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1、作文Contents:2021年上海市徐汇区初三英语一模2021年上海市静安区初三英语一模2021年上海市杨浦区初三英语一模2021年上海市长宁区初三英语一模2021年上海市虹口区初三英语一模2021年上海市普陀区初三英语一模2021年上海市闵行区初三英语一模2021年上海市嘉定区初三英语一模2021年上海市松江区初三英语一模2021年上海市宝山区初三英语一模2021年上海市浦东新区初三英语一模2021年上海市奉贤区初三英语一模2021年上海市金山区初三英语一模2021年上海市崇明区初三英语一模W.（2021 年徐汇区一模）Writing.64.Write at least 60 words
2、to talk about“How technology affects me”.Does the development of technologyaffect you in a positive way or in a negative way?What do you think of the influence?How do you deal with it?请 以 How technology affects me”为题，写一篇不少于6 0 个词的短文，谈论科技发展对你带来了正面的影响还是负面的影响。你怎样看待科技对你的影响吗？你怎样面对这些影响呢?（注意：短文中不得出现考生 姓名、校
3、名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）VII.（2021 年静安一模）Writing（作文）69.Write at least 60 words on the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）在美国新泽西这一走丢孩子的眼中，马是世界上最美好的事物。你眼中最美好的事物是什么呢？请以The greatest thing in the world”为题，结合自身经历谈谈你的看法。注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。照抄阅读语篇不得分。VII.（2021年杨浦区一模）Writing（作文）64.Write at
4、 least 60 words on the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于6 0 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）法 国“蜘蛛人”阿兰.罗伯特的经历告诉我们，战胜恐惧也可以是一种勇敢。你对勇敢的理解是如何的呢？请以“The time Iwas brave（那次我很勇敢）”为题，根据自身的经历谈谈你对勇敢的理解。（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读的语篇不得分。）V II.（2021 年长宁区一模）Writing.69.Write at least 60 words about the topic left me a new
5、 impression.（请以“给我留下一个新印象”为题，写一篇不少于6 0 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）你身边有熟悉的同学、朋友、老师.有一天可能因为某件事让你对她（他）改变了原有的看法。请补全标题，并结合这个事例谈谈她（他）给你留下的这个新的印象。（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）VII.（2021 年虹 口 一模）Writing（作文）80.Write at least 60 words on the topic Happiness doesnt always disappear during difficult times（以 在困难时期，幸福感不一
6、定会消失”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）.小到个人，大到团队、城市、国家，都会有困难时期，但即便是困难时期，人们还是能感受生活中的小喜悦，感受幸福温馨的片刻，请结合自己或他人的经历，说说困难时期的幸福感。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予计分）VII.（2021年普陀区一模）Writing（作文）80.Write at least 60 words on the topic I can be a winner（以 我可以成为赢家”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）提示：马拉松爱好者Allen的人生经历告诉我们：每个人都能够在某方面取得成
7、功。请结合具体自己的经历谈谈你对这一观点的认识。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分.照抄语篇不得分）Vn.（2021 年嘉定一模）Writing.59.Write at least 60 words about the topic When I met with a problem.（以“当我遇至U问题时”为题写一篇不少于6 0 个词的短文。标点符号不占格。）在日常的生活与学习中，我们应该具备一些解决问题的能力。请结合一次自身经历，说说你是如何解决那个问题的，并分享一下你的经验：如果未能解决，也请谈谈你从中获得的教训。（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它
8、相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following is for reference only.（以下表达仅供参考）have difficulty in.enable me to.help me realize.（2021年松江区一模）Writing作文89.Write at least 60 words according to the following information.虽然写给地球人的一封信中所提及到的问题确实存在,但是我们人类正在努力改变现状。相信你也看到身边的变化或感受到自己的变化了。请选取其中的一个题目A change around me（我身边的变化）或 Achange
9、 about me（我的变化）,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格。注 意：1、短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2、照抄阅读语篇不得分。VII.（2021 年宝山一模）Writing（作文）69.Write at least 60 words about the topic“An act of kindness”.（以 一个善意的举动”为题写一篇不少于6 0 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）“赠人玫瑰，手有余香意思是一件很平凡微小的事情，哪怕如同赠人一只玫瑰般微不足道，但它带来的温馨都会在赠花人和爱花人的心底慢慢升腾、弥漫。因此，善待他人也是善待自己，请结合生活中
