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1、读后续写材料It took place in a teachers family. One day, Ban was playing basketball in the living room after school when he accidentally threw a ball at a vase sitting on the shelf. The vase dropped to the floor and a large piece broke off.What made them more upset was that the vast was not a common decor
2、ation, but an antique, which was handed down through generations from the 18th century. It was also his mothers favorite possession. To cover his terrible action, the terrified boy glued the pieces hastily/hurriedly and put the vase back to its place.As the mother herself dusted the vase every day,
3、she naturally noticed the cracks(裂 纹)that evening. To her surprise5the repair work was actually very good. At the dinner time, she asked her boy if he broke the vase.Fearing punishment, the suddenly inspired boy said that a neighbors cat jumped in from the window and he couldnt drive it away no matt
4、er how hard he tried. It raced around the living room. And finally knocked the vase off its shelf. His mother was quite clear that son was lying for all the windows were closedbefore she left for work each morning and opened after she returned.However, in the face of her sons nervous eyes and the su
5、spicious looks of the other family members, Bens mother remained calm. She realized she shouldn*t just simply blame and punish her son for lying. She came up with another idea.Before going to bed, the boy found a note from his mother in his room, asking him to go to her study at once. The boy though
6、t he would now be punished, but as he had already lied, he was determined to deny everything to the end, no matter how angry his mom became.In the study, calmly bathed in the light, his mothers face showed no sign of anger. On seeing her son push open the door and cautiously enter, she took a chocol
7、ate box out of a drawer and gave him one.Paral: The mother said, uThis chocolate is a reward for your imagination: a window-opening cat.”Para2: Now with some chocolates in hand, the boys bad attitude disappeared.Preparation Who: Where: What: When: Theme:写作构思段一主要写什么?段一:妈妈说,“这块巧克力是对你的想象力的奖励:一只会开窗的猫。”(
8、根据段二所给的首句,本段主要写男孩的坏态度和母亲给男孩巧克力的过程。)细节:L男孩尴尬,生气,并否认;2 .母亲给小孩第二颗巧克力。3 .男孩的态度;4 .母亲给小孩第三颗巧克力。段二主要写什么?段二:手上拿着一些巧克力,男孩的坏态度消失了。(坏态度消失了,说明本段要写男孩认错,和感悟(围绕文章的主题“诚实。)细节:1 .男孩开始后悔并内疚;2 .认错;3 .母亲感欣慰;4 .明白的大道理。SAMPLEParal: The mother said, “This chocolate is a reward for your imagination a window-opening cat. Ho
9、wever, Ben felt so ashamed that his face turned red. But he still denied what he had done, stamping in anger. His mother ignored his words, and handed him another chocolate to him, saying with a smile, uThis chocolate is for your good repair work/5 A sense of fright and uneasiness welled up inside h
10、im. But he yelled, Believe me. It was the cat that broke the vase. Not me! Mom interrupted him, delivered him the third chocolate and said patiently, This chocolate is a reward for persistence.5,Para2: Now with some chocolates in hand, the boys bad attitude disappeared. Overwhelmed by a sense of emb
11、arrassment and guilt, he didn*t look at his mother in her eyes because his mom gave him some chocolates instead of blaming him. After realizing his mistake, he lowered his head, admitted his mistake for lying, and sincerely apologized to his mother, uSorry, Mum. Ifs my faulf. Relieved and satisfied, his mother gave the rest of chocolates to him, saying, uYou deserve the chocolates I gave you. Hearing that, Ban was wild with joy. Not until then did he realize nothing is more important than honesty.