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1、X4U4 Sharing 爱V高中英语工作室 单元主题语境和语篇内容分析主题语境：人与社会主题群：社会服务与人际沟通子话题：志愿服务【单元主题解读】本单元围绕“志愿服务”主题展开，展示了志愿服务、志愿者组织、国家援助等内容。本单元旨在引导学生关注并了解公益事业，启发学生联系自身实际讨论志愿服务活动的意义和参与方式，帮助学生理解并鼓励他们探讨中国对外援助的意义。一、 教材语料：人教版 X4U4 (单词+短语+习惯表达）描述志愿服务的主题单词（源自全单元，包括教材单元所有教学内容+workbook）动作描写I am greeted by.If I need water I have to carr
2、y it from my house.I was showing.before I knew it, the mixture was bubbling out of the test tube spilling everywhere.心理描写I have been dying to have.I wonder.I doubt.I made my first visit to.情绪描写My muscles were aching and my knees shaking as we dragged ourselves down the mountain towards home.That eve
3、ning I fell happily into bed.It was such a privilege to have spent a day with Tombes family.环境描写The classrooms are made of bamboo, with clay floors and roofs of grass. .down a dusty track covered in weeds.语言描写.a chorus of “good morning”, Tombes mother,.started crying”ieee ieee”.二 教材语料：人教版 X4U4描述志愿服务
4、的教材金句(一)志愿服务时的困难1.It took about two weeks to arrive, and it was a bit damaged, but it was so nice to get some sweets and jam from home.(特殊句式it作形式主语)2.The classrooms are made of bamboo, with clay floors and roofs of grass.(with短语)3.Theres no electricity, running water or even textbooks, not to mentio
5、n laptops, tablets, or other modern devices!(倒装句-there be 句型)4.All the students have are pencils, rubbers, and paper.(定语从句)5.Its important not to be too rigid about rules here, too.(it做形式主语)6.The class became a circus as the boys, who had never come across anything like this before, started jumping
6、out of the window.(定语从句)7.Tombes father, Mukap, a man with a strong jaw and a wrinkled forehead, led us to his house, a low, round bamboo hut with no window, with a door just big enough to get through, and with grass sticking out of the roof-this shows it is a mans house.(with的复合结构)8.And, while the
7、country is quite beautiful and has much natural wealth, many of the people quite poor and live without things we take for granted, such as electricity, running water, cars and good transport systems, and supermarkets.(定从)（二）志愿服务的感受1.Sometimes I wonder how relevant chemistry is to these students-few
8、will ever become chemists and most will be going back to their villages after Year 8 anyway.(宾语从句)2.To be honest, I doubt whether Im making any difference to these boys lives at all.(宾语从句)3.I loved listening to the family talking softly to each other in their language, even though I could not partic
9、ipate much in the conversation.(love doing sth；让步状语从句)4.That evening I fell happily into bed.(happily 副词)5.It was such a privilege to have spent a day with Tombes family.(it做形式主语)6.So I was unhappy about her leaving without even asking for my input.(adj做表语)7.Today, I want to relay to you that Im pro
10、ud of the work my mother has done, and I am now supportive of it.(定语从句)（三） 志愿服务的行为1.Lately, all of us have seen Chinese people on TV in far-off places in the world, helping other countries to develop.(doing做宾补)2.We see Chinese workers building roads in the Congo, s port in Pakistan, railways in Pana
11、ma, and an airport in Sri Lanka.(doing做宾补)3.And we see Chinese miners, oil workers, agricultural experts, mechanics, and doctors working in nearly every corner of the world.(doing做宾补)4.In addition, her team has given patients a new malaria treatment invented in China, and this has saved many lives.(
12、done做后置定语)5.Little wonder that I and many other UNICEF volunteers travel the world to raise funds before its too late, but also to raise awareness and to combat a different kind of darkness-a darkness people find themselves in through lack of information on how easy it is to reach out and help these
13、 children.(同位语从句；定语从句)6.It is poverty that is at the root of all their suffering-not having the means to help themselves, and that is what UNICEF is all about: helping people to help themselves, giving them the aid to develop, and thereby allowing them to become self-reliant and live in dignity.(强调句
