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1、Four short words sum up what has lifted most successful individuals above the crowd: a little bit more.-author-date写作训练-建议信由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存为鼓励大家节能环保,学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动, 假设你是高三6班的一名学生, 将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议,以下是倡议的内容:写作练习-如何写建议信 一技巧点拨 1. 概念:建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。 2. 分类: 1)写给个人,就其遇到的某个
2、问题提出自己的看法和观点; 2)写给某个组织和机构,就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。 3内容安排:1)开门见山地写出写信的原因、背景;2)建议的内容及提出建议的理由 4. 语言特征:1)建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。 2)提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。 5. 注意事项 1)建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由,提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力 2)建议的角度要多样化,避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议。 3)符合英文信件的基本格式 4)语言要委婉、礼貌,顾
3、及对方感受。 二、常用写作句型 1. 表对对方的情况表示理解,并乐意帮忙: Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to Im very glad to hear that you want to and give you some suggestions on how to It is my pleasure to do Im willing to give a hand to you. After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know th
4、at I know you have trouble inafter reading your letter I am writing to you for the purpose of - I am writing to share some advice with you. I am writing to express my views concerning You have asked me for my advice onand Ill try to make some conductive suggestions. Thanks for trusting me. Regarding
5、, Id like to make some suggestions. 2. 提建议的句式 It is useful / helpful / important / necessaryfor you to do It should be a good idea for you to do It will certainly help a lot to do sth / It also helps to do sth It does harm to sb / sth = It is harmful to benefits = be beneficial to = do good to I thi
6、nk it would be more beneficial if you could In my opinion, it would be better if you do As far as Im concerned/As for me, it would be wise to take the following action. I would like to suggest/recommend that If I were you, I would I wonder if you have considered the following tips. I feel that it wo
7、uld be more beneficial if you could When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you shouldYou may consider doing3. 表意见并列的连词 表先后次序: First, second, third.Finally Firstly, secondly,eventuallyto begin with/ to start with, at last 递进关系: furthermore; moreover; besides; meanwhile; in ot
8、her words; at the same time4.建议信结尾常用句式 I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration. I hope you will find these proposal/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my
9、 suggestions. I feel that it would be beneficial if you stick to it. In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. I would be ready to discuss this matter in further details. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this matter. If you have any more problems, please feel free
10、 to contact me at any time. Im willing to discuss this matter with you whenever you need. 三、写作模板 写作模板一Dear , Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You
11、 can also ( 提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建议). Im sure (预测可能的结果,给对方以行动的信心和决心). Im looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua 写作模板二Dear , You have asked me for my tips concerning_(问题), and I will try to make some suggestions here. As far as Im concerned, it would be
12、 wise to take the following actions:First, _(建议一); in addition_(建议二); whats more _(建议三). I hope youll find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you about further details. Good luck with you! Yours sincerely, Li Ming 四、课堂练习在紧张的高三备考阶段,各校为了确保教学质量,除了早读和晚自习以外,每天至少要上9节课
13、,甚至周末都要上课,学生们有大量的作业要完成,感到非常疲倦。为此,校学生会根据学生的实际情况,给校长写了封信,表达你们的需求和建议。五实战演练由于废气、污水、白色垃圾等环境污染已危及到人类的健康与生存为鼓励大家节能环保,学校将举办一次“低碳行动”的环保活动, 假设你是高三6班的一名学生, 将要在这个活动中向全体师生发起“低碳生活”的倡议,以下是倡议的内容:1. 尽量绿色出行:采取步行或自行车方式;2. 少喝一次瓶装水;3. 尽量不用一次性制品,如一次性木筷子和塑料袋;4. 每周至少手洗衣服一次;5. 每周少开手机、电视一天。参考范文Reference IDear Principal, We a
14、re writing to say out what we are thinking about the preparation for the entrance examination in Senior Three. In order to guarantee the teaching quality in the course of the general revision, we Senior Three students at least have 9 periods each day apart from morning and evening classes.We even ha
15、ve classes on Saturday. Besides, we have got a lot of homework to do, which makes us exhausted. According to the real situation of us students, we think that it is necessary to reduce the amount of periods and leave us time to think by ourselves. Meanwhile, give us more practice on those important a
16、nd confusing points to cultivate our ability to deal with problems. Furthermore, reduce daily homework to assure the quality and give us less criticism but more encouragement, which we think will be beneficial to us all. We do hope that you can take our opinions into consideration. Thanks. Yours Stu
17、dents UnionReference III am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three. We human beings are seriously threatened by the environmental pollution, such as waste gases, dirty water and white pollution. In order to encourage all of us to save energy and protect our environment, I am going to make the following
18、 suggestions. It is suggested that we should walk or take bikes if we go out. To avoid white pollution, we can reduce the use of bottled water and unrecyclable items such as disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Whats more, if we can wash clothes by ourselves at least once a week as well as turn off our TVs and mobile phones for one day every week, it will be of great benefit to saving energy. I believe everyone, as a member of this global village, should take responsibility to take part in the global green campaign! -