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1、专题09材料作文（原卷版）目录一、宝山区 二、崇明区 三、奉贤区 四、虹口区 五、黄浦区 六、嘉定区 七、金山区 八、静安区 九、闵行区十、浦东新区 十一、普陀区 十二、青浦区 十三、松江区 十四、徐汇区 十五、杨浦区 十六、长宁区的经历，谈一谈自己的改变。（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否那么不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇 不得分。）十六、长宁区十六、话题作文80. Write at least 60 words about the topic “Keep patient when facing difficulties （请以“面对困难保持耐心”为题，写一篇不少于60个词
2、的短文，标点符号不占格）阅读文章（C）篇告诉我们日常生活中不能缺乏耐心，还提出用2种方式来帮助我们克 服这样的缺点。在我们的生活和学习中遇到的各种困难也很容易使人失去耐心，请你以一 个具体的例子谈谈怎样面对困难保持耐心。专题09材料作文（解析版）目录十七、宝山区十八、崇明区十九、奉贤区二十、虹口区二十一、黄浦区 二十二、嘉定区 二十三、金山区 二十四、静安区 二十五、闵行区 二十六、浦东新区 二十七、普陀区 二十八、青浦区 二十九、松江区三十、徐汇区 三十一、杨浦区 三十二、长宁区十七、宝山区十二、话题作文69. Write at least 60 words about the topic
3、made me a better person, （i*以“使我成为更好的自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）生活中往往有许多人或事帮助我们成为更好的自己。也许是曾经的某一次经历或某个 人使我们发现了自己的潜力与天赋；使我们由依赖到独立，敢于选择、敢于承当责任；使 我们勇于面对未知，尝试新经验，主动做出改变。请补全标题并结合过去的真实经历，谈 一谈什么促使你成为更好的自己，你又在哪些方面做出了改变。【答案】范文：Understanding other people makes me a better personAs is known to all, everyone i
4、s a special unity that has his own mind and story. When facing the similar circumstances, they may make different choices. Every decision we make and every action we do make us be a different person from others. So it is very important to understand others especially when we get along with other peo
5、ple.First, understanding can avoid quarrels among people. If we put ourselves in other peoples shoes, we can understand others better. Second, understanding is also a self-cultivation. Everyone has their own difficulties, which means that we cant impose our minds on other people.I always remind myse
6、lf of understanding others. I think that understanding other people makes me a better person.【详解】.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时首先补全标题，然后根据汉语提示的内容, 说明什么促使你成为更好的自己，在哪些方面做出了改变，并说明理由。1 .写作指导：本文应该用第三和第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时， 力求语句通顺，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。十八、崇明区十六、话题作文80. Write at least 60 words on the topic “In three yea
7、rs time （以“三年以后”为题写一遍不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）你是否想象过，三年以后你的生活或者周围的世界会发生产怎样的变化？你对三年以后的 自己周围的世界有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否那么不予评分。）【答案】例文：In three years timeThere is no denying that the world is changing fast. I do believe that my life will be different in three years9 time. On the one hand,
8、 it will be more convenient, we can study at home. Whether we will go to school or stay at home depends on our choices. Certainly, unlike the last special year, we had to study on line because of the virus . On the other hand, the environment may become worse especially white pollution. Sadly, the n
9、umber of people who like to throw everywhere is still rising. I hope the world will be more beautiful. To achieve this, I need to learn more knowledge about how to protect the environment. Call on more people to take part in fighting against pollution. Only by working together will our future be bet
10、ter in 3 years.【详解】,题干解读：此题要求以“三年以后”为题，写篇不少于60个词的短文，描述三年以后你的 生活或者周围世界发生的变化，以及自己对周围世界的期待。1 .写作指导：人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般将来时为主。写作时，先描述三年后所发生 的变化，最后可以谈谈如何实现这些变化；保证内容完整，结构清晰条理。十九、奉贤区十六、书信作文80. Write at least 60 words on the given situation.（根据以下情景写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）王老师是你们学校的一名退休教师。他非常期待收到学生们的来信。请你写一封信给 他，你
11、可以告诉他学校发生的变化、开展的活动、或者任何关于校园生活的点点滴滴。 （注意：1.短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否那么不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）【答案】参考范文：Dear Wang,Im a senior high school student named Li Hua. It is a great honor to tell you about the changes in our school.There are lots of changes that have happened in our school. One of them is sports changing
12、. For example, now we can have more time to do some sports after class to relax ourselves. To be more concrete, time we have sports compared with past days that were added for about one hour. Now we have ping pong, soccer and baseball games. That really made our students healthier and study better t
