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1、话题7健康与安全/知识储备有话可说=|话题经典背诵1. Wed like one bowl of beef soup.我们想要一碗牛肉汤。2. However, she has some bad habits, too.然而，她也有一些坏习惯。3. As a mountain climber, Aron is used to taking risks.作为一个登山者，阿伦习惯冒险。4. Teenagers should not be allowed to smoke.不应该允许青少年吸烟。5. We stared in disbelief at the black smoke rising a
2、bove the burning building.我们直愣愣地盯着燃烧的大楼上升起的黑烟，无法相信这 一切。I句子升格范例We should remember to wash our hands before meals.In order to protect ourselves from diseases, we should remember to wash our hands before meals.（扩写目的）Regular exercise and a balanced diet can help us.Regular exercise and a balanced diet c
3、an help us keep healthy bothphysically and mentally.（扩写具体作用）1. Students shouldnt eat too much junk food. It is harmful.It is harmful for students to eat too much junk food.（用句型 It5s + 形 容词+for sb. +to do sth.升格）Dont go to crowded places.一Dont go to crowded places, such as cinemas and supermarkets.（扩
4、写具体实例）And never fail to open the windows regularly.一And never fail to open the windows regularly to let in some fresh air.（扩写目的）I谚语俗语积累1. Health is better than wealth.健康胜于财富。2. Wealth is nothing without health.失去健康，空有财产。3. Eating little and speaking little can never do harm.吃少病少，话少祸少。4. Bitter pills
5、 may have wholesome effects.良药苦口利于病。5. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.一天一个苹果，疾病远离我。/真题示范-有章可循=（2021 湖州中考）假定你是李雷。某英语杂志正在举办征文活动，请根据广告中的 信息写一篇短文，用于投稿。文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息：词数：80100oARTICLES WANTED!JBeing HealthyWhich do you think is more important, doing exercise or eating healthy food?What do you do
6、to stay healthy? Tell us what you think!Write an article answering these questions and we will publish the best ones in our magazine.I四步攻关第一步:“四定”审题.定人称：以第一人称为主1 .定时态：一般现在时和一般过去时.定要点:点明主题;具体事例描述;发表感想2 .定思路：首先点明人们关注健康，并从“锻炼”或者“吃健康食品”做出选择；用具体事例进行说明自己的观点；最后发表感想。第二步:“三段”谋篇第一段：开篇点题.做出选择1 .人们越来越关注保持健康。Peo
7、ple are paying more and more attention to staying healthy.2 .人们通过很多方法保持健康。People stay healthy by many ways.3 .我认为锻炼更重要。/我认为吃得健康更重要。I think doing exercise is more important. /I think eating healthily is more important.第二段：证明观点事例说明.过去我经常很长时间坐着，很少外出。I used to sit for too lone and seldom co out.4 .我在学校经
8、常运动。所以我认为锻炼已经足够了。At school, I often do exercise. So I think Ive got enough exercise.5 .结果我一个月体重增加了 5千克，并容易感到累。As a result I put on 5 kilos just in a month and I felt tired easily.6 .我通常在学校吃午饭很匆忙。所以在家吃得健康对我来说很重要。I usually have lunch hurriedly at school. So eating healthily at home is very important f
9、or me.7 .周末我经常做我喜欢吃的美食。On weekends, I usually do delicious food that I like.8 .我开始锻炼，感觉更健康。I began to do exercise, and I felt healthier.第三段：加以总结发表感想.从那以后，我每天坚持锻炼。Ever since then, I have kept doing exercise every day.9 .我认为锻炼对大脑和身体都有好处。I think doinq exercise is good to both the mind and the body.10 .
10、为了保持健康和快乐我要吃得健康。I will eat healthily to stay healthy and happy.第三步：连句成文第四步：润色升格to feel energetic andhealthier.使短文上下连贯更加紧 凑，过渡更加自然流畅。使观点更加突出,并且改 变了句式结构，丰富了短文 内容。使动作发生的时间更具体 化；try to do slh.的使用，表 达了作者的决心。更加显示锻炼的好处增 加了说服力。Possible version 2People may have different ways to keep healthy such as doing ex
11、ercise* eating healthy food. etc. 1 think eating healthily is more important.At school. 1 have sports timc every day. so I think I ve got enough exercise. I lowcvcr. I usually have lunch hurriedly at school. So eating healthily at home is important for me. Luckily. I can enjoy delicious and healthy
12、food cooked by myparents.which also makes mefeel g(MKl.0 1 often make some vegetable salad forbreakfast. Sometimes. I even cook something I like at weekends.1 think I will cat healthily to stay healthy and happy.副诃luckily和动诃enjoy 的使用，表达了作者的内心 想法;非限定性定语从句的 出现，使句式多样化，同时也 丰富了短文内容。even起强调的作用；而JLL， 这是一个含
13、有定语从句的复 合句，结构完整、正确。Possible version 1People are paying more and more attention to staying healthy. Ways such as doing exercise, eating healthy fo(Kl etc. help a lot. But I think doing exercise is more irnportani.For me, I used to sit at the desk for loo long and seldom go outside doingsome sports；。.
14、 As a result. 1 put on 5 kilos just in a month and 1 felt tired easily.Since ihcn, I have kept the habit of taking exercise. And I find it docs good lo both the mind and the body.写作练兵学以致用 =你的睡眠习惯是怎样的？是早睡早起的morning people,还是晚 睡晚起的 evening people?请以“A Morning or Evening People?”为题, 根据所给表格提示，写一篇短文，谈谈你对养成良好睡眠习惯，保持身体健康的认识。文中不得出现真实的人名和地名，词数不得少于80个。A Morning or Evening People?写作提示提示词Beginningsleeping habitsyour parents sleeping go to bed; get up; sleeping Body Parthabits; your sleeping habit hoursdifferent ideasreasonsEndingenough sleep; healthy body