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1、利用新教材同题语料 用“脚手架”续写教材文章结局B3U3 Diverse Culture爱V高中英语工作室杨燕 龙文清 单元主题语境和语篇内容分析主题语境：人与社会主题群：历史、社会与文化子话题：；了解多元文化，跨文化交际【单元主题解读】本单元主题是“了解一个具有多元文化特点的城市”( Learn about a city that has diverse cultures)，引导学生了解世界各地的多元文化。本单元旨在帮助学生了解旧金山的城市风貌、文化特色，以及加利福尼亚州的历史，体会多元文化对美国的影响，从而培养学生的跨文化交际能力。一、教材语料：描述多元文化的主题词汇性质特征形容词 int
2、eresting ，attractive ， satisfying/satisfactory ， impressive， popular， convenient modern ， pleasant ， tidy; clean， friendly，fresh，改成了通用模板 unforgettable， beautiful，rich， breathtaking ，wonderful， delicious， famous/ wellknown，colorful，splendid， peaceful心理描写形容词comfortable ，tired ，satisfied ，delighted/ple
3、ased，familiarGeographical intro此处内容比较好duction (地理概况）1. lie in/be located in/on/at 位于.2. is. in size/covers an area of 有着.面积3. One of the most popular tourist destinations 最受欢迎的旅游目的地之一4. has a population of 有着.的人口5. the climate is mild all year round (P32) 一年四季气候温和6. a centre for art, music and food
4、(28)艺术、音乐、美食中心7. There were so many. to choose from. (29) .有着如此多的.供选择Scenery and sites (风景名胜）1. get/have/offer a good/great/spectacular view of. (28) (75) 有/提供绝佳的风景2. to name but a few (32) 仅举几例3. Its a tourist area with. (75) 它是一个.的旅游地区4. a popular /internet-famous spot 网红地 5. spend hours/go explor
5、ing (P32) (75)花几小时/去探索6. take a ride/boat (75) 乘车/坐船7. head to (28)前往8. a variety of/ various attractive scenic spots/sites 不同种类的旅游景点History and culture 历史人文1. has a history of. years 有着.年的历史2. .used to be., but is now. (28).曾经是., 但现在是.3. What started as. then turned into. (32) 一开始是.后来变成了.4. is home
6、 to. ethnic groups (29)是多民族的共同家园5. experience a real taste of (32)体验原汁原味的.6. offer a unique range of. culture (32)提供一系列独特的文化7. A real mix of cultures here! (28)这里是真正的多元文化！8. a good place to. (P32) .的好地方9. There is . to suit everyones taste. (P32)有.适合每个人的口味/品味。10. carry a bit of home in ones hearts (
7、28)带着心中的家园Food culture饮食文化1. suit sbs taste适合某人的口味2.traditional dishes from all over China中国各地的传统菜肴3. hamburger汉堡4. fortune cookie幸运曲奇5. gumbo秋葵汤6. nachos墨西哥玉米片7. recipe食谱；秘诀8. a food truck食品卡车9. fast food快餐mixed-culture dishes混合文化菜肴Chinese element中国元素1.experience a real taste of China体验到正宗的中国味 2. C
8、hinese architecture中国建筑3. Legendary Dragon Gate具有传奇色彩的龙门 4. to name but a few仅举几例5. experience traditional Chinese culture first hand近距离感受中国传统文化 6. Chinese chess中国象棋 7. practise taichi 打太极拳8. A unique range of souvenirs, goods and clothing各式特色纪念品、货物和衣服9. traditional Chinese herbal中国传统中草药10. Chinese
9、immigrants中国移民二 教材语料：描述多元文化的教材金句P1 General Introduction引入话题，点名写作对象Chinatown in San Francisco1. 旧金山的唐人街在全美规模最大、历史最为悠久，是一个炙手可热的旅游景点，每年接到的游客甚至比金门大桥还多。The Chinatown in San Francisco is the biggest in America, and also the oldest. It is a very popular tourist draw that receive more visitors each year tha
10、n even the Golden Gate Bridge.P2 Detailed Information介绍城市的自然风光和人文历史Chinatown in San Francisco1. 这里全年气候温和，这意味着任何时候都适宜来游览。The climate is mild all year round, meaning it is always a good time to visit.2. 这里原本是中国移民的居住地，后来变成了一个中国文化中心。What started as a residential area for Chinese immigrants then turned i
11、nto a centre for Chinese culture.3. 传统上，游客从具有传奇色彩的龙门走入唐人街没龙门的建筑材料是由中国捐赠的。其他的著名景点还有天后古庙、广东银行等，不生枚举。Traditionally, visitors enter Chinatown through the legendary Dragon Gate, which was built using materials donated from China. Other famous sites include the Tin How Temple and Bank of Canton, to name b
12、ut a few.4. 游客亦可花上数小时，一探此地的中国味道与美景声色。Visitors can also spend hours just exploring the interesting sights, smells, and sounds of China.5. 作为唐人街的中心，花园角广场也是一个重要景点。广场历史悠久，声名远扬，作家罗伯特路易斯史蒂文森曾长居于此进行创作。如今，花园角广场已经成为游客的一个好去处，可以欣赏现实生活里的中国传统文化，如中国象棋和打太极。Portsmouth Square is also a key site, being the centre of
13、Chinatown. It has a long and famous history, with the author Robert Louis Stevenson having spent much time writing there. These days, the square is a great place to see traditional Chinese culture in real life, such as games of Chinese chess, and people practicing tai chi.6. 很多游客和旧金山人最钟爱的或许是唐人街的美食。这
14、里有来自中国各地的传统菜肴，各种口味应有尽有。Perhaps what many tourists and San Franciscans treasure most about Chinatown is its food. There is Chinese food to suit everyones taste, with traditional dishes from all over China.P3 Summary总结评价Chinatown in San Francisco1. 唐人街是美国多元文化的一种重要组成部分，未曾踏足中国的游客可以在唐人街近距离感受中国传统文化。Chinat
