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1、错文：A Visit to Beijing ZooLast Sunday morning, I and my friend go to visit the Beijing Zoo. We went by bike. It take us about half a hour to get there. When we get to there, it is already crowded with people. There was a lot of foreign visitors, too. It is said that the Beijing Zoo is largest in Asia
2、 and one of the largest in the world. There are hundred of different kinds of animals. It will take a whole day to see all the animals there. So we decided to saw some of the most interesting ones. We saw the elephants first and then the monkeys. Finally we go to see our favourite nfriendsn-the gian
3、t pandas. We were delighted to see them waving to us. We really have a wonderful time in the zoo.正文：A Visit to Beijing ZooLast Sunday morning, my friend and I went to visit the Beijing Zoo. We went by bike. It took us about half an hour to get there. When we got there, it was already crowded with pe
4、ople. There were a lot of foreign visitors, too. It is said that the Beijing Zoo is the largest in Asia and one of the largest in the world. There are hundreds of different kinds of animals. It would take a whole day to see all the animals there. So we decided to see some of the most interesting one
5、s. We saw the elephants first and then the monkeys. Finally we went to see our favourite nfriendsnthe giant pandas. We were delighted to see them waving to us. We really had a wonderful time in the zoo.错文:National DayNational Day is coming soon, and I has a plan on that day. Firstly, I needs to comp
6、lete all my homeworks. After that, I is going to invite my friends to come to my house and playing the games. Secondly, I am going to cook some delicious food to my family. Lastly, my family members is going to my cousin*s birthday party. I think the National day is a wonderful day!正文：National DayNa
7、tional Day is coming soon, and I have a plan on that day. Firstly, I need to complete all my homeworks. After that, I am going to invite my friends to come to my house and play the games. Secondly, I am going to cook some delicious food for my family. Lastly, my family members arc going to my cousin
8、*s birthday party. I think the National day will be a wonderful day!My mother is tallest than my father.Fm heavyer than my brother.We like both sports, although he is more athletic （擅长运动的，活跃的）than me. He is more outgoinger, and Im very quieter.! think Pm smarter than his. He run faster than me do .
9、However We both enjoy go to parties. We like to do same things.错文：There are many subjects at schooljike Chinese math English science history and so on.I think the math is more difficult than Chinese.And English is more popular than Chinese.So I like English very much.science is also good.But I think
10、 history is more interesting than science.My mother is taller than my father.Im heavier than my brother.We both like sports,although（虽然）he is more athletic（擅长运动的,活跃的）than me. He is more outgoing （外向的，友好的），and Pm quieter.I think Im smarter than him. However（然而）We both enjoy（喜欢） going to parties.（聚会）W
11、e like to do the same（相同的） things.2.My subject正文：There are many subjects at school,like Chinese math English science history and so on.I think the math is more difficult than Chinese.And English is more popular than Chinese.So I like English very much.science is also good.But I think history is more
12、 interesting than science.Hello everyone! My name is Wu Cao .How time fly! It was two years since I come to the high school. And I became taller and taller than before. Because of my hard study, I think that Im smart than before. I made friends with my classmates ,so I become more and more popular i
13、n my class. Two years ago, I am a very shy boy ,but now I was more outgoing, because I often played basketball or soccer with schoolmates and I believe our friendship is forever. I also believe I am a better student than others because I usually help someone who is poor .正文：Hello everyone! My name i
14、s XXX .How time flies! It was two years since I came to the high school. And I become taller and taller than before. Because of my hard studying, I think that i*m smarter than before. I make friends with my classmates ,so i become more and more popular in my class. Two years ago, i was a very shy boy(Girl) ,but now im more outgoing, because I often play basketball or soccer with schoolmates and i believe our friendship will be forever. I also believe i am a better student than others because i usually help someone who is poor .