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1、名著阅读与读后续写4今天的内容清单: 1. 摆渡人第二章的节选内容 第二章主要讲述了主人公Dylan去和她多年没见面的父亲，在火车站的见闻，在火车上一些相遇，回忆和同学通过发短信的方式谈论见父亲的喜悦和激动。这一章节里面有很多心理描写值得学习。 2.重点词短语句型讲解 3.链接高考-改写新概念3 Lesson4 The double life of Alfred Bloggs下面请静心阅读名著摆渡人第二章的节选内容：He carried on, unfazed by her lack of enthusiasm.“I mean, the prices theyre charging, youd
2、 think they could be on time. But oh no. Outrageous. Ive been waiting here for twenty minutes, and you know when it comes in there wont be a seat to be had. Terrible service.Dylan looked around. Though a cross-section of society loitered under the various points of shelter, the platform was not so c
3、rowded that she could just melt away and disappear.The tweed man turned to look at her.”Dont you think?”Forced into a direct response, Dylan tried to be as unclear as possible.“Mmmm.”He seemed totake this as an invitation tocontinue the diatribe.“Where is the train, Dylan thought, desperate to be re
4、lieved of this social charade. And there it was, rolling in like a knight in rusting armour. One glimmer of hope in a day full of embarrassment and torment.She reached down for the rucksack at her feet. It was faded and showing signs ofwear and tear, like most things she owned. As she took both hand
5、les in her hand and heaved the heavy bag off the ground and over her shoulder, a faint ripping sound made her grimace.Once in carriage, she glanced left and right, trying to identify the crazies- drunks, weirdos, people who wanted to tell you your life stories.These people seemed drawn to her when s
6、he took public transport, and she was anxious to avoid them today when she had so many other things on her mind. Her surveillance picked out the free seats andit did not took long to work out why these remained open in the packed train.A mother with her screaming baby, its red face puckered up and a
7、ngry, sat at one end with a pram and several bags filled with everything a baby could possibly need around them. On the other side of the aisle, a few seats down, there was a double-seater opposite a pair of drunken teenagers in blue Rangerstops.The only other option was in the middle of the carriag
8、e, squashed in beside a large woman with an array of shopping bags, which she had arranged on the seat beside and across from her in a manner that made it clear that she did not welcome company. However, glaring or not, she was the most appealing option.Keeping her eyes closed, she thought about the
9、 coming weekend.Nerves and excitement fought for control of the butterflies in her stomachas she contemplated stepped off the train and searching out the man who was all but a stranger to her. Dylan remembered how her hand had shaken as shed dialled, hung up, dialled again, and then hung up.What if
10、he didnt want to me? What if he had his own family now? What if, worst of all, he turned out to be a huge disappointment? A drunk or a criminal?Hed left when Dylan was five years old. And in the decade that had passedhis face had become less than a memory.As soon as shed hung up, shed cringed. What
11、an idiot! She couldnt believe that she hadnt planned a message. Shed sounded like a bumbling moron. Well,there was nothing to do now but wait. All afternoon she felt sick to her stomach.Biology and English passed in a blur.At home she numbly watch Ready, Steady, Cook and the news, not even changing
12、channel when the stupid soaps came on.What if he didnt call? Would he have listened to to the message yet? What if he never got the message?Dylan had imagined a female hand lifting the receiver and listening, then slowly pressing a painted red fingernail on the delete button. The image had made her
13、look over the cordless phone beside her and chew her bottom lip, indecisively.Too scared to phone again, shed had no choice but to cross her fingers and stay within easy reach of her mobile.It took two days, but he did call. At four oclock, her phone vibrated in her pocket and began chirping out the
