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1、 who 关键词动词形容词人物1人物2所有物体what 关键句P1P2 关键词3w1H情节构思前：读原文，找素材（加入续写每1句中）who 关键词动词形容词人物1续写：延续这些动作；或再做一遍，do it again续写：加在名词前/困难或表达“更加”much+adj.er人物2所有物体续写：作为解决问题的方法/工具what 关键句 需求；冲突；待做的事P1P2 关键词“the+名词”；转机（定结尾）；需求3w1Hwhere/when/why/how 各类描写占比情节构思前：读原文，找素材（加入续写每1句中）Needs（需求）Difficulties（困难、障碍）Solutions（方法）De
2、nouement（结局）续写情节构思：需求法（NSDD）Needs（需求）原文找需求：(首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)Difficulties（困难、障碍）原文找困难：(5w1H+角色特点)内在冲突：人物特点/局限外在冲突：外部障碍Solutions（方法）1、大转机：多在P1/P2首句；2、小工具：原文出现的事物（多划名词事物）3、其他角色：分工协作Denouement（结局）1、需求被解决；2、呼应首段事件/画面；3、升华感悟续写情节构思：需求法（NSDD）-原文线索 N 需求：_（线索：首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句）D 困难：_ （线索：5w1H/外在+角色特点/内在）S 方法：_
3、（线索：P1/P2首+原文工具+其他角色）D 结局：_ （线索：需求解决+呼应首段）P1:The man just smiled and started to tell the truth.P2:Then,Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.【填入原文线索，只需补2-3句，续写每1句都有原文词】【读后续写：情节设计|简单 稳妥|“NSDD”法】1、情节设计原则（1）简单稳妥 紧凑 丰富 故事性（2）后三者实现方式：词汇、句式、连接成分、各类描写。2、情节构思法：“NSDD”（1）N需求+D困难+S方法+D结局（2）历
4、年真题，情节设计分析3、线索在原文，利用3 件事（1）串联首尾段 5W1H+P1P2首句，定事件走向（2）划出关键词（角色特点、关键情节）（3）描写占比多，是关键；续写比例与其一致高中英语读后续写（情节设计|只需4步）“NSDD”：N需求+D困难+S方法+D结局 “NSDD”续写情节设计“你说得对”“NSDD”续写情节设计“你说得对”1、“评卷员说”：情节设计原则2、情节构思法：“NSDD”（提供表格）（历年真题，情节设计分析）3、线索在原文：3件事（提供表格）“有迹可循”续写情节设计（融洽度高，难度降低 nice!）【读后续写：情节设计|简单 稳妥|“NSDD”法】1、情节设计原则（1）简单
5、稳妥 紧凑 丰富 故事性（2）后三者实现方式：词汇、句式、连接成分、各类描写。2、情节构思法：“NSDD”（1）N需求+D困难+S方法+D结局（2）历年真题，情节设计分析3、线索在原文，利用3 件事（1）串联首尾段 5W1H+P1P2首句，定事件走向（2）划出关键词（角色特点、关键情节）（3）描写占比多，是关键；续写比例与其一致 “语法、时态、拼写、标点、大小写、叙述连贯性等方面的错误率都与学生读后续写的成绩存在不同程度的正相关性。”（张春青）“普遍存在情节不严密，词汇较低级，句式变化少等情况”（屠勤琴）“.续写内容才能与原文融洽，连贯.”“最后附上阅卷实际操作评分标准，主要依据是是否有正确的
6、句子，原则上就高不就低。20分：内容顺，细节比较多，允许些许错误。18分：内容顺，细节少些，语言有些错误。15分：内容可读，语言错误多。10分：内容基本完整，基本没什么完整的句子。”“听评卷员说”:对情节设计的要求？简单稳妥 紧凑 丰富 故事性续写情节设计，优先顺序：“严密、融洽、连贯”简单稳妥 紧凑 丰富 故事性续写情节设计，优先顺序：（优先/重要）（重要）（挑战）（尝试）“严密、融洽、连贯”简单稳妥 紧凑 丰富 故事性续写情节设计，优先顺序：（优先/重要）（重要）（挑战）（尝试）注意：设计的任务为“简单稳妥”，其他要求，可通过这些来实现：词汇、句式、连接成分、各类描写。“严密、融洽、连贯”
7、简单稳妥 紧凑 丰富 故事性续写情节设计，优先顺序：（优先/重要）（重要）（挑战）（尝试）注意：设计的任务为“简单稳妥”，其他要求，可通过这些来实现：词汇、句式、连接成分、各类描写。紧凑性：情节推进+连接成分（逻辑连词+副词+介词短语）丰富性：各类描写、词汇、句式故事性：多读英语小故事，了解文化风俗，熟悉常见情节“严密、融洽、连贯”简单稳妥续写情节设计，优先顺序：“严密、融洽、连贯”简单稳妥续写情节设计，优先顺序：“严密、融洽、连贯”贴紧原文，找线索 【读后续写：读原文|5W2P+角色特点+描写占比】1、第一件事：串联首尾段 5W1H+P1P2首句，定事件走向（1）读首段得知：人物+大致事件（
8、2）读尾段得知：具体事件+态度（列出所有角色）（3）读P1P2首句得知：故事结局走向 2、第二件事：划出关键词（角色特点、关键情节）（1）划出角色相关描写(adj/v/n)：用来续写角色，或用同义替换（2）划出矛盾/需求，关键情节：用来续写情节，甚至是“升华”3、第三件事：观察各类描写占比，续写比例与其一致（1）看各类描写：续写时占比一致（2）语法句式：保持一致，也可模仿好句（3）占比多：关键所在，决定情节走向 who 关键词动作：v.情绪/心理：adj.特点：n./短语角色1角色2角色3what 关键句P1P2 关键词3w1H情节构思前：读原文，3件事（5W2P+角色+描写）每写一篇，都填此
