得出结论。归纳总结并得出结论。5 In a word,there is no doubt that there will be great changes in peoples diet in the future.观察下列图表观察下列图表,根据图示描述该市住房产权的根据图示描述该市住房产权的变化变化;并说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的并说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响影响;%20406080100199520002005State-ownedprivate注意注意:词数词数100左右左右.首句已经为你写好首句已经为你写好,不计入总词数不计入总词数.1.1.As can
9、be seen from the chart,ownership As can be seen from the chart,ownership of houses in a big city in China has changed a of houses in a big city in China has changed a lot in the past ten years.lot in the past ten years.2.2.In 1995,75%of In 1995,75%of the houses were state-owned.the houses were state
10、-owned.3.3.Five years Five years later,the rate of state-owned houses to private later,the rate of state-owned houses to private ones was 3 to 2.ones was 3 to 2.4.4.But from then on,the But from then on,the ownership of houses changed rapidly and so far ownership of houses changed rapidly and so far
11、 80%of houses have been private.80%of houses have been private.5.5.Such changes Such changes have had a great effect on the development of have had a great effect on the development of society and It does good to both the citizens society and It does good to both the citizens and the whole city.and
12、the whole city.根据所给图表根据所给图表,用用5句话写一篇题为句话写一篇题为“电影与电视电影与电视”的短文。的短文。短文须包括以下要求短文须包括以下要求:A.电影观众人数呈逐年下降趋势电影观众人数呈逐年下降趋势;B.电视观众人数越来越多电视观众人数越来越多(原因原因:方便、经济、选择范围方便、经济、选择范围);C.然而还是有人喜欢看电影然而还是有人喜欢看电影(原因原因:气氛、娱乐气氛、娱乐)。参考词汇参考词汇:decrease v.下降下降 atmosphere n.氛围氛围 entertainment n.娱乐娱乐 film goer/TV watcher电影电影/电视观众电视
13、观众(a):Number of TV watchers(b):Number of film goersNumber of People(in thousands)AB参考范文参考范文:1 From the table,we can see that film is giving way to TV in our city.2For example,in 1992,there were less than 10 thousand TV watchers,more than 80 thousand film goers,while in 2002,we had about 1 million TV
14、 watchers but only about 10 thousand film goers.3The number of film goers is decreasing and that of TV watchers is increasing.4Televisions are quite common nowadays and so more and more people turn to TV because it is convenient and cheap and watchers have a wide range of programs for them to choose from.5At the same time,there are still some people who prefer films because they like the atmosphere in the cinema as well as the entertainment