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1、Writing1(2018 课标全国)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1.学校的体育场馆;2.主要的运动项目;3.你喜欢的项目。注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。五年高考A组 统一命题课标卷题组答案 写作提示1.本文为书信形式的说明文;以第一人称的口吻介绍学校的体育场馆和主要的运动项目;时态以一般现在时为主。2.可采用三段式结构。第一段:介绍背景,引出写作目的;第二段:具体介绍试题给出的三个要点,其中第二个要点可采取列举的方式,第三个要点除了写自己喜欢的体育运动,还要阐述喜欢这项体育运动的原因;第三段:总结
2、并发出邀请。Onepossibleversion:DearPeter,Iamexceedinglydelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmaygiveyouaroughsketch.Tobeginwith,afabulousnewstadiumhasbeenbuilt,whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awide
3、rangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichping-pongandfootball,aswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.Asforme,Imintoxicatedwithbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours,LiHua精彩语句1.精美词汇exceedin
4、gly adv.非常,极其givesb.aroughsketch 向某人做简单的陈述enjoygreatpopularity 受到了热烈欢迎2.出彩结构Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichping-pongandfootball,aswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.(with 的复合结构作状语,ofwhich 引导定语从句)Writing2(2018 课标全国)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry 将去中国朋友家做客,
5、发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示1.本文是回复一封邮件,主要人称为第二人称,写作主体时态为一般现在时。2.文章要点:到达时间;合适的礼物;餐桌礼仪。Onepossibleversion:DearTerry,Iamdelightedwhenreceivingyourletter,askingwhatcustomsyoushouldpayattentiontowhenvisitingafriend.Herearemytipsforyou.Firstofall,b
6、earinmindthatyouhadbetterarrivepunctuallyorsometimeearlierthantheap-pointedtime,whichisofgreatsignificancetoshowyourpoliteness.Additionally,toberespectful,youmightaswellbringanappropriategift,likesomefruits.Mostimportantly,it svitalthatyoushouldmindyourtablemanners.Forinstance,neverspeakwithyourmout
7、hfulloffood,whichmaybesimilartoyourowncustom.Inbrief,doastheChinesedowheninChina.Idohopeyouwillhavegreatfunatyourfriend shome.Yourssincerely,LiHua精彩语句1.精美词汇punctually adv.准时地beofgreatsignificance 很重要appropriate adj.合适的2.出彩结构Firstofall,bearinmindthatyouhadbetterarrivepunctuallyorsometimeearlierthanth
8、eappointedtime,whichisofgreatsignificancetoshowyourpoliteness.(that 引导宾语从句,which 引导非限制性定语从句)Writing3(2018 课标全国)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片 Gr owing T o-gether,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示本文为提纲式作文,属于应用文中的书面通知。可采用三段三步写作法写作。第一步审题立意,布局谋篇“启”:审题确定
9、主题、体裁、主要人称和主体时态。主题:在学校宣传栏“英语天地”发布邀请大家观看短片的书面通知;体裁:书面通知;人称和时态:以第一、二人称为主要人称,以一般现在时或一般将来时为主体时态。第二步确定、提炼和理顺要点,顺势承上启下,巧妙转折过渡 巧“承”妙“转”,即注意段落之间、句子之间的衔接与过渡。结合要点文章可分三段来写。第一段:介绍短片内容 学校的发展;第二段:说明放映的时间和地点;第三段:表达愿望 希望大家对短片提意见。第三步紧扣主题,遣词造句“合”:照应开头和主题的完美的结尾,是画龙点睛之笔。紧扣主题组词成句,做到语言得体、准确无误,避免重复;遣词造句时,注意高级词汇、短语或句式的使用。O
10、nepossibleversion:NoticeDearschoolmates,Itisagreathonortobeonbehalfofourschooltoinformyouthatwe llinviteyoutoseeanEng-lishshortfilmnamed Gr owing T ogether,whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourschool.Wehavearrangedthattheshortfilmwillbeonshowfrom16:00to17:00atourschooltheaterto-morrow.Don tmissthechanceof
