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1、10咨询信(2014年，全国卷I）假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）注意：1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。参考词汇：住宿accommodation【参考范文】Dear Sir/Madam,I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.Ive seen your ad,and Id like to know something mor
2、e about your six-week English course.First,when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week?Besides,I wish there would not be too many students in a class.Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family
3、 or university dormitory?I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【写作解析】李华计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周,看到广告后自己感觉有一些问题广告里不清楚，想要给校方写信咨询有关事项，考生要清楚这是一封信，要符合信的格式。这是考生非常熟悉的一个应用文文体。考生要注意动词时态的变化，以一般现在时为主，兼有将来时，比如：功课什么时间开始?这是将来的事情。注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。使用一些高级句型和词汇来提高作文档次。【范文点评】短文用了一些短语，增加了文章的色彩，如：p
4、lan to do sth ;would like to do sth;pay for; look forward to doing/sth等；用了一些过渡词如：First ；Besides等，使文章过渡自然；用了一些连词使句子结构复杂化不再单一。如：Id also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.并且wish后用了虚拟语气，增加了文章的亮点。开头句1.I am writing to see if it is possible for you to
5、provide me with information regarding / concerning我写信想看看您是否能提供一些关于的具体信息。2.I would lie to know whether you can tell me something about我想写信看看是您否能告诉我有关的情况。3. I am I wonder if you could provide me some specific information about我是我想知道您是否能够提供一些关于的具体信息。4. I wonder/ am wondering if you could / would let me
6、 know something about不知道您能否告知有关的情况。5. Id like to acquire all the information relative to 我想获得关于的信息。6. Im writing to ask you some relevant questions.我写信向您询问一些相关的问题。中间句1.I would also like to acquire 我想知道关于一些的事情。/ 我还想咨询2. Another point I am not certain about is 我还不确定的另外一点是3. Id also like some help / in
7、formation on 我还想知道一些有关的帮助/信息。4. The questions I need answering are listed as follows 下列是我想咨询的问题。5. I would appreciate it if you could inform me 如果你能告诉我，我将不胜感激。结尾句1.Could you be so kind as to send me someon the above-mentioned aspects?能否针对上述问题寄些相关的给我？2.Thank you for your kindness and your timely atte
8、ntion to this letter will be highly appreciated.谢谢您的善意，对于这封信的及时关注我将不胜感激。3.Im looking forward to / eagerly waiting for a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.我盼望着您尽早回复。4.May I have your reply by（日期），if possible(语气更委婉)？如果可能，我可否在（日期）之前收到您的回复？5.I would greatly appreciate a response from you at y
9、our earliest convenience.请在方便的时候尽早回复，我将不胜感激。模板开头：1. _your advertisement in the paper, I am interested _ it. 拜读了你们在报纸上做的广告，我很感兴趣。2. Now I am writing for some detailed information.正文：1._, I would like to know . 首先，我想知道 2.I m also interested in knowing . 3.而且，我不知道newsletters是否会额外收费（至少3种表达）。_4.就价钱而言，学生有
10、优惠吗？_ the price, do you have discounts for students?As for the price, I m wondering _.5.最后，不知道学生是否有优惠。Finally, it is still not clear to me whether there is a reduced membership fee for students.结尾：I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience.Or: Your timely reply w
11、ould be much appreciated.Or: I am looking forward very much to hearing from you soon.开头：表达写信咨询的原因With the winter holiday around the corner, we plan to pay a visit to China. Im writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with specific information regarding your country.随着寒假的临近，我们计划去中国旅游。我写
12、信是想知道你是否能给我提供有关贵国的具体信息。中间：分点叙述咨询内容1.询问的第一点内容：什么时候课程开始。To begin with, could you be so kind as to tell mewhen the course will start . 首先，你能告诉我课程什么时候开始吗？用这种彬彬有礼的句子来询问，肯定会得到非常细致的回复。2. 询问的第二点内容，学费和住宿In addition, it is still unclear to me how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is
13、included. 另外，我还不清楚我需要支付多少学费，是否包括住宿。3.最后，询问课程的内容Lastly, I would be more than obliged if you could keep me informed of the content of the course in details so that I can make proper arrangements.最后，如果您能将课程内容详细告知我，我将不胜感激，以便我做出适当的安排。结尾再次表达感谢，期待回信Your immediate attention to this letter would be highly ap
14、preciated. May you be blessed in everything you do.如能立即收到这封信，将不胜感激。愿你万事亨通。1假定你是李华，你报名参加了国外的一项夏令营活动，下个星期要进行面试。请你用英语给交换生James写一封邮件，咨询面试技巧，内容包括：1.写信目的；2.描述现状；3.期待回复。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_2假定你是李华，你最喜欢的歌手下周将到你市演出。最近你准备和几个同学成立一个歌迷俱乐部。请你给你的英国网友Jack写一封电子邮件，向他询问一些建议。内容要点如下：1.喜欢该歌手的原因；2.咨询如何办好歌迷俱乐部。
15、注意：词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_3假设你是红星中学高二学生李华，当你得知你校和另外一所国际学校计划共同筹办一场“最美中国”现场书画比赛，号召书画爱好者踊跃参加，你有意参加此次活动，请你给组委会用英文写封咨询信，内容包括：1.参赛作品种类2.是否自备书画工具3.其他需要询问的内容注意：词数100词左右Dear Sir/Madam，_Yours faithfully，Li Hua4假如你是李华，一名高二学生，因痴迷看小说，熬夜，严重影响了健康和学习。希望有所改变，写信向老师咨询建议。内容包括：1. 陈述所受影响；2. 表达期望和感激。注意：1. 写作词数在80词左右；2. 可以
16、适当增加细节使行文流畅。Dear Mr. Li,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua5假如你是学生会主席李华，你所就读的高中准备举办心理健康月系列活动。你得知美国笔友Rogers最近组织过类似的活动，请你写一封电子邮件，向Rogers咨询以下内容：1.活动准备；2.活动安排；3.注意事项。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：心理健康月Month of Psychological HealthDear Rogers,_Yours,Li Hua6假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。通过网上得知英国一所中学正在全球范围内向高中学生征集画作进行展出。请写一封