9、表格（考试时直接划）who 关键词动作：v.情绪/心理：adj.特点：n./短语角色1（主角色）角色2（其他角色）角色3（动物/事物）what 关键句 冲突；待做的事P1P2 关键词 the+n.3w1Hwhere/when/why/how 各类描写占比 情节构思前：读原文，3件事（5W2P+角色+描写）who 关键词动作：v.情绪/心理：adj.特点：n./短语角色1（主角色）（行动方法）角色2（其他角色）角色3（动物/事物）（困难Diff）what 关键句 冲突；待做的事（转机 S；需求N+结局De）P1P2 关键词 the+n.（转机 S/行动方法）（需求N+结局De）3w1Hwhere
10、/when/why/how 各类描写占比（困难Diff）情节构思前：读原文，3件事（5W2P+角色+描写）短故事 情节续写情节设计 【短故事情节：short story plots】续写情节构思：需求法（NSDD）Needs需求Difficulty困难、障碍Solution行动、方法Denouement结局（需求解决）Needs（需求）Difficulties（困难、障碍）Solutions（方法）Denouement（结局）续写情节构思：需求法（NSDD）每写一篇，都填此表格 Needs（需求）原文找需求、目标：(首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)Difficulties（困难、障碍）设置困难
11、，原文找障碍：(5w1H+角色特点)内在冲突：人物心理/特点外在冲突：外部因素Solutions（方法）1、大转机：通常在P1/P2首句；2、小工具：原文出现的事物（多划事物名词）3、其他角色：分工协作Denouement（结局）1、需求被解决；2、呼应首段事件/画面；3、升华感悟续写情节构思：需求法（NSDD）-线索在哪？【历年真题情节：需求-被解决】年份主题需求 Needs结局 Denouement困难 Difficulties方法和媒介 Solutions2021.6 全国1卷母亲节惊喜2021.6浙江卷暑期打工挣钱2021.1浙江卷卡南瓜视频在网络走红2020.7浙江卷拍摄北极熊，对峙
12、，遇险2020.7山东卷救助穷人2020.1浙江卷小主人离家，宠物狗难过 【历年真题情节：需求-被解决】年份主题需求 Needs结局 Denouement困难 Difficulties方法和媒介 Solutions2021.6 全国1卷母亲节惊喜做早餐2021.6浙江卷暑期打工挣钱处理挣到的钱2021.1浙江卷卡南瓜视频在网络走红得救，视频在网络传播开来2020.7浙江卷拍摄北极熊，对峙，遇险脱险2020.7山东卷救助穷人助人2020.1浙江卷小主人离家，宠物狗难过让小狗开心 【历年真题情节：需求-被解决】年份主题需求 Needs结局 Denouement困难 Difficulties方法和媒
13、介 Solutions2021.6 全国1卷母亲节惊喜做早餐做好了早餐2021.6浙江卷暑期打工挣钱处理挣到的钱处理了钱：将挣到的钱给了父亲2021.1浙江卷卡南瓜视频在网络走红得救，视频在网络传播开来得救，视频传播获得关注2020.7浙江卷拍摄北极熊，对峙，遇险脱险脱险2020.7山东卷救助穷人助人助人2020.1浙江卷小主人离家，宠物狗难过让小狗开心小狗开心，家庭团聚 【历年真题情节：困难-原文关键句】年份主题需求 Needs结局 Denouement困难 Difficulties方法和媒介 Solutions2021.6 全国1卷母亲节惊喜做早餐做好了早餐不会做，厨房乱2021.6浙江卷
14、暑期打工挣钱处理挣到的钱处理了钱：将挣到的钱给了父亲作者不情愿贡献辛苦挣到的钱2021.1浙江卷卡南瓜视频在网络走红得救，视频在网络传播开来得救，视频传播获得关注被南瓜卡住无法自救2020.7浙江卷拍摄北极熊，对峙，遇险脱险脱险救援直升机30分钟后才到2020.7山东卷救助穷人助人助人没钱2020.1浙江卷小主人离家，宠物狗难过让小狗开心小狗开心，家庭团聚小狗想念男孩，但他上大学未归 【历年考题情节分析：方法-借助他人/他物】年份主题需求 Needs结局 Denouement困难 Difficulties方法和媒介 Solutions2021.6 全国1卷母亲节惊喜做早餐做好了早餐不会做，厨房
15、乱爸爸帮忙2021.6浙江卷暑期打工挣钱处理挣到的钱处理了钱：将挣到的钱给了父亲作者不情愿贡献辛苦挣到的钱父亲的辛劳和担心，触动了我2021.1浙江卷卡南瓜视频在网络走红得救，视频在网络传播开来视频传播开来，获得关注被南瓜卡住无法自救爸爸妈妈帮忙,视频传上网络2020.7浙江卷拍摄北极熊，对峙，遇险脱险脱险救援直升机30分钟才到用辣椒喷雾击退熊；救援赶到2020.7山东卷救助穷人助人助人没钱卖爆米花赚钱，路人购买2020.1浙江卷小主人离家，宠物狗难过让小狗开心小狗开心，家庭团聚小狗想念男孩，但他上大学未归父母买新小狗，作伴，男孩回来 【历年考题情节分析：升华-呼应首段】年份主题结局首段升华/
16、呼应2021.6 全国1卷母亲节惊喜做好了早餐给母亲节惊喜，但实际不会煮母亲惊喜，父女秘密作战大成功2021.6浙江卷暑期打工挣钱处理了钱：将挣到的钱给了父亲父亲“不理解”我的学生世界我和父亲互相理解对方2021.1浙江卷卡南瓜视频在网络走红得救，视频传播获得关注比赛谁能找到最大的南瓜大南瓜走红，路人都来和大南瓜合影2020.7浙江卷拍摄北极熊，对峙，遇险脱险我们目标：拍到北极熊北极熊抢食物，我拍到熊抢食物2020.7山东卷救助穷人助人经济衰退，人们互相帮忙度过难关两家互相帮忙，互相感激并帮助更多人2020.1浙江卷小主人离家，宠物狗难过小狗开心，家庭团聚和小狗这“老朋友”拥抱短暂告别小狗拥有
17、了新伙伴 素材哪里找？续写情节构思：需求法（NSDD）who 关键词角色1角色2角色3what 关键句P1P2 关键词3w1H情节构思前：读原文，3件事（5W2P+角色+描写）who 关键词动作：v.情绪/心理：adj.特点：n./短语角色1（主角色）（行动方法）角色2（其他角色）角色3（动物/事物）（困难Diff）what 关键句 冲突；待做的事（转机 S；需求N+结局De）P1P2 关键词 the+n.（转机 S/行动方法）（需求N+结局De）3w1Hwhere/when/why/how 各类描写占比（困难Diff）情节构思前：读原文，3件事（5W2P+角色+描写）Needs（需求）Dif