15、owns are an important part of the diverse culture of the USA. They allow visitors who have ever been to China to experience traditional Chinese culture first hand.佳句仿写（建议：仿写句子与下水文句子相似）1、公式：It+系动词+adj. (+ for/of sb.)+to do sth.I have to admit that it definitely feels good to be back in the city again
16、.仿写：It definitely feels nice to be supported by so many warm-hearted people. 2、公式：动词的-ing形式作后置定语Many of the people living here are from Mexico or Central America. 仿写：The boy running as fast as arrow was my friend, Tom, who just recovered from a serious illness. 3、公式：过去分词作后置定语 In fact, an art movemen
17、t called the “Mission School” started here. 仿写：It was a nice-looking cake decorated with fruits in the shape of heart.4、公式：which引导非限制性定语从句In the same year, gold was discovered near San Francisco, which started a gold rush. 仿写：Thanks to the gift and nice words, which calms me down gradually, I began
18、to accept that nothing matters more than love and care. 5、公式：that引导定语从句It is a very popular tourist draw that receives more visitors each year than even the Golden Gate Bridge.仿写：An air of relaxation and thrill could be sensed ten meters away. The only thing she wanted to do was to rush back home an
19、d share the news with my parents . 6、公式：现在分词短语作结果状语The climate is mild all year round, meaning it is always a good time to visit.仿写：He reached out his hand with his finger forming a victory, saying you will make it.7、公式：“代词+介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句The majority of residents in Chinatown are still ethnic C
20、hinese, many of whom do not speak English fluently.仿写：All the families were moved to tears, some of whom stood up , trembling, excitement written on their red face. 8.公式：with复合结构It has a long and famous history, with the author Robert Louis Stevenson having spent much time writing there.仿写：Putting c
21、akes and cream into a bag, he headed to Claras house, with two policemen followed.三、教材语料：主题阅读，灵活续写个性结局第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The eight-yea这篇续写是网上的原题，并且跟单元话题不太符合，建议删除r-old girl Carol lived with her father David, mother May and elder brother Rob. The little family happily lived
22、 in a beautiful village surrounded by beautiful nature. The village was at the foot of a mountain, with beautiful views of the snowy mountain. The family survived on growing seasonal plants and trees. Their life was totally surrounded by nature and beauty. While they lived a very happy life, Carol d
23、id not love the beautiful atmosphere of the village. She really wanted to move into the city and enjoy the city life. She wanted to shop, move around the city, watch movies, and eat in fantastic restaurants and cafes, etc. However, there was hardly any chance that Carols family moved to the city as
24、they had everything in the village. One day, Carol fell asleep during the early noon and she had a sound sleep. Of course, she had a strange dream. She saw her grandmother in her dream as a fairy and her deceased grandmother granted her a wish. Carol requested her that she should love to enjoy the c
25、ity life as she always desired. Grandmother understood the desire of Carol, but still wanted to convince her that the peaceful village life is better than the city life. She told Carol, “Baby, you cannot have access to fresh fruit and vegetables from plants as you have at your home. You cannot breat
26、he fresh air. You cannot play with animals. You will not find peace as you see here! Do you still want to go to the city?”Without hearing the concerns, Carol asked her grandmother to grant the wish. Grandmother granted her wish, but with a condition. Carol was told that she would only have 6 hours t
27、o spend in the city. Later, she would return to the village. Carol agreed.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Carol then found herself in the city with her friends. _Carols brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up. _Carol then found herself in the city with her friends. Curi
28、ous and confused, Carol looked around everywhere with her eyes widen. She was astonished to see many skyscrapers of glass and steel, cars of different colors rolling by. The bright-colored posters, cozy coffee shops as well as specially-designed pictures formed a pleasant image of the charming city.