17、邮件咨询相关事项，内容包括：1.写信目的;2.咨询相关信息(主题，作品形式，提交方式等，);3.表示感谢。注意：1.词数150左右;2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。Dear Sir/Madam,_Yours faithfully,Li Hua7假定你是李华，了解到你校国际部正在招募儒家思想宣传大使志愿者，在暑期面向外国友人宣传中国传统文化。你对这个活动很感兴趣，准备报名参加。由于活动信息不太明确，你准备写一封咨询信，询问相关信息。内容包括：(1)活动的时间、地点;(2)参选的要求;(3)期待回复并表示感谢。注意：(1)词数100词左右;(2)可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。(3)参考词汇：儒家
18、思想Confucianism_8假定你是李华，最近你的视力下降严重，看不清楚周边的事物。为此你感到十分焦虑。请你给美国外教Miss Evans写封信，咨询她如何保护视力。要点：1.陈述视力下降的原因；2. 询问保护视力的建议。注意：1.词数80词左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Miss Evans,_Yours sincerely,Li Hua9假设你是高中生李华，你热爱英语学习，但在学习过程中发现自己看不懂一些英语笑话。请给一名英文报刊的编辑写一封信，就此问题进行咨询。内容包括：1.热爱英语学习；2.不能理解英语笑话的幽默之处；3.询问原因，寻求建议。注意：1.词数100左
19、右;2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：笑话 joke幽默 humourDear Editor,I am Li Hua, a senior high school student._I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua10假定你是红旗中学高二年级学生李华，你在网站看到了亚青会(the Asian Youth Games)志愿者招募的消息，你有兴趣报名参加。请你向负责人Mr. Li写一封电子邮件，内容主要包括：1. 自我介绍；2. 咨询相关情况(招募条件，有何类别志愿者，报
20、名时间和方式等)；3. 期待回复。注意：1. 词数100词左右；2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文流畅；3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入词数。参考词汇：招募recruitDear Mr. Li,_Yours,Li Hua11假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部在校园网上发布了一则有关“英语微电影大赛”的活动启事，你对此非常感兴趣。请你给该俱乐部的负责人Brown外教写一封邮件，申请参加比赛，要点包括：1咨询比赛信息(时间、地点、要求等)；2你的优势；3期待回复。注意：1写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Mr Brown,Hearing the Englis
21、h Micro Film Competition will be held in our school, Im writing to apply to enter it._Yours,Li Hua参考答案1Dear James, Im delighted to tell you that Ill take part in a summer camp. However, there will be an interview next week, which makes me worried. I am wondering if you could tell me some interview s
22、kills.As you know, my spoken English is not good. It makes the communication difficult with native speakers. I think the question is that I am always flooded with a sense of nervousness when talking. So Im extremely afraid to fail now. I hope to pass the interview successfully and there is an opport
23、unity to make more friends and know about the local culture.Im looking forward to your early reply!Yours,Li Hua【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华，你报名参加了国外的一项夏令营活动，下个星期要进行面试。请你用英语给交换生James写一封邮件，咨询面试技巧。【写作分析】1.词汇积累高兴的：delightedglad参加：take part inparticipate in担心的：worriedconcerned机会：opportunitychance2.句式拓展同义句转换原
24、句：I hope to pass the interview successfully and there is an opportunity to make more friends and know about the local culture.拓展句：I hope to pass the interview successfully so that I can have an opportunity to make more friends and know about the local culture.【典型句式】高分句型1 However, there will be an in
25、terview next week, which makes me worried. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)高分句型2 I think the question is that I am always flooded with a sense of nervousness when talking. (运用了状语从句的省略和that引导表语从句)2Dear Jack,Im glad to tell you that my favourite singer will come to our city to perform next week. Im so pleased at
26、the news that I decide to set up a music fan club with some of my classmates. All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and fantastic! His songs are great, which not only sound nice but can also touch our heart. We can sing most of his songs and would like to know more ab
27、out him. But we dont know how to start a music fan club and what activities a fan club should have. Could you give us some good advice? Looking forward to your reply soon! Yours, Li Hua【写作指导】本文是应用文。假定你是李华，你最喜欢的歌手下周将到你市演出。最近你准备和几个同学成立一个歌迷俱乐部。请你给你的英国网友Jack写一封电子邮件，向他询问一些建议。内容要点如下：1.喜欢该歌手的原因；2.咨询如何办好歌迷俱
28、乐部。【写作分析】1.词汇积累高兴的：gladhappy迷人的：charmingattractive创立：startfound建议：advicesuggestion2.句式拓展合并句子原句：All of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. He is very charming and fantastic!拓展句：He is so charming and fantastic that all of us like him and enjoy his songs very much. 【典型句式】【高分句型1】Im glad to tell y
29、ou that my favourite singer will come to our city to perform next week.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)【高分句型2】Im so pleased at the news that I decide to set up a music fan club with some of my classmates. (运用了so.that引导的状语从句)【高分句型3】His songs are great, which not only sound nice but can also touch our heart.(运用了which
30、引导的非限制性定语从句)3Dear Sir/Madam，I heard that our school and another international school planed to jointly organize a “most beautiful China” live calligraphy and painting competition. Most of the students think highly of this live painting competition, which provides a platform for them to explore the beauty of China and experience the charm of Chinese art. I also want to participate in it. I am wr