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1、14日记类(2012年，上海卷）Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示），回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括：1.对两堂绘画课的具体描述；2.你从中获得的启发。【参考答案】Date: June 8, 2012Last week, I sat in on two painting classes at a primary school. In
2、 one class a student dipped her feet in ink and made a painting out of footprints. By contrast, the same student used a brush to make a breath-taking landscape paintingso vivid that one could almost smell the refreshing rivers and hear the chirping birds.Though standing in stark contrast, the two pa
3、intings both intrigued me. In fact, they reminded me of what Facebook founder Mark Zuckerberg said, “Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground.” Its this maxim on success that lends insight into the two paintings. The first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be caut
4、ious of being carried away with temporary success. A kite stays afloat because its attached to a reel; otherwise it will instantly lose its balance before eventually crashing into the ground. So it is with us.However, success requires more than being simply down-to-earth, with a lofty ideal being an
5、other crucial factor. So grand was the scenery portrayed in the second painting that it embodied the reach of our dreams. Instead of ignoring the gleam of light, the spark of wisdom that flashes across our mind and worshipping the luster of the sky of geniuses, wed be better off trusting that the gl
6、eam and the spark will one day shine as brightly as a search light if we have faith in ourselves.The paintings taught me to dream big and act small. And I believe, by doing so, the warm light of success will cascade into my life.【范文点评】这是一篇看图写话，体裁是日记的形式。内含两个要点：介绍对两堂绘画课的具体描述和你从中获得的启发。文章要紧紧围绕这两个要点展开。各个
7、要点表达要清晰，要点要根据图的内容进行具体描述。然后谈谈自己的启发。层次要分明，衔接要自然。需要考生自己做合理的联想，启发要有新意，内容要符合图的逻辑。日记分为记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。建议大家在学习写日记的过程中，可按以下步骤进行：将一天所经历的主要事情和过程依次简要地记下来，不附加任何感情色彩，这是最简单的记日记的方法;阅读别人的日记，并利用所学过的句型来表达个人在一天中观察到的或感受到的事情。例如：March 12th，20xx，Tuesday Sunny (Fine)Today is Tree Planting Day. At 730 in the morning，all the
8、 students in our class met at the school gate. We walked to the park. Miss Gao and other teachers went and worked with us. All the students worked very hard，and we planted about 200 trees. Though we were dirty and tired，we still felt very happy.模板March 12th, 2020, Tuesday Sunny (fine)y parents are t
9、eachers, so they want me to read more books. henstarted to learn reading, they bought me a lot of novel books, such as arry otter, licen the onderland and so on.saw the movie first, and thenwould have the interest to read the novels.found that the novel were with much more details andwas absorbed in
10、 it. he literary books not only described an attractive world, but the more important thing was that it enlightened me to be a better girl. What learned from these novels helps me to be independent andhave my own thinking.模板December,10,Sunday Fine This afternoon I went to the park with Wang Neng, wh
11、ere there was a pond. We saw several boys skating there. Suddenly we heard a cry for help. One of the boys had fallen into the water. Wang Neng jumped into the icy water immediately and managed to pull the boy to safety. Then the boy was given first aid and soon came to himself. The boys parents cam
12、e soon after they received the phone call. They were very thankful to Wang Neng, who was trembling with cold.日记是每日生活的记载，是一种记事文体。一、基本要求1. 注意日期、星期和天气的书写位置英语日记日期和星期要写在正文的左上角，其顺序多是“星期 + 月、日、年”（也有把星期放在后面的），如“ 20XX 年 11 月 22 日，星期一”可写为“ onday ovember 22， 20XX 或 ovember 22， 20XX onday ”。天气情况应写在正文的右上角，如： ine
13、， ainy， loudy， indy 等。2. 关于题目的书写在日期和天气的下一行中间可以写上日记小题目，也可以不写题目。3. 关于正文的书写正文是关于一天生活的记载，也是日记的主习题。在书写正文时要做到：1 ）要选择当天感受最深刻、最有意义的事件来描述，不要写成简单的流水帐；2 ）日记的内容多是亲身经历和耳闻目睹的事情，所以要用第一人称来写；3 ）日记多是在当天晚上来记述当天发生过的事情，因为动词时态常使用过去时，但使用时必须灵敏掌握并且要简明扼要，层次清楚，写出真实感。二、主要格式英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组成。日记常以第一人称记下当天生活中的所见、所闻、所做或所想的事情。中、英文