11、takingpartinthiscollectiveactivity.Idohopeyoucangiveussomevaluablesuggestionsabouttheshortfilm.Pleasegiveyourfeed-backintimeandcontactusatyourconvenience.Students Union精彩语句1.精美词汇onbehalfof 代表takepartin 参加;参与feedback n.反馈atone sconvenience在某人方便的时候2.出彩结构Itisagreathonortobeonbehalfofourschooltoinformyo
12、uthatwe llinviteyoutoseeanEnglishshortfilmnamed Gr owing T ogether,whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourschool.(that 引导宾语从句;which 引导非限制性定语从句)Writing4(2017 课标全国)假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric 写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:1.球队活动;2.报名方式及截止日期。注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示1.本文为提纲类作文。人称应以第一、二人称为主,时态以一般现在时、一般
13、将来时为主。2.写作要点:导入话题:鉴于Eric 对乒乓球运动的兴趣,特告知他校乒乓球队招收新队员的消息;介绍球队活动,可从日常训练安排以及比赛活动入手;告知Eric 报名方式,提醒他务必在截止日期前完成报名。Onepossibleversion:DearEric,I mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinourschooltabletennisteam.Ihavebeentoldthatourschoolteamisrecruitingnewmembers.Knowingthatyouarekeenonplayingtabletennis,Iwonderifyou dliketo
14、join.Teammembersneedtoreceivetrainingafterschooleverydayandareoftenofferedopportunitiestowatchtabletenniscompetitions,whichbenefitmemost.Whatdoyouthinkofit?Ifyouarein-terestedinit,youcanvisittheschoolwebsitetosignup.Theclosingdateis15thJune.Ihopetomeetyouintheschoolteam.Yours,LiHua精彩语句1.精美词汇recruit
15、v.吸收;招募bekeenon 酷爱,对 着迷2.出彩结构Knowingthatyouare.Iwonderif.join.(现在分词短语中that 引导宾语从句;won-der 后的if 引导宾语从句)Writing5(2017 课标全国)假定你是李华,正在教你的英国朋友Leslie 学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.内容:学习唐诗;3.课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示1.本文为电子邮件,属于书信类。人称为第一人称,写作时态以一般将来时为主体时态。2.内容要点:上课的时间和地点;
16、上课的内容:学习唐诗;课前准备:简要了解唐朝的历史。Onepossibleversion:DearLeslie,Iamwritingtoinformyouofourcoursescheduleofournextclass,whichisaboutpoetryoftheTangdynasty.WewillhaveitthisFriday,inClassroom602,Building6.Inordertolearnitbetter,youneedtodothefollowingthingsbeforethenextclass.Atfirst,pleasereadsomematerialsabou
17、tpoetryoftheTangdynasty,whichplaysanextremelysignificantroleinourliterature.Youcanfindsomeoriginalpoemsoffamouspoets,suchasLiBaiandDuFu.Besides,knowingthehistoryoftheTangdynastywillbeofgreatbenefitforyoutounderstandthebackgroundofthepoems.YouaresodiligentandIamgladtoteachyou.Isincerelylookforwardtoo
18、urnextclassandyourreply.Yours,LiHua精彩语句1.精美词汇extremely adv.极其playarolein 在 起作用2.出彩结构Atfirst,pleasereadsomematerialsaboutpoetryoftheTangDynasty,whichplaysanextremelysignificantroleinourliterature.(which 引导非限制性定语从句)Writing6(2017 课标全国)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry 一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;
19、2.展览内容。注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为书信。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,以一般现在时和一般将来时为主体时态。2.文章要点:1)展览时间、地点;2)展览内容:中国传统剪纸艺术的历史和作品。Onepossibleversion:DearHenry,I mLiHua,oneofyourstudents.I mwritingtoinviteyoutovisitthepaper-cuttingexhibition.Paper-cuttingisoneofChinesetraditionsandI msureyouwill
20、likeit.TheexhibitionwillbeheldinthelocalmuseumnextSaturday.SomefamousChineseartistswillperformonthatday.Meanwhile,somebeautifulpaper-cuttingworks,collectedfromalloverthecountry,willbeexhibitedthere.Itwillbeafeast.Ifyoulike,youcanalsojoininpaper-cutting.I msureitwillbeanunforgettableexperienceforyou.
