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1、建议信1.假如你是李华,目前已经被牛津大学录取 你的朋友C hris现就读于牛津大学一年级,请你给他写封邮件,请教大学学习生活事宜。1.告知C hris自己已被牛津大学录取。2.请教如何选课,住宿等有关事宜。3.表达感谢,期待相见。注意:1.词 数 8 0 左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Chris,Yours,Li Hua2.你校英文报正在向全校学生进行英文征稿,征稿主题是“劳动与学生成长“,请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1.你对劳动的认识;2.你经常参加哪些劳动;3.你的建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡
2、的相应位置作答。Labor and Students?Growth3.假定你是李华,你校广播站计划每周一播放英语节目,就此向全体学生征求意见。请你给负责英语广播的交换生Chris写封电子邮件,内容包括:1 .推荐英语广播文章;2.建议插播英语歌曲;3.表达祝愿和期待。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。4.假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Lucy被曼彻斯特大学(The University of Manchester)录取,请你给她写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示祝贺;2.介绍自己选择大学专业的困惑;3.请对方给出建议。注意:1.词数80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡
3、的相应位置作答。Dear Lucy,Yours,Li Hua5.学校运动场地及运动设施的配备情况对青少年学生的成长起着不容忽视的作用。假如你是留学生P eter,你给所在学校的校长写一封信,表达一下你对学校运动设施的关心。内容包括:1.学生人数逐年增加,学校运动设施数量有限;2.学生参加体育运动的必要性;3.你的建议注意:1.词 数 100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Mr.Principal,Yours faithfully,Peter6.假定你是李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Tom对中国美食很感兴趣,打算在间隔年(gap year)期间学做中
4、国美食,他写信想你征询建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.推荐美食;2.说明理由;3.表达祝愿。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。注意:1.词 数 100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Tom,Yours,Li Hua7.假如你是李华,刚参加完高考且取得优异成绩。你的朋友王东今年读高三感到读书压力大,晚上睡不着,写信向你求助,希望你能给一些建议让他能够顺利度过高三学习生活。内容要点如下:1.相信自己的老师,提高课堂听课效率;2.课后合理安排时间,提高解题效果;3.尽可能抽空锻炼,树立信心。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使
5、行文连贯。Dear Wangdong,I am sorry to hear that you are sleepless under the stress of study in Senior Three.Yours,Lihua8.假定你是李华,最近你发现自己视力下降严重,无法看清楚周边的事物。因此,你感到十分的焦虑。请你写封信向你的美国网友Lucy咨询她保护视力的相关事宜。要点:1.视力下降;2.视力下降的原因;3.询问保护视力的建议。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Lucy,Yours,Li Hua9.你正在一所寄宿制高中就读,你校英文报正在征稿,希望
6、高三的学长为高一新生提供生活和学习方面的建议,内容包括:1.生活方面:适应新环境、与人和谐相处2.学习方面:方法、习惯注意:1.写作词数应为80左右。2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。10.假设你是李华,你的笔友Tom因不被朋友理解而特别苦恼。请你根据所给提示,给他发一封120/50词的英语电子邮件对他进行开解。邮件内容包括:1 .安慰 Jack。2.你的建议。Dear Tom,Yours Sincerely,Li Hua参考答案1.One possible version:Dear Chris,I cant wait to tell you the good news that I h
7、ave been admitted into Oxford University!Imwriting to ask for your advice on the campus life there.Knowing that Oxford University offers a wide range of courses,I wonder if you could offersome guidance on how to choose the suitable ones,so that I can easily balance my major and myinterest.Besides,wh
8、en it comes to accommodation,I prefer to live in a host family rather than adorm,yet my parents think otherwise.At length,are there other things I should be aware of?Your suggestions will be highly appreciated and I am looking forward to meeting you oncampus!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李华,目前
9、己经被牛津大学录取。你的朋友C hris现就读于牛津大学一年级,请你给他写封邮件,请教大学学习生活事宜。【详解】1.词汇积累建议:advice/suggestion-tip提供:offer-provide合适的:suitable-appropriate此 夕 卜:besides一in addition2.句式拓展同义句转换原句:Besides,when it comes to accommodation,I prefer to live in a host family rather than adorm,yet my parents think otherwise.拓展句:Besides,w
10、hen it comes to accommodation,although I prefer to live in a host familyrather than a dorm,my parents think otherwise.【点睛】高分句型 1 I cant wait to tell you the good news that I have been admitted into OxfordUniversity!(运用了同位语从句)高分句型 2 Knowing that Oxford University offers a wide range of courses,I wond
11、er if youcould offer some guidance on how to choose the suitable ones,so that I can easily balance mymajor and my interest.(运用了宾语从句和目的状语从句)2.One possible versionLabor and Students9 GrowthAs is known to all,labor is a necessity fbr a students growth.At present,most students livein cities and rarely h
12、ave opportunities to truly experience labor,resulting in lack of laboreducation.Through labor,students can cultivate correct labor viewpoint and develop labor habits,which will contribute to students overall development.In my spare time,Id like to help my parents do varieties of housework at home.Be