13、han before. It made our school spirited. And the relationship between students and teachers becomes better and better.We are all looking forward to seeing you.Best wishes to you!【详解】.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按书信格式写。在写作时应分为三段，第一 段总写，介绍你叫什么，告诉他变化。第二段表达具体的变化；第三段抒发感情，可以告诉 王老师我们都期待着见到他，结束本文。1 .写作指导：本文应该用第一人称；
14、时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，在描写具体变 化时，会与过去的事情进行比照，描述过去的事情使用一般过去时；表达要完整，保证条理 清晰，语言通顺，语法、标点、拼写正确。二十、虹口区十六、话题作文80. Write at least 60 words on the topic “Id like to get close to.”（以“我想要走 近”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）人的一生会遇见很多美好的事物，人、物、景等各种美好的存在都会吸引我们走进。请写写你想走近什么？怎么走近？说说你的理由。【答案】例文：Id like to get close to Pingyi. Fd
15、 like to introduce a nice place to you. I live in a wonderful place in Pingyi. It is a wonderful housing estate with a lot of flowers and trees.East of the community is a wide road along the river. The river is clear and transparent. It was our favorite place when we were kids. There are many people
16、 walking and playing along the river every day. You can see six blocks in the middle. There is a swimming pool in front of Block 2. In summer, children love to swim in it. A big playground lies on the right of Block 4. You can often see many men, women, boys and girls take exercise there. There is a
17、 small kindergarten behind Block 3. It is convenient and comfortable for me to live there.As fbr me, Pingyi is very beautiful. No matter where I am, I always think of the food and people of my hometown. Tve been almost everywhere and I can feel the warmth of my hometown. The people and things here a
18、ll attract me to have a deeper understanding of it.What a wonderful place it is! I love my housing estate veiy much.【详解】.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文。主要围绕Id like to get close to”来进行写作,写作时 可以围绕我们一生遇见的人、物、景等各种美好的事物来进行阐述。1 .写作指导：本文应该用第一称来表达故事内容；时态采用一般现在时描述场景；描述故事 时，场景应描写细致；表达要准确，没有语法错误等。二十一、黄浦区十二、材料作文64. Write at le
19、ast 60 words on the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）在生活中，要取得成就，往往需要勇气，你需要勇气来帮助你战胜困难，成认错误， 拒绝他人，或者克服恐惧，你是如何理解勇气的呢？请以“have the courage to”（我有勇 气），为题，结合自己的经历谈谈你对勇气的理解和感受。注意：L短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否那么不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。【答案】例文Have the courage to be braveIn our daily life, we have various fea
20、rs preventing us from moving forward. And overcoming the fears helps us become more confident.I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I never dared to step up and speak in front of a crowd. Then, in Grade 9, a speech contest was held in my school. With my teachers encouragement, I entered for it
21、and made full preparations fbr it. Luckily, I finished it smoothly. To my surprise, I won the second prize. This time I was brave. Now I have become more and more confident in expressing myself in public.Dont let the fear take you. Just step forward and you will find you can do it!【详解】.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文
22、写作。但写作时要根据汉语提示，首先表达自身的经历，然 后根据经历谈谈对勇敢的理解。1 .写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来表达自身的经历；时态采用一般过去时表达过去的经历, 用一般现在时和现在完成时来表达自己的成长和对勇敢的理解。描述经历时，力求语言准确, 叙事完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。二十二、嘉定区十二、话题作文64. Write at least 60 words on the given situation （根据以下情境写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）石砖和雕像的经历告诉我们，不同的选择会带来不同的结果。生活中，我们也会碰到 很多项选择择。请以“I chose to为
23、题，结合自身的经历，说说你是怎么做的？你为什 么会做出这样的选择？The following is for reference onlychoose to be / domake up my mindencourage me to（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否那么不予评分。2.照抄阅读 语篇不得分。）【答案】例文：I chose to be a reporterLife is full of different kinds of choices. Different people have different choices about their future jo
24、bs. As fbr me, I have made up my mind to be a reporter. Because I would like to see different people and I can make friends with more people. Whats more, I can tell people the truth about something popular. What can I do to become a reporter? I must study hard to obtain more knowledge. And, at the s
