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1、话题11 购物(Shopping)I高考方向和写法指导II Useful expressions范文1【2013年全国新课标卷I】请美国朋友代卖中国结范文2介绍网上购物的优缺点范文3关于所购数码相机的质量问题的投诉I高考方向和写法指导 购物（Shopping）包括购物计划和产品的规格、样式、颜色、重量、性能、价格和质量等，以及对产品或服务的赞扬与投诉，付款方式等。此话题涉及三类考点：第一类，在应用文求助信中考查，请朋友帮忙代卖商品。包括该商品的外观（尺寸、颜色、形状、和质地等）、重量、性能、功能、价格及象征意义等。写作思路：交代写作目的描述该商品的具体信息提出请求并表达感谢。第二类，在议论文中
2、考查，网上购物的优缺点。写作思路：主题句网购的优点和缺点我的观点第三类，在应用文投诉信中考查，就自己购买的物品在质量（封面、内容、纸张、印刷等）、包装、数量或商家的服务态度等方面进行投诉。写作思路：交代写作目的描述所购商品出现的具体问题希望得到的结果（要求理赔的方案及途径）。第四类，在说明文中考查，如：随着时代发展，描述购物方式的变迁。II Useful expressions1. 购物相关用语（Words and expressions related to shopping）买卖Buying and sellingsale卖 purchase 购买 order 订购，预定 make a b
3、argain讨价还价 bargain with attendant和服务员砍价 exchange交换 on sale打折 sell out卖光 be all sold out /out of stock售空buy in group 团购 price tag价格标签 consume（vt.）消费 consumption（n.）消费 goods货物 相关人员 Related personnela shop assistant商店营业员 shopkeeper店主，店经理 customer顾客 consumer消费者 场所Placeshop商店 market市场 supermarket 超市 depa
4、rtment store 百货商店 shopping center购物中心 mall室内购物中心 duty-free shop免税店 online store 网上商店outlet市场；（一家公司产品的）销售点 second-hand store旧货店 counter柜台cash desk付款处支付Paymentprice价格 cost花费 pay付款 spend花费 charge 收费 charge sb. a fee of 500 yuan （向sb.）收500元的费用 discount 打折；折扣offer a discount 打折 free of charge免费 down paym
5、ent定金；（分期付款的）预付款项 cash现金 pay in cash以现金支付 credit card信用卡 pay by credit card通过信用卡支付cheque 支票 change零钱 yuan元 dollar 美元 pound英镑 penny 便士 pence是penny的复数 expense 花费，开销 fee费（如：会费、入场费、手续费等；付给律师、医生等的）服务费；酬金 a membership fee 会费 school fees学杂费 a license fee执照税 fare船/车费用；飞机票价 bus/taxi fares公共汽车费/出租车费 tax税 exch
6、ange rate （外币）汇率 receipt 收据 网上购物On-line shopping cyber ordering 网络订购 e-shopping 网上购物 deliver 运送/发（货物/商品） package包裹parcel（n.）包袱，包裹 wrap up包装express （美）特快发送，快运（邮件、包裹、钱、货物等） 其他 Other expressionsfake products 假冒商品 be of poor/ high quality糟糕/优异的质量 poor service 糟糕的服务 avoid being cheated 避免受骗 a full refund
7、 on your rail tickets 你火车票的全额退款 effective and convenient 高效率、方便much to my disappointment 非常令我失望的是 convey/express ones dissatisfaction表达不满investigate the matter =look into the incident调查此次事件2. 商品的具体信息（Detailed information about goods）（1）Chinese knot 中国结（2）These Chinese knots are about 5 inches long a
8、nd 3 inches wide. 这些中国结大约有5英寸长，3英寸宽。（3）The size of the Chinese knots is about 6 inches long and 4 inches wide, as large as our hands. 中国结的大小大约有6英寸长，4英寸宽，和我们的手一样大。（4）They are of different shapes, such as diamonds, butterflies, flowers and birds. 它们形状各异，如钻石、蝴蝶、花朵和鸟。（5）They are in the shape of diamonds
9、. 它们是钻石形状的。（6）They are red and orange in color, and made of silk threads, which make them look very beautiful. 它们有的是红色，有的是橙色，均用丝带做成，这让它们看起来格外漂亮。（7）They are of different colors, but mostly are red. 它们有不同的颜色，但大多是红色的。（8）In China, they are symbols of peace, unity and good luck. You can use Chinese knots
10、 as small gifts for friends or to decorate your room. 在中国，他们象征着和平、团结和好运。你可以用中国结作为礼物送给朋友或用来装饰房间。（9）You know Chinese knots are very popular in China because they stand for reunion, peace and harmony. So they are used to decorate our houses.你知道中国结在中国很受欢迎，因为他们象征着团圆、和谐与和平。所以它们被用来装饰我们的房子。（10）They are 10 d