14、 piano chords of the Once upon a time theme tune.Her heart seemed to stop beating as she yanked the phone out of her pocket. Sliding her thumb up the glass screen, she pressed it to her ear.“Hello”her voice sounded rough and strangled. She tried to clear her throat quietly.“Dylan? Dylan, this is Jam
15、es Miller. I mean, your dad”Silence. Say something Dylan, she thought. Say something, Dad.The silence hung between them, but in the stress of the moment it sounded like streaming.“Listen.”His voice broke through it, melt it away.“Im so glad you called. Ive wanted to get in touch with you for so long
16、.Weve got a lot to catch up on.Dylan closed her eyes and smiled. She took a deep breath and started to speak.It had been so easy after that. Talking to him felt very comfortable,like shed known him for ever.Theyd talked until Dylans mobile ran out of charge. He wanted to know everything about her, h
17、er school, hobbies, who she hung out with, what movies were her favorites and what books she liked to read. In return, he told her about his life in Aberdeen, where he lived with Anna, his dog. No wife, no kids. No complications. And he wanted her to visit.That had been exactly on week ago.For seven
18、 days Dylan had been wrestling with her nerves and excitement about meeting him,and trying not to fight with Joan, who made no secret of the fact she disapprovedof Dylan trying to connect with her father. Shed no one to talk to about it except snatched MSN conversations with Katie whenever her frien
19、ds mother gave her five minutes alone.Dylan had hit the send button and waited. Her heart had been racing ridiculously. Shed wanted Katie to say something nice, wanted someone to tell her that she was doing the right thing.Theres been a pause that seemed to last for ever before the little box had po
20、pped up: Katies writing.Dylan had laughed out loud, then clamped her hand over her mouth.Joan would go metal if she knew she was on the computer this late.Dylan held that very train ticket in her hand right now. She was supposed to text her dad to let him know she was on her way.Shed been impressed
21、that he could text.Digging into her pocket, which was difficult being surrounded by the glaring womans bags., Dylan pulled out he phone. She opened up a new text and began to type.Dad, on train, not running too late at the mo. Cant wait to meet you.Just as she hit the send button, the window beside
22、her went black. Fabulous, she thought, a tunnel. The mobile - an expensive Christmas gift that Joan had paid for through several extra shifts at work- scrolled on words across the screen: sending. It rolled through three times before the little phone emitted a double beep: Message failed.“Dammit,”Dy
23、lan muttered. Irrationally she tried holding the phone up above her head, knowing that it was useless. They were still in the tunnel, no signal was going to get through that much rock. She was poised like that, arm in the air like a mini Statue of Liberty,when it happened. Light vanished, sound expl
24、oded, and the world ended.重点内容讲解：1.Forced into a direct response, Dylan tried to be as unclear as possible.“Mmmm.”被逼给出一个直接的回应， Dylan 尽量保持含糊不清。force:to make sb. do sth. they dont want to do.e.g: I was forced to take a taxi because the last bus had left. 最后一班公共汽车已经开走，所以我只好叫了一辆出租车。to use physical stren
25、gth to move sb./sth. into a particular position.e.g:He tried to force a copy of his book into my hand. 他硬要把他的一本书往我手里塞。The door had been forced open.门被强行打开了。2.take this as an invitation toinvitation:something that encourages sb. to do sth., usually sth. bade.g:Having the doors unlocked is an open inv
26、itation to burglars. 出门不上锁无异于开门揖盗。3. wear and tear: the damage to objects, furniture, property, etc. that is the result of normal usee.g: The carpet is designed to stand up to a lot of wear and tear. 这种地毯设计得十分耐用。4. Once in carriage, she glanced left and right, trying to identify the crazies- drunks,
27、 weirdos, people who wanted to tell you your life stories. 这就是我们每次乘坐公交车或者地铁的时候，不想和别人聊天时做的动作，值得背诵。5. It did not took long to work out why these remained open in the packed train. 很快就明白了为什么在这么拥挤的火车上这些座位是没人坐的。It takes/took sb. some time to do sth. 做. 花费某人多长时间remain 在这里作为系动词使用，是一个非常使用的词。 例如， remain stan
