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1、读后续写练习写作指导讲义试题原题第二节 读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文。Julia always enjoyed running through The Dark Walk towards the light at the end of it. It was a dark, damp tunnel （隧道）made of smooth branches. This year she had the extra joy of showing it to her small brother, Stephen, and terrify
2、ing him as well as herself.One day they found a hole on one side of the walk. Inside there was water, in which they perceived a panting trout （喘息的鱼尊鱼）.They were both so excited that they were no longer afraid of the darkness as they bent down and peered at the fish panting in his tiny prison, his si
3、lver stomach going up and down like an engine; otherwise he was motionless. Julia wondered what he ate and thought of his hunger. She found him a worm. He ignored the food, and just went on panting. Bending over him, she thought how he had been in there. All the winter, in the dark tunnel, all day,
4、all night, floating around alone.Nobody knew how the fish got there. Her mother suggested that a bird had carried the egg. Her father thought that in the winter a small stream might have carried it down there as a baby, and it has been safe until summer came and the water began to dry up.Before they
5、 went to bed, Stephen asked his mummy the whole story of the trout, not really interested in the actual trout, but in the story which his mum began to make up for him, and Julia, in her bed, presented her back to them and read her book. But she kept one ear cocked. nAnd so, in the end, this naughty
6、fish got bigger and bigger, and the water got smaller and smaller./1Passionately, she turned around and cried, “Mummy, dont make it a horrible old moral story. Her mom even brought in a fairy （仙子），who had made it rain and filled the hole, so that the trout could float away down to the river below. S
7、taring at the moon she knew there was no such thing as a fairy and that trout, down in the tunnel, was panting for his life.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。She sat up in the silent night and Stephan was sound asleep.ulia poured the trout out of the pot into the river.写作分析1 .人物（角色）：Julia: Juli
8、a always enjoyed running through The Dark Walk towards the light at the end of it.the trout: panting in a hole on one side of the walkStephen: Julias small brothermother & father:对trout来源的猜想；妈妈给Julia的弟弟编了个故事2 .主题：人与自然（自我）Julia和弟弟经常跑步穿越the Dark Walk隧道。有一天，他们发现在隧道内的 一个小水坑里有一条挣扎的鱼尊鱼，这让善良的Julia夜不能寐。于是，J
9、ulia就3 .续写情节安排：第一段：She sat up in the silent night and Stephan was sound asleep.（与开头句衔接）Julia心里五味杂陈，不知道该怎么办最终做出决定：准备救鳗鱼一命（与下文开头句衔接）Julia回到The Dark Walk,把鱼装进pot,然后带到附 近的河边第二段：Julia poured the trout out of the pot into the river.（与开头句衔接）开始the trout的身影在月光的照射下若隐若现，不久就消 失在河里复杂的思绪再次涌上Julia的心头Julia对这件事情的认识（
10、于自然，于自我）下水作文She sat up in the silent night and Stephan was sound asleep. Mixed feelings crowded in and the image of the panting trout made her wide awake. Driven by kindness and responsibility, Julia eventually made a decision that she should do something immediately. Pot in hand, she left the house
11、 quietly. Bearing the determination of getting the suffering trout out of trouble, Julia ran all the way to the Dark Walk. What comforted her was that the trout was still alive. A sense of delight swept over her. She bent down, cupped him and put him into the pot gently. A short conversation with th
12、e lovely trout, Julia brought him to the river nearby with great care. （105 words）Julia poured the trout out of the pot into the river. What made her delighted was that the trout began to swim merrily, his silver stomach flashing against the moonlight. It was not long before he was out of sight in t
13、he running river. She felt a sense of relief that the trout was finally out of his tiny prison and went back where he belonged. Julia was proud that she was just the fairy in her mothers story, who could give a timely hand to the trout. Nothing was better than this! Thinking about this, Julia giggle
14、d to herself. With great satisfaction, she went back home though dawn was breaking. All was worth it! (104 words)参考范文She sat up in the silent night and Stephan was sound asleep. She tiptoed out, quietly lifted a large pot of water and ran to the opening of the tunnel. Inside was complete darkness! S
15、cared but determined, she raced in, knelt down by the hole, and put her hand into it. The trout lashed and they were both mad with fright. Still she managed to shove him into the pot and raced out of the tunnel and down the steep paths. All the way his tail was lashing against the pot. Finally, she
16、reached the riverbank. (85 words)ulia poured the trout out of the pot into the river. For the first seconds the somewhat dizzy creature was still visible in the water. Then all she saw was the faint light of the moon in the silent-flowing river. In relief, she trotted back home, dropped down the pot
17、, and flew through the air like a bird into bed. Soon she fell asleep, satisfied and peaceful. The next morning Stephen rushed to her, shouting that he was gone and asking where and how”. Lifting her nose in the air, she proudly laughed, y/A fairy, I suppose?71 (87 words)试题题源The TroutSean OFaolainOn
18、e of the first places Julia always ran to when they arrived in G was The Dark Walk. It is a laurel walk, very old, almost gone wild, a lofty midnight tunnel of smooth, sinewy branches. Underfoot the tough brown leaves are never dry enough to crackle: there is always a suggestion of damp and cool tri
19、ckle.She raced right into it. For the first few yards she always had the memory of the sun behind her, then she felt the dusk closing swiftly down on her so that she screamed with pleasure and raced on to reach the light at the far end; and it was always just a little too long in coming so that she
20、emerged gasping, clasping her hands, laughing, drinking in the sun. When she was filled with the heat and glare she would turn and consider the ordeal again.This year she had the extra joy of showing it to her small brother, and of terrifying him as well as herself And for him the fear lasted longer