10、的一次真实经历，谈一谈你对善良的看法。（注意：1.短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照搬阅读语篇内容不得分。）The following is for reference only.（以下表达仅供参考）have trouble with/doinggive a help hand.treat sb with kindness.VII.（2021 年浦东新区一模）W riting.64.Write at least 60 words on the topic 6My choice”.（请 以“我_的选择”为题，写一篇不少于 60字的短文。）人生即是选择。你在生活中
11、一定做过无数次选择，或许是明智的，亦或许是错误的；或许是难忘的，亦或许是遗憾的请结合你以往的一次选择，谈谈它对你的影响或你的感悟。（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）VIL（2021 年奉贤一模）Writing64.Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情景写一篇不少于6 0 个词的短文，标点不占格。）Mr.Smith用特殊的方式给他的学生上了“精彩一课”。你的老师一定也以他/她独特的方式给你留下过深刻的印象。他/她或许组织过精彩的活动，他/她或许讲述过精彩的故事，他/她或许请以“A wonder
12、ful lesson（精彩一 一 课）”为题，记录老师给你上过的精彩一课。VII.（2021 年金山一模）Writing（写作）Write at least 60 words on the topic“is important.”6 4.以“is i m p o r t a n t 是重要的）”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格。Cody liked the freedom that came with his first summer job.He worked at Mitchells Farm where peoplecould come and pick the com,
13、berries and tomatoes out in the fields themselves.Then theyd bring their produce tocheckout stand,where Cody would weigh it and charge（4 攵费）the appropriate price.Mr.and Mrs.Mitchell wereusually busy somewhere else,so Cody was trusted to manage the stand by himself.For the most part,Cody obeyed the M
14、itchelFs rules.When someone asked for a discount or a sample,Codysaid no.But he did sometimes change the rules for friends,much to their delight.“Go ahead,taste a few berries before 1 weigh,hed say when it was someone he knew.It was against the rulesto eat something before you bought it,but everyone
15、 wanted to.One day,a man came to stand with a basket of corn he had picked.Cody weighed the ears of corn and toldthe man how much it cost.The man looked confused.“But I was here yesterday,and you told someone that fbr every five ears you buy,you get one free,he said.Cody had it in his memory.He had
16、indeed offered that deal to the Thomases,who happened to be hisneighbors.Now he felt sad about it.He saw Mrs.Mitchell working close by.How was Cody going to explain thathe had given a deal to those he knew while he made everyone else pay full price?The man saw that Cody was looking at Mrs.Mitchell,t
17、6Is that the owner?May I speak to her?he asked.Cody thought about offering the man the same discount,but there were people in line behind him,and theywere carrying com,too.Cody hung his head and walked over to seen Mrs.Mitchel.男孩Cody的暑期工作经历告诉我们，遵守规则，保持诚信，勇担责任和公平待人等是非常重要的品质。请结合你自己的经历和感悟，分享你的一个故事，谈谈你对
18、某一种优秀品质的理解与感受。（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不给分。）遵守规则(follow the rules)保持诚信(keep honest)勇担责任(take responsibility)公平待人(be fairto others)VIL（2021 年崇明一模）Writing（作文）64.Write at least 60 words on the topic Things I love to do at weekends 以“周末我喜欢做的事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）在紧张的学习之余，周末做些自己喜欢的
19、事可以调节放松一下自我，以便更有效地继续下一周的学习，请谈谈你周末喜欢做的事，并说说理由。作文Contents:2021年上海市徐汇区初三英语一模2021年上海市静安区初三英语一模2021年上海市杨浦区初三英语一模2021年上海市长宁区初三英语一模2021年上海市虹口区初三英语一模2021年上海市普陀区初三英语一模2021年上海市闵行区初三英语一模2021年上海市嘉定区初三英语一模2021年上海市松江区初三英语一模2021年上海市宝山区初三英语一模2021年上海市浦东新区初三英语一模2021年上海市奉贤区初三英语一模2021年上海市金山区初三英语一模2021年上海市崇明区初三英语一模VII.（
20、2021 年徐汇区一模）W riting.64.Write at least 60 words to talk about“How technology affects me”.Does the development of technologyaffect you in a positive way or in a negative way?What do you think of the influence?How do you deal with it?请 以“How technology affects me”为题，写一篇不少于6 0 个词的短文，谈论科技发展对你带来了正面的影响还是负