11、ollars each. 每个售价10美元。（11）I guess some people may want to buy them. You can sell them at five dollars each.我想有些人可能会买它们，你可以卖五美元一个。3. 网上购物的优缺点（Advantages and disadvantages of shopping online）（1）It is effective and convenient for you to do some shopping on the Internet because you neednt go out of your
12、 home. 网上买东西既高效又方便，因为你不必出门。（2）Besides, the large varieties of goods on the net are effortlessly comparable and easy to choose. 此外，网上商品种类繁多，易于比较和选择。（3）But just as the saying goes, every coin has two sides. 但正如谚语所说，每个硬币都有两面, 万事均有利弊。（4）Its negative aspects are also apparent. 它的消极方面也很明显。（5）One of the di
13、sadvantages is that you have to spend extra money on the goods. 缺点之一是你必须在商品上多花些钱。（6）And sometimes the incomplete payment system will result in revealing your personal information，which is not safe. 有时不完整的支付系统会泄露你的个人信息，这是不安全的。（7）What is more，it is unsuitable for consumers to purchase the goods in eag
14、er demand on the net.另外，它不适合消费者在网上购买急需的产品。4. 投诉信相关用语 （Useful expressions about complaints）（1）complain to sb. about sth. 向sb.投诉sth. make a complaint about sth. n.（c/u）complaint 抱怨，投诉（2）I am writing this letter to make some complaint(s) about the shoes I bought from your store.我写这封信的目的是就我在你们店里买的鞋子事宜进行
15、投诉。（3）There are some main reasons why I am not content with At first, Whats worse, Eventually, 我对不满意有一些主要原因。首先，更糟糕的是，最后，（4）Its bad to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem. 受到如此差劲的服务真是太糟糕了，我相信我有权利要求你处理这个问题。（5）Please give me your immedi
16、ate attention to this letter. 请及时关注这封信。（6）I am looking forward to a satisfactory reply as soon as possible. 我期待尽快得到满意的答复。（7）Thanks for your consideration. 感谢您（对我提出的建议）的考虑。（8）I expect to receive another pair of better quality or the full refund of the shoes. 我希望贵厂可以更换一双较好质量的鞋或是全额退款。（9）I sincerely hop
17、e that/It is my sincere hope that you will look into/investigate the matter/incident seriously and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.我真诚地希望你能认真调查这件事情，以及采取恰当的措施防止类似事件再次发生。（10）You will receive a full refund if you cancel the holiday.如果你取消假期，将会收到全额退款。（11）I woul
18、d appreciate it very much if you could take measures to deal with/solve the problem as soon as possible.你若能尽快采取措施处理这个问题，我将感激不尽。范文1【2013年全国新课标卷I】请美国朋友代卖中国结（ Shopping）假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（Chinese knot）给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信， 请他代卖，要点如下：1.外观（尺寸，颜色，材料）；2. 象征意义； 3. 价格。注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好
19、。2013年高分作文范文1Dear Tom, How are you doing？I have learned you have started an online store recently. My hobby is making Chinese knot in my spare time. I am wondering whether you can help me sell some. These Chinese knots are about 5 inches long and 3 inches wide. They are of different shapes, such as
20、diamonds, butterflies, flowers and birds. They are red and orange in color, and made of silk threads, which make them look very beautiful. In China they are symbols of peace, unity and good luck. You can use Chinese knots as small gifts for friends or to decorate your room. They are 10 dollars each.
