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1、读后续写无灵主语句非人称主语句采用“无灵主语”(inanimate subject)，表示抽象概念、心理感觉、事物名称或时间地点等，但谓语却常常使用“有灵动词”(animate verb)表示人或社会团体的动作和行为 ，这类句子往往带有拟人化(personification)的修辞色彩。举个栗子：1）他想到一个好主意。He had a good idea.A good idea occurred to/struck/ hit him. 2） 夜幕降临，黑暗笼罩着森林。Night approaching, darkness ruled the forest.3） 我想不起他的名字了。His na
2、me escaped me .His name failed me.His name slipped my mind.无灵主语优点：（一）运用无灵主语，突出人物的心理描写案例1What if his ghost should rise up, angry at the way I was treated? The thought of it brought me no comfort, but only a growing terror. （简爱）评析：幼小的简爱寄养在舅父家中，舅舅去世后，简爱受尽舅妈和表兄的歧视和虐待。这句话以行为名词the thought 为主语，用有灵动词brought
3、作谓语动词的无灵主语句，更加具象地描写除了她内心的被迫与恐惧和无助。案例2Horror and grief gave way to a great desire to see her, but the nurse would not to let me.（简爱）评析：简爱被送入教规严厉的孤儿院后生活非常艰苦。最好的朋友Helen也在ICI斑疹伤寒中去世了。该句淋漓尽致地展现了简爱得知海伦被隔离后，想去看望好友遭到阻止时的复杂心情，小练1. 天越来越黑，越来越冷了，我的勇气消沉了。It grew darker and colder, and my courage sank.2. 一想到要和费尔法
4、斯太太一起回桑菲尔德过夜，我就厌烦了，于是我一路沿着墙久久徘徊。The _idea_ of going back to Thornfield for an evening with Mrs. Fairfax_bored_me, and I lingered over the wall home3. 痛苦和绝望击垮了我， 我倒在门阶上哭泣。我既没有希望，也没有勇气。_Suffering_and _despair_ _defeated_me, and I fell sobbing on the doorstep. I had neither hope nor courage any more.（二
5、）运用无灵主语句，烘托主题场景描写Night fell, the wind grew strong, and the tree creaked and groaned. A storm was gathering, but we stayed there until thunder and lightening crashed. It was midnight when we reached the house. （简爱）【练习】1. 天哪！什么叫声！及其可怕的尖叫声响彻夜空。Great heavens! What a cry! The most appalling(骇人听闻的)_scream
6、_ _tore_through the night.2. 第二天，大雪席卷山谷，厚积成堆。黄昏时分，我点了火，坐着看书。All the following day, _snow_ _swept_into the valley and _lay_in drifts. In the evening twilight, I lit the fire and sat reading. 无灵主语五大种类 (Observe & Summarize)l 第1类Panic seized her. 她突然惊慌失措。Despair choked her words. 她绝望得说不出话来。 Fear slowly
7、creeps up on her. 恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。Summary 1：主语是_名词 情感状态常见的谓语：seize(侵袭，突然控制）, well up（涌出），choke (使哽咽)，flood (涌入），come over（不知不觉地产生）, grip(紧抓），give way to (被代替）take hold of （握住）常见的抽象名词有：joy（高兴）、excitement（兴奋）、fear（恐惧）、anger（愤怒）、sorrow（悲伤）练习：1. 当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。When the host announced that she won the priz
8、e, a wild excitement took hold of her.2. 她伤心不已。Sadness came over her.3. 我兴奋得什么话也说不出来。Excitement deprived me of all power of utterance.l 第2类Linping has witnessed great changes in recent years. 临平见证了最近几年的的巨大变化。The following year saw the death of his mother. 第二年他的妈妈去世了。The town boasts a beautiful lake.
