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1、2021年1月八省联考好心的墨西哥一家During this past year, Ive had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadnt bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big si
2、gns that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was
3、 too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I b
4、roke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tr
5、ied to put a $20 bill in the mans hand, but he wouldnt take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then
6、they would go home.注意：续写词数应为150左右；请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch.Paragraph 2:After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.故事容易理解，不至于要花很多时间去审题。情节很简单：我车子坏了，没有人帮忙，墨西哥一家帮忙，结束后小女孩问我饿了没有。至于续写，也很简单：结合第二段我打开纸袋，毫无疑问：这个纸袋肯定是food。当然
7、你要写其它也可以，逻辑说得通就可以。第一段续写：小女孩一家给我food。第二段续写：我看到食物后的心理。学生考完后也反应，这个题目让我们有话可写，不像之前模拟题文章都很难看懂。有话可写，不代表能写好，原因是：有些学生可能觉得几句话就可以结束一段。文学中的很多打断描写其实就是一句话的概括，关键就是能不能放开拓展。这篇文章关键是刻画小女孩。对了，我最喜欢刻画小女孩，因为小孩子的心灵是最纯洁的，那什么能极具代表性？这其实和我写过的圣诞节的小女孩文章差不多，就是：孩子的笑声。我突然想到：她在丛中笑。这个太好了，就这句让我充满了灵感。嗯，无须多言，一句足矣！下水文：第一段：When I was abou
8、t to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch.1. Not until then did I hear my stomach rumbling.（句式：倒装。同时用到拟声词rumble说明我饿了，不直接说hungry）I shrugged awkwardly.（很短的一个动作，shrug，表示我的尴尬）A smile of sympathy flickering across her face, she suddenly turned around and darted toward her truck.（小女孩的同情，加上动作链来突出女孩的
9、热情）For split seconds, the girl turned up breathlessly, a paper bag held tightly in her hand.（小女孩拿来一个纸袋，这里开始和第二段衔接。此处我简化了很多词，本来写了很多）“Here you are. It willdo you good.” She stammered in broken English, grinning mysteriously.（这里我抖了一个包袱：为什么她神秘笑？这也是为第二段铺垫，这里broken English照应文中他们是墨西哥人，mysteriously是包袱）Maybe
10、, it was her toy she didnt need any longer.（我的想法）I waved to the family, seeing them walking across the street hand in hand.（纯粹是为了衔接下一句）第二段：After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.In sight came a hamburger and a 20-dollar bill, to which a note was attached.（一般用倒装句来让一个东西出场，包袱解开）It
11、 read, “I bought them with all my savings. Good luck.”（不需要解释，本来我也是写了很多，字数限制，都简化掉了）As if a bolt of lighting struck me, I gaped in gratitude and meanwhile felt a stab of guilt for my misunderstanding her goodwill.（描写我的震惊。这种描写手法太多了，我用的是比喻，同时用gape动作）I looked out of the window eagerly only to find their
12、truck just alongside.What a coincidence!（无巧不成书！这是文学手法）The little girl returned me a sweet smile, her tinkling laughter filling the air.（这里我想刻画女孩的可爱，我脑子里想到：她在丛中笑。为了唤起一种艺术画面的美感，我用银铃笑声）It was the first time I was not sick of my car trouble but lucky for seeing a beautiful heart.（照应第一段，突出主题：美丽的心灵）翻译：我正要
13、说再见，女孩问我有没有吃午饭。直到此刻，我才听到肚子咕咕地叫唤着。我尴尬地耸了耸肩。她的脸上闪过同情的笑容，突然小女孩转过身，朝她家的卡车飞奔过去。不一会，女孩气喘吁吁地出现了，手里紧紧握着一个纸袋。“给你，它会对你有用。”她结结巴巴地用并不完整地英语说道，挺神秘地笑着。可能，这就是她并需要地玩具吧。我目送他们手挽手穿过马路，很感激地朝他们挥了挥手。等他们离开后，我进了我了吉普车，打开纸袋。眼前是一个汉堡和20美元，还有一张便条贴在上面，写道：我用了所有的积蓄买了它们。祝好运。我目瞪口呆，内心满是感激，似乎一股闪电击中了我。同时我为我误解了小女孩的好意感到阵阵的内疚。我急切朝窗外看，正看到了他
14、们的卡车就在旁边。多么巧合啊！小女孩朝我笑得很甜，她银铃般的笑声弥漫在空气中。参考范文1When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch.I shookmy head and said no, wondering why she asked such a question was shegoing to treat me to lunch or something? “Wait a minute,” said the girl, andthen she went back to the truck. After a
15、few minutes she came back with apaper bag. “Here are some Mexican snacks and you can have some whenyou are hungry,” the girl smiled. I was so surprised and touched that wordsalmost failed me. I just said a “WOW!” instead of a “Thank you!” when Itook the bag.After they left, I got into my Jeep and op
16、ened the paper bag.When I sawwhat was in the bag, I was overcome with a mixture of respect andgratefulness. In addition to the snacks, there was the $20 bill. What a kindand respectable family! They are a perfect example of what kindness reallymeans. And Im sure I will pay it forward.参考范文2When I was
17、 about to say goodbye, the girl asked if Id had lunch.Of course not, for I had been trapped there for quite a few hours. She then had a word with her parents and went back to their truck. A few minutes later she came back with a paper bag. “Thats Mommys hand-made taco,” explained the girl. “Its so y
18、ummy that you must love it.” I was starving to death after all that exhausting work so I took the Mexico-originated food, grateful and deeply moved. Then we waved goodbye to each other.After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.Inside the bag was a chicken taco. The next few minute
19、s saw my wolfing down the delicious food. Tears welled up as I was chewing. It was awesome to know that while many people tend to ignore those in need, there are some kind-hearted ones who go out of their way to lend a hand. The good deed the foreign family did will never escape me. I am going to pa
20、ss it down to create a much friendlier world.助人类读后续写主旨句语料1. Many years have passed, but I will never forget the lesson Arthur taught me: Life is meaningful when you can give a hand to those in trouble / need. （感悟）2. Until now, every time I recall this unforgettable experience, my heart flutters with
21、 a current of warmth not only for the kindness we gave but also for the belief, companionship and satisfaction we received.（情）3. The room light leaked through the curtains, casting lengthy shadows behind us, silently showing what the true meaning of Thanksgiving was. (景)4. The sun was setting and th
22、e night was falling, but the smiles of people who received our help lit up our day and decorated our Thanksgiving, which were the best gifts for us. (景)5. The roses given, the fragrance in hand. (谚语)6. A small gesture of kindness does generate great blessings, even lighting up the gloomy world someo
23、ne deeply sinks in. A lamp is lighted and my heart is warmed, which is valued in my deep heart forever.（感悟）7. Yet when we gave out the food, smiles of heartfelt appreciation could be seen on all those pale and weather-beaten faces, radiating enough warmth to melt the coldest winter.（自然收尾）8. The litt
24、le act of kindness reminded everyone of what is more important in our life: sharing our love, which warmed everyones heart in the tough time.（评价）9. Light a lamp and warm a heart.10. As long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a better place to live in.11. Sow love sunshine, warm your heart and my heart.12. In a world where people can be so focused on what theyre doing, a random act of kindness can make all the difference.13. The grace of dripping water should be reciprocated by a gushing spring.14. Love makes the world go around.学科网（北京）股份有限公司