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1、高考英语读后续写语篇练习感恩节的美食邀约1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part 1题目呈现3续写原文On a snowy day Steve sat down on the usual seat in the Union Square.Every Thanksgiving for nine years he had sat down there at one in the afternoon.Every time,a wonderful thing happened to him,which made his heart feel full of joy.On those oth
2、er Thanksgiving Days,Steve usually had been hungry.But today Steve was not hungry.He had come from a dinner so big that he had almost no power to move.His body had suddenly become too big for his clothes;it seemed ready to break out of them.They were torn.You could see his skin through a hole in the
3、 front of his shirt.But the cold wind,with snow in it,felt pleasantly cool to him.The dinner had not been expected.He had been passing a large house near the beginning of that great broad street called Fifth Avenue,where lived two ladies of an old family who had a deep love of tradition that on Than
4、ksgiving Day food will be offered to the first hungry person to walk by.Today Steve happened to be the one to pass by on his way to the park.4续写原文Steve sat in the park,appearing to be waiting for somebody,but appearing not to expect something to happen.Suddenly his eyes grew wider and his breath sto
5、pped.For the old gentleman was coming across Fourth Avenue toward Steves seat.Every Thanksgiving Day for nine years the old gentleman had come there to find Steve on his seat.Then he had led Steve to a restaurant and watched him eat a big dinner,which had been a part of Thanksgiving Day.The old gent
6、leman was thin and tall and sixty.His hair was whiter and thinner than it had been last year.His legs shook,seeming not as strong as they were the year before.5段首句Para 1：As this kind old gentleman came toward him,Steve began to shake and his breath was shorter.Para 2：With these words,the old man loo
7、ked into Steves eyes,expecting Steve to accept the dinner.6Part 2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析话题：助人篇主要内容：今年的感恩节，Steve在第五大道的一所大宅里饱餐了一顿美食。九年以来的每个感恩节，一位老先生都会请他吃大餐。今年老先生如约又来请他吃饭，可是Steve已经吃得很饱了，他会拒绝还是接受老先生的邀请以便
8、给他施恩的机会呢？9续写思路分析Para 1As this kind old gentleman came toward him,Steve began to shake and his breath was shorter.由第一段首句内容“当这位和蔼可亲的老先生向他走来时，史蒂夫开始颤抖，呼吸急促。”可知，第一段应该描写史蒂夫对是否接受邀约的内心挣扎。10续写思路分析Para 2：With these words,the old man looked into Steves eyes,expecting Steve to accept the dinner.由第二段首句内容“说完这些话，老
9、人看着史蒂夫的眼睛，期待着史蒂夫接受晚餐。”可知，第二段应该描写史蒂夫最终接受了老人的邀约。11续写素材可用句型：高分句型1 Steve hesitated for half a minute,helpless and very sorry for himself.（形容词作伴随状语）高分句型2 But now he looked up at the old gentlemans face,totally at a loss what to say.（伴随状语）12Part 3范文呈现13范文呈现As this kind old gentleman came toward him,Steve
10、began to shake and his breath was shorter.He wished he could fly away.But he could not move from his seat.“Good afternoon,”said the old gentleman.“Glad to see you again.Come with me,my man,and I will give you a dinner that will surely make your body feel as thankful as your mind.”Those are what the
11、old gentleman said every time.The words themselves were almost a tradition.Always before,they had been music in Steves ear.But now he looked up at the old gentlemans face,totally at a loss what to say.14范文呈现With these words,the old man looked into Steves eyes,expecting Steve to accept the dinner.Ste
12、ve hesitated for half a minute,helpless and very sorry for himself.And then Steve made a strange noise,and said:“Thank you.Im very hungry.”which the old gentleman had heard nine times before,he understood it.Steve was very full,but he understood that he was a part of a tradition.His desire for food
13、on Thanksgiving Day was not his own.It belonged to this kind old gentleman.Then he struggled to stand up and followed the gentleman in the snow.15范文译文当这位和蔼可亲的老先生向他走来时，史蒂夫开始颤抖，呼吸急促。他希望他能飞走。但是他不能离开他的座位。“下午好，”老先生说。“很高兴再次见到你。跟我来，我的人，我会给你一顿晚餐，一定会让你的身体和你的思想一样感激。”这是老先生每次说的话。这些词本身几乎是一种传统。以前，它们一直是史蒂夫耳边的音乐。但现在他抬头看着老先生的脸，完全不知道该说什么。16范文译文说完这些话，老人看着史蒂夫的眼睛，期待着史蒂夫接受晚餐。史蒂夫犹豫了半分钟，无助地为自己感到难过。然后史蒂夫发出一种奇怪的声音，说：“谢谢你。我很饿。”老先生听了九遍，他明白了。史蒂夫很饱，但他明白他是传统的一部分。他对感恩节食物的渴望不是他自己的。它属于这位好心的老先生。然后他挣扎着站起来，在雪地里跟着那位先生。17Part 4努力方向18高级结构名词性从句高级结构三连动虚拟语气形容词做状语无灵主语19定语从句状语从句（包含倒装句）强调句副词做状语非谓语（包括独立主格）20Thankyouverymuch!