《名著阅读与读后续写4讲义 高考英语作文复习.docx》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《名著阅读与读后续写4讲义 高考英语作文复习.docx（6页珍藏版）》请在taowenge.com淘文阁网|工程机械CAD图纸|机械工程制图|CAD装配图下载|SolidWorks_CaTia_CAD_UG_PROE_设计图分享下载上搜索。
1、名著阅读与读后续写4今天的内容清单：1.摆渡人第二章的节选内容第二章主要讲述了主人公Dylan去和她多年没见面的父亲，在火车站的见闻， 在火车上一些相遇，回忆和同学通过发短信的方式谈论见父亲的喜悦和激动。这 一章节里面有很多心理描写值得学习。2 .重点词短语句型讲解3 .链接高考-改写新概念3 Lesson4 The double life of Alfred Bloggs下面请静心阅读名著摆渡人第二章的节选内容：He carried on, unfazed by her lack of enthusiasm. I mean, the prices theyre charging, youd
2、think they could be on time. But oh no. Outrageous. Ive been waiting here for twenty minutes, and you know when it comes in there wont be a seat to be had. Terrible service.Dylan looked around. Though a cross-section of society loitered under the various points of shelter, the platform was not so cr
3、owded that she could just melt away and disappear.The tweed man turned to look at her. Dont you think?”Forced into a direct response, Dylan tried to be as unclear as possible. Mmmm.”He seemed to take this as an invitation to continue the diatribe.“Where is the train, Dylan thought, desperate to be r
4、elieved of this social charade. And there it was, rolling in like a knight in rusting armour. One glimmer of hope in a day full of embarrassment and torment.She reached down for the rucksack at her feet. It was faded and showing signs of wear and tear, like most things she owned. As she took both ha
5、ndles in her hand and heaved the heavy bag off the ground and over her shoulder, a faint ripping sound made her grimace.Once in carriage, she glanced left and right, trying to identify the crazies drunks, weirdos, people who wanted to tell you your life stories. These people seemed drawn to her when
6、 she took public transport, and she was anxious to avoid them today when she had so many other things on her mind. Her surveillance picked out the free seats and it did not took long to work out why these remained open in the packed train. A mother with her screaming baby, its red face puckered up a
7、nd angry, sat at one end with a pram and several bags filled with everything a baby could possibly need around them. On the other side of the aisle, a few seats down, there was a double-seater opposite a pair of drunken teenagers in blue Rangers9 tops.The only other option was in the middle of the c
8、arriage, squashed in beside a large woman with an array of shopping bags, which she had arranged on the seat beside and across from her in a manner that made it clear that she did not welcome company. However, glaring or not, she was the most appealing option.Keeping her eyes closed, she thought abo
9、ut the coming weekend. Nerves and excitement fought for control of the butterflies in her stomach as she contemplated stepped off the train and searching out the man who was all but a stranger to her. Dylan remembered how her hand had shaken as shed dialled, hung up, dialled again, and then hung up.
10、 What if he didnt want to me? What if he had his own family now? What if, worst of all, he turned out to be a huge disappointment? A drunk or a criminal? Hed left when Dylan was five years old. And in the decade that had passed his face had become less than a memory.As soon as shed hung up, shed cri
11、nged. What an idiot! She couldnt believe that she hadnt planned a message. Shed sounded like a bumbling moron. Well, there was nothing to do now but wait. All afternoon she felt sick to her stomach. Biology and English passed in a blur. At home she numbly watch Ready, Steady, Cook and the news, not
12、even changing channel when the stupid soaps came on. What if he didnt call? Would he have listened to to the message yet? What if he never got the message? Dylan had imagined a female hand lifting the receiver and listening, then slowly pressing a painted red fingernail on the delete button. The ima
13、ge had made her look over the cordless phone beside her and chew her bottom lip, indecisively. Too scared to phone again, shed had no choice but to cross her fingers and stay within easy reach of her mobile.It took two days, but he did call. At four oclock, her phone vibrated in her pocket and began
14、 chirping out the piano chords of the Once upon a time theme tune. Her heart seemed to stop beating as she yanked the phone out of her pocket. Sliding her thumb up the glass screen, she pressed it to her ear.“Hello her voice sounded rough and strangled. She tried to clear her throat quietly.“Dylan?