9、 这个镇引以为荣的是有个美丽的湖。Summary 2 ： 主语是表示_名词 时间和地点常见的谓语：witness(见证）, find, see, boast（有引以为荣的事物）等。练习：黄昏时候，小男孩还在离家很远的地方。Nightfall found the boy still a long way off home. l 第3类The thick fog blanketed the field. 浓雾笼罩着整个大地。The bitter weather had driven everyone indoors由于天气寒冷，大家都躲进了室内。Summary 3 ：主语是表示_等名词 气候环境常
10、见谓语：blanket, come, bring, prevent, strike, hit, threaten 等词。练习：这个城市刚下过一场大雨.A heavy rain just visited the city. l 第4类Her facelit up/brightened when I gave her the present.我给她礼物时，她的脸上焕发出了光彩。Laughter lingered around the room. 笑声在房间里萦绕。When he saw the familiar handwriting, tears welled up in his eyes.他一
11、看到熟悉的字迹，便热泪盈眶。Summary 4: 主语是表示_的名词 身体部位和音容常见的谓语：light up（照亮）, brighten（照亮）, linger（继续存留）, well up(涌出）, flash（闪现）常见的名词：face脸，laughter笑声练习：1. 看到直升飞机，Jane 高兴地笑了起来。The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, a bright smile lit up Janes face/eyes.The moment she caught sight of the helicopter, Janes ey
12、es/ face lit up with delight.2. 他皱起了眉。A frown stood on his face. l 第5类A terrible thought suddenly struck me. 我突然想到一个可怕的想法。The sight of the scene stunned me.想到这个情景我是我震惊（stun）。Summary 5: 主语是表示_的名词 行为动作常见的名词有：sight, thought, glance, look, idea, feeling等。常见谓语：strike, arouse(唤起），remind, delight, frighten
13、, stun（使震惊）, overwhelm(压倒）等词。练习：这个故事使我想起了一句谚语“不能以貌取人”。This story reminds me of a saying that “Never judge a person by his appearance”.牛刀小试请把下列有灵主语句改为无灵主语句。1. He felt very anxious. _Anxiety_ tore(撕裂)him into pieces.2. He felt sorrowful. A chill of _sorrow_ suddenly swept over him.3. I was so astonish
14、ed that I couldnt say a single word. _Astonishment_ deprived(使丧失） me of my power of speech. 4. At dusk, he was crying in the street. Dusk _witnessed him crying in the street.5. I forgot his name at the moment. His name_escaped / failed_ (被忘掉，被忽视）me at the moment.6. He suddenly lost his confidence wh
15、en he had to speak. His confidence suddenly _betrayed/abandoned_（背离，使失望）him when he had to speak.7. I lost all my courage. My courage _deserted_（遗弃，抛弃）me. 读后续写练习阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A Turning-point PartyThe cold snow was falling as Kelly struggled home from school in December. How much she
16、hated the snow-and everything else about Pinetree, Wyoming, America. How much she missed Thailand! “I hate it here! I want to go home!” Kelly thought.She reached for a small white envelope in her pocket. In it was an invitation to Jennifers party: Kelly didnt want to go. She felt awkward at the thou
17、ght of being at a party with a bunch of kids she barely knew. She closed her eyes and remembered this time of year people would hold a festival to thank the Mother of Water in Thailand, They used banana leaves to make a little boat with a candle lit in it, made a wish for the coming year and set the
18、 boat floating on the river.Kelly sighed and pushed open the door to her parents restaurant. They were busy working. “Maybe I should go just this once for Mama and Papa. They are so worried that Im not making any friends.” Kelly went over and tied an apron around her waist. As she was washing dishes
19、, she told her mother that she had been invited to a party on Friday night. Mama smiled saying now she might be happy in their new home. Kelly nodded, thinking Pinetree could never be her home.On Friday evening, Papa drove Kelly to the party. Jennifer met her at the door and led her into the dining
20、room. Six kids from her classes were seated around the table, on which were sitting small brown cookie houses. They were selecting colorful candies and gluing them to their own houses, Wow, she loved making things. For this part of the party, she could be herself. She decided to decorate her cottage
21、 like one of the golden temples of Thailand. As she was making it, Jennifer wondered how she did it. The others joined staring at Kelly with admiration, Kelly felt a warm glow. Maybe I could fit in here-a little, she thought.After dinner, the party went on and the talk turned to the coming holidays.
22、_Suddenly, Kelly came up with an idea._【参考答案】After dinner, the party went on and the talk turned to the coming holidays. All the children present immediately burst into cheers. They talked about their familiar American festivals one after another. Finally, it was Kellys turn. With her face flaming w
23、ith shyness and her head lowered, Kelly gradually began to introduce her favorite Thailand festivals intended for thanking the Mother of Water. Everyone listened carefully with burning curiosity. Slowly, a surge of confidence rose inside Kelly and she raised up her voice, pouring out words.Suddenly,
24、 Kelly came up with an idea. She ran to the garden, returning with several leaves. Clearing her throat, she announced, “Lets make a boat and celebrate the festival!” Everyone took the leaves to make them into little boats decorated with one colorful candle each, and then put them into the bathtub. K
25、elly turned off the light, little boats flowing on the water, like dots of star blinking in the darkness. All the children including Kelly, put their palms together, closed their eyes and made a wish. Right at that moment, a thought occurred to Kelly that she could fit in the new home as long as she made an attempt.5学科网（北京）股份有限公司