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1、表达的精准性和丰富性表达的精准性和丰富性读后续写微技能指导2 人物内心世界（人物内心世界（2 2）happyhappygladgladjoyfuljoyfuldelightedelighted dexcited.excited.angryangryannoyedannoyedcrosscrossirritatedirritatedmad.mad.sadsaddisappointdisappointededdepresseddepressedfrustratedfrustratedupset.upset.surprisesurprised damazedamazedastonishastonis
2、hededshockedshocked.Using adjectives to describe the picture.读后后续写第五档写第五档评分原分原则 档档 次次 描描 述述 第五档（2125）与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开 头语衔接合理。内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的 关键词语。所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能 有些许错误，但完全不会影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续 写短文结构紧凑。rich&accurateB3 sadness,weep,curiosity,glare,sign,stare,rude,scream,cheerup,terrify,t
3、errified,pleasedB6 melt,bad-tempered,tough,breathless,desperate,disappointed,ashamed,embarrassed,awkward,unconscious,tremble,anxious,anxiety,panic,He covered his mouth to hide his yawn.Our mouths dropped open in surprise.She folded her arms and stared at him.She jumped to her feet at the news.She pi
4、cked her way carefully along the stream.He paced back and forth.She screamed that there was a snake.tiredsurprisedangryexcitedcautiousupset/uneasyfrightenedfeelingsfeelings actionsactionsUsing actions to describe the feelingsscratch her head skrt 她她她她挠挠了了了了挠头挠头，一个字也听不懂。，一个字也听不懂。，一个字也听不懂。，一个字也听不懂。She
5、 _,not understanding a word.She _,not understanding a word.hang/drop/lower ones head他羞愧地低下了他羞愧地低下了他羞愧地低下了他羞愧地低下了头头。H He _in e _in shame.shame.puzzledpuzzledconfusedconfusedashamedashamedsadsadCanwedescribefeelingsCanwedescribefeelingsmorevividly?morevividly?scratched her headscratched her headhung/d
6、ropped/lowered his headhung/dropped/lowered his head翻译练习1:Tony感到很绝望。概括描述Tonyfelthopeless/desperate.1)Astheresultofanaccident,Tonywassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.(被投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望)2)Tonyfeltleftoutandwasgettingdesperatewithloneliness.(感觉被遗忘、忽视)3)Tonysbeliefsinlookingforwardan
7、dseeingthepositiveineverythingdesertedhim.(被信念抛弃)(主语问题)关于关于关于关于绝望绝望绝望绝望的描写的描写的描写的描写翻译练习2:Sheldon感到非常生气。概括描述Sheldonfeltveryangry.1)Sheldonfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slamming(砰地关上)thedoorfuriouslybehindhim.(冲出房间；狠狠摔门)2)Filledwithangre/fury(狂怒),Sheldonwasunabletoutterasingleword.(充满愤怒；说不出话)3)
8、Boilingwithrage(愤怒),Sheldonshookhisfistatme.(怒火中烧；挥舞拳头)关于关于关于关于生气生气生气生气的描写的描写的描写的描写翻译练习3:当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。概括描述Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy.1)Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereontopoftheworld.(非常开心)3)Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,h
9、edancedwithjoyandsweetness.(欢欣雀跃)2)Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamed(堆满笑容)andhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.(眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)关于高兴的描写关于高兴的描写关于高兴的描写关于高兴的描写Micro-writingPara.1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark.HowdidJanefeelthen?HowdidJanestrugglethroughthenight?Didshefallasleep?_Assignment1.Polishyourstory.