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1、根据新课程标准，人与自我主题语境下包括两大主题群：生活与学习；做人与做事。因此在读后续写中，个人的成长不仅涉及到知识层面上，更多涉及到情感、态度和价值观(含品德)。语篇往往是学生比较熟悉的场景：学校生活、家庭生活及工作（劳动）场景。最终的升华指向：健康的生活方式，积极的生活态度，完善的自我,优秀的品行及更好的规划(学习,生活和职业)。Individual growth - 读后续写原题目During lunchtime, Emma suggested going to the zoo to feed the animals and her mom agreed.Well stop by the
2、 bakery and pick some bread up. Now hurry and eat and then well go. Its going to be a lovely day. Grancma is coming with us. Shell be here any minute, mom said.Emma ate her lunch and then ran into her room to get her shoes.The problem was that she could only find one of them, She looked under her be
3、d. but all she could see were dirty towels and pants. She moved some of her toys out of the way,but still couldnt find her shoe. After shed checked everywhere in her room,she ran into the kitchen. Mom, I cant find my shoe. Will you wait while I look for it? she asked.Her mom. thought about how many
4、times shed told Ema to clean her room up. She whispered something to Emmas grandma and then said to EmmaYou will have to stay home. Your dad and I will take Ryan to the zoo. Grandma will stay here with you.” “No! Please wait for me.I want to go to the zoo, Emma cried. “Im sorry, Emma. Ive told you a
5、 dozen times to clean your room and you ignored me. You cant find your shoe now. Its your own fault for not doing as I asked You will stay home.”Emma ran into her bedroom, crying. Her mom came to the door and said , “Emma ,clean that room of yours before I get home. Ive told grandma not to give you
6、any sweets until you finish the work” She went out to the car with Ryan and Emmas dad and then they drove away.Para1:Emma sat on her bed and cried for a long timePara2:Emma and her grandma were sitting at the table, eating when her mom, dad and Ryan came home.读后思路分析:Paral: Emma sat on her bed and cr
7、ied for a long time.How did she feel as she cried?Whats the growth motivation?Whats the result serving as the linking part?Whats the function of grandma?Para2: Emma and her grandma were sitting at the table, eating when her mom, dad and Ryan came home.What was her first reaction when seeing mom?What
8、 would her mom say and do?Whats the effect of this matter on Emma?(主题)How to make the ending echo with the beginning of the whole story?水文:(第一段写出转变过程: 心理变化+具体行动)Emma sat on her bed and cried for a long time.When she pictured the scene where Ryan was feeding animals merrily in the zoo, she became inc
9、reasingly annoyed. She threw herself on the bed to find her toy for relief, she stopped dead because she couldnt find it either.What a mess!”she looked around her room and murmured,“Its really the high time that I should do some cleaning.”(横线处也火“If I had kept my room tidy, I wouldnt missed this chan
10、ce.) Wiping off her tears, Emma rolled up her sleeves , classified the messy piles of objects and put them in order,(连续的动作写) Time creeping by. Hearing a knock on the door, she looked up into her grandmas smiling face, (拍头体到笑)surprised by the spotless room, grandma invited her to enjoy the delicious
11、sweets. (第二段写出她的收拾成果+妈妈的反应 和 她的成长)Emma and her grandma were sitting at the table, eating when her mom, dad, and Ryan came home. Hardly had her mom took off her shoes when Emma led her to her room, (一照下鞋，就妈来参观自己的房同)When mom stepped into her room, a shelf lined with books greeted her; and the window s
12、tood a bed with neat quilt; besides it, all the toys were collected in the toy-box, which was beyond her expectation，(场景描写,注意空间顺序)Seeing the previously-unseen(前所未有的) tidy room, mom cant wait to hug her and give her a thumb-up (坚起大排指) .“OK, you won a chance to the zoo next week on condition that you
13、can keep your room clean Emma jumped to her feet and said “No problem, mom.A smile appeared on moms face, and she believed that Emma wont t have trouble in finding out her shoes next time.(横线处的主题句可以换成 Emma determined to keep her room clean.链接课本：选择性必修二unit2 Improve yourselfJack started the habit of c
14、leaning his room last week. This is what his room looked like yesterday morning.The floorwas clean.The sheetwas laid flat on the bed.All the books and clotheswere placed neatly and tidly.The pictureson the wall were straight.But two weeks ago, Jacks room was in an awful mess.His clotheshad been thro
15、wn everywhere;the pictureshad not been hung straight;andall the drawershad been opened.It had been a very disorderly sort of room, withbooks and paperslying around everywhere.语言积累：1. Embarrassed and ashamed.Emma jumped to her feet before grandma uttered a word and instantly picked up all the rubbish
16、,ducking her head but not daring to look at her grandmas eyes.2. Not until grandma came into her room did she realize how messy her room was.3. Stepping into the room,mom found there were no dirty towels under bed or toys on the floor but spotless floor and tidy bed.4. Mom smiled satisfyingly when Dad and Ryan opened their mouths wide in astonishment.5. Ok ,you have won a chance to go to the zoo next week on condition that you can keep the tidiness.6. That moment Emma found she couldnt be happier and she was sure that she wouldnt find her shoe nowhere again.学科网（北京）股份有限公司