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1、 读后续写实战真题演练(1) A A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISE (2021新课标卷)The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had w
2、atched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to
3、boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. Th
4、e pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porr
5、idge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeffs hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. J
6、enna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.Para.1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared._Para.2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up._注
7、意：1.续写词数应为150左右 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。一.三大要求内容要简单 结构要清晰 语言要精彩二.两大步骤内容第一段:必要的过渡+配套动作 第二段:必然的结果+配套动作三.造句过渡:时间副词/地点副词/逻辑词a) Early in the morning, . /Late in the afternoon, . b) Then, ./After that, . /After a short while, . . / Two hours later, . .c)Just at that moment,. d) Suddenly, . /Immediately, . ./W
8、ithout hesitation, .e) With all the work done,. f) At the sight of what had happened,.g) Fortunately, . / Unfortunately, . h) As a result, . /However, ./Instead, .i)To ones surprise,. 惊讶 / To ones amazement 惊喜 / To ones astonishment 震惊 j)On dong sth , . /Upon doing sth. , .要点:谁+干了+什么a)Step 1:确定主语(名词
9、) b) Step 2: 确定谓语(动词) c)Step 3:补充(缺宾语时补宾语,缺修饰时补修饰)细节a) 名词细节 :with+n.+修饰 / n.+修饰with a smile on his face/ a smile on his face with tears in his eyes/tears in his eyeswith a tool in his hand with some books under his armwith a hat on his head with all the work donewith the meal beautifully cooked with
10、 all babies cryingb) 动作细节: 看见./听见./说了./做了./感觉./想到./努力. doing sth. having done sthSeeing . hearing. saying. doing. feeling. realizing. trying ones best to do sth.c)其它细节:扩展句型(1). , in that . / . , considering that . 因为 (2). ; therefore, . / . ; accordingly, . / . ; consequently, . 因此(3) . , so that .
11、/ . ,in order that . 以便 (4). , which . 这件事.感悟a)所感: Exhausted as I was, I felt my time and effort worthwhile, for.b) 所悟:From this experience, we can learn that.c) 难忘: What an unforgettable day/experience it was!四.实战Para.1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared._爸爸问他俩
12、干啥 _, _, the _ man _ asked what the _ twins were doing, _, _ it was the first time that he had seen his kids working in the kitchen.说想给妈妈惊喜 _, _, they said that they intended to give their mother a surprise, trying their best to make her proud, _ it was the mothers day.爸爸帮忙做早餐 _, _, the father start
13、ed to help them with the breakfast, _,so that they could do the job well.然后早餐做好啦 _, the meal was done, _._, they felt their time and effort worthwhile, _ they were about to surprise their mom.Para.2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up._妈妈很感动并吃掉早餐 _, the happy mom was de
14、eply moved and ate up the breakfast.“I cant believe you can cook such a wonderful meal! she said. 孩子说是根爸爸一起做的 Then, they admitted that _ their father _ had helped them.妈妈谢谢孩子和爸爸,拥抱,亲亲,孩子和爸爸说节日快乐 _, she expressed her _ gratitude to the kids and their father, _, and they wished her a happy mothers day
15、._ B 2021浙江卷读后续写My dad, George, only had an eighth grade education. A quiet man, he didnt understand my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the money my dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.I didnt really understand his world either: He was a livest
16、ock trucker, and I thought that I would surpass (超过) anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage at high school graduation.Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a foot
17、ball team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone (长号).The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer hired to work in his field. He explained our basic task, the tractor fired up and we were off, riding down the field looking for weed
18、s to spray with chemicals. After a short way, the farmer stopped and pointed at a weed which we missed. Then we began again. This happened over and over, but we soon learned to identify different grasses like cockleburs, lambs-quarters, foxtails, and the king of weeds, the pretty purple thistle. It
19、was tiring work, but I looked forward to the pay, even though I wasnt sure how much it would amount to.At home, my dad said, A jobs a big step to growing up. Im glad you will be contributing to the household. My dads words made me realize that my earnings might not be mine to do with as I wished.My
20、labors lasted about two weeks, and the farmer said there might be more work, but I wasnt interested. I decided it was not fair that I had to contribute my money.Paragraph 1：The pay arrived at last._我爸要钱(为了交学费,而不是补贴家用) _,_, my father suggested that he should take care of the money for me, _ it would
21、be used to pay for my tuition rather than our family expenses, _.我不给他_, _, I refused to give it to him and ran out of our home, _ buy whatever I liked, _ it was the first time that I had made money by myself.很快花光,内心空虚_, I spent all the money within two hours, _ a lot of _ I might never use, making m
