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1、-Where there is a will ,there is a way.-建议信写作导学案一、实例分析（2010深圳五校联考基础写作）在紧张的高三备考阶段，各校为了确保教学质量，除了早读和晚自习以外，每天至少要上9节课，甚至周末都要上课，学生们有大量的作业要完成，感到非常疲倦。为此，校学生会根据学生的实际情况，给校长写了封信，表达你们的需求和建议。 a)适当减少课时，留出思考时间b)反复训练重要、易错知识点，培养能力 c)减少作业量以保证质量d)少些批评，多些鼓励 注意：短文开头已给出（不算入要求的5句话里）。Dear Principal，We are writing to say ou
2、t what we are thinking about the preparation for the entrance examination in senior three.1）In order to guarantee the teaching quality in the course of the general revision, we senior three students at least have 9 periods each day apart from morning and evening classes. 2）Besides, we have got a lot
3、 of homework to do, which makes us exhausted. 3）According to the real situation of us students, we think that it is necessary to reduce the amount of periods and leave us time to think by ourselves. 4）Meanwhile, give us more practice on those important and confusing points to cultivate our ability t
4、o deal with problems. 5）Furthermore, reduce daily homework to assure the quality and give us less criticism but more encouragement, which we think will be beneficial to us all.We do hope that you can take our opinions into consideration. Thanks.YoursStudents Union二、讨论：1. 建议信的内容安排第1,2句 _第3，4,5句 _2.时态
5、_3.人称_4.语言特征_三、技巧点拨1. 概念：建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。2.分类：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。3.内容安排：1）写出写信的原因、背景；2）建议的内容及提出建议的理由4.语言特征：1）建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。2）提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。5. 注意事项语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。四、常用写作句型1.表对对方的情况表示理解，并乐意帮忙： It is a pity that Im glad to receive your letter
6、asking for my advice on how to Im very glad to and give you some suggestions on how to It is my pleasure to doIm willing to give a hand to you. 2.提建议的句式 You can do It is useful / helpful / important / necessaryfor you to do In my opinion, it would be better if you do It should be a good idea for you
7、 to do It will certainly help a lot to do sth / It also helps to do sth It does harm to sb / sth = It is harmful to benefits = be beneficial to = do good to3.表意见并列的连词 Firstly, Above all, First of all, Besides,In addition,Moreover, In general,Personally,In my opinion, 写作模板一Dear Bob,Im glad to receive
8、 your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . ( 提出建议)As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). Im sure (预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).Im looking forward
9、to (表达愿望).Sincerely yours,Li Hua写作模板二Dear_, You have asked me for my advice with regard to _, and Ill try to make some conductive suggestions here. In my humble opinion(以我拙见), you would be wise to take the following actions: _. I hope youll find these proposals useful and I would be ready to discuss
10、 this matter with you to further details. Good luck with you.Yours,XXX 五、练习实战演练一假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：1. 表示你很乐意他能向你求助。2，参加中文学习班。 3，看中文书刊和电视。4，学唱中文歌曲。5，交中国朋友。写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。Dear Peter, Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best wishes！Li Hua实战演练二假如你叫孙军，是光明中学的学生，要给市长写一封信，反
11、映学校门前交通拥挤现象，包括以下要点：1. 问题：学校和一所小学毗邻，对着大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小, 家长接送。交通更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。2. 建议：政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。参考词汇: 穿行 thread ones way 天桥 overpass 写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容。(已给出的开头和结尾句不计入总句数)Dear Mayor,Im a student in Guangming Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.Im looking forward to your reply. Yours si
12、ncerely,Sun Jun答 案 实战演练一Dear Peter, Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as youll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to
13、 watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese and learn and sing Chinese songs whenever possible. Besides, it should be a good idea to make more Chinese friends, who will tell you a lot about China as well as help you learn Chinese. Try and write me in Chinese next time.Best wishes！L
14、i Hua实战演练二Dear Mayor,Im a student in Guangming Middle School. Here I have something to tell you.Standing next to a primary school, our school is faced with/faces the main street. During the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that the traffic is busy. What makes things wor
15、se is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age, making the situation more serious. As a consequence, it is extremely dangerous for students to risk their lives to thread their way among cars. According to the phenomenon stated above, it is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like building an overpass.Im looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely,Sun Jun4