21、面的影响。你怎样看待科技对你的影响吗？你怎样面对这些影响呢？（注意：短文中不得出现考生 姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格）【答案】例文:How technology affects meWe live in an information time.Almost every person has one mobile phone.Its very convenient for me to learnthe world using our telephones.I can send my greetings to my friends by phones.I can also
22、 communicate with myfriends.I can get too much information by my phones.I cant imagine what our life will be like without telephones.Telephones are our good friends,but some children are addicted to mobile games,which affects their study.So weshould use mobile phones properly.【解析】【分析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属
23、于说明文写作，在写作时根据汉语提示，谈论科技发展带来了正面的影响还是负面的影响；怎样看待科技的影响：如何面对这些影响等。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容：时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。VIL（2021 年静安一模）Writing（作文）69.Write at least 60 words on the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）在美国新泽西这一走丢孩子的眼中，马是世界上最美好的事物。你眼中最美好的事物是什么呢？请以*The greatest thing in the w
24、orldv为题，结合自身经历谈谈你的看法。注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。照抄阅读语篇不得分。【答案】例文：The greatest thing in the worldWhat is the greatest thing in the world?It is a smile.A smile can start a friendship and make us feel warm andjoyful.Last year when I entered the new school,I had no friends and felt lonely.Then a boy
25、with a big smile came upto me.I felt warm and cheerful because of his smile and we soon became good friends.How great the power of a smile is!【解析】【分析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题属于话题作文，作文标题是The greatest thing in the w orld。题目要求结合自身经历谈谈你眼中最美好的事物。注意文章字数不少于60词。2.写作指导：由于作文是夹叙夹议的议论文，表达观点时用一般现在时，描写经历时用一般过去时，人称为第一人称。作文可以
26、采用“三段式”结构，第一段表明观点，第二段叙述经历，第三段再次强调自己的观点。作文完成后注意检查语法、单词拼写和标点。VIL（2021年杨浦区一模）Writing（作文）64.Write at least 60 words on the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于6 0 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）法 国“蜘蛛人”阿兰.罗伯特的经历告诉我们，战胜恐惧也可以是一种勇敢。你对勇敢的理解是如何的呢？请以“The time Iwas brave（那次我很勇敢）”为题，根据自身的经历谈谈你对勇敢的理解。（注意：L短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2
27、.照抄阅读的语篇不得分。）【答案】例文：The time I was braveIn our daily life,we have various fears preventing us from moving forward.And overcoming the fears helps usbecome more confident.I used to be afraid of speaking in public.I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd.Then,in Grade9,a speech contest wa
28、s held in my school.With my teachefs encouragement,I entered for it and made fullpreparations for it.Luckily,I finished it smoothly.To my surprise,I won the second prize.This time I was brave.Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.Donrt let the fear take you.Just st
29、ep forward and you will find you can do it!【解析】【分析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。但写作时要根据汉语提示，首先叙述自身的经历，然后根据经历谈谈对勇敢的理解。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述自身的经历；时态采用一般过去时叙述过去的经历，用一般现在时和现在完成时来叙述自己的成长和对勇敢的理解。描述经历时，力求语言准确，叙事完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。V D.（2021 年长宁区一模）Writing.69.Write at least 60 words about the topic left me a new impressi
30、on.（请以“给我留下一个新印象”为题，写一篇不少于6 0 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）你身边有熟悉的同学、朋友、老师.有一天可能因为某件事让你对她（他）改变了原有的看法。请补全标题，并结合这个事例谈谈她（他）给你留下的这个新的印象。（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）【答案】范文：The teacher left me a new impression.Once I was not interested in English.That was Miss Wang who changed me.One day,our teacher told us we wo
