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1、 读后续写实战真题演练(1) A A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE (2021新课标卷)The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had w
2、atched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to
3、boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. Th
4、e pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porr
5、idge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. J
6、enna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.Para.1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared._Para.2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up._注
7、意：1.续写词数应为150左右 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。一.三大要求内容要简单 结构要清晰 语言要精彩二.两大步骤内容第一段:必要的过渡+配套动作 第二段:必然的结果+配套动作三.造句过渡:时间副词/地点副词/逻辑词a) Early in the morning, . /Late in the afternoon, . b) Then, ./After that, . /After a short while, . . / Two hours later, . .c)Just at that moment,. d) Suddenly, . /Immediately, . ./W
8、ithout hesitation, .e) With all the work done,. f) At the sight of what had happened,.g) Fortunately, . / Unfortunately, . h) As a result, . /However, ./Instead, .i)To ones surprise,. 惊讶 / To ones amazement 惊喜 / To ones astonishment 震惊 j)On dong sth , . /Upon doing sth. , .要点:谁+干了+什么a)Step 1:确定主语(名词
9、) b) Step 2: 确定谓语(动词) c)Step 3:补充(缺宾语时补宾语,缺修饰时补修饰)细节a) 名词细节 :With+n.+修饰 /n.+修饰with a smile on his face/ a smile on his face with tears in his eyes/tears in his eyeswith a tool in his hand with some books under his armwith a hat on his head with all the work donewith the meal beautifully cooked with
10、all babies cryingb) 动作细节: 看见./听见./说了./做了./感觉./想到./努力. doing sth. having done sthSeeing . hearing. saying. doing. feeling. realizing. trying ones best to do sth.c)其它细节:扩展句型(1). , in that . / . , considering that . 因为 (2). ; therefore, . / . ; accordingly, . / . ; consequently, . 因此(3) . , so that . /
11、 . ,in order that . 以便 (4). , which . 这件事.感悟a)所感: Exhausted as I was, I felt my time and effort worthwhile, for.b) 所悟:From this experience, we can learn that.c) 难忘: What an unforgettable day/experience it was!四.实战Para.1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared._爸爸问他俩干
12、啥 At the sight of what had happened, with a smile on his face, the kind-hearted middle-aged man patiently asked what the poor twins were doing, feeling rather amused, in that it was the first time that he had seen his kids working in the kitchen.说想给妈妈惊喜 Then, tears in their eyes, they said that they
13、 intended to give their mother a surprise, trying their best to make her proud, considering that it was the mothers day.爸爸帮忙做早餐 Without hesitation, with tools in his hand, the father started to help them with the breakfast, instructing them to turn on the stove, fry the bread and cook the porridge,
14、so that they could do the job well.然后早餐做好啦 After a short while, the meal was done, which gave them a great sense of achievement.Exhausted as they were, they felt their time and effort worthwhile, for they were about to surprise their mom.Para.2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their
15、 mother up._妈妈很感动并吃掉早餐 To their amazement, the happy mom was deeply moved and ate the breakfast.“I cant believe you can cook such a wonderful meal! she said. 孩子说是根爸爸一起做的 Then, they admitted that it was their father who had helped them.妈妈谢谢孩子和爸爸,拥抱,亲亲,孩子和爸爸说节日快乐 On hearing their words, she expressed
16、her heartfelt gratitude to the kids and their father, hugging and kissing them,and they wished her a happy mothers day.What an unforgettable experience it was! B2021浙江卷读后续写My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didnt understand my world of school activities. From age 14,
17、 he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didnt really understand his world either: He was a livestock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass (超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduatio
18、n.Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone (长号).The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys tha
19、t a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weeds to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over
20、and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lambs-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasnt sure how much it would amount to.At home, my dad said, A jobs a big step t
21、o growing up. Im glad you will be contributing to the household. My dads words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.My labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasnt interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to con
22、tribute my money.Paragraph 1：The pay arrived at last._我爸要钱(为了交学费，而不是补贴家用) Immediately,with a smile on his face, my father suggested that he should take care of the money for me, explaining that it would be used to pay for my tuition rather than our family expenses, which still made me annoyed.我不给他Ho
23、wever, with all the money in my packet, I refused to give it to him and ran out of our home, having made up my mind to buy whatever I liked, in that it was the first time that I had made money by myself.很快花光，内心空虚Unfortunately, I spent all the money within two hours, buying a lot of stuff that I migh
24、t never use, making me upset, disappointed, and frustrated.Paragraph 2：I understood immediately what my parents were worried about._回去工作As a result, I decided to go back to the farmer to do more tiring work, trying my best to make more money, so that I could earn my money back.挣到工资“Here is your pay,
25、said the farmer several days later, “remember to hand it to your dad.交给爸妈,替我保管This time, without hesitation, I gave all the money to my dad, requesting him to save it for my future, considering that I had already learned an invaluable lesson about money: its better to keep your money than to spend i
