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1、真题再现During this past year, Ive had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadnt bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said N
2、EED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for
3、the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire i
4、ron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $2
5、0 bill in the mans hand, but he wouldnt take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go h
6、ome.结构分析我们来分析一下该文章，先从结构上说看，第一段讲了主人车子路上遇到困难求助，有一家子墨西哥人经过。第二段和第三段都是关于具体的帮忙修车的细节，第四段是关于我对这家人的感谢和大家的一些交流的情况。因为不像普通的阅读题要关注指定细节，作为读后续写的文章，我们主要是在350词篇幅中寻觅有助于下一步建构合理情节的。从第一段里面，我们可挖掘主人公的过往经历，他因为过往的经历对人性是失去了希望。第二三段可以一起来考察，因为都是修车的一些细节动作，比较专业，一般不会要求体现在后续的写作当中，但从中我们应该可以获得出这样的信息：小女孩的父母都非常的热心和友善，可为一位素味平生的路人尽心尽力地去做
7、事。第四段是比较重要的，因为其一它已经很接近下面段首句，另外它里面有一些信息点是对之后的写作有非常大甚至是决定性的提示作用。此处的20元就是非常关键的因素，很多考生的作文中反映来看，没有回应到这20元的答卷都是视为不完美的。而女孩爸妈在水果农场工作也可以为下面的构思提供一些情节延伸思路。把文章做一番梳理之后，我们基本可以得出文章的价值主题是关于乐助和友善。首句分析第一段：When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id hadlunch.第一段段首的lunch非常的突然，也就是下一段当中的一定要解决的问题，至于是如何解决，方法可以有多个
8、选择，但应该是基本符合一般情理和具体文中角色的特点。第二段：After they left, I got into my Jeep and openedthe paper bag.第二段中的paper bag也是一个横生而来的事物，前文中没有提到，说明这个事物应该在第一段给予充分说明。另外第二段双方已经分开，所以第一段的结尾处比较适合的是要提及离开的场景。那我们可以把里面的信息用以下的方式来归纳一下。明线：I was sick of the way most people hadnt bothered to help.暗线：预示结果会对人性的价值重构明线：put a 20 dallors bi
9、ll暗线：无私乐助精神的反射明线：Mexico farm暗线：为之后可能相遇打伏笔明线：had lunch暗线：乐助和友善的信号明线：paper bag暗线：情节焦点（主题正增强）范文分享现在就可着手写作，从考场的考生作文上看第一段的lunch问题的解决可以有两个途径，一是找附近的餐馆就餐，另外就是小女孩家人有多余的食物分享。先分别给予范文。第一段：找饭馆When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch.I shrugged my shoulder, responding that I had nothing. Th
10、e family dragged me to a nearby restaurant, where we talked merrily like good old friends, laughing and sharing interesting stories with each other to our hearts content. After the meal, they had to take leave. I sincerely expressed my appreciation for their timely assistance while they showed me ho
11、spitality by inviting me to their farm to for a visit. The girl handed me a paper bag, saying that it contained some post cards of the fruit farm which also had detailed address. Filled with gratitude, I gave her a light hug and bid farewell to the family.第一段：分享食物When I was about to say goodbye, the
12、 girl asked if Id had lunch.I shrugged my shoulder, responding that I had nothing for a whole day. The girl hurried back to the truck and in no time returned with a paper bag. She handed it to me with a beaming face, “you must be hungry, take it.” Filled with appreciation, I took the bag. the girls
13、parents walked up to me and took their leave. I could not express my thanks to them in full for their kindness. They left their address and welcomed me to pay a visit to their fruit farm some day. Once again, we exchanged loving words and bid farewell to each other.相比之下，分享食物的情节更为合理一些，比较符合墨西哥一家人的身份，毕
14、竟在农场工作的话，经济也不会太宽裕。所以在临场得分方面第一种的处理会拿不到最高的分数.第二段：场地变换After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag.I was surprisedthat besides some toast and cookies, the 20-dollars bill were inside. It seemed that they hated to refuse my money in the face, so they thought of another way to return it t
15、o me. Deeply touched by their acts, I had a desire to pay them a visit. Some time later, I met the family in their farm, which was of a vast land of fruit trees. I insisted that they should take the money. The Daddy smiled to me, saying that it was their honor to have a chance to help a stranger and
16、 made such a good friend. Hearing that, I found myself bathed in the good of human nature.第二段：原地感悟After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag.Inside was a hamburger, together with some cookies and an apple. Simple though the food was, it seemed like a feast to a person starving at t
17、his point. No sooner had I picked up the burger than I spotted the 20-dollar bill, on which there were three neatly written words: Kindness is free. Deeply affected, I stuck the bill on the corner of the windscreen, which served as a constant reminder of the favor I owed to this Mexican family. It w
18、as also because of the random kindness of these passing strangers that I eliminated, from that day on, my prejudice against indifferent strangers and determined to offer a helping hand to anyone in need.第二段作为结尾就更加开放，也可以有不同的处理方式，普遍有场地变换和原地感悟两种，前者把故事的时空拓展开来，后者就把笔墨用在主人公的内心感受。相比之下，拓展文章的时空很容易导致天马行空，不着边际。
19、所以在情节设置的时候还是建议尽量少用新增的叙事元素，而应该增加主要人物的细节刻画来达到强化主题的目的。延伸学习范文通读对比学习之后，可以把里面的关键用语或词组表达做一番整理记录，之后可以反复背诵复习。shrug onesshoulder耸肩膀（表否定回应）talk merrily开心聊天to our hearts content尽情express my appreciation 表达谢意timely assistance 及时帮忙showed me hospitality表达热情detailed address详细信息filled with gratitude 充满感恩give sba light hug 轻轻拥抱bid farewell to the family道别at this point此时此刻spot发现serveas担当constant reminder时刻回忆owe to亏欠eliminate消除prejudice against对的偏见offer a helping hand施予援手学科网（北京）股份有限公司