14、型)（四） 志愿服务的意义1.It has made a big difference to their lives.(固定搭配)2.Yes, to the lives of the people she is helping, it is worth it. But by any criteria this work is worth it to us as well, because it shows that we are global citizens interested in world stability, and that we feel responsible for oth
15、ers and are ready to build a community with a shared future for mankind.(宾语从句)3.Now that I understand how important my mothers work is, Ive decided to become a volunteer myself to help people in other lands.(宾语从句)4.Children are our most vital resource, our hope for the future.(同位语)三 佳句仿写：人教版 B1U1 （约
16、510句）1、公式：It takes sb. some time to do sth.It took about two weeks to arrive. (it做形式主语)仿写：每天写作业需要花费我一个半小时的时间。（it做形式主语）It takes me one and a half hours to do my homework everyday.2、公式：with的复合结构做状语The classrooms are made of bamboo, with clay floors and roofs of grass.(with的复合结构)仿写：他们离开教室，关了灯，锁了门。They
17、left the classroom with the light turned off and the door closed.3、公式：宾语从句To be honest, I doubt whether Im making any difference to these boys lives at all.(宾语从句)仿写：我一点都不怀疑他会考上北京大学。I dont doubt that he will be admitted to Peking University.4、done做后置定语In addition, her team has given patients a new ma
18、laria treatment invented in China, and this has saved many lives.(done做后置定语)仿写：我太喜欢那本鲁迅写的小说了。I love the novel written by Lu Xun so much.5、doing做宾补We see Chinese workers building roads in the Congo, s port in Pakistan, railways in Panama, and an airport in Sri Lanka.(doing做宾补)仿写：昨晚9点，我听到邻居在弹钢琴。I hear
19、d my neighbor playing the piano at 9 oclock last night.四 教材语料：人教版 X4U4 Sharing五 目标文本（来源自人教版 X4U4 Sharing第一篇文章）主题阅读，灵活续写个性结局I just got a parcel from home! It took about two weeks to arrive, and it was a bit damaged, but it was so nice to get some sweets and jam from home; Ive been dying to have some
20、of my favorite sweets, and its always nice to get mail!So Ive been here in the jungle for about a month now. My secondary school is a bush school. The classrooms are made of bamboo, with clay floors and roofs of grass. It takes me only a few minutes to walk to school down a dusty track covered in we
21、eds. When I reach the school grounds, Im greeted by a chorus of “good morning” from the boys, many of whom have to walk a long way to get to school.Theres no electricity, running water or even textbooks, not to mention laptops, tablets,or other modern devices! All the students have are pencils, rubb
22、ers, and paper. Ive had to become much more imaginative in my teaching. Science is my most challenging subject as my students have no concept of doing experiments because there is no equipment.The other day I was showing the boys a chemistry experiment when, before I knew it, the mixture was bubblin
23、g out of the test tube spilling everywhere! The class became a circus as the boys, who had never come across anything like this before, started jumping out of the windows. Sometimes I wonder how relevant chemistry is to these students -few will ever become chemists-and most will be going back to the
24、ir villages after Year 8 anyway. To be honest, I doubt whether Im making any difference to these boys lives at all.Last weekend I made my first visit to a remote village, home to one of our students, Tombe. Another teacher and I walked for two and a half hours to get there- first, up a mountain from
25、 where we had fantastic views, and then down a shaded path to the valley bellow. Tombes family welcomed us warmly in their special way. We spent such a happy day with Tombes family. 获取基本信息Who : I; the boys; Tombe; another teacher; Tombes mother and fatherWhen: a month; the other day; last weekend; t
