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1、专项五 中考题型 重难点47 书面表达之叙事描写类叙事描写类的书面表达是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式，以写人、叙事和经历、写物、绘景等为主要内容的文体：这一类的书面表达动词使用率最高，且富于变化，用得最多的是动词的过去时态，其他各种时态为辅。合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是这类书面表达的首要语言特征。人物类书面表达如果是对人的性格、外貌等叙述常用一般现在时，如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格，那么就要用过去时。写好这类书面表达要注意以下几点：1. 头绪分明，脉络清楚写好书面表达，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选
2、取素材。这些素材都要围绕五个W和一个H来展开，分别是why, what, when, where, who及how。2. 突出中心，详略得当在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的一步。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写或粗述那些非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。3. 用活语言，准确生动记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类书面表达的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事物描写得具
3、体生动。常用表达1.Among various kinds of things/persons in my mind. is the most unforgettable one.2.On a sunny/rainy morning,while I was.First of all. Then . After that. In the end .3. He/she/this was one of the most meaningful/enjoyable/unforgettable persons/things that I have ever met/ experienced,I will
4、remember him/her forever.加分句子：1. Sth impressed me greatly.2. What impressed me most is that.经典句型：1.LastSunday（Saturday.）, itwassunny（rainy,windy,foggy）2.Igotupveryearly（late）.AfterbreakfastIwenttowithmyfriendsbybike,bus.3.Weenjoyedourselves.4.Weforgotthetime.Wedidntcomebackuntil5oclock.5.Weallfeltve
5、rytired,butwewerehappy.6.IthoughtIwouldneverforgetthistrip.7.Lastsummer,myparentsandIwenttoBeijingforourholidays.8.Wevisitedalotofplacesofinterest.9.Wehadagoodtimethere.10.Weboughtalotofthings.Theclothesherearegoodandcheap.写作模板更多写作模板参照学科网备战2023年中考英语高分作文之研读中考作文真题总结黄金模板l 人物类书面表达主要通过刻画人物性格，塑造人物形象，反映生活，
6、表现主题，模版如下：开门见山，引出要介绍的人物正文（时间、地点、人物）感想I will never forget my English teacherShe is a beautiful womanIt wasoclock, I didinI realize thatl 叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。l 写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总分总的结构或总分的结构，模版如下：介绍景观介绍旅行经历总结旅行感受 is one of the most beautiful scenery spots.I volunteered a guide to
7、 introduceIt was a busy and tired day but I was very happy.叙事描写类的书面表达是以叙述和描写为主要表达方式，以写人、叙事和经历、写物、绘景等为主要内容的文体。这一类的书面表达动词使用率最高，且富于变化，用得最多的是动词的过去时态，其他各种时态为辅。 人物类书面表达如果是对人的性格、外貌等叙述常用一般现在时，如果通过事件来刻画人物的性格，那么就要用过去时。合理使用丰富多彩的动词时态是这类书面表达的首要语言特征。中考五星高频考点，题目难度中等，在全国各地中考试卷选填题中多有考查。易错归纳易错点01：理不清脉络，弄不明头绪。写好书面表达，首
8、先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展一直到结束的整个过程，然后再收集选取素材。这些素材都要围绕五个 “W”和一个 “H”来展开，分别是why, what, when, where, who及how。易错点02：平铺直叙，没有突出中心。在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的一步。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。详写细述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写或粗述那些非关键的次要情节。面面俱到反而会使情节罗列化，使人不得要领。这一点是写好记叙文要解决的一个基本问题，也需要一定的技巧。易错点03：语言
9、呆板，不够生动。记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的叙事描写类书面表达的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事物描写得具体生动。典例解析（2022四川宜宾市教科所中考真题）亲爱的同学，三年的初中学习生活即将结束，你一定有很多感慨。在此之际，请你以“My Favorite Teacher”为题，用英语写一篇短文向学校校刊英文栏目投稿。内容包括：1. 最喜欢的老师；2. 简单介绍该老师（外貌或性格）；3. 喜欢他（她）的理由（两个）；4. 最想对老师说的话。注意：1. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2. 不能出现真实姓名和校名（只用Mr./Ms./Miss+
10、姓；学科）；3. 词数100左右。开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数。My Favorite TeacherHow time flies! My three-year junior middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my teachers._【参考范文】My Favorite TeacherHow time flies! My three-year Middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many mem
11、ories of my teachers.Do you know who is my favorite teacher？She ls Ms. Li, our English teacher.She is tall and a bit thin but very beautiful, with a pair of thick glasses.She always wears seriousness and gives us the impression that she is strict with her students.In fact,she is always willing to ge
12、t along with us and she is good at English teaching.she often makes her classes so interesting and lively that we all enjoy her lessons. When we are tired in class, she often tells jokes to make us relaxed. With the help of her, we have made great progress in English.She always helps me out whenever
13、 I have difficulties.Once I was sick in hospital ,she accompany me all through the night.Though she was very tired,she stuck to going to school and giving the lesson for students.She is full of love and I hope she will have a happy life in her life long journey.【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，以“My Favorite Te
14、acher”为题，介绍自己喜欢的老师。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主。文章可分为三段式：第一段文章已给。第二段阐述喜欢的这位老师是谁、他(她)的外貌或性格、以及喜欢的原因。最后一段介绍自己想对老师说的话。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。（2022湖北湖北中考真题）在你的成长历程中，有许多值得感恩的人，如父母，老师，同学他们或帮助过你，或影响到你，你最想感恩谁？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。要点提示：1. 他/她有什么特点（外貌，性格）？2. 他/她对你影响最深的一件事是什么？3. 你想怎样感谢他/她？写作要求：1. 词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数
15、）；2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。参考词汇：be grateful to对心存感激；have an influence on对有影响；care about关心；unforgettable难以忘怀的The Person I Want to Express My ThanksIn my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to express my thanks most is. _【参考范文】The Person I Want to Express My T
16、hanksIn my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. Do you know who is the person I want to express my thanks most?She is my English teacher Mr. Lee. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair and wears glasses.She always wears smile and gives us the impression that He is always friendl
17、y and patient with us.When I was in Grade 8, my English was very poor. One day, he asked me to take part in an English speech contest. He said, “Your pronunciation is really good. Try your best. I believe in you”. With the help of Mr. Lee, I got the first prize. My English improved a lot. She has a