21、 because his legs were so short and she had gone out at the far end while he was still screaming and racing.When they had done this many times they came back to the house to tell everybody that they had done it. He boasted. She mocked. They squabbled.Cry baby!You were afraid yourself, so there!HI wo
22、nt take you anymore.Youre a big pig.”I hate you.Tears were threatening, so somebody said, Did you see the well?1 She opened her eyes at that and held up her long lovely neck suspiciously and decided to be incredulous. She was twelve and at that age little girls are beginning to suspect most stories:
23、 they have already found out too many, from Santa Claus to the stork. How could there be a well! In The Dark Walk? That she had visited year after year? Haughtily she said, Nonsense.1But she went back, pretending to be going somewhere else, and she found a hole scooped in the rock at the side of the
24、 walk, choked with damp leaves, so shrouded by ferns that she uncovered it only after much searching. At the back of this little cavern there was about a quart of water. In the water she suddenly perceived a panting trout. She rushed for Stephen and dragged him to see, and they were both so excited
25、that they were no longer afraid of the darkness as they hunched down and peered in at the fish panting in his tiny prison, his silver stomach going up and down like an engine.Nobody knew how the trout got there. Even old Martin in the kitchen garden laughed and refused to believe that it was there,
26、or pretended not to believe, until she forced him to come down and see. Kneeling and pushing back his tattered old cap he peered in.Be cripes, youre right. How the devil in hell did that fella get there?She stared at him suspiciously.You knew? she accused; but he said, The devil a know,n and reached
27、 down to lift it out.Convinced, she hauled him back. If she had found it, then it was her trout.Her mother suggested that a bird had carried the spawn. Her father thought that in the winter a small streamlet might have carried it down there as a baby, and it had been safe until the summer came and t
28、he water began to dry up. She said, I see, and went back to look again and consider the matter in private. Her brother remained behind, wanting to hear the whole story of the trout, not really interested in the actual trout but much interested in the story which his mummy began to make up for him on
29、 the lines of, S。one day Daddy Trout and Mammy Trout.” When he retailed it to her she said, Pooh.It troubled her that the trout was always in the same position; he had no room to turn; all the time the silver belly went up and down; otherwise he was motionless. She wondered what he ate, and in betwe
30、en visits to Joey Pony and the boat, and a bathe to get cool, she thought of his hunger. She brought him down bits of dough; once she brought him a worm. He ignored the food. He just went on panting. Hunched over him she thought how all the winter, while she was at school, he had been in there. All
31、the winter, in The Dark Walk, all day, all night, floating around alone. She drew the leaf of her hat down around her ears and chin and stared. She was still thinking of it as she lay in bed.It was late June, the longest days of the year. The sun had sat still for a week, burning up the world. Altho
32、ugh it was after ten oclock it was still bright and still hot. She lay on her back under a single sheet, with her long legs spread, trying to keep cool. She could see the D of the moon through the fir tree-they slept on the ground floor. Before they went to bed her mummy had told Stephen the story o
33、f the trout again, and she, in her bed, had resolutely presented her back to them and read her book. But she had kept one ear cocked.And so, in the end, this naughty fish who would not stay at home got bigger and bigger and bigger, and the water got smaller and smallerPassionately she had whirled an
34、d cried, Mummy, dont make it a horrible old moral story! Her mummy had brought in a fairy godmother then, who sent lots of rain, and filled the well, and a stream poured out and the trout floated away down to the river below. Staring at the moon she knew that there are no such things as fairy godmot
35、hers and that the trout, down in The Dark Walk, was panting like an engine. She heard somebody unwind a fishing reel.Would the beasts fish him out!She sat up. Stephen was a hot lump of sleep, lazy thing. The Dark Walk would be full of little scraps of moon. She leaped up and looked out the window, a
36、nd somehow it was not so lightsome now that she saw the dim mountains faraway and the black firs against the breathing land and heard a dog say bark-bark. Quietly she lifted the ewer of water and climbed out the window and scuttled along the cool but cruel gravel down to the maw of the tunnel. Her p
37、ajamas were very short so that when she splashed water it wet her ankles. She peered into the tunnel. Something alive rustled inside there. She raced in, and up and down she raced, and flurried, and cried aloud, Oh, gosh, I cant find it, and then at last she did. Kneeling down in the damp she put he
38、r hand into the slimy hole. When the body lashed they were both mad with fright. But she gripped him and shoved him into the ewer and raced, with her teeth ground, out to the other end of the tunnel and down the steep paths to the rivers edge.All the time she could feel him lashing his tail against
39、the side of the ewer. She was afraid he would jump right out. The gravel cut into her soles until she came to the cool ooze of the rivers bank where the moon mice on the water crept into her feet. She poured out, watching until he plopped. For a second he was visible in the water. She hoped he was n
40、ot dizzy. Then all she saw was the glimmer of the moon in the silent flowing river, the dark firs, the dim mountains, and the radiant pointed face laughing down at her out of the empty sky.She scuttled up the hill, in the window, plonked down the ewer, and flew through the air like a bird into bed.
41、The dog said bark-bark. She heard the fishing reel whirring. She hugged herself and giggled. Like a river of joy her holiday spread before her.In the morning Stephen rushed to her, shouting that he was gone, and asking where and how. Lifting her nose in the air she said superciliously,Fairy godmother, I suppose? and strolled away patting the palms of her hands.