13、sides,Ioften volunteer to do some cleaning work for the elderly at nursing home.In view of many benefits of labor to students,I suggest that we should regularly take part in awide range of labor so that we can become well-rounded.【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文投稿,主题是“劳动与学生成长工【详解】1.词汇积累目前:at present cu
14、rrently机会:opportunity 一 chance空余的:spare-free此 夕 卜:besides*whatm ore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:At present,most students live in cities and rarely have opportunities to truly experiencelabor,resulting in lack of labor education.拓展句:At present,most students live in cities and rarely have opportunities to truly ex
15、periencelabor,which resuls in lack of labor education.【点睛】【高分句型 1 As is known to all,labor is a necessity for a students growth.(运用 了 as 引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型 2 Through labor,students can cultivate correct labor viewpoint and develop laborhabits,which will contribute to students?overall development.(运用 了
16、 which 引导的非限制性定语从句)3.Dear Chris,Im delighted to hear our station will broadcast English programs every Monday.Tm writingto give my opinions about it.First,!suggest broadcasting some English articles about how to learn English.Besides,thearticles related to foreign figures and universities are also w
17、orth sharing.In my view,you can addEnglish songs to the music section because music is a universal language which can relax andconnect us.I hope the programs will be popular with us students and help us broaden horizons whilepicking up your English broadcast.Fm looking forward to it.Yours,Li Hua【解析】
18、【分析】本篇书面表达属于书信体中的建议信。要求考生给负责英语广播的交换生Chris写封电子邮件,就你校广播站计划每周一播放英语节目的计划给出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的:delighted happy此外:besides whats more拓展:broaden expand盼望:look forward to expect2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:First,I suggest broadcasting some English articles about how to learn English.拓展句:First,I suggest broadcasting some Eng
19、lish articles which are about how to leam English.【点睛】高分句型 1 In my view,you can add English songs to the music section because music is auniversal language which can relax and connect u s.(运用 了 because 弓|导的原因状语从句和which引导的限制性定语从句)【高分句型 2 Im delighted to hear our station will broadcast English program
20、s every Monday.(运用了省略that的宾语从句)4.Dear Lucy,On hearing the news that you*ve been admitted to the University of Manchester,Fm proud of youand Im writing to extend my warm congratulations to you.As for me,I suffer from greatconfusion when choosing my major.Initially,what Im concerned about lies in whet
21、her the majorwill be suitable for me.Additionally,I prefer the one that is beneficial to my career prospectsinstead of so-called popular major.To avoid making my decision blindly,I expect you torecommend some practical proposals to me,including analyzing the advantages and disadvantagesof a certain
22、profession.I would appreciate it if you can do me a favor.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文。要求考生对美国笔友Lucy被曼彻斯特大学(The University of Manchester)录取表示祝贺,同时就自己选择大学专业的困惑向对方求助,希望对方给出建议。【详解】1 .词汇积累对.感到骄傲:be proud offtake pride in表示:extend一show/present起初,开始:initially originally适
23、合:be suitable fbr-be up to2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:As for me,I suffer from great confusion when choosing my major.拓展句:As for me,I suffer from great confusion when choosing my major,which leaves me at aloss.【点睛】高分句型1On hearing the news that youve been admitted to the University of Manchester,Fm proud of youan
24、d Im writing to extend my warm congratulations to you.(运用 了 that 引导的同位语从句)高分句型2As for me,I suffer from great confusion when choosing my major.Initially,what Im concernedabout lies in whether the major will be suitable for me.(运用 了 what 引导的主语从句和 whether引导的宾语从句)5.Dear Mr.Principal,I am writing to expr