14、的日记三格式大致一样。英语日记的书端是专门写日记的日期、星期和天气的。左上角是日期(年、月、日)、星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如：unny, ine, ainy, indy, nowy, loudy等。1.日期表达有多种形式英语日记年、月、日都写时，通常以月、日、年为顺序，月份可以缩写，日和年用逗号隔开。例如： December 18, 2019 或者 ec. 18, 20192.星期的特殊性星期也可以省略不写，可将其放在日期前或后，星期和日期之间不用标点，但要空一格，星期也可缩写。如：Saturday, October 22nd, 2019；October 22nd, 2019 Satu
15、rday3.天气情况必不可少天气一般用一个形容词如 :Sunny, Fine, Rainy, Snowy 等表示。写在日期之后，用逗号隔开，位于日记的右上角。如：Saturday, arch 4, 2020, Windy；1st January, 2019, Fine三、日记的类型和训练日记分为记事型、议论型、描写型和抒情型。建议大家在学习写日记的过程中，可按以下步骤进行：将一天所经历的主要事情和过程依次简要地记下来，不附加任何感情色彩，这是最简单的记日记的方法；阅读别人的日记，并利用所学过的句型来表达个人在一天中观察到的或感受到的事情。1每年3月是植树活动月，假定你是李华，你们班开展了一次植
16、树活动，请你根据以下要点，写一篇日记，叙述记录这次植树活动，并在英语课上向同学们展示。1活动目的：亲近自然，美化环境；2具体活动过程；3活动感受。注意：1词数80 左右；2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_2假定你是李华，你正在英国某高中参加你们学校的“交换生”项目，请你用英语写一篇日记，叙述你在新学校第一周的学习生活。内容包括：1.学校印象; 2.同学印象; 3.个人感受。注意：1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。September 12th，Saturday Sunny_3假定你是高一学生李华，高中生活已经过了一周，一切都很新鲜。在此，你写下一篇日记，记下了你对高中新生
17、活的感受，并制订计划调整自己。注意：1.词数80左右；2日记的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Wednesday Sept.7 SunnyNow, my high school life has been on for a week. High school life gave me the feeling that_I think I will adapt myself to the high school life as soon as possible.4假如你是李华，今天你参加了班级春游活动。请你写一篇英文日记。内容包括：1. 活动时间、地点、参加人员；2. 活动过程；3. 活动意义。
18、注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。An Unforgettable Spring Outing_5假定你是李华，本周你校开展了“记录美好生活”系列活动。请你用英语写一篇日记，记录你本周的美好生活。内容包括：1. 你的生活情况；2. 谈谈你的感受。注意：1、日记的格式已给出；2、写作词数应为80左右；3、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Saturday January 16th, 2022SunnyDear Diary,_6假定你是李华，进入高中后，你加入了羽毛球俱乐部。请你以日记的形式记录，向校英文报投稿。内容包括：1.参加的原因；2.安排或活动；3.收获
19、及感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thursday l5 December_7假定你是李华，昨天你和你的美国朋友Mary一起去市图书馆参加高中生如何交友的讲座。请你据此写一篇英文日记。要点：1.时间、地点；2.讲座内容；3.参加讲座收获。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dec. 6, 2021_8今天下午，你校手工俱乐部（handcraft club）邀请民间艺人来校给你们传授了灯笼制作技术。请你写一篇英语日记，内容包括：1.活动过程；2.你的感受。注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使
20、行文连贯。参考词汇：lanternmaking activityMay 15 Sunday Sunny_9你是校陶艺社团（pottery club）的成员李华，参加了10月18日（周二）的社团活动，请写一篇日记，内容包括：1.活动时间、地点；2.活动内容；3.活动感受。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答；3.开头结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Tuesday 18 OctoberToday is our pottery day._10假定你是李华，上周日你和班里同学游览参观了长城。请你用英语写一篇日记，内容要点包括：1.游览心情；2.具体见闻；3.事后感受。注
21、意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯My weekend_11假如你是李华，一周前参加了夏令营活动，结识了安静、喜欢读书的Lily和外向、幽默的Rose两位室友，并成为好友，在一起愉快地度过了一周的时光。请你用英语写一篇日记，描述这一周的夏令营生活。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：卧室bedchamberFriday, 16 August, 2019 hotHow time flies! _12今天下午，你校手工俱乐部(handcraft club)邀请民间艺人来校给你们传授了灯笼制作技术。请你写一篇英语日记，内容包括：1活动过
22、程；2你的感受。注意：1写作词数应为100左右；2请按如下格式作答。May 15 Sunday Sunny_13假定你是李华，寒假期间，你参加了WWF举办的为期一周的野生动物保护冬令营。请你写一篇日记分享这段有意义的经历。1.活动的时间、地点及内容；2.你对野生动物保护的看法和感悟。注意：短文词数80字左右。参考词汇：冬令营：winter campSunday, 8 January, Sunny_14今天下午，你班在学校操场上组织了一次制作并放风筝的室外班会，请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记，记录本次活动经历。写作要点：1.你对风筝的喜爱；2.描述放风筝的过程；3.你的感受。注意：1.短文词数
23、不少于100词。2.开头部分已写好，不计入总数。3.文中不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。March 3, 2022MondaySunnyIn China, there is a long history to fly a kite in the spring while usually the weather and wind are so suitable for this leisure. _参考答案1March 12 SunnyToday our class held a tree planting activity which aimed to get close to nature an
24、d beautify the environment. In the morning, we took a bus to Western Hill which is 5 kilometers away from our school. On arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. After getting the work done, we put up a bo
25、ard reminding people to protect the trees. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. Before leaving we took some photos to record our action. Through this activity, we learned that it was our duty to protect the environment.【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就“班级开展了一次植树活动”一事，写一篇日记，叙述记录这次植树活动，并在英语课上向同学们展示。【写作分析】1.词汇积累举办：holdconduct立即：immediatelyin no time挖掘：digunearth责任：dutyresponsibility2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.拓展句：When we saw the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Today our clas