29、 Suddenly, the whistle of the passing cars and waving plastic bags attracted her attention. The strange smell from the nearby factory made her feel disgusted. _It occurred to her that what grandma once said was a reality. Life in the city is not so perfect while life in the countryside also has its
30、unique magic that cant be replaced. Carols brother Rob was calling her for lunch and Carol woke up. When she slowly opened her eyes, familiar faces of her families and green trees outside the window came into her sight. With Teary eyes, she sat up and threw herself into her grandmas arms. Wiping her
31、 tears away gently, her grandma whispered in a soft voice, “why not going out to appreciate what you have?” The moment she stepped outside of the house, Carol cant help taking a deep breath of fresh air. A joyful smile bloomed on her innocent face. The ray of sunshine from the snow mountain didnt me
32、lt the snow but melted the icy land in her heart. “Home is where the heart is” Carol sighed. 第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。The place where Emily was born and brought up is located in the North West part of the country, a piece of land in desolation. The people living there are from
33、various nations but they act like a family that has close ties as the older generation spent their lives developing this piece of land and have gone through all the difficulties together.Several years ago, back to the 1940s, there was a huge population migration due to the strategy came up by the Ch
34、inese government to enhance the city economic growth in the less developed rural areas. Everything that came into their sight was desert, which looks like the scar on the face of earth. Fifty-mile-an-hour winds blowing in from Siberia, bring snow to the Desert. Dunes of sand covered the surface. Wit
35、h no cloak of vegetation to conceal them, strange formations are exposed in the naked rock. Her grandpa used to work as a postman and spent days driving and sending letters from different places. She can still remember seeing all the merit certificates of her grandpa under the plate glass on the des
36、k showing how dedicated he was to his job.Time went by but the homesickness never faded away. Thirty more years later, her grandparents could finally go back to their hometown and reunite with the family. Walking along the street, they could see the street divided into two blocks, and dotted with lu
37、xury brands and wine bars, luxury malls, giant fast fashion stores, fine handicraft shops, top-notch tailors, cheap electronics markets. Numerous delicate sculptures and old-fashioned buildings are telling the story of the past. The stores and restaurants Along the roads offer a unique range of souv
38、enirs, goods, clothing and delicious foods. The familiar fragrance also serves as reminders to activate the former memory. 请根据上面短文的情节进行续写。续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好，所续写短文的词数应为150左右。para1. Witnessing the prosperity of the urban city, Emilys grandparents were numb with surprise._para2. Standing on the platf
39、orm, Emilys grandparents waved goodbye to her families._获取基本信息who： When： Where： What： How： 3.根据中文提示写续写：(用上前面的课文好句欣赏的句式或短语)Keys:Witnessing the prosperity of the urban city, Emilys grandparents were numb with surprise.They had to admit it definitely felt so nice to be back to the city again._(被色彩明丽的海报
40、和装饰精美的建筑包围), her grandparents were so thrilled that they felt their hearts were beating like freed birds. Smelling the fragrance of the coffee,_（他们觉得山区的一切变成了遥远的记忆）. “ Stay at hometown or go back to that rural area?” they were faced with such a tough choice._ （正在这个关键的时刻，一辆快递车映入了爷爷的眼帘）. He was lost in
41、 thought. _（当地人收到信时欣喜的面孔浮现在她的脑海里）Their voice of calling him “ Uncle” kept echoing around his ears._（悔恨的泪水在她的眼眶里滚动）. “ I need to go back” he whispered. Paragraph 2:Standing on the platform, Emilys grandparents waved goodbye to her families. _（眼泪在脸上滑落，我的祖母紧抓着兄弟的手不愿意松开）。 Suddenly, the whistle blew, the
42、 train moved out._ _.（我祖父母登上了火车，示意家里人离开）。 Attached to the glory and brilliance of the former city, they gazed at the carriage and was overwhelmed by a feeling of loss. _（就在那个时候，窗外熟悉的沙子让他想起了曾经的小路，那个他每天踩着去送信的小路）Finally, the train pulled in, my grandparents got off along with other guests._. （沐浴着温暖的阳光，
43、他们走出了站台）。Paragraph 1:Witnessing the prosperity of the urban city, Emilys grandparents were numb with surprise. They had to admit it definitely felt so nice to be back to the city again. Surrounded by bright-colored posters and delicately-decorated architecture, her grandparents were so thrilled that they felt their hearts were beat