31、uld have an English speech competition two months later.Everyone washappy except me,because I couldnt dare to speak English in public.My English teacher came with a smile andencouraged me.From then on,I practiced every day.The day came,I got the first prize at last.From Miss Wang,Iknow that if you d
32、ecide to do something and put your heart into it,you will succeed.The teacher left me a newimpression.【解析】【分析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时首先补全标题，并且根据汉语提示，叙述因为某件事让你对她（他）改变了原有的看法，给你留下了新的印象。2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称为主来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时；描述故事时，力求描写细致，故事发生的背景、起因等叙述完整，保证条例清晰。VII.（2021 年虹 口 一模）Writing（作文）80.Write at le
33、ast 60 words on the topic Happiness doesnt always disappear during difficult times（以 在困难时期，幸福感不一定会消失 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）.小到个人，大到团队、城市、国家，都会有困难时期，但即便是困难时期，人们还是能感受生活中的小喜悦，感受幸福温馨的片刻，请结合自己或他人的经历，说说困难时期的幸福感。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予计分）【答案】例文Happiness doesnt always disappear during difficult tim
34、esEveryone may have difficult times.Even in difficult times,people can still feel the small joys in life.One day,it was raining hard when I was on my way home from school.I didnt take an umbrella,so I was wet.Suddenly,a stranger came toward me.He passed me an umbrella and said he could drive me home
35、.I didnt knowhim but I was very thankful he helped me.Although the weather was cold,I felt very warm in my heart.【解析】【分析】【详解】题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以Happiness doesnt always disappear during difficult times在困难时期，幸福感不一定会消失”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。题目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，学生们应发挥想象力，结合自己的实际生活，写一篇切题的文章。这是一个难点，学生所选取的生活中的事例应合情合理。写作
36、指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以一般过去时态、第一人称为主来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意英语句式结构和表达习惯，写完整的句子，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句、非谓语结构等复杂句式，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯、表达流畅。VII.（2021年普陀区一模）Writing（作文）80.Write at least 60 words on the topic I can be a winner（以 我可以成为赢家”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格）提示：马拉松爱好者Allen的人生经历告诉我们：每个人都能够在某方面取得成功。请结合具体自己的经历谈谈你对
37、这一观点的认识。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。照抄语篇不得分）【答案】例文:I can be a winnerThe life experience of marathon enthusiast Allen tells us that everyone can succeed in some way.I couldntagree more with that.At the beginning of learning English,I felt it was very difficult.I dared not speak English because m
38、ypronunciation was not standard.I also thought my classmates would laugh at me.It wasnt until I learned Allenslife story that I realized I could work to change that.I began to get up early every day to read English.I tried mybest to imitate the pronunciation by listening to English songs and watchin
39、g English movies.Finally,I got an A inthe final speaking test.I believe that as long as I persist,my spoken English will be better and better.Nothing is difficult if you putyour heart into it.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：阅读题干可知，本文要求以“我可以成为赢家”为题写一篇记叙文。根据提示可知写作内容包括结合自己的经历和经验谈谈关于“每个人都能够在某方面取得成功”。写作要思路清晰，层次分明，逻辑清楚，语言
40、的表达符合语法结构。2.写作指导：例文采取三段式的写作手法，时态为一般过去时和第一人称为主，第一段写根据马拉松爱好者 Allen的人生经历告诉我们：每个人都能够在某方面取得成功；第二段联系身边小事和经验来说明；第三段写个人观点和感受。V D.（2021 年嘉定一模）Writing.59.Write at least 60 words about the topic“When I met with a problem.（以“当我遇至lj问题时”为题写一篇不少于6 0 个词的短文。标点符号不占格。）在日常的生活与学习中，我们应该具备一些解决问题的能力。请结合一次自身经历，说说你是如何解决那个问题的