26、t all!感悟 What an unforgettable experience it was! CLast night, my partner John and I went to the levees (堤岸) where I was relearning how to run. He supported on his bike and I went as fast or as slow as my old legs wanted to take me. Ahead of us was a very old man with a plastic bag who seemed to be
27、unable to walk a straight line. John said, You keep running, and I will check on him.John was holding his hand. John told the man, We are going to come back this way. If you are still here, we will check on you. The man said he was fine but he was going to stay down for a bit. He was on the ground a
28、t the bottom of the levee and off a walkway that backed up into other peoples homes. We ran on for 10-15 minutes or so and turned around.John rode ahead to see if he was still there. When I got to the spot, there was John and the man. The man didnt look fine he was stumbling (蹒跚而行) around and seemed
29、 lost.The man in the meantime tried to climb up the levee and fell again and as he sat there, I walked down. I said, Hi, my name is Mia, whats your name? He laughed and looked at me. I said light-heartedly, I am relearning how to run. I didnt realize it was so difficult. He said, Oh my son and I run
30、 too yeah its not always easy.It was starting to get dark. Turns out the mans name was John also. I said, Shall we walk together, John? He said, Okay. He didnt want me to grab his hand or arm to help him, so I said, Ill just stand by you if that is okay. Thats okay, he said.We walked down the levee
31、together with John riding behind. Through our walk he swerved (急转弯) from either side of the levee I stayed calm and moved to either side casually trying not to look like I was blocking.Paragraph 1: I said to our new friend John, Do you know why we are concerned?他说不知However, having walked with us for
32、 nearly a mile, he, with sweat on his face,shook his head, telling me that he didnt know.我做解释Without hesitation, I told him that,as a disabled person, I could completely feel his hardship.帮他找路After that, we tried our best to help him find his way.找到路了Suddenly, with a proud smile on his face, he caug
33、ht sight of a path and said that was the way to his home;therefore, he felt extremely happy.Paragraph 2:He waved goodbye to us and practically ran into the dark.看他背影,我羡慕他Seeing him disappearing into the forest, I felt a little bit jealous, in that even an old man like him could do something that.I w
34、as not able to.累但是值Exhausted as I was, I felt my time and effort worthwhile, for I had made my own contribution to the society.学到道理From this experience, I have learned that hardship might always exist, but kindness endures.经历难忘 What an unforgettable experience it was! DNo matter how small you are, y
35、ou can also give help or support to others. I didnt understand these words until I saw my grandfather weep that day.I grew up in Southern California, and my family often went to Disneyland, Knotts Berry Farm, and Sea World. The highlight of those park visits for me was always the evening activities,
36、 when there would be fireworks.As I grew older and more observant, I noticed that my grandfather would go missing just before the fireworks were scheduled to start and reappear shortly after they finished. I asked my mother about this and was told that Grandpa didnt like to hear the noise of the exp
37、losions. They reminded him of the war and his fellows who died in the war. So every time there was fireworks, he would go inside the bathrooms until they were done. I felt surprised because my grandfather was such a strong man.One summer night, somewhere near my tenth birthday, my family and I exite
38、d a ride just in time to hear over the loudspeakers, In only two minutes, the lights will be turned off around the Rivers of America, and Disneyland will present their fireworks in the skies over the park. At this moment, Grandpa was just in front of me, and when he heard the announcement, he starte
39、d jogging ahead without a word to anyone. Without really thinking. It look off after him, against the orders of my mother, who repeatedly called after me to stay with the rest of the family. Grandpa, unaware that I was behind him, tried desperately to walk through the masses of people who were stopp
40、ed in the street waiting for the show to begin.As he tried to reach the restrooms, the first shell(烟花弹) broke in the skies above us. Grandpa paused and looked up, just looking as if he had been hit by a shot. And then he kept moving forward. As shell after shell burst overhead, he struggled forward,
41、 and almost fell over before he could sit onto a bench nearby. Para.1:Instantly, I went forward and was by his side.噪声很大Meanwhile, the noise was extremely loud which made my grandpa terribly scared.捂他耳朵Without hesitation, I covered his ears with my hands, so that he could hear less explosions.爷爷哭了我抱
42、着他Suddenly, with the ground shaking wildly,I saw him crying bitterly; as a result, I decided to hug him until the end of the show,comforting him with my words.Confused as I was,I felt sympathetic for what he had experienced during the war.Para.2:When the fireworks show ended, he straightened suddenl
43、y and wiped the tears. 爷爷谢我Then, with sweat all over his head,he expressed his heartfelt gratitude to me, telling me how sorry he was for his strange behavior. 回忆过去，反对战争After that, he recalled the war many years ago, saying he would never like to be a soldier again, considering that he could face the blood and death anymore.学到反战From this experience, I have learned that wars will eventually go away but love endures. 经历难忘What an unforgettable story it was!7