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1、B7U1 Science Fiction爱V高中英语工作室 单元主题语境和语篇内容分析主题语境：人与世界 人与自我主题群：科学幻想与科学现实子话题：1.科幻小说 2.科幻的意义【单元主题解读】本单元主题围绕科幻小说节选展开，在“人与自我”和“人与世界”的主题下，启发读者从更宏大的视野去思考科技发展与人类命运乃至人类文明发展的关系和可能面临的问题。本单元旨在从另外一种角度对人类社会本质及其发展的分析和思考。一、 教材语料：人教版 B7U1 (单词+短语+习惯表达）描述科学幻想的主题单词（源自全单元，包括教材单元所有教学内容+workbook）心理描写be being adj., more lik
2、e, pros and cons, superior to, remind sb of, feel alarmed, treat sb with dignity, as a favor to sb, feel guilty about, be aware of, 动作描写sub. would(should) be doing, dismiss sb. from a position, test out, take over, conflict with, turn out, fall away, have an urge to, change ones attitude, turn aroun
3、d, push away, take sb in ones arms, cut sth into pieces, spread rumors, charge sb with doing sth, save up for, distinguish between . and ., when it comes to doing sth, handle a task, elect sb as, it is an honor to do sth, be adapted into, admit sb into a college, attract attention, set up, be caught
4、 up in, compare with, mean to do sth, move on to, be beside the point, come to harm, obey an order, start a machine, sit sb in, draw a breath, skip to, rise up, flash before ones eyes, flip on the side, throw. through the air, break the routine of daily life, be bordered by, conduct research on, .二
5、教材语料：人教版 B7U1描述科学幻想与科学现实的教材金句(一)机器人三定律1. Todays science fiction is tomorrows science fact. (Parody)今日的科学幻想就是明日的科学事实。2. When she first saw the robot, she felt alarmed.（感到害怕）3. He seemed more like a human than a machine.（更像是，而不是）4. He was tall and handsome with smooth hair and a deep voice, although h
6、is facial expression never changed. （with结构短语）5. She gradually admired his wisdom and integrity and began to trust him.（并列句）6. As a favor, Tony promised to help Claire make herself more beautiful and her home more elegant.（介宾短语作状语）7. By that time, Tony expected that the house, which was being comple
7、tely transformed, would be ready. （非限定性定语从句）8. A robot may not injure a human being, or, through inaction, allow a human being to come to harm.（状语从句）（二）时间机器1. I had a strong urge to look at the random things that were being flashed before my eyes.（动词短语、定语从句、过去进行时被动语态)2. With a sudden jolt, the Time
8、Machine was flipped on its side, and I was thrown through the air.（with结构、动词短语）三 佳句仿写：人教版 B7U1 （约510句）1、公式：be+being+形容词Tony told her she was being sensitive and was just as good as Gladys. (be+being+形容词)仿写：我们所有人都觉得老板这次格外慷慨。（be+being+形容词）Everyone thinks that our boss is being particularly generous th
9、is time.2、公式：过去将来进行时The guests would be arriving soon, so Claire dismissed Tony for the rest of the night.（过去将来进行时）仿写：汤姆匆忙走来告诉大家，主席随时会到。Tom hurried to tell us that the president would be arriving at any moment.3、公式：still的副词用法Tomorrow night came, then skipped to day, again and again, faster and faste
10、r still. （still的副词用法）仿写：马克的公司期望进一步扩大在中国的市场份额。Marks company is hoping to expand its market share in China still further.4、公式：宾语从句+并列成分She heard him declare that he did not want to leave her the next day, and that he felt more than just the desire to please her.（宾语从句+并列成分）仿写：吉尔听到杰克宣称他第二天不想上班，并且他感到这不只是
11、身体上的原因。Jill heard Jack declare that he did not want to go to work the next day, and that he felt more than just the problem of his health.四 教材语料：人教版 B7U1目标文本（来源自人教版B7U1第一篇文章）主题阅读，灵活续写个性结局Tony gave Claire a new hairstyle and improved her makeup. As he was not allowed to accompany her to the shops, he
12、 wrote out a list of things that he would need for his work on the house. Claire went downtown and bought these things. She had an appointment to paint her nails, then she went into an expensive clothes shop. The saleswoman there was rude to her, so she rang Tony and told him she was being treated b
13、adly. He spoke to the woman, who immediately changed her attitude. Claire thanked Tony, telling him that he was a“dear”. As she turned around, there stood Gladys Claffern. How awful to be discovered by her, Claire thought. By the look on her face, Claire knew that Gladys thought they were in a relat
14、ionship. After all, she knew Claires husbands name was Larry, not Tony. Although it was completely innocent, Claire felt guilty. When Claire got home, she wept. Gladys was everything Claire wished to be. Tony told her she was being sensitive and was just as good as Gladys. He suggested that she invi