41、，并分享一下你的经验：如果未能解决，也请谈谈你从中获得的教训I。（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following is for reference only.（以下表达仅供参考）have difficulty in.enable me to.help me realize.【答案】例文：When I met with a problemEveryone will meet a difficulty during his life,especially for a student.I used to have difficulty with my
42、homework.For example,sometimes I cant work out a maths problem.In front of a difficulty,different people havedifferent attitudes.Some will give up.To me,I will never give up.I will think it over and over,till I have solved it.Or I will turn to my teachers and classmates for help.This experience make
43、s me know the importance of thinkingover the problems.【解析】【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求以“当我遇到问题时”为题写一篇短文，要求结合一次自身经历，介绍如何解决那个问题的并分享经验；如何未能解决，谈一谈从中获得的教训，可适当发挥。2、写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述自身经历；时态采用一般现在时为主；描述经历以及如何解决的问题并分享经验或描述未能解决问题，从中获得的教训时，应详细具体，叙述完整，保证条理清晰。（2021年松江区一模）Writing作文89.Write at least 60 words according to the f
44、ollowing information.虽然写给地球人的一封信中所提及到的问题确实存在,但是我们人类正在努力改变现状。相信你也看到身边的变化或感受到自己的变化了。请选取其中的一个题目A change around me（我身边的变化）或 Achange about me（我的变化）,写一篇不少于60词的短文,标点符号不占格。注 意：1、短文中不得出现真实姓名和校名及其它相关信息、，否则不予评分。2、照抄阅读语篇不得分。【答案】高分范文A change around meEnvironmental pollution has been around for a long time.People
45、 have taken action to improve the situation.Inmy town,we used to leave rubbish eveiywhere.It was a heavy job for street cleaners to clear and separate all kindsof rubbish.Activities have been organized to arouse peoples awareness of rubbish separation in the neighborhoods,at schools and even in publ
46、ic places.Now everyone in my town begins to put different kinds of rubbish intodifferent bins.As a result,our town is getting cleaner and more beautiful.I believe this change will help us live a happier life.【解析】【分析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，首先要陈述提及的问题：环境污染确实存在，然后指出人们正在努力改变现状的措施，最后写身边的变化以及自己的感受。2.写作指导：本
47、文应该用第三人称阐述存在的问题以及具体的措施；时态采用一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时以及一般将来时的结合。注意将存在问题、改变现状的措施以及看到的身边变化按照顺序陈述清楚，保证条理清晰。VII.（2021 年宝山一模）Writing（作文）69.Write at least 60 words about the topic An act of kindness”.（以 一个善意的举动”为题写一篇不少于6 0 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）“赠人玫瑰，手有余香意思是一件很平凡微小的事情，哪怕如同赠人一只玫瑰般微不足道，但它带来的温馨都会在赠花人和爱花人的心底慢慢升腾、弥漫。因此，善待他人也是
48、善待自己，请结合生活中的一次真实经历，谈一谈你对善良的看法。（注意：1短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照搬阅读语篇内容不得分。）The following is for reference only.（以下表达仅供参考）have trouble with/doinggive a help hand.treat sb with kindness.【答案】例文:An act of kindnessHere is a touching moment in my life that 1 will never forget.1 still remember that w
49、as a rainy day.1 failed an exam,and 1 felt very upset.Whats worse,I didnt bring anumbrella.Countless raindrops beat against my body.Suddenly,the raindrops disappeared.When 1 looked up,1 sawa big umbrella and my deskmate,Mike.He said,“An exam cant stand for everything.1 believe you can get goodgrades
50、 next His words really touched my heart and cheered me up.After that,1 studied harder and madegreat progress.Ifs our duty to show kindness to others around us.I think everyone should treat others with kindness,whenhave trouble with something.【解析】【分析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时结合题目要求，进行作答写作，第一段引出话题“善意的