22、e_.Paragraph 2：I understood immediately what my parents were worried about._回去工作_, I decided to go back to the farmer to do more tiring work, trying my best to make more money, so that I could earn my money back.挣到工资“Here is your pay”,said the farmer several days later, “remember to hand it to your
23、dad.交给爸妈,替我保管This time,_, I gave all the money to my dad, _ him to save it for my future, _ I had already learned an _ lesson about money: its better to keep your money than to spend it all!感悟 _ CLast night, my partner John and I went to the levees (堤岸) where I was relearning how to run. He supporte
24、d on his bike and I went as fast or as slow as my old legs wanted to take me. Ahead of us was a very old man with a plastic bag who seemed to be unable to walk a straight line. John said, You keep running, and I will check on him.John was holding his hand. John told the man, We are going to come bac
25、k this way. If you are still here, we will check on you. The man said he was fine but he was going to stay down for a bit. He was on the ground at the bottom of the levee and off a walkway that backed up into other peoples homes. We ran on for 10-15 minutes or so and turned around.John rode ahead to
26、 see if he was still there. When I got to the spot, there was John and the man. The man didnt look fine he was stumbling (蹒跚而行) around and seemed lost.The man in the meantime tried to climb up the levee and fell again and as he sat there, I walked down. I said, Hi, my name is Mia, whats your name? H
27、e laughed and looked at me. I said light-heartedly, I am relearning how to run. I didnt realize it was so difficult. He said, Oh my son and I run too yeah its not always easy.It was starting to get dark. Turns out the mans name was John also. I said, Shall we walk together, John? He said, Okay. He d
28、idnt want me to grab his hand or arm to help him, so I said, Ill just stand by you if that is okay. Thats okay, he said.We walked down the levee together with John riding behind. Through our walk he swerved (急转弯) from either side of the levee I stayed calm and moved to either side casually trying no
29、t to look like I was blocking.Paragraph 1: I said to our new friend John, Do you know why we are concerned?他说不知_, _, he, _,shook his head, telling me that he didnt know.我做解释_, I told him that,_, I could completely feel his hardship,_even running on my own had become a challenge for me.帮他找路_, we trie
30、d our best to help him find his way.找到路了_, _, he caught sight of a path and said that was the way to his home;_, he felt extremely happy.Paragraph 2:He waved goodbye to us and practically ran into the dark.看他背影,我羡慕他_, I felt a little bit jealous, _even an old man like him could do something that I w
31、as not able to.累但是值Exhausted _ I was, I felt my _ worthwhile, _ I had made my own contribution to the society.学到道理From this experience, I have learned that _ might always exist, but kindness _.经历难忘 What an unforgettable experience it was! DNo matter how small you are, you can also give help or suppo
32、rt to others. I didnt understand these words until I saw my grandfather weep that day.I grew up in Southern California, and my family often went to Disneyland, Knotts Berry Farm, and Sea World. The highlight of those park visits for me was always the evening activities, when there would be fireworks
33、.As I grew older and more observant, I noticed that my grandfather would go missing just before the fireworks were scheduled to start and reappear shortly after they finished. I asked my mother about this and was told that Grandpa didnt like to hear the noise of the explosions. They reminded him of
34、the war and his fellows who died in the war. So every time there was fireworks, he would go inside the bathrooms until they were done. I felt surprised because my grandfather was such a strong man.One summer night, somewhere near my tenth birthday, my family and I exited a ride just in time to hear
35、over the loudspeakers, In only two minutes, the lights will be turned off around the Rivers of America, and Disneyland will present their fireworks in the skies over the park. At this moment, Grandpa was just in front of me, and when he heard the announcement, he started jogging ahead without a word
36、 to anyone. Without really thinking. It look off after him, against the orders of my mother, who repeatedly called after me to stay with the rest of the family. Grandpa, unaware that I was behind him, tried desperately to walk through the masses of people who were stopped in the street waiting for t
37、he show to begin.As he tried to reach the restrooms, the first shell(烟花弹) broke in the skies above us. Grandpa paused and looked up, just looking as if he had been hit by a shot. And then he kept moving forward. As shell after shell burst overhead, he struggled forward, and almost fell over before h
38、e could sit onto a bench nearby. Para.1:Instantly, I went forward and was by his side.噪声很大_, the noise was extremely loud ,which made my grandpa _ scared.捂他耳朵_, I covered his ears with my hands, _he could hear less explosions.爷爷哭了我抱着他Suddenly, _,I saw him crying bitterly; _, I decided to hug him until the end of the show,comforting him with my words.Confused _ I was,I felt _ for what he had experienced during the war.Para.2:When the fireworks show ended, he straightened suddenly and wiped the tears. 爷爷谢我Then, _,he expressed