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1、高考英语建议信写作指导和练习【试题探究】(2023 新高考卷)假定你是李华, 外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组, 让大家课后练习口语, 你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件, 内容包括: 1.说明问题; 2.提出建议。Step 1: 审题布局类 型建议信人 称第三人称时 态一般现在时要 点1.随机分组的弊端12.随机分组的弊端23.我的口语分组建议14.我的口语分组建议2Step 2: 巧饰亮点要点1: 首先, 随机配对的学生可能会导致小组内的语言能力不平衡。Randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language
2、abilities within the groups.这可能会阻碍学生的进步, 因为更先进的人可能会主导谈话, 给其他学生留下很少的进步空间。(增加细节)This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced ones may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.要点2: 如果与一个他们相处不好或沟通有困难的人配对, 学生可能会感到不舒服或缺乏动力。Students may feel uncomfor
3、table or less motivated if paired with someone who they dont get along well with or have difficulty communicating with.要点3: 我的建议是根据学生的语言能力来分组, 或者让学生自己选择合作伙伴。My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.要点4: 大家一起练习和提高英语口语就会更舒服。Every
4、one can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.Step 3: 衔接成篇Dear Ryan, Im Li Hua from Class 3.I dont think its a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.The reasons are as follows.To begin with, randomly pairing up stude
5、nts may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups.This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced ones may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone wh
6、o they dont get along well with or have difficulty communicating with.My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.Everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together.Thank you for considering
7、my suggestion.Yours sincerely, Li Hua【句式储备】1.篇头开篇表意, 说明目的Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life.Here are my suggestions.很高兴收到你的来信询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 Im very glad to have received your e-mail.Now Im writing to give you some advice on how t
8、o learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在, 关于如何在高中学好英语, 我写邮件给你一些建议。2.篇中讲清理由, 表达建议Classroom interaction can create a democratic and harmonious classroom atmosphere.课堂互动可以创造一个民主和谐的课堂氛围。Classroom interaction can change the roles of both teachers and students.课堂互动可以改变教师和学生的角色。You may try to div
9、ide the class into smaller groups to promote collaboration and students interaction.It will give Chinese students the chance to practice English in a low-pressure setting.你可以尝试将班级分成较小的小组, 以促进协作和学生互动。它将让中国学生有机会在轻松的环境中练习英语。3.结尾望采纳, 盼回复I firmly believe that by taking these suggestions, you will have a
10、more engaging and interactive classroom environment.It will enhance our learning experience and provide us with valuable opportunities to practice our English skills.我坚信, 通过采纳这些建议, 你将拥有一个更具吸引力和互动性的课堂环境。它将增强我们的学习经验, 并为我们提供宝贵的机会来练习我们的英语技能。I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you.If there
11、 is more I can do to help, please let me know.我真诚地希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的, 请告诉我。I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway.I would be more than happy to see improvement.无论如何, 我希望我的建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。【拓展储备】假定你是李华, 外教David向全班征求如何与学生更好地进行课堂互动的建议。请你给他写一封邮件, 内容包括: 1.支持与学生课堂互动; 2.给出课堂互动的方法
12、。注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Dear David, I am Li Hua, one of your Chinese students in your class._Yours sincerely, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear David, I am Li Hua, one of your Chinese students in your class.I would like to express my strong support about classroom interaction because it can not only crea
13、te a democratic and harmonious classroom atmosphere but also change the roles of both teachers and students.Apart from your communicating with us in English class, as you hope, Id be frank to provide you with some suggestions as follows.To begin with, you may try to divide the class into smaller gro
14、ups to promote collaboration and students interaction, which will give Chinese students the chance to practice English in a low-pressure setting.Additionally, creating a more welcoming atmosphere where questions are encouraged may be a good method to motivate us to engage in discussions.I hope my ad
15、vice will be of help to you.Thanks for reading.Yours sincerely, Li Hua【要点精练】1假定你是李华,你班英国交流生 Robert因为语言和文化差异导致心情郁闷,请你给他写封邮件,表示安慰。内容包括:1.表示理解;2.提出建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Robert, _Yours, Li Hua2假定你是李华,你校校刊英语角正在征集有关新生如何加入社团的建议。请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。内容如下:1.你对社团的认识;2.你的建议。注意:1.词数80左右;2.请按如下格式
16、在答题卡的相应位置作答。_3假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Johnson所在的学校将开设汉语选修课(Chinese elective)。他来信询问如何布置一间教室来营造良好的汉语学习氛围。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.提出建议;2.说明理由。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Johnson, _Yours, Li Hua4假设你是李华,你的英国好友Tim计划明年来北京读大学,主修中文专业,他发来邮件向你询问择校建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:1表示欢迎;2建议他读哪所大学及理由;3祝福他成功。注意:1写作词数应为80左右;2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
17、。Dear Tim,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua5假定你是李华,你校英语报计划举办英语文化周系列活动,现向同学们征集活动内容。请你给英语报的负责人Mr.Smith写一封邮件,内容包括:1.提出建议;2.说明理由。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Mr.Smith,Im Li Hua._Yours sincerely,Li Hua6假定设你是李华,你们班外教Chris要求每位同学针对“同学们在英语课上不爱提问题,问题意识缺乏”这一现象给他写一封信,发表自己的看法。内容包括:1.分析原因;2.提出解决办法。注意:1.写作词数应为8