15、Dylan, this is James Miller. I mean, your dad”Silence. Say something Dylan, she thought. Say something, Dad. The silence hung between them, but in the stress of the moment it sounded like streaming.“Listen. His voice broke through it, melt it away. Im so glad you called. Ive wanted to get in touch w
16、ith you for so long. Weve got a lot to catch up on.Dylan closed her eyes and smiled. She took a deep breath and started to speak.It had been so easy after that. Talking to him felt very comfortable, like shed known him for ever. Theyd talked until Dylans mobile ran out of charge. He wanted to know e
17、verything about her, her school, hobbies, who she hung out with, what movies were her favorites and what books she liked to read. In return, he told her about his life in Aberdeen, where he lived with Anna, his dog. No wife, no kids. No complications. And he wanted her to visit.That had been exactly
18、 on week ago. For seven days Dylan had been wrestling with her nerves and excitement about meeting him, and trying not to fight with Joan, who made no secret of the fact she disapproved of Dylan trying to connect with her father. Shed no one to talk to about it except snatched MSN conversations with
19、 Katie whenever her friends mother gave her five minutes alone.Dylan had hit the send button and waited. Her heart had been racing ridiculously. Shed wanted Katie to say something nice, wanted someone to tell her that she was doing the right thing. Theres been a pause that seemed to last for ever be
20、fore the little box had popped up: Katies writing.Dylan had laughed out loud, then clamped her hand over her mouth. Joan would go metal if she knew she was on the computer this late.Dylan held that very train ticket in her hand right now. She was supposed to text her dad to let him know she was on h
21、er way. Shed been impressed that he could text. Digging into her pocket, which was difficult being surrounded by the glaring womans bags., Dylan pulled out he phone. She opened up a new text and began to type. Dad, on train, not running too late at the mo. Cant wait to meet you. Just as she hit the
22、send button, the window beside her went black. Fabulous, she thought, a tunnel. The mobile - an expensive Christmas gift that Joan had paid for through several extra shifts at work scrolled on words across the screen: sending. It rolled through three times before the little phone emitted a double be
23、ep: Message failed.“DammitJ Dylan muttered. Irrationally she tried holding the phone up above her head, knowing that it was useless. They were still in the tunnel, no signal was going to get through that much rock. She was poised like that, arm in the air like a mini Statue of Liberty, when it happe
24、ned. Light vanished, sound exploded, and the world ended. 重点内容讲解：1 .Forced into a direct response, Dylan tried to be as unclear as possible. Mmmm.”被逼给出一个置接的回应， Dylan尽量保持 含糊不清。force:to make sb. do sth. they dont want to do.e.g: I was forced to take a taxi because the last bus had left. 最后一 班公共汽车已经开走，
25、所以我只好叫了一辆出租车。to use physical strength to move sb./sth. into a particular position.e.g: He tried to force a copy of his book into my hand. 他硬要把他 的一本书往我手里塞。The door had been forced open, fl被强行打开了。2 .take this as an invitation toinvitation: something that encourages sb. to do sth., usually sth. bade.g:
26、 Having the doors unlocked is an open invitation to burglars. 出 门不上锁无异于开门揖盗。3 . wear and tear: the damage to objects, furniture, property, etc. that is the result of normal usee.g: The carpet is designed to stand up to a lot of wear and tear. 这 种地毯设计得十分耐用。4 . Once in carriage, she glanced left and r
27、ight, trying to identify the crazies drunks, weirdos, people who wanted to tell you your life stories.这就是我们每次乘坐公交车或者地铁的时候，不想和别人 聊天时做的动作，值得背诵。5 . It did not took long to work out why these remained open in the packed train.很快就明白了为什么在这么拥挤的火车上这些座位 是没人坐的。It takes/took sb. some time to do sth.做 花费某人多长时间
