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1、 读后续写微技能指导4 融情于景Emotion+EnvironmentEmotion+Environment细节描写细节描写My eyes were wide open.My face turned pale.My legs were trembling.My heart was beating wildly.My tears were welling up.My heart My face My eyes My legs eyes/face/mouth/heart/ear/hand/body.My tears 细节描写细节描写eyes/face/mouth/heart/ear/hand/bo
2、dy.She was happy.She was happy.1._shone/glittered/sparkled with joy.2 _lit up with pleasure.3._ was pounding with excitement.Her eyes Her faceHer heartShe was excited.She was excited.1.He was so excited that he could hardly _.2 The man_for joy when he won the first prize.3._ glittered with excitemen
3、t.speak jumpedHer eyes 生生动动词动动词A feeling of fear slowly _ on me.A flood of terror _ me.A sense of fright _ me.蔓延蔓延蔓延蔓延表示某种情感侵袭/涌入I I was was scared.scared.overtook/overwhelmedwashed over/flooded overcrept upA wave of horror_ inside me.welled upShe was angry.She was angry.（其他表达）Anger flooded his vein
4、s.Her temper sparked.Rage nearly consumed her.The wind was _ dreadfully and the rain was_from the heaven,_ against the branches of lined tress.The world was_ with a sea of darkness.emotionemotionhowlingpouringwhippingburdened/loadedspecific Translation1.他正要反应，突然感觉自己舌头打结，手心出汗。2.她悲伤而疲惫，瘫倒在扶手椅上。3.漆黑的雨夜
5、，风雨交加，电闪雷鸣，我全然被这种力量镇住了。He was about to respond when he felt his tongue tied and palms sweating.The dark,rainy evening,the wind,the thundering clouds held me entirely in ther power.Sad and exhausted,he collapsed into his armchair.The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heave
6、n,whipping against the branches of lined tress.The world was burdened with a sea of drakness._ a sense of horror creeping up on me.I immediately turned around to slide into the bed and curled up.I was seized with the roaring power of nature,The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring fr
7、om the heaven,whipping against the branches of lined tress.The world was burdened with a sea of drakness._A flood of fear washing over me,I immediately turned 1.1.2.2.around to slide into the bed and curled up.“景景”“”“情情”过渡过渡更融洽更融洽？Allys Emotions “Nothing will be the same again,”Ally whispered.her ow
8、n tears were still frozen inside her heart.“I miss you,Dad,”she said softly.Ally smiled,remembering.“If only I could get that good feeling back,”she thought,sighing.sad/miss her father.sad/miss her father.Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her._ trees/flowers/breeze/sun/fortable/fortable/
9、sad.EnvironmentEnvironmentEmotionEmotion Familiar smells of the earth rose up to greet her.Wandering in the woods,Ally slowed her pace to find the little guy in the mixed air.The sun looked at her with a glowing smile and the flowers nodded merrily towards her.The breeze patted her on the face,warm and comfortable.However,it seemed that Ally couldnt catch sight of the wood warbler after a long time wait.With the sun setting,Ally was about to leave.1.1.细节描写细节描写2.2.动作描写动作描写3.3.情景交融情景交融 未未将将AllyAlly的一丝忧伤融入大自然的景色的一丝忧伤融入大自然的景色情景交融情要细致景要细致过渡要融洽1.Polish your writing.Homework