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1、哈尔滨市20192022学年第一学期期末高一质量检测英语应用文写作汇编（共三年）文末附作文评分标准一、建议信1（2022黑龙江哈尔滨高一期末）书面表达：你校的英语报刊正举办“请为学校献一计”活动，假定你是高一新生李华，写一封英文建议信并投稿内容包括：1. 穿校服2. 午餐3. 课余活动注意：1. 词数80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但是不计入总词数。Dear Teachers:_Yours Sincerely,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Teachers:I am very glad that I have the opportunity to
2、 contribute ideas to our school. Here are some of my suggestions.First of all, we should wear clean and tidy school uniforms at school. I suggest the school wash and change our school uniforms regularly. Second, I think the school should prepare a big lunch for us and help us keep order when eating.
3、 Finally, our study schedule is too tight. I suggest our school increase after-school activities, which is good for our physical and mental development.I hope my suggestions will have some effect. Thank you.Yours Sincerely,Li Hua二、感谢信/祝贺信2（2020黑龙江哈尔滨高一期末）假设你是李华，作为交流学生去了美国新奥尔良市(New Orleans)学习生活了一年。在此
4、期间，你住在Brown夫妇家中，他们为你提供吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请你给他们写一封感谢信，主要内容如下：1.表示感谢；2.表达感受；3.欢迎来访；4.保持联系。注意：1.词数100字左右；2.信的开头与结尾已为你写好；可适当增加细节，以使行文连Dear Mr. and Mrs. Brown, Faithfully yours, Li Hua【参考范文】One possible version：Im writing to you from my home in China. I returned home safe and sound. When thinking of the wonde
5、rful days I spent in New Orleans, I just cant help thinking of you. It was so kind of you to have provided everything to make my stay there such a happy experience. Ive learned so much, not only English but also the culture. And I really enjoyed a great deal, the fun and laughter we shared with each
6、 other. Thank you very much. Ill always remember this trip as well as your kindness.Welcome to China when its convenient for you. Ill be very glad to show you around. And youll surely have a pleasant visit here.Ill keep in touch and write to you later. Please take care!三、其他应用文3（2021黑龙江哈尔滨高一期末）假定你是李华
7、，你的美国笔友Mike发来邮件询问你有关春节的习俗和活动，请回复一封邮件向他介绍你家乡的春节。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mike,_Yours, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Mike,How is everything going? With the Spring Festival approaching, Id like to introduce you to the most significant event.The Spring Festival, also known as the lunar New Year is the m
8、ost important traditional festival in China. On New Years Eve, well paste couplets and “fu” character on the gates, decorating the house with flowers, balloons and red lanterns. A get-together banquet/A family reunion dinner is usually a must for every Chinese family. We stay up late to greet the Ne
9、w Year, eating dumplings at midnight. What children love most is the chance to receive a red envelope, wear new clothes and set off firecrackers. By tradition, people visit relatives and friends on lunar January 1. Nowadays, we have a happy chat using social apps.As for me, the Spring Festival is a
10、celebration of joy and love, representing the best wishes for a sweet life.评分原则：1. 本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3. 词数少于60从总分中减去2分，多写原则上不扣分。4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。如书写较差以至影响交际，将分数降低
11、一个档次。各档次的给分范围和要求第五档(1720)分完全完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点。应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，完全达到了预期的写作目的。完全完成了试题规定的任务。第四档(1316分)完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。达到了预期的写作目的。第三档(912分)基本
12、完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第二档(58分)未恰当完成试题规定的任务。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第一档(14分)未完成试题规定的任务。明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。信息未能传达给读者。0分未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。学科网（北京）股份有限公司