21、I mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua精彩语句1.精美词汇exhibition n.展览unforgettable adj.难忘的2.出彩结构Meanwhile,somebeautifulpaper-cuttingworks,collectedfromalloverthecountry,willbeexhib-itedthere.(过去分词短语作定语)Ifyoulike,youcanalsojoininpaper-cutting.(if 引导条件状语从句)Writing7(2016 课标全国)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob 约好一起去书店,
22、因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文 电子邮件。主要人称为第一人称,时态主要用一般现在时。2.文章要点为告诉对方你不能赴约的原因并表示歉意和另约时间,虽然题干中已经给出要点,但重在适当地发挥。Onepossibleversion:DearBob,I msorrytosaythatIcannotgotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.IhavejustfoundthatIhavetoattendan
23、importantclassmeetingthatafternoon.Ihopethechangewillnotcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.ShallwegoonSaturdaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwe llhavemoretimetoreadandselectbooks.Ifit sconvenientforyou,let smeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnex
24、tweek.Yours,LiHua精彩语句1.available adj.有空的2.causesb.toomuchtrouble 给某人造成太多的麻烦3.Ifit sconvenientforyou,let smeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.(避免了出现汉式英语:Ifyouareconvenient)Writing8(2016 课标全国)假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photographyclub)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter 写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:1.主题:环境保护;2.展览时间;3.投稿邮箱:。注意:1.词数100 左右;2
25、.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示1.本文属于应用文,按照要求写一封书信,应使用第一人称。基本时态用一般现在时。2.本文要点:1)主题:环境保护;2)展览时间;3)投稿邮箱。Onepossibleversion:DearPeter,OurschoolphotographyclubisgoingtoholdanInternationalHighSchoolStudentPhotographyShow.Thethemeoftheshowisenvironmentalprotection.ItwillstartfromJune15thandlastforthreeweeks.Anyst
26、udentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate.Iknowyoutakegoodpic-turesandyou vealwayswantedtodosomethingforenvironmentalprotection.Irememberyoushowedmesomephotosonthatthemethelasttimeyouvisitedourschool.Thisissurelyagoodchanceformorepeopletoseethem.Ifyouwanttojoin,youcansendyourphotostointlphoto-.Hope
27、tohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHuaWriting9(2016 课标全国)假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教MsJenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示1.本文为半开放式作文,体裁为书信。人称为第一人称,时态主要用一般现在时。2.文章要点包括告诉对方你的情况(想去一家外资公司兼职)和要求(帮助修改申请书和个人简历)。Onepossibleversion:DearMsJenkins,I moneofyourstud
28、ents,LiHuafromClassTwo.I mwritingtoaskforyourhelp.ThissummerIintendtotakeupapart-timejobinaforeigncompany,throughwhichIwouldliketobroadenmyhorizons,gainsomeworkingexperienceandmeetnewfriends.MyapplicationandresumehavebeenpreparedandIsincerelyhopeyoucanhelpmepolishthem.Firstly,I mwonder-ingifyoucanhe
29、lpaddsomecontents.Besides,iftherearesomemistakesinthem,Ihopeyoucanhelpcorrectthem.Lastly,Iattachsomematerialswhoseformathadbetterbechangedandhopeyoucanhelp.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakethetroubletodosomuchforme.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourstruly,LiHuaWriting10(2015 课标全国)假定你是李华,计划和同学去敬老院(nu
30、rsinghome)陪老人们过重阳节(theDoubleNinthFesti-val)。请给外教露西写封邮件,邀她一同前往,内容包括:1.出发及返回时间;2.活动:包饺子、表演节目等。注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结语已为你写好。Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua答案 写作提示1.本文为应用文 电子邮件的写作,属于提纲类作文。在写作时应使用第一人称,时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。2.内容要点:(1)出发及返回时间;(2)在敬老院的活动:包饺子、表演节目等。Onepossibleversion:DearLucy,I