15、te Gladys and her friends to the house the night before he was to leave and Larry was to return. By that time, Tony expected that the house, which was being completely transformed, would be ready. Tony worked steadily on the improvements. Claire tried to help by working on a light suspended from the
16、 ceiling, but she fell off the ladder. Even though Tony had been in the next room, he managed to catch her in time. As he held her, she felt the warmth of his body. She screamed, pushed him away, and ran to her room. The night of the party arrived. The clock struck eight. The guests would be arrivin
17、g soon, so Claire dismissed Tony for the rest of the night. At that moment, Tony took her in his arms, bringing his face close to hers. She heard him declare that he did not want to leave her the next day, and that he felt more than just the desire to please her. Then the front door bell rang.获取基本信息
18、谁who时间：when地点：where事件：what情节走向：How 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Para 1: Tony freed her and disappeared from sight._Para 2: The next morning a car drove up and took Tony away._原创下水作文Tony freed her and disappeared from sight. It was then that Claire realized that Tony had opened the c
19、urtains of the front window. Her guests had seen everything!The women were impressed by Claire, the house and the delicious cuisine. Just before they left, Claire heard Gladys whispering to another woman that she had never seen anyone so handsome as Tony. What a sweet victory to be envied by those w
20、omen! She might not be as beautiful as them, but none of them had such a handsome lover.Then she remembered - Tony was just a machine. She shouted Leave me alone and ran to her bed. She cried all night. The next morning a car drove up and took Tony away. The company was very pleased with Tonys repor
21、t on his three weeks with Claire. Tony had protected a human being from harm. He had prevented Claire from harming herself through her own sense of failure. He had opened the curtains that night so that the other women would see him and Claire, knowing that there was no risk to Claires marriage. But
22、 even though Tony had been so clever, he would have to be rebuilt - you cannot have women failing in love with machines. 佳作学习（续写下水文的挖空）根据中文提示写续写：(用上前面的课文好句欣赏的句式或短语)Tony freed her and disappeared from sight. It was then that Claire realized that _.（托尼已经打开了前窗的窗帘） Her guests had seen everything! The wo
23、men were impressed by Claire, the house and the delicious cuisine. Just before they left, Claire heard Gladys _（正对另一位女士窃窃私语） that she had never seen anyone so handsome as Tony. What a sweet victory to be envied by those women! She might not be as beautiful as them, _. （但她们之中没有人拥有一位如此帅气的情人）Then she r
24、emembered - Tony was just a machine. She shouted Leave me alone and ran to her bed. She cried all night. The next morning a car drove up and took Tony away. _ （公司对于托尼的报告十分满意）on his three weeks with Claire. Tony had protected a human being from harm. _. （他曾阻止克莱尔从自己的失败感中受到伤害）He had opened the curtains
25、 that night so that the other women would see him and Claire, knowing that there was no risk to Claires marriage. But even though Tony had been so clever, he would have to be rebuilt - _ （你不能使女人爱上机器）Keys:Tony freed her and disappeared from sight. It was then that Claire realized that Tony had opened
26、 the curtains of the front window.（托尼已经打开了前窗的窗帘） Her guests had seen everything! The women were impressed by Claire, the house and the delicious cuisine. Just before they left, Claire heard Gladys whispering to another woman（正对另一位女士窃窃私语） that she had never seen anyone so handsome as Tony. What a swe
27、et victory to be envied by those women! She might not be as beautiful as them, but none of them had such a handsome lover. （但她们之中没有人拥有一位如此帅气的情人）Then she remembered - Tony was just a machine. She shouted Leave me alone and ran to her bed. She cried all night. The next morning a car drove up and took
28、Tony away. The company was very pleased with Tonys report （公司对于托尼的报告十分满意）on his three weeks with Claire. Tony had protected a human being from harm. He had prevented Claire from harming herself through her own sense of failure. （他曾阻止克莱尔从自己的失败感中受到伤害）He had opened the curtains that night so that the other women would see him and Claire, knowing that there was no risk to Claires marriage. But even though Tony had been so clever, he would have to be rebuilt - you cannot have women falling in love with machines. （你不能使女人爱上机器）