28、remain在这里作为系动词使用，是一个非常使用的词。例如， remain standing/ seated/motionless 保持站着/做着/ 一动不动， remain the best friend/ manager仍是最好的朋友/经理，除此之外 remain 还可以做行为动词，例如：It remains to be seen whether you are right.你说的对不对还有待证实。 There remained one significant problem.还有一个人重要的问题。6 .Keeping her eyes closed, she thought about
29、the coming weekend.非谓语动词doing做状语在英语写作中的使用非常普 遍，也是让句子多样化的一种很实用的方法。7 .What if he didnt want to me? What if he had his own family now? What if, worst of all, he turned out to be a huge disappointment? A drunk or a criminal?这句中三个what if对主人翁的心理进行了 描写。在读后续写中要学会使用两个或者三个what if对人物的 心理进行描写。8 .His face had be
30、come less than a memory.他的脸 已经几乎没有了 记忆。其实就是已经记不得他长什么样了。这样的表达很地道， 要学会输入，下次直接使用。9 .Too scared to phone again, shed had no choice but to cross her fingers and stay within easy reach of her mobile. 形容词放在句首 做状语，这里推荐大家使用aware这个词，例如,Aware that there are many unexpected problems to solve, the general manage
31、r is ready to employ more top graduates from elite universities.10 .like shed known him for ever.虚拟语气在读后续写心理描写中 使用，来我们假设一个场景：一个小男孩不停父母的劝告，一定 要一个人去爬山，最后迷路被困在山里，后悔没听父母的话，希 望当时应该约一个朋友一起去。Jack insisted on backpacking on the mountain slops alone although his parents told him that it was dangerous. Thrill
32、ed and delighted, Jack started his own journey, expecting spectacular scenery and fresh air. However, he couldnt find the way back when he was about to go home. Digging into his pocket, Jack pulled out his phone, ready to call his family, but there was no signal. He was poised like that, arm in the
33、air like a mini Statue of Liberty. Trapped in the forest, he was filled with fear and regret, thinking if only I had listened to my parents warning, or if I had a friend to keep me company, I wouldnt have been frightened and helpless.”11 .Theres been a pause that seemed to last for ever before the l
34、ittle box had popped up: Katies writing. 表示在很着急的等待中， 一 分钟像是一个世纪一样的，that seemed to last for ever非常地道， 值得拥有，还有类似的表达，after what seemed like a century.链接高考：改编于新概念英语 3 Lesson4 The double life of Alfred Bloggs These days, people who do manual work often receive far more money than people who work in offic
35、es. People who work in offices are frequently referred to as white collar workers1 for the simple reason that they usually wear a collar and tie to go to work. Such is human nature, that a great many people are often willing to sacrifice higher pay for the privilege of becoming white collar workers.
36、 This can give rise to curious situations, as it did in the case of Alfred Bloggs who worked as a dustman for the EllesmereCorporation.When he got married, Alf was too embarrassed to say anything to his wife about his job. He simply told her that he worked for the Corporation.Every morning, he left
37、home dressed in a smart black suit.Alf s wife has never discovered that she married a dustman and she never will.运用前面学过的内容，对文章进行续写。改编文章：Every morning, he left home dressed in a smart black suit. Afraid to see his wife, Mary, in the eye, he just gave her a kiss and walked downstairs very quickly as i
38、f he had not wanted to see anyone. Actually, no sooner had he entered the company than he changed into his overalls and spent the next eight hours as a dustman. Keeping his eyes closed during breaks, he was always worried that his wife would find that he was a dustman, thinking” what if she quarrele
39、d with me for lying to her, what if she left and divorced me?Alffs wife has never discovered that she married a dustman and she never will. Before returning home at night, he took a shower and changed back into his suit, which his wife didnt know for over two years when he worked for the company. An
40、d so understanding was Alfs fellow dustmen that they kept his secret. But it was not a permanent solution to the problem. Determined to change his job, Alf made the best of every minute he could use to learn and finally get some practical certificates, enabling him to apply for a better and decent job. It didnt take long for him to get an office job. He thought it had a good prospect although he earned only half as much as he used to. (204 words)