31、 dliketoinviteyoutojoinusforavisittothenearbynursinghomenextSaturdayfortheDoubleNinthFestival.Itisthedayfortheelderlyinourculture.We llgoandmakedumplingsandcakeswiththeelderlypeoplethere.We llalsospendsomefuntimetogethersinging,dancingandplayinggames,whichwehopewillmakethemhappy.Weshouldbebackaround
32、4o clockintheafter-noon.Ifyouareabletocomewithus,pleaseletusknowandwe llwaitforyouattheschoolgateat9inthemorning.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHuaWriting11(2015 课标全国)假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿,要点如下:1.栏目介绍;2.稿件内容;3.稿件长度:约400 词;4.交稿日期:6 月28 日前。注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使
33、行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。DearPeter,I dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool sEnglishnewspaper.答案 写作提示本文为书信体提纲式作文。写作时以一般现在时为基本时态,以第一人称为主体人称;注意要点要齐全,包括栏目介绍、稿件内容、稿件长度和交稿日期;写作时注意恰当地使用衔接词和过渡词,以使文章行文连贯、流畅,这一点是高考英语高分作文所必须具备的要素。Onepossibleversion:DearPeter,I dliketoaskyoutowriteanarticleforourschool sEnglishnewsp
34、aper.The“ForeignCultures”sectioninournewspaperisverypopularamongusstudents.Itcarriesar-ticleswrittenbyforeignfriendsabouttheculturesoftheirhomecountries.WouldyoupleasewritesomethingaboutthecultureinyourpartoftheUnitedStates?AndwewouldespeciallywelcomearticlesabouthowAmericansspendtheirholidaysandfes
35、tivals,andthelifeofAmericanhighschoolstudents.Youcanwriteanythingrelevantsolongasit sinterestingandinformative.400wordswouldbefine.CouldwehaveyourarticlebeforeJune28?I mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHuaWriting12(2014 课标全国)假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。注意:1.词数
36、100 左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.参考词汇:住宿accommodationDearSir/Madam,Yoursfaithfully,LiHua答案 写作提示1.本文属于图表类作文,在写作时要用第一人称,基本时态以现在时为主。2.内容要点:说明写信的目的;开课时间和每周上课时间;班级大小;收费情况;住宿类型。3.参考词汇:住宿accommodation 宿舍dormitoryOnepossibleversion:DearSir/Madam,IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringth
37、evacation.I veseenyourad,andI dliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourse.First,whenwillthecoursestartandhowmanyclasshoursarethereperweek?Besides,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.I dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.Wouldtherebehostfam
38、ilyoruniversitydormito-ry?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully,LiHuaWriting13(2014 课标全国)一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活。注意:1.词数100 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture.答案 写作提示1.本文为提纲式作文,注意不要遗漏内容要点,注意上下文的连贯性。2.人称需用第一人称,时态以
39、一般将来时为主。3.注意结尾要有总结性语句。Onepossibleversion:Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture.Ithinkmylifewillbeverydifferentintenyears.Iwillbetwenty-eightyearsoldbythen.Iwillhavemyownfamily,probablywithalovelychild.IhopeI llworkinacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner.I llenjoymyworkandgeta-longwellwithmycolle
40、agues.I lldoagoodjobinwhateverIdo.Inmyfreetime,I llcontinuetotakeregularexercise,suchasswimming,runningandvariousballgames.Onmyholidays,I lltravelaroundtheworld.Inaword,mylifewillbemuchricherandmorecolorful.B组 自主命题省（区、市）卷题组Writing1(2018 浙江)假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:1.口语能力;2.相关经验;3.应聘