25、ame time, I will write articles fbr magazines or newspapers. When I finish high school, I am going to go to college in Beijing. Because I think I can learn more there. My parents also encourage me to chase my dream bravely. With their support, I believe everything will come as expected.【详解】.题干解读：这是一
26、个半命题作文，要求以“Ichoseto为题，结合自身的经历， 谈谈你生活中的选择，说说你是怎么做的？你为什么会做出这样的选择？1 .写作指导：正式写作前，需要先补全题目，围绕题目中心内容，用第一人称开始写作；开 头先点题，然后结合自身情况说明原因，以及实现的方式，最后简单收尾。写作中注意要保 证语句通顺，条理清晰，无单词和语法错误。二十三、金山区十六、话题作文80.Write at least 60 words on the topic “Keep your mind open”.（以“敞开心扉/心胸开阔”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，标点符号不占格）.在生活中，你对你的生活满意吗？不满意
27、的话，是什么原因呢？如果我们能以开阔的 胸怀面对不同的事物，从不同的角度去思考问题，可能会得到意想不到的收获。结合自身经 历，谈一谈你是如何做到心胸开阔、乐于接受各种顺势逆境的。（注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否那么不予评分。）【答案】例文：Keep your mind openIn our daily life, we sometimes dont feel satisfied with our life, especially when we meet difficult situations, such as getting a low mark, losing a
28、precious gift and so on.If we can keep our minds open to different people or things, we may get unexpected harvest.Last week, my good friend Lucy got a good grade in her English exam. But mine is very poor.I felt very sad. However, she always talked about the English test. It made me annoyed. But I
29、didnt tell her how I felt. Later, I told my mother about it. My mother encouraged me to talk to Lucy and tell her how I felt. My mother said that friends should keep their minds open to each other. The next day, I shared my feelings with Lucy. She suddenly realized that she had not thought about my
30、feelings and apologized fbr it. She thanked me for keeping my mind open to her.In a word, we should keep our mind open when we face the difficulties.【详解】.题干解读:题目要求根据提示内容，写出自己敞开心扉的一件事情，要写一件具体的事情， 可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。1 .写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般过去时 为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。二十四、静安
31、区十六、话题作文80.美国拉斯维加斯的不少学生参加了户外花园教室工程，在活动中收获了很多。你在校内外参加过什么有趣有 益的工程，并给你留下了深刻的印象。请以“Making learning fun （乐中学）”为题，提供你的经历或感想。 注意：1 .短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否那么不予评分。2 .照抄阅读语篇不得分。【答案】例文Making learning fiinFve joined in various after-class meaningful activities, of which the volunteer one in the local nursing hou
32、se is the most impressive.Several classmates and I volunteered there every weekend last year. We did some cleaning, chatted with the old and read newspapers to them. After finishing the whole activity, I benefited a lot because I got meaningful lessons and fun. First, cleaning the nursing house deve
33、lops my ability of doing chores, which prepares me fbr living independently in future. Second, talking with the old and reading newspapers to them improve my communication skills and bring me much fun.Therefore, this activity offers me so many benefits that its really impressive and unforgettable.【详
34、解】.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，话题作文。写作内容紧扣主题，本文可以分三段表达， 第一段总写这次活动;第二段具体描述这次活动，以及做了什么及收获;第三段概括并结尾。1 .写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来表达；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，用一般 过去时描述过去的经历，谈论感受及现在情况使用一般现在时，注意时态的变换。使用连词 和副词，这样能够保证文章的连贯性，条理性，富有逻辑，语句表达要通顺、清晰，确保无 语法、单词拼写及标点错误。一、宝山区十二、话题作文69. Write at least 60 words about the topic made me a better pers
35、on.（请以“使我成为更好的自己”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）生活中往往有许多人或事帮助我们成为更好的自己。也许是曾经的某一次经历或某个 人使我们发现了自己的潜力与天赋；使我们由依赖到独立，敢于选择、敢于承当责任；使 我们勇于面对未知，尝试新经验，主动做出改变。请补全标题并结合过去的真实经历，谈 一谈什么促使你成为更好的自己，你又在哪些方面做出了改变。二、崇明区十六、话题作文80. Write at least 60 words on the topic “In three years time （以“三年以后”为 题写一遍不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）你是否
36、想象过，三年以后你的生活或者周围的世界会发生产怎样的变化？你对三年以后的 自己周围的世界有怎样的期待？你能为此做些什么？（注意：短文中不得出现任何校名、人名及其它相关信息，否那么不予评分。）三、奉贤区十六、书信作文二十五、闵行区十一、话题作文_56. Write at least 60 words on the topic My funnest family memory”（根据提示, 以“我最有趣的家庭回忆”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：回忆有趣的家庭生活总是美好的。请结合你的亲身经历，描述你和家人在一起 时最有趣的事儿，并谈谈感想。（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名
37、、校名及其它相关信息， 否那么不予评分。抄袭阅读理解语篇的不给分。）【答案】范文：My funnest family memoryThere are countless interesting things in our family. Let me tell you one thing. Ifs about eating.I remember once again, when I was at my grandmas house, it was going to a dinner. My stomach was hungry and sang “I want to eat”. I ran t
