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1、读后续写原文：The Christmas holidays were fast approaching, and we had ordered many gifts online. So, when the doorbell rang, I was sure some of the packages had arrived. I ran to the door and swung it open, but no one was there. I sensed something and looked down, only to find a beautiful calico kitten（杂色
2、猫）sitting there, looking up at me with big, intelligent eyes.There was no way that she could have rung the doorbell by herself, was there?We figured that someone had found the kitten somewhere and left her there, and then the person rang the doorbell and ran away. They accurately guessed we would we
3、lcome an additional family member and take care of her.My husband called her our little angel, so we named her Angelica accordingly. She had a calm aura（ 气 质 ）about her as she walked straight into our home and hearts, fitting in perfectly. It seemed as if she was always meant to be in this big house
4、 with us. She was an old soul and turned out to be the perfect companion. Always by my side, she was more like a puppy than a kitten. Wise beyond her years, she enjoyed wandering through the tunnels and mysterious rooms as much as I did, but with much less fear. Angelica the calico was courageous.So
5、, I learned from her and decided to be brave, too. There was an underground stone cellar（地窖）I had been eager to explore. The only way in was down a rickety（摇晃的）ladder to its dark depths. I guessed it was an old root cellar, probably twelve feet deep.I had promised my husband that I wouldnt explore d
6、angerous areas unless he or someone else was around. Though I knew I was sort of afraid, I figured that Angelica would count as my companion. I was ready to explore this cellar, and so was she.I equipped myself with a good flashlight and warm clothes and carefully started down the rickety ladder whi
7、le Angelica was looking down at me from above. Suddenly, something unexpected happened. Faint cracks and a sudden crash were what I could remember.注意：1. 续写词数应为 150 左右；2. 请按如下格式作答。Paragraph 1: Paragraph 2: It seemed my companion, Angelica,was my last hope. 文本分析：本篇故事主题语境为人与自然。故事主要内容为：“我们”捡到了一只杂色猫，它聪明，
8、可爱，爱探险。“我们”把它看作最好的伙伴。在它的影响下，“我”冒险去了丈夫一直不准“我”去的地窖。结果，“我”摔进了地窖。最终在小猫的帮助下，“我”脱离了困境。文章第四段提到了地窖可能有12英尺深。所以，在续写内容中，“我”很有可能受伤了。所给文本的最后一段提到“我”带着手电筒，穿着暖和的衣服，而Angelica则在上面看着“我”。所以，在续写的文章中，手电筒可能好用，但也有可能摔坏了。第一段的情节可以这样设计：根据第一段的段首句“我”醒来只看到了石地板上的梯子的零散碎块，说明“我”摔下来之后晕过去了。所以，醒来后，“我”的反应是想要爬起来，却发现自己受伤了。而在第二段段首句，似乎Angeli
9、ca是“我”最后的希望，此句暗示在续写的第一段，“我”努力自救，但失败了。而在最绝望的时刻，“我”看到、听到或想到了Angelica，这样就可以顺利衔接到第二段。第二段的情节可以按以下思路设计：第二段的结尾应该是“我”被及时救出来，所以第二段的开头衔接的是“我”想办法让Angelica去找人帮忙。而Angelica走了之后，“我”焦急地等待，不知结果如何。当获救之后，回扣主题Angelica是“我们”最好的伙伴。参考范文：Paragraph 1: I woke up with pieces of the rotting, broken ladder lying around me on the
10、 stone cellar floor. An acute pain tearing me into pieces, I struggled to my feet and glanced at the remote ray of light with frustration. Learning that I had to get out of the twelve-foot-deep cellar by myself, I grabbed the bump on the wall and started to climb up. The broken ashlight on the groun
11、d witnessed my vain attempts to escape from the situation. Eventually, I collapsed onto the ground, trembling helplessly. Suddenly, a faint meow came into my ears. It was my little angel, with its calm aura as usual！Paragraph 2: It seemed my companion, Angelica, was my last hope.“Angelica, go and fi
12、nd Dad!”I cried with all my strength. Eyeing me with its intelligent eyes for a moment, the calico kitten ran away. Staring at the entrance, I couldnt help wondering whether she went to seek help or just to play. My only hope of survival dimmed gradually. After what seemed to be centuries,hurried fo
13、otsteps broke the dead silence. It was my intelligent companion that found my husband to rescue me! Having left the dark cellar, I lifted my little angel, Angelica, up, murmuring my heartfelt gratitude. Undoubtedly, it was a blessing to have met such a perfect companion in the cold winter!范文分析：动作线：挣
14、扎着站起来，了解形势试图爬出地窖失败后崩溃地瘫坐在地上看到Angelica并求救 Angelica 离开后焦急地等待获救。情感线：刚开始的沮丧自救失败时的崩溃看到 Angelica 时产生一丝希望等待中的焦急获救后的感激。在语言方面：在范文第一段的段首句衔接，用acute, tear. into pieces, struggle来体现“我”受伤的情况，remote ray of light烘托出“我”渴望逃出去但又希望渺茫的困境；而collapse onto the ground, dead silence则体现出我的绝望；the twelve-foot-deep cellar, thebro
15、ken flashlight, intelligent companion, tremble, its calm aura, angel,很好地与原文形成了内容上的有效衔接和呼应。在语法方面：An acute pain tearing me into pieces,使用了独立主格结构；The brokenashlight on the ground witnessed.使用了高级语法无灵主语；It was. that.强调句式；. whether she went.，after what seemed to be centuries宾语从句，after what seemed to be centuries宾语从句。eventually, suddenly, after whatseemed to be centuries, undoubtedly, having left.起到了很好的衔接作用。学科网（北京）股份有限公司