41、目的。注意:1.词数80 左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案 写作提示1.本文是一封求职信,以第一人称为主,时态主要用一般现在时。2.内容要点:(1)口语能力;(2)相关经验;(3)此次应聘的目的。Onepossibleversion:DearSir/Madam,Onseeingyournoticeonthebulletinboard,Ifeelexcitedtowritethisletterfortheposition.OwingtostudyingintheEnglishdepartment,IcantalkinEnglishfluently.Tobehonest,Ihavej
42、ustwonfirstprizeintheSpokenEnglishCompetition,sothereisnodoubtthatthereisnotanyproblemformetocommunicatewithforeigners.What smore,Ihaveeverservedasareceptionistinourschool s70thanniversarycelebration,makingmyselfmoreconfident.Inordertopractisemyspeakingskillsandgetmoreexperience,I meagertobetakenonf
43、orthisjob.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua精彩语句1.精美词汇owingto 因为fluently adv.流利地tobehonest 老实说communicate v.沟通;交流what smore 而且confident adj.有信心的beeagertodosth.渴望做某事lookfor-wardtosth.期盼某事2.出彩结构Onseeingyournoticeonthebulletinboard,Ifeelexcitedtowritethisletterfortheposition.(ondoingst
44、h.表示“一做某事”).thereisnodoubtthatthereisnotanyproblemformetocommunicatewithforeigners.(Thereisnodoubtthat.句式)What smore,Ihaveeverservedasareceptionistinourschool s70thanniversarycelebration,makingmyselfmoreconfident.(making.为非谓语动词短语作状语,表示自然而然的结果)Writing2(2018 天津)61.假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris 就读于天
45、津某国际学校,他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7 月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。(1)比赛的时间、地点;(2)邀请他的原因;(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:世界青少年机器人技能竞赛theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionDearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.I mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
46、Yours,LiJin答案 写作提示1.本文是一封电子邮件,主要人称为第一人称和第二人称,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。2.文章要点:说明写邮件的目的;介绍比赛的时间和地点;邀请他的原因;告知Chris 训练计划将发送到他的邮箱并请他提出自己的建议。Onepossibleversion:DearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionisscheduledtobeheldattheendofJulyinTianjin.I mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinourteamtoprepa
47、reforit.AsfarasIknow,youoncewonaprizeinaroboticscompetition.Therefore,Ithinknotonlywillitbeagoldenopportunityforyoutoshowyourgreattalent,butalsoyoucanofferusguidance,whichisofgreatsignificanceforustoperformwellinthecomingcompetition.Ourtrainingplanistobesenttoyoure-mailbox.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucou
48、ldgiveusyourpersonaladviceaf-terreadingit.I mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin精彩语句1.精美词汇schedule v.安排;计划agoldenopportunity 良机significance n.重要性2.出彩结构Therefore,Ithinknotonlywillitbeagoldenopportunityforyoutoshowyourgreattalent,butalsoyoucanofferusguidance,whichisofgreatsignificanceforustoperformw
49、ellinthecomingcompetition.(倒装句+非限制性定语从句)Writing3(2018 北京,第一节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.推荐他上哪所大学;3.建议他做哪些准备工作。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJim,Yours,LiHua答案 写作提示1.仔细审题,注意交际用语;2.要点齐全,合理添加细节;3.注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。Onepossibleversion:DearJim,
50、I mhappytohearfromyou.WelcometoBeijingforyourstudy!SinceyouhavelongbeeninterestedinChineseculture,IthinkBeijingLanguageandCultureUni-versityisanidealplaceforyou.Theuniversityisknownforitslanguageandculturecoursesin-tendedforinternationalstudents.Ibelieveyouwillhavearewardingexperiencethere.Tobefrank