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1、读后续写（一）大题优练11优选例题【例题】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。During this past year, I've had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn't bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours wit
2、h my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK(千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveye
3、d through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw(锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.I started taking the
4、wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepare
5、d a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man's hand, but he wouldn't take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy
6、 could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I'd had lunch. After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. 【范文】 When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if
7、 Id had lunch. I told her I hadnt had lunch because Id been waiting here for help for nearly three hours. The girl said they didnt have lunch either. She suggested to her parents that we have lunch together. Their truck happened to have some food and some things for picnic. So we ate together in a v
8、acant lot by the side of the road. During that time, I told about what had happened to me and how I felt. They shared interesting stories about their lives in Mexico and on fruit farms. After lunch, the girls mother put a paper bag of fruit in my Jeep. I showed my gratitude again and we said goodbye
9、 to each other. After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag. There are some delicate fruits in the paper bag. I was surprised to find the money I had quietly left them. At the same time, there was a note written by a girl, which read “We are very happy to be able to help you. We hav
10、e encountered many difficulties and been disappointed. But we met a lot of helpful people, which made us feel very warm. To help others with ones own ability is also a kind of lifting a finger. The beauty of life comes from these lifting a finger. I hope you have a good life and a happy mood.” This
11、made me very moved, and I would try my best to help more people in the future to make our world more beautiful and warmer.【语篇分析】本文属于读后续写。根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。认真读懂所给提供的材料：作者车子出了故障，在马路边等待了三个小时寻求过路的车辆的帮助，后来等到了一家墨西哥人的帮助。续写的第一段首句提示：我正要告别的时候，小女孩问我是否吃了午餐。那么续写的第一段可以针对吃午餐发生的事情展开；而续写的第二段首句提示：他们离开之后，我
12、到车里面打开纸袋。由此续写的第二段则可以纸袋里面的东西展开构思。注意续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。【亮点说明】逻辑连接词：so，after.，at the same time亮点词汇：wait for（等待），happen to（碰巧），show ones gratitude（表达某人的感激），be able to（能够），enc
13、ounter difficulties（遇到困难），try ones best to（尽某人最大的努力做某事）句型句式：I told her I hadnt had lunch because Id been waiting here for help for nearly three hours. （省略引导词的宾语从句和because引导的原因状语从句）She suggested to her parents that we have lunch together. （that引导的宾语从句）During that time, I told about what had happened
14、to me and how I felt.（what和how引导的宾语从句）I was surprised to find the money I had quietly left them.（省略关系代词的定语从句）At the same time, there was a note written by a girl, which read “We are very happy to be able to help you.” （which引导的定语从句）模拟优练（一）On a rainy night in March 2013, my husband Reece went out to
15、get a box that he had forgotten in his car. On his way back inside, he noticed a small shadow moving on the driveway. He walked towards it quietly, and found it was a small hedgehog(刺猬), all wet in the grass, eating mud. Reece quickly removed his jacket and picked it up. The hedgehog was very weak a
16、nd unable to move about quickly. But he did not seem to be frightened; nor did he resist being scooped up (抱起).Once he was inside, Reece called out to me, saying that he had something that would make my heart melt, and he was right! We named the hedgehog Alf, because, just like the TV show character
17、 of the'80s, he came out of nowhere. And, like Alf the alien, this little hedgehog was amazingly intelligent. Not only did he learn to eat his dinner and drink water from his bowls, but he also learnt to wait for us inside his little indoor cubby house and hop into his pet carrier whenever we to
18、ok him out with us.Alf knows us very well and recognizes both our voices. He does not roll into a ball or put his spines up. Every day he allows us to pat him. He loves playing with paper and towels and will bite and tug on the bed sheets if given a chance. Like all pets, Alf loves his treats, in pa
19、rticular small pieces of sugar-coated biscuits.Unfortunately, in April 2014, I was in a car accident and had to spend two months in the hospital. And boy, did I miss Alf! Reece told me that Alf would search around the house for me, checking in places where I'd normally be, such as my desk, my fa
20、vorite seat in front of the TV and even my side of the bed.注意：1.续写的词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。One evening, Reece set up a video call for me from my hospital bed. _I cannot describe the feeling when I arrived home and saw his little face again._【范文】One evening, Reece set up a video call for me fro