25、ess my concern about the sports facilities on campus.I have noticed thatour school has very limited resources for students to participate in sports,especially given that thenumber of students on campus is increasing every year.As we all know,sports are very important for the sound growth of students
26、.If they haveaccess to quality sports facilities,they are able to build up confidence,and take a positive attitudetowards study and life.My proposal is to build a new sports area.It should have a different section for each activityand be available to students all year round.I believe such facilities
27、 will meet our sporting needs.Thank you for reading this letter.Yours faithfully,Peter【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给所在学校的校长写一封信,表达一下你对学校运动设施的关心。【详解】1.词汇积累担心:worry concem设施:equipment facility参 力 口:take part in一participate in建议:suggestion proposal2,句式拓展合并简单句原句:It should have a different section for each ac
28、tivity and be available to students all year round.I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.拓展句:It should have a different section for each activity and be available to students all yearround,which I believe will meet our sporting needs.【点睛】高分句型 1 I have noticed that our school has ver
29、y limited resources for students to participatein sports,especially given that the number of students on campus is increasing every year.(运用T th a t引导宾语从句)高分句型 2 My proposal is to build a new sports area.(运用了不定式作表语)6.One possible version:Dear Tom,Im pleased to know you intend to learn to cook Chines
30、e cuisine during your gap year.I thinkfried rice is your best choice.Fried rice is eaten as a main dish.It is flavorful and is easy to learn.Fried rice is made fromrice with many other ingredients that you can choose to suit your preferences,such as pork,beefchicken,egg,or vegetables.It is a fast me
31、al because it not only cooks quickly,but also requires aminimal amount of preparation.I hope my recommendation will be helpful.May you have a good time learning it.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给对中国美食很感兴趣,打算在间隔年(gap year)期间学做中国美食的澳大利亚笔友Tom写一封回信,内容包括:推荐美食;说明理由;表达祝愿。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴的:pleased happy可
32、口 的:flavorful-delicious要求:require request有用的:helpful useful2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:Fried rice is eaten as a main dish.It is flavorful and is easy to learn.拓展句:Fried rice is eaten as a main dish,which is flavorful and easy to learn.【点睛】高分句型 1 Fried rice is made from rice with many other ingredients that you ca
33、n choose to suityour preferences,such as pork,beef chicken,egg,or vegetables.(运用 了 that 弓 I 导的定语从句)高分句型 2 It is a fast meal because it not only cooks quickly,but also requires a minimalamount of pr叩aration.(运用了 because引导的状语从句和固定用法not only.but also)7.Dear Wangdong,I am sorry to hear that you are slee
34、pless under the stress of study in Senior Three.I wouldlike to share some advice with you.To begin with,you are supposed to believe in your teachers and improve your efficiency inclass.Whats more,it is a good idea to arrange your time properly after school,which can enhancethe effectiveness of your
35、problem solving.At last,taking time to exercise as much as possible isbeneficial to build up self-confidence.Hopefully,my advice can help you.Looking forward to your good news.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,要求考生给朋友王东写信,给一些建议让他能够顺利度过高三学习生活。【详解】1.词汇积累建议:advice suggestion首先:to begin with=first of all
36、合适地:properly suitably此 夕 卜:whats more=in addition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Hopefully,my advice can help you.拓展句:I hope that my advice can help you.【点睛】高分句型1Whats more,it is a good idea to arrange your time properly after school,which can enhance theeffectiveness of your problem solving,(which 弓|导非限制性定语从句)高分句型
37、2At last,taking time to exercise as much as possible is beneficial to build up self-confidence.(动名词短语作主语)8.Dear Lucy,I am sorry to trouble you,for I want to get some helpful suggestions from you.Recently,I have felt I can not see things as clearly as before though I wear glasses,whichworries me a lo
