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1、折衷式折衷式(Semi-Block Style)Dear Sir or Madam,(Para1)(Para2)(Para3)Yours(sincerely),Lihua 信件写作流程信件写作流程1、仔细审题,明确写作要求、仔细审题,明确写作要求一审一审文体文体:二审二审时态、人称时态、人称:三审三审要点要点:2、列出提纲,构建框架结构、列出提纲,构建框架结构-框架框架 -要点分布要点分布 -逻辑关系逻辑关系 -语言(词汇、语法)语言(词汇、语法)(动词、连接成分、可用句型)(动词、连接成分、可用句型)格式格式正确,正确,语言得体;语言得体;时态前后照应人称时态前后照应人称上下一致上下一致;要
2、点齐全,要点齐全,逻辑逻辑清晰清晰3、依据依据提纲,提纲,扩展成文扩展成文紧扣提示紧扣提示,适度发挥,适度发挥,扩展成句,扩展成句,连句成文。连句成文。尽量使用较丰富的词汇和语法结构尽量使用较丰富的词汇和语法结构。4、核查文章,适度修改。、核查文章,适度修改。格式正确格式正确要点齐全要点齐全语言语言准确准确衔接自然衔接自然求助信求助信内容要点内容要点:-写信目的写信目的 -说明困难说明困难 -请求帮助请求帮助 -感谢并感谢并期待期待答复答复求助信求助信起首句(起首句(theopeningsentence)Imwritingtoaskyouafovor.Wouldyoudomeafavor?结束
3、语结束语(theclosingsentence)IsincerelyhopeyoucanIamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.HopeforanearlyreplyIwouldbegratefulifyoucouldIwouldappreciateitifyoucould求助信求助信表示求助的常用句式表示求助的常用句式Wouldyoubesokindasto?Isitpossiblethat?Isincerelyhopethatyoucan假如你是李华,暑假参加了某假如你是李华,暑假参加了某微信公众号(微信公众号(Wechatofficialaccount)举行的
4、英语原版书阅读)举行的英语原版书阅读活动,并写了一篇书评(活动,并写了一篇书评(abookreview)。现你用英语给外教)。现你用英语给外教Sam写一封信,希望他能帮你当面写一封信,希望他能帮你当面批改书评,内容包括:批改书评,内容包括:简要介绍活动简要介绍活动提出请求提出请求提议见面时间提议见面时间注意:注意:词数词数80次左右次左右可适当增加细节,使行文连贯可适当增加细节,使行文连贯(1)(1)文体文体(2)(2)人称人称(3)(3)时态时态(4)(4)要点要点求助信求助信第一人称第一人称一般现在时一般现在时一般将来时一般将来时写信目的写信目的求助内容求助内容结束语结束语1、仔细审题,明
5、确写作要求、仔细审题,明确写作要求original English booksEnglish originals Dear,(Para1)(Para2)Yours(sincerely),Li Hua 2、列出提纲,构建框架结构、列出提纲,构建框架结构请求帮助请求帮助提出请求提出请求&约定时间约定时间感谢并期待答复感谢并期待答复说明困难说明困难写信目的写信目的根据交流对象根据交流对象选用选用称呼称呼和和结尾礼语结尾礼语DearSam,Yoursrespectfully,Yourstruly,Yourssincerely,介绍活动介绍活动要点要点罗罗列列 ask you a favor signu
6、pforareadingactivityandwriteabookreview helpmecorrectit/makesomecorrections meetafterclassonFriday/sparemesometime thanksandexpectations3、依据依据提纲,提纲,扩展成文扩展成文askyouafavor I am writing to ask you a favor.I am Li Hua,a student from our school.I am writing to ask you a favor.highlyrelatedlooselyrelated3、
7、依据依据提纲,提纲,扩展成文扩展成文 signupforareadingactivityandwriteabookreviewAs a keen lover of English books,I signed up for an English origial reading activity during the summer vocation.I wrote a book review on my favorite book Jane Eyre.As a keen lover of English books,I signed up for a reading activity durin
8、g the summer vocation,where I read some English originals and wrote a book review.Supporting+Keynon-restrictiveclause3、依据依据提纲,提纲,扩展成文扩展成文 helpmecorrectit/makesomecorrectionsIamnotsurewhetherIhavegotmyideaacross,soIsincerelyhopeyoucanhelpmetocorrectitandgivemesomeadviceonwriting.Beingpoorinwriting,Ia
9、mworriedtheremightbesomemistakes.Wouldyoubesokindastohelpmemakesomecorrections?Supporting+KeyUsingaquestiontobepolite3、依据依据提纲,提纲,扩展成文扩展成文 meetafterclassonFriday/sparemesometimessionIfpossible,canImeetyouafterclassOnFriday?IfyouareavialableafterclassonFriday,pleasetellmeandIwillmeetyouinyouroffice.Ca
10、nyousparemesometimeandtellmewhensothatIcangotomeetyou?ConcessionConcessionResult3、依据依据提纲,提纲,扩展成文扩展成文 thanksandexpectationIdbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeahand.Lookingforwardtoyourkindreply.Dear Sam,(I am Li Hua,a student from our school.)I am writing to ask a favor of you.As a keen lover of English book
11、s,I signed up for a reading activity during the summer vocation,where I read some English originals and wrote a book review on my favorite book Jane Eyre.But I am not sure whether I have got my idea across,so I sincerely hope you can help me to make some corrections and give me some advice on writin
12、g.Can you spare me some time and tell me when so that I can go to meet you?Id be grateful if you could give me a hand.Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua格式、要点、语言格式、要点、语言4、核查文章,适度修改、核查文章,适度修改cohesiveandlogicalDearSam,(IamLiHua,astudentfromourschool.)Iamwritingtoaskafavorofyou.范文(来不及打了)范文(来不及打了)Idbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeahand.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua4、核查文章,适度修改、核查文章,适度修改Thank you!Thank you!