21、m my hospital bed. When the video phone was connected, I saw Reece holding Alf in his arms and Alf was staring at the phone screen. Alf seemed shocked when it saw me at the other end of video. It kept scratching the phone screen with its claws, which made me so excited that tears filled my eyes. At
22、this moment, I knew she also missed me very much. How I wanted to run back to it and pat it. Then we could play with each other.I cannot describe the feeling when I arrived home and saw his little face again. As Alf saw me again, it rubbed my trousers with its little face, and then grabbed my pants
23、tightly with its claws as if I would disappear. When Reece saw us like this, he said he thought Alf had regarded me as his mother. I looked at him with great excitement and said, “I also think of it as my own child.” People can cultivate feelings with each other, while people and animals can also cu
24、ltivate such affection. And then we would live happily with Alf.【语篇分析】本文以动物为线索展开， 讲述了作者的丈夫捡回来的一只小刺猬， 他们给小刺猬起名叫Alf，并且像养宠物一样，让Alf学会吃饭和用碗喝水，在和Alf的相处中，Alf也和作者一家相处的非常快乐。 但不幸的是， 作者出了车祸， 需要在医院呆两个月，作者非常想念Alf，Alf也非常想念作者，它们通过视频互相表达想念，最后作者终于康复回到家，再次见到Alf的经历。【亮点说明】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“一天晚上，里斯给在病床上的我打了一个视频电话。”可知，第一段可
25、描写作者和Alf通过视频电话表达想念。由第二段首句内容“当我回到家，再次看到他的小脸时，我的感觉难以形容。”可知，第二段可描写作者回到家再一次见到Alf的感受。2.续写线索：接通电话盯着看想念回家见面激动快乐3.词汇激活行为类接通电话：connect/get through/put through盯着看：stare at/gaze at想念：miss/ long to see again认为：regard as/think of情绪类激动的：showing ones excitement/excited/ excitedly快乐地：happily/joyfully【点睛】高分句型1. It k
26、ept scratching the phone screen with its claws, which made me so excited that tears filled my eyes.（由关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型2 As Alf saw me again, it rubbed my trousers with its little face, and then grabbed my pants tightly with its claws as if I would disappear.（由as引导的时间状语从句和as if引导的方式状语从句）（二）I
27、live in an old two-story home in Newark. My neighbors are mostly retired people with perfect yards. One of the retirees, Joe Perez, lives on the corner. Because of our time together last summer, he and I have built a special relationship.At the start of the summer, Joe and I didn't hit it off to
28、o well. He was very picky about his yard. Every morning he was doing something to make the lawn look better. If we played around and stepped on the grass, Joe would yell at us from his front porch (门廊）。Through mid-July his yard was perfect, but then I noticed some changes. I didn't see Joe outsi
29、de as much. His grass was getting brown and untidy, and some weeds were growing in his flower beds. It wasn't like Joe to let things go. I didn't think much about it, but when I walked by his place, I wondered why he wasn't taking care of his yard.One day I was sitting on the curb waitin
30、g for one of my friends to show up when Joe came out on the porch. I expected him to yell at me for sitting on his grass. Instead, he swayed back and forth. Then he fell down! I ran to my house and dialed 911. “My neighbor, Mr Perez, just passed out! He lives on the corner of Garden and Mills,"
31、 I blurted. Then I hurried back to the porch to see what I could do. Joe was awake, but he was as white as a ghost. He started blankly at me.“W-What happened to me?” he mumbled.“You passed out, Mr Perez,” I said, trying to catch my breath. “But help is on its way," The paramedics came and took
32、Joe to the emergency room. It turned out that Joe had been forgetting to take his blood pressure medication. A doctor gave Joe some medicine and examined him carefully.Paragraph 1:Then Joe was allowed to go home._Paragraph 2:Joe found lots of things I could do._【范文】Then Joe was allowed to go home. T
33、he doctor said that he was going to be all right, and I was glad about bat. Joe thanked me for helping him. He said that I could play in his yard whenever I wanted. I felt so surprised that I couldn't say a word at first. Then I asked him, “Is there anything I can do for you, Mr. Perez?” Little
34、did I know that one question would change everything.Joe found lots of things I could do. Soon I was cutting his grass, weeding his flower beds, and tidying his bushes, as well as the grass along his sidewalk. Before long, I was planting things like an expert and telling kids to stay off his grass.
35、Instead of yelling at me from his porch, Joe now waved and smiled. A whole year has passed, and each week I help Joe. I've realized that I can make a difference, so I also help some of the other retired neighbors. Joe has taught me that helping people is what life is all about.【语篇分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲
36、述了作者和退休邻居乔并不是很合得来，后来有一次乔摔倒，作者拨打911救了他，还帮他打理花园，两人关系发生转变的故事。【亮点说明】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“然后乔被允许回家了。”可知，第一段可描写作者救了乔，两人关系好转。由第二段首句内容“乔发现了很多我能做的事。”可知，第二段可描写作者帮助乔做了很多事情，两人日后友好相处。2.续写线索：救了乔的命病愈关系好转帮忙相处友好感悟3.词汇激活行为类回家：go back home/return home 远离：stay off/stay/keep away from情绪类感谢：be glad about /show his appreciation/show his gratitude/be grateful对感到惊讶：feel so surprised that/be amazed at【点睛】高分句型1: Little did I know that one question would change everything.这句话运用了否定词little开头的倒装句。高分句型2: Joe has taught me that helping people is what life is all about.这句话运用了what引导的表语从句。