18、ficulties（困难、障碍）Solutions（方法）Denouement（结局）续写情节构思：需求法（NSDD）Needs（需求）原文找需求、目标：(首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句)Difficulties（困难、障碍）设置困难，原文找障碍：(5w1H+角色特点)内在冲突：人物心理/特点外在冲突：外部因素Solutions（方法）1、大转机：通常在P1/P2首句；2、小工具：原文出现的事物（多划事物名词）3、其他角色：分工协作Denouement（结局）1、需求被解决；2、呼应首段事件/画面；3、升华感悟续写情节构思：需求法（NSDD）-原文线索 One fall,my wife Ell
19、i and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears like all wild animals should be photographed from a saf
20、e distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread.T
21、he hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun
22、 shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making th
23、e best of this close encounter(相遇),I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly an
24、d,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back toour camp.P2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.20202020年年7 7月浙江卷月浙江卷 One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar be
25、ars.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bea
26、r,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,whi
27、ch was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like
28、these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇),I took some p
29、ictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With
30、 an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back toour camp.P2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.20202020年年7 7月浙江卷月浙江卷 原文：5W2P所有人/物+特点+描写占比 One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a re
31、search camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a
32、 camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.某个秋天，我和妻子 Elli 有个目标：拍摄北极熊。我们住在“世界北极熊之都”加拿大马尼托巴省丘吉尔镇外的一个调研营地。给北极熊拍照很神奇，但也很危险。北极熊和所有野生动物一样应该在安全距离内拍照。当我与北极熊面对面时，我喜欢用带有长焦镜头的相机。但有时，说起来容易做起来难。这是其中之一。As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polarmale po
33、lar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry The hungry bearbear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried a
34、ll the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws.当 Elli 和我做晚饭时，一只年轻的雄性北极熊在附近湖里玩耍，它嗅和闻到了
35、我们大蒜面包的味道。饥饿的熊顺着鼻子来到我们的营地，营地被高高的铁丝网包围。他拉扯并咬住了电线，用后腿站立，推木栅栏柱子。Elli 和我吓坏了，试了所知的所有防熊行动。我们对着熊大喊大叫，用力击打罐子，并向空中发射空弹。有时这种响亮的声音会吓跑熊。然而对这只北极熊无效他只是不停地用大爪子试图推倒栅栏。5W2P5W2P所有人所有人/物物+特点特点+描写占比描写占比 I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arriv
36、ed.Making the best of this close encounter,I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest s
37、lowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.我用无线电向营地经理寻求帮助。他告诉我一架直升飞机在路上了，但 30 分钟后才能到。充分利用这次近距离接触，我拍了一些熊的照片。Elli 和我担心围栏在熊的暴行下，无法扛多 30 分钟。营地经理建议我用胡椒喷雾。喷雾会灼伤熊的眼睛，但不会伤害它们。于是我慢慢走近这不速之客，穿过栅栏，朝他脸上喷过去。熊怒吼一声，跑到湖边洗眼睛。Needs（需求）Difficulti