21、 Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li HuaUseful expressions1.diamond 钻石 2.silk threads 丝线2013年满分作文范文2Dear Tom, How are you doing？I am glad to know you have started an online store. I made some Chinese knots a few days ago. I really hope you can help me sell them. The size of the Chinese knots
22、 is about 6 inches long and 4 inches wide, as large as our hands. They are of different colors, but mostly are red. They are in the shape of diamonds. You know Chinese knots are very popular in China because they stand for reunion, peace and harmony. So they are used to decorate our houses. I guess
23、some people may want to buy them. You can sell them at five dollars each. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua范文2介绍网上购物的优缺点（Topical Issues, shopping）随着电视和网络的普及，人们的购物方式也发生着变化，下表是你班的同学对网上购物的认识。请根据以下表格内容写一份报道，介绍网上购物的优缺点,并谈谈你的看法。优点缺点足不出户，高效率、方便要花额外的费用可以不费力气地进行比较不完善的支付系统可供选择的货物多不适合消费者购买急需的产品和容
24、易买到假货参考范文Nowadays many people prefer to shop on line. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.It is effective and convenient for you to do some shopping on the net because you neednt go out of your home. Besides, the large varieties of goods on the net are effortlessly comparable and easy t
25、o choose. But just as the saying goes, every coin has two sides. Its negative aspects are also apparent. One of the disadvantages is that you have to spend extra money on the goods. And sometimes the incomplete payment system will result in revealing your personal information，which is not safe. What
26、 is more，it is unsuitable for consumers to purchase the goods in eager demand on the net.Through the above analysis, I believe that positive aspects of shopping on line far outweigh negative ones. Therefore, I would like to shop on line.Useful expressions1. Besides, the large varieties of goods on t
27、he net are effortlessly comparable and easy to choose.此外，在网上的商品种类繁多，可以不费力气地进行比较，并且也容易挑选。2. What is more，it is unsuitable for consumers to purchase the goods in eager demand on the net.另外，它不适合消费者在网上购买急需的产品。3. Through the above analysis, I believe that positive aspects of shopping on line far outweigh
28、 negative ones.通过以上分析，我认为网上购物的好处远远超过消极方面的影响。范文3关于所购数码相机的质量问题的投诉（Shopping）Dear Manager, I venture to write to complain about the quality of the digital camera I bought last Friday at your store. During the five days the camera has been in my possession, problems have emerged one after another. For on
29、e thing, the screen is always black, making the camera no different from a traditional one. For another, the battery is distressing as it supports the cameras operation for only two hours. Therefore, I wish to exchange it for another camera or declare a refund. I will appreciate it if my problem rec
30、eives due attention. Yours, Li MingUseful expressions1. venture vi 冒昧 2. refund n.退款 3. battery n.电池 4. distressing adj.令人烦恼的 5. operation n. 运行, 操作 6. in ones possession 某人拥有 e.g. He had often see the knife in Peters possession.他常常看见皮特带着那把刀。7. I venture to write to complain about the quality of the digital camera I bought last Friday at your store.我冒昧给你写这封信，投诉我上周五在您商店里购买的数码相机的质量问题。8. Therefore, I wish to exchange it for another camera or declare a refund. 因此，我希望可以换一个相机，否则我要求退款。9. I will appreciate it if my problem receives due attention.如果这个问题能够得到足够的重视，我将十分感激。