38、t.I guess there are two causes making this happen.On the one hand,I am addictedto my mobile phone these days.Sometimes I even play games on the phone for a long time.Onthe other hand,I lack enough exercise.It is said that being exposed to sunshine is beneficial.But Iam not sure about it.I know you h
39、ave excellent eyesight and that you also love playing computergames.So could you be kind to tell me how you protect your eyes?Looking forward to hearing from you!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国网友Lucy写信咨询她保护视力的相关事宜。【详解】1 .词汇积累打扰:bother/interrupt-trouble得至U :gain/obtain-get有益的:helpful benefici
40、al善良的:kind-hearted=kind2.句式拓展合并并列句原句:I know you have excellent eyesight and that you also love playing computer games.拓展句:Not only do you have excellent eyesight but you also love playing computer games.原句:Today I go to a conference.In the conference,two students have a debate about thestrengths and
41、 weaknesses of the Internet.拓展句:Today I go to a conference,where two students have a debate about the strengths andweaknesses of the Internet.【点睛】高分句型 1 Recently,I have felt I can not see things as clearly as before though I wear glasses,which womes me a lot.(运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型 2 It is said t
42、hat being exposed to sunshine is beneficial.(运用 了 名词性从句)9.One possible versionIn the coming three years,your life can be challenging.You should adapt to the newenvironment as soon as possible.Youd better learn how to get along well with others一respecting teachers and classmates is necessary.Besides,
43、to achieve satisfying academic goals,youre supposed to know how to learnefficiently.Its of vital importance to develop good habits,such as previewing lessons,gettingactively involved in class and reviewing in time,which will benefit you a lot.Hopefully with yourgreat efforts,you will enjoy a fruitfu
44、l life here.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生作为高三的学长为高一新生提供生活和学习方面的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累适应:adjust/accommodate adapt to尽快:as quickly as possibleas soon as possible相处的好:fit in-get along well with实现:acquire/obtain/gain achieve2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Youd better learn how to get along well with others拓展句:It is vital that you sh
45、ould learn how to get along well with others【点睛】高分句型 1 Besides,to achieve satisfying academic goals,youre supposed to know how tolearn efficiently.(运用了不定式作目的状语)高分句型 2 Its of vital importance to develop good habits,such as previewing lessons,gettingactively involved in class and reviewing in time,whi
46、ch will benefit you a lot.(运用 了 which 弓|导的非限制性定语从句)10.One possible version:Dear Tom,I am sorry to know that you are being misunderstood by your friends these days.I can totally understand the pain you are undergoing,which must be a big challenge for you.Iknow you are always a good friend.It is consi
47、derate of you to help your friends in many ways.Iam sure there must be some misunderstanding between you and your friends.You must be veryupset now.Annoying as it is,I still think you should face the music bravely.First,I suggest you takesome measures to release your pressure,for example,you can do
48、some sports and enjoy some nicemovies.Second,you need to talk with them frankly and sincerely to know why theymisunderstood you.Therefore,you can explain to them and make up your friendship.I hope everything goes smoothly and you can be good friends again.Looking forward to yourgood news.Yours Since
49、rely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给因不被朋友理解而特别苦恼的笔友Tom写封开解电子邮件,安慰他。【详解】1.词汇积累经历:experience undergo沮丧的:depressed-upset压力:stresspressure误解:misconceive misunderstand2.句式拓展合并简单句原句:I am sure there must be some misunderstanding between you and your friends.You must bevery upset now.拓展句:I am sure there mus
50、t be some misunderstanding between you and your friends,whichmakes you very upset now.【点睛】高分句型 1 I can totally understand the pain you are undergoing,which must be a big challengefor you.(运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型 2J First,I suggest you take some measures to release your pressure,fbr example,youcan