38、es（困难、障碍）Solutions（方法）Denouement（结局）续写情节构思：需求法（NSDD）One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dange
39、rous.Polar bears like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear
40、 who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense act
41、ions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopt
42、er was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇),I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears
43、 eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back toour camp.P2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.20202020年年7 7月浙江卷月
44、浙江卷 One fall,my wife Elli and I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears like all wild animals should be
45、 photographed from a safe distance.When Im face to face with a polar bear,I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens.But sometimes,that is easier said than done.This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner,a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed,and sm
46、elled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp,which was surrounded by a high wire fence.He pulled and bit the wire.He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified,Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew.We yelled at the bear,hit pots hard
47、,and fired blank shotgun shells into the air.Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off.Not this polar bear though he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws(爪子).I radioed the camp manager for help.He told me a helicopter was on its way,but it would be 30 minutes bef
48、ore it arrived.Making the best of this close encounter(相遇),I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldnt last through 30 more minutes of the bears punishment.The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray.The spray burns the bears eyes,but doesnt hurt them.So I approached our u
49、ninvited guest slowly and,through the fence,sprayed him in the face.With an angry roar(吼叫),the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.P1:A few minutes later,the bear headed back toour camp.P2:At that very moment,the helicopter arrived.20202020年年7 7月浙江卷月浙江卷 N需求：首尾+后半部分+P1/P2首句 One fall,my wife Elli an
50、d I had a single goal:to photograph polar bears.We were staying at a research camp outside“the polar bear capital of the world”the town of Churchill in Manitoba,Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous.Polar bears like all wild animals should be photographed from a safe di