26、he next morning; that eveningWhere: in the jungle; a bush school; a remote village; the classrooms are made of bambooWhat: I am greeted by a chorus of good morning from the boys; I was showing the boys a chemistry experiment; I made my first visit to a remote village, home to one of our students; I
27、left the village; I fell happily into bedHow: many of them also have to walk a long way, sometimes for up to two hours, just to get to school; the mixture was bubbling out of the test tube spilling everywhere; who had never come across anything like this before 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开
28、头语已为你写好。Para 1: Time does pass by quickly when we are having fun. It was time for me to go back home. I could scarcely bear to leave the students here. However, when I told my students that I would leave the next day. To my disappointment, there was no sadness in their face. They behaved as usual, f
29、inishing their exercise carefully and discussing with partners heatedly. Even after class, nobody talked to me, which was really an exception. I was quite heartbroken. Para 2: Dragging my feet, I set foot on the road home full of disappointment. I couldnt help doubting the significance of my being h
30、ere for two months. Reflecting on what had happened here, I had to stop my footsteps, tears of grievance sweeping my eyes. At that moment, a chorus of “good luck” rang across the mountains. It was my boys that stood far away on the top of the mountains hand in hand sobbing. It flashed through my min
31、d that they shared the same feeling as me. They just hid their feelings to express their understanding of my departure. How kind and considerate they are! Having realized it, I continued my way home with happiness and gratitude despite of strong wistfulness.佳作学习（续写下水文的挖空）根据中文提示写续写：(用上前面的课文好句欣赏的句式或短语
32、)Nowadays more and more people devote themselves to being volunteers(越来越多的人投身于志愿服务行列) to make the world a beautiful place, especially in China because Chairman Xi once said, “Build a community with a shared future for mankind”. Therefore, we can see Chinese people on TV in far-off places in the worl
33、d, helping other countries to develop(帮助其他国家发展). We can also see Chinese workers building roads in the Congo, a port in Pakistan, railways in Panama, and an airport in Sri Lanka. And we see Chinese miners, oil workers, agricultural experts, mechanics, and doctors working in nearly every corner of th
34、e world（在几乎世界的每一个角落工作）.And some people may ask,“Is it worth it?” Let me answer your question, “It is worth it.” What the volunteers do has made a big difference to the people in need（对困难中的人们产生了很大影响）. It shows that we are global citizens interested in world stability（我们是关心世界稳定的国际公民） and we feel respo
35、nsible for others （我们对他人有责任有担当）and are ready to build a community with a shared future for mankind(我们准备好构建一个人类命运共同体). Everyone deserves a fair chance in life. When I think of all the things that we as Chinese citizens can be most proud of, helping others comes at the top of this list.X4U4简析如下：1. 教材语
36、料的单词分类清晰分为了环境描写，动作描写，心理描写，情绪描写，语言描写五大种类，选取典型，重点突出，紧扣单元话题与主题，为学生提供了充足的话题词汇输入。2. “教材语料：描述志愿服务的教材金句”符合单元主题，分为志愿服务时的困难、志愿服务的感受、志愿服务的行为、志愿服务的意义四大板块。所挑选语句不仅内容适恰，且语言高级，句型丰富，主要语法现象有it作形式主语，定语从句，宾语从句，让步状语从句，with的复合结构，doing做宾补，done做后置定语，强调句型等。3. 佳句仿写选材丰富，重点突出，但是此处所造的新句子若均能贴近本单元话题语境更好，实现“一境到底”；例句选择适合学生背诵。4. 原创
37、续写文所给两句非常好，与原文的契合度高。5. 原创下水作文撰写的非常精彩、高级、一气呵成，用到如下丰富的句式或词块：it作形式主语，It was time for me to ，宾语从句，heatedly副词，To my disappointment；Reflecting，Having realized it 分词作状语；despite of短语；I couldnt help doing短语； tears of grievance sweeping my eyes独立主格；a chorus of “good luck” rang across the mountains无灵主语。读后续写故事情
38、节合情合理，续写内容丰富充实，环境描写和心理描写都很出色，上下文连贯通顺，值得学习与借鉴。6. 续写下水文的挖空中应用到了多种前面提及的句型和词块，如being volunteers，has made a big difference to the people in need， build a community with a shared future for mankind，且二者各有侧重，均特别丰富。7. 目标文本选自人教版X4U4第一篇文章，内容紧扣单元话题，通过第一人称的视角续写了个人离别时候的悲伤和不舍，续写合情合理，在拓展学生视野的同时，启发学生从人与社会的角度，思考人与人之间的关系内涵和意义。