38、o the table in a windy manner and started eating. I just had a bite of the food, feeling very spicy, asked her mother, Mom, why is vegetable pepper so hot?” Mom ran over and tasted vegetable pepper and said, “This is not vegetable pepper, its pepper!” Ah? I asked in confusion. This is chili, no wond
39、er its so spicy. Give me some water!” The family laughed when they heard it. In fact, there are many interesting family stories, waiting for us to discover. As long as you are serious about discovering it, you will feel that family fun everywhere.【详解】.题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以“我最有趣的家庭回忆”为题，根据写作提示，谈一谈自 己最有趣的家庭回
40、忆，属于话题作文。1 .写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第一人称和一般过去时为主来表达，要写出家庭生 活的有趣及自己的感受，注意主谓一致，保证无语法和单词拼写错误。二十六、浦东新区56. Write at least 60 words about the topic “A(n)with love(请以爱的,为题, 写一篇不少于60字的短文，标点符号不占格)在上文中，祖母收到的生日礼物包含了祖父对她真挚的爱。我们的生活也充满了爱，我 们一定收到过带有满满爱意的物品。请你提供一下关于这个物品的故事，并谈谈你的感受或 它对你的影响。注意：1 .短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否那么不予评分
41、。2 .照抄阅读语篇不得分。【答案】.范文：A gift with loveMy favorite gift is a watch, which was a gift full of love from my parents. It can be used to tell the time. It reminds me of the importance of making right use of my time. With the watch, I may be economical of my time. I will never forget how excited I was whe
42、n I got it. Though I have changed several watches since then, I still believe that it is the watch I like best.56.1,题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作。在写作时，根据汉语提示的内容，表达收到过的带有 满满爱意的礼品，并谈谈自己的感受。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来表达故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；在表达内容 时，力求语句通顺，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。二十七、普陀区十六、材料作文80. Write at least 60 words on the topic has
43、won my respect”（以“赢得了我的尊敬”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）提示：Aunt Sandy用行动赢得了外甥女的尊敬。你的身边是否有这样一位值得尊敬的 人关心着你的成长？请先补全标题，再结合具体事例谈谈你自己的感受。【答案】范文：My mother has won my respectMy mother is the person I respect most. She plays an important role in my life, not only as a mother but also as a friend.As a mother, she
44、takes good care of the family, and she is never upset about my mistakes. She works hard in the company. Shes always warmhearted and ready to help others. She sets a good example fbr me. 1 have learned to work hard and respect people around. As a friend, she knows a lot about me and gives me help whe
45、never its necessary.My mother has a great influence on me and she has won my respect.【详解】,题干解读：本文属于记叙文写作，要求以“has won my respec/为题写一篇短文谈 谈我最尊敬的人，举出一些事例来说明。1 .写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来表达内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，第一段指出谁赢 得了我的尊敬；第二段阐述具体事例，第三段总结这我很尊敬这个人。逻辑性要强，保证条 理清晰。二十八、青浦区十五、话题作文80. Write a passage of at least 60 words abo
46、ut the topic “A valuable lesson”（请以“珍贵的一课”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）提示：在学习与生活中，我们会因为经历了一些事情，获得体验，增加阅历，吸取教 训。请以“珍贵的一课”为题，结合你的经历，谈谈你的感受。注意：抄袭试卷中内容不得分。文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其它相关信息，否那么不予评分。【答案】例文：A valuable lessonDuring our life, there are always moments that give us valuable lessons, because they can taught so
47、mething important about ourselves. As fbr me, I will never forget my first volunteer experience.During the summer vacation of my seventh grade, our class went to to an orphan home in our city to help the children there. At first, we gave away some meaningful story books and stationery to them. Then
48、we talked about our school life to them. I was quite shy before, to my surprise, I talked with some kids for almost an hour without intermission. I shared my effective study methods with them excitedly. And I even showed some children some skills which I learned from my PE teacher on how to play badminton better. Finally, we played games together. All of us felt so happy.That volunteer work really taught me a lesson, which I will never forget. I felt the truth of those words, which I never understood before that: It i