18、great influence on me, I am grateful to him. I hope I can work hard to become better. I think thats the best gift for my dear teacher.【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要以“The Person I Want to Express My Thanks”为题并结合题干中的问题进行写作，介绍你最想感谢的人，可适当增加细节。3.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。第一段介绍自己想感谢的人的特点；第二段讲述他对你影响最深的一件事；第三段讲
19、述你会如何感谢他。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。（2022辽宁沈阳中考真题）榜样是我们学习的楷模、努力的方向。学校英语社团开展以“介绍我心中的榜样”为主题的社团活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封英文发言稿来介绍你心中的榜样李想。内容包括：1. 人物描写；2. 说明理由；3. 表达希望。【注意】1. 词数80100，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包括所给内容信息，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名。Dear fellow students,I am Li Hua. Today I wou
20、ld like to introduce Li Xiang, a model student in my mind. _Thanks for your listening!【参考范文】Dear fellow students,I am Li Hua. Today I would like to introduce Li Xiang, a model student in my mind. Do you know him？He is my good friend in our school.He is tall and thin .His black hair is short.He alway
21、s wears smile and gives us the impression that He is very kind and caring. He is always willing to study hard and help others .He is good at studying.he often gets good scores in exams.However, I dont do well in studying. He always helps me out whenever I have difficulties in studying.he not only he
22、lps me with every subject but also tells me how to study in order to catch up others. With Li Xiangs help, I made great progress and I thank him very much.I think Im lucky to have such a good friend.He is so excellent and always be ready to help others, From now on, I must learn from him .I will do
23、my best to study better and better. And help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others.Thanks for your listening!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，要求根据提示问题，介绍自己心中的榜样。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：文章以第一、三人称，一般现在时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时要分别介绍榜样是谁，为什么是自己的榜样并表达自己的希望。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。（2022新疆中考真题）初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和
24、生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。例如：1.一次难忘的旅行2.一次难忘的比赛3.一次难忘的志愿服务要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名：3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。Looking back at these past three years, I had a lot of sweet memories_【参考范文】I cant swim easily without my swimming coach.I remember clearly when I decid
25、ed to learn to swim last summer vacation ，I felt afraid of swimming in the water. But the coach said he would protect me. Then I started swimming, but I couldnt swim forward at all.He told me how to move and swim with my hands and legs. A few days later, I could swim by myself. I was very excited an
26、d proud of myself.It is the coach that let me know nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it and try to do it bravely. .【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。（2022甘肃定西中考真题）以“being lost”为主题，根据以
27、下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。The pictures are provided to help you think about this topic.Pay attention to the following points when you plan your composition.Where was Mary?What was Mary doing?What happened to her?What did Mary feel when seeing her mother?The following words may help you:crowded with visitorss
28、o interested in the animalsno one aroundturn to 要求：1.条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现其他人名和地名等信息；3.在答题卡的相应位置作答。_【参考范文】Mary could hardly find the way back home without her mother on a Sunday afternoon. She remembers clearly when she went to the zoo with her mother ，The zoo was crowded with visitors. Near the
29、gate of the zoo stood two pretty giraffes. Mary had never seen such amazing animals before. She was so interested in the animals that she looked at every small movement of them carefully. After a while, she wanted to tell her mother what shed found about these animals. However, she noticed there was
30、 no one around. She felt afraid and worried, but she remembered that her mother told her not to move when being lost. So she waited for her mother just at the gate of the zoo. Soon after, she saw her mother walking to the gate anxiously. When seeing her mother, Mary was happy and ran to her mother.I
31、t is her mother that told her what to do when being lost.It is important that we should be calm down to come up with ideas.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，结合图片提示进行详细地描述故事的发生以及过程及结果，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.写作指导：写作时要紧密结合所给出的要点内容，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。（2022吉林长春中考真题）疫
32、情（the COVID-19 pandemic）期间，总有些特别的事使你心存感恩。某英文网站正在开展以“疫情故事”为主题的征文活动，请用英文写一篇不少于80词的短文投稿，讲述一段疫情期间的故事（人与人的互助或自身的成长等），写出你的感受与收获。要求：1.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。_【参考范文】My couldnt get enough food During the COVID-19 pandemic without my neighbor Mr Huang.I remember clearly when we had to stay at homeBec
33、ause of the COVID-19，we had little food to eat. Ordering food online was very difficult at first.I felt terrified .Mr Huang knew everything happened to my family. He sent many vegetables and fruit to me. Our family were moved by what he had done. We also realized that we should pass this love one by
34、 one. Small actions can make a big difference.It is Mr Huang that make me realize that we should help others in need. Helping others is helping yourself.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍疫情期间发生的一个故事。2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述发生在自己身边的故事；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。（2022黑龙江中考真题）图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。提示词：holiday, activities, colorful, meaningful, museum.要求：1.词数：80-100之间。2.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。_