18、0个左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Chris,_7假定你是某高中学生李华,你在Amazon上某网店Kentier里购买了一本英语词典,收到货后你发现该词典存在一些问题。你打算给该网店发一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.说明购物情况;2.陈述问题所在;3.表达你的建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Sir or Madam,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua8假设你是李华,你的好朋友Harry即将步入自己理想的高中,在憧憬高中生活的同时,他也有些担忧,他写邮件向你求助,请你给他写一封回信。内容如下:1.表示祝贺;
19、2.分享学习、交友等方面建议;3.表达期望。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不允许出现自己的真实姓名和学校。Dear Harry,_Yours,Li Hua9假定你是李华,近日你发现一些招聘广告对应聘者设置了年龄限制。请你给当地英文报写一封邮件,内容包括:1.描述你对此现象的看法;2.说明存在的问题;3.提出你的建议。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。Dear Editor,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua10假定你是李华,你的交换生好友Alice最近沉迷于抖音(TikTok),你非常担心她。请给她写一封电子邮件
20、。内容包括:1.阐述玩抖音的危害;2.提出建议和解决办法。注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Alice,_Yours,Li Hua【参考答案】1Dear Robert,I am sorry to hear you have been feeling depressed recently.I would like to offer some advice to you, which I hope will be of help to you.Indeed, its understandable that, coming from a different c
21、ulture, youve found yourself at a loss as to how to deal with the larguage barrier, let alone the cultural difference.But thats part of our process of growth.By communicating more with your classmates and teachers, youll develop your Cbinese fluency as well as a good understanding of Chinese culture
22、.Gradually, youll definitely see a boom in your overall well being and enjoy your stay here.Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交流生 Robert写封邮件,就他因为语言和文化差异导致心情郁闷的问题表示安慰并提出建议。【要点分析】1.词汇积累有帮助的:be of help be helpful处理:deal with handle与交流:communicate with interact with肯定的:definitely surely
23、2.句式拓展陈述句变倒装句原句:By communicating more with your classmates and teachers, youll develop your Cbinese fluency as well as a good understanding of Chinese culture.拓展句:Only by communicating more with your classmates and teachers will you develop your Cbinese fluency as well as a good understanding of Chi
24、nese culture.【高分句型1】I would like to offer some advice to you, which I hope will be of help to you.(运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)【高分句型2】Indeed, its understandable that, coming from a different culture, youve found yourself at a loss as to how to deal with the larguage barrier, let alone the cultural differenc
25、e.(运用了现在分词作状语、疑问词how+动词不定式结构以及that引导的主语从句)2School clubs play an important role in enriching students campus life, promoting students abilities and developing students interests.In my opinion, it is best to follow some principles to join clubs.First of all, the club you choose must be relevant to you
26、r interests and strengths.Secondly, dont try to attend every club, which will affect your normal study.Finally, it is better to join the club under the guidance of the teacher, so that you can avoid blindly following the trend.I hope all students can develop their own specialties and hobbies while s
27、tudying well.【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校校刊英语角正在征集有关新生如何加入社团的建议,要求考生按照要求用英语写一篇短文并投稿。【要点分析】1.词汇积累重要的:important significant提升:promote improve相关的:relevant related参加:attend participate in2.句式拓展同义句转换原句:Finally, it is better to join the club under the guidance of the teacher, so that you can avoid blindly followi
28、ng the trend.拓展句:Finally, to avoid blindly following the trend, you had better join the club under the guidance of the teacher.【高分句型1】In my opinion, it is best to follow some principles to join clubs.(运用了it作形式主语、不定式to follow作真正的主语)【高分句型2】Secondly, dont try to attend every club, which will affect you
29、r normal study.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)3One possible version:Dear Johnson, Im thrilled to hear that your school is introducing a Chinese elective! To create an immersive learning environment for the classroom, I suggest the following: First, decorate your classroom with cultural items: Chinese calligra
30、phy, traditional paintings, and maps of China to stimulate interest in the language.Second, engage students with Chinese music, films, and interactive software for more dynamic learning.Finally, include authentic objects like Chinese tea sets or chopsticks, which can help students understand the pra
31、ctical use of the language.I hope these suggestions will help make the Chinese classroom a place of excitement and inspiration.Wish you all the best.Yours, Li Hua【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Johnson写一封回信,就如何布置一间教室来营造良好的汉语学习氛围提供建议。【要点分析】1.词汇积累激动的:thrilled excited激发:stimulate arouse活跃的:dynamic active领会:
32、understand grasp2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:First, decorate your classroom with cultural items: Chinese calligraphy, traditional paintings, and maps of China to stimulate interest in the language.拓展句:First, decorate your classroom with cultural items: Chinese calligraphy, traditional paintings, and maps of China, which are of great help to stimulate interest in the language.【高分句型1】First, decorate your classroom wi