28、ding/ seated/motionless 保持站着/做着/ 一动不动，remain the best friend/ manager 仍是最好的朋友/经理， 除此之外 remain还可以做行为动词， 例如：It remains to be seen whether you are right. 你说的对不对还有待证实。 There remained one significant problem. 还有一个人重要的问题。6.Keeping her eyes closed,she thought about the coming weekend.非谓语动词doing做状语在英语写作中的使用
29、非常普遍，也是让句子多样化的一种很实用的方法。7.What ifhe didnt want to me?What ifhe had his own family now? What if, worst of all, he turned out to be a huge disappointment? A drunk or a criminal? 这句中三个what if 对主人翁的心理进行了描写。在读后续写中要学会使用两个或者三个what if 对人物的心理进行描写。8.His face had becomeless than a memory.他的脸已经几乎没有了记忆。 其实就是已经记不得
30、他长什么样了。这样的表达很地道，要学会输入，下次直接使用。9.Too scared to phone again, shed had no choice but to cross her fingers and stay within easy reach of her mobile. 形容词放在句首做状语，这里推荐大家使用aware这个词，例如，Aware that there are many unexpected problems to solve, the general manager is ready to employ more top graduates from elite
31、universities.10.like shed known him for ever.虚拟语气在读后续写心理描写中使用，来我们假设一个场景：一个小男孩不停父母的劝告，一定要一个人去爬山，最后迷路被困在山里，后悔没听父母的话， 希望当时应该约一个朋友一起去。Jack insisted on backpacking on the mountain slops alone although his parents told him that it was dangerous. Thrilled and delighted, Jack started his own journey, expect
32、ing spectacular scenery and fresh air. However, he couldnt find the way back when he was about to go home. Digging into his pocket, Jack pulled out his phone, ready to call his family, but there was no signal. He was poised like that, arm in the air like a mini Statue of Liberty. Trapped in the fore
33、st, he was filled with fear and regret, thinking”if only I had listened to my parentswarning, or if I had a friend to keep me company, I wouldnt have been frightened and helpless.”11.Theres been a pausethat seemed to last for everbefore the little box had popped up: Katies writing. 表示在很着急的等待中， 一分钟像是
34、一个世纪一样的，that seemed to last for ever非常地道，值得拥有，还有类似的表达， after what seemed like a century.链接高考：改编于新概念英语3 Lesson4 The double life of Alfred BloggsThese days, people who do manual work often receive far more money than people who work in offices. People who work in offices are frequently referred to as
35、white collar workers for the simple reason that they usually wear a collar and tie to go to work. Such is human nature, that a great many people are often willing to sacrifice higher pay for the privilege of becoming white collar workers. This can give rise to curious situations, as it did in the ca
36、se of Alfred Bloggs who worked as a dustman for the Ellesmere Corporation.When he got married, Alf was too embarrassed to say anything to his wife about his job. He simply told her that he worked for the Corporation.Every morning, he left home dressed in a smart black suit._Alfs wife has never disco
37、vered that she married a dustman and shenever will._运用前面学过的内容，对文章进行续写。改编文章：Every morning, he left home dressed in a smart black suit.Afraid to see his wife, Mary, in the eye, he just gave her a kiss and walked downstairs very quicklyas if he had not wanted to see anyone.Actually,no sooner had he ent
38、ered the company than he changed into his overallsand spent the next eight hours as a dustman.Keeping his eyes closedduring breaks, he was always worried that his wife would find that he was a dustman, thinking”what if she quarreled with me for lying to her, what if she left and divorced me?Alfs wif
39、e has never discovered that she married a dustman and shenever will.Before returning home at night, he took a shower and changed back into his suit, which his wife didnt know for over two years when he worked for the company. Andso understanding was Alfs fellow dustmen that they kept his secret.But
40、it was not a permanent solution to the problem.Determined to change his job, Alf made the best of every minute he could use to learn and finally get some practical certificates, enabling him to apply for a better and decent job.It didnt take long for him to get an office job. He thought it had a good prospect although he earned only half as much as he used to. (204 words)学科网（北京）股份有限公司