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1、Week 3道歉信Monday 满分范文晨诵满分优范本感悟作文并背诵Dear Bob,(表达歉意)I ni writing to apologize to you for not being able to accompanyyou to the bookstore tomorrow as planned.(解释失约原因)The reason why I will fail to go there for our appointment ist h e r e a s o n w h y .i s t h a i表语从句说明失约原因that 1 have to attend a family
2、get-together tomorrow when my cousin Peter willreturn home from Beijing.M y p a r e n t s j u s t t o l d m e t h a t w e are g o i n g t ow e l c o m e h i m a n d h a v e d i n n e r t o g e t h e r.T h e y k e p t t h i s a s e c r e t i n o r d e r t o g i v em e a s u r p r i s e.P e t e r a n
3、d I g r e w u p t o g e t h e r w h e n w e w e r e k i d s a n d l a t e r h ew e n t t o B e i j i n g f o r h i g h s c h o o l.I t i s e x c i t i n g f o r m e t o s e e h i m a g a i n a f t e r h a l fa y e a r.(请求理解+另约时间)1 hope you can understand my situation and forgiveme.Would you mind if
4、1 suggest we go to the bookstore next weekend?TW 婷地再次约定时间(再次表示 道歉)()n c e a g a i n,I a p o l o g i z e f o r a n y i n c o n v e n i e n c e c a u s e d.Lo o k i n g f o r w a r d t o y o u r r e p l y.Yours sincerely,Li Hua(2016新课标全国卷m)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约,请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约
5、时间。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Bob,Yours sincerely,Li Hua仿写再借鉴仿照范本中的句式补充范文并背诵Dear Tom,(由于下周不能和你一起去上海迪士尼乐园,我写信向你道歉).(我不能和你一起去的原因是)I had my left foot injured the otherday.I have to put off our travel to Shanghai,which was scheduled next week.The doctor told me to stay at homefor a month,so(你介意
6、我建议一个月后再去吗?)(我希望你理解我的处境并原谅我).rmlooking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.Yours sincerely,Li Hua假设你是新华中学的学生李华,你和英国朋友Tom约好下周去上海迪士尼乐园游玩,但你因脚部受伤不能赴约。请根据以下要点给他写一封电子邮件。1.表达歉意;2.解释原因;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,Yours sincerely,Li HuaT uesday题型素材积累素材3、道歉与遗憾背满分词单词apology(v.apo
7、logize)n.道歉;trouble/bother n.&v.麻烦;misunderstandingn.误解;forgive v.宽恕;inconvenience n.不便;excuse/pardon v.原谅;fault n.过错;regret n.&v.遗憾短语owe sb.an apology 应向某人道歉;accept ones apology 接受某人的道歉;put sb.into much trouble给某人添了很多麻烦;be sorry for sth.对某事表示歉意;expressone*s regret表达某人的遗憾;do sb.wrong冤枉某人背满分句型夺人眼球开头句
8、1.I would like to give you my apology for.对于.我向你道歉。2.I owe vou an apology for not being able to inform you.我没能及时通知你,向你道歉。3.I apologized most sincerely for what I said that day.I didnt mean to hurt you.我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。4.I am sorry to say that Im unable to attend your birthday party because
9、my father is ill.很抱歉我不能去参加你的生日派对,因为我的父亲病了。.5.Im writing to apologize for./I am writing to say sorry for.我写这封信是因道歉。6.I am writing to express/convey my heartfelt apology to you.我写信向你表达真切的歉意。亮点出彩篇中句1.I feel awfully sorry about it and want vou to know what happened.为此我感到非常内疚,所以想告诉你实情。2.Much to my regret
10、 I was unable to keep my engagement to meet you at the park gate.很抱歉我没有遵守约定在公园门口等你。.3.I am sorry for my not being able to attend your party due to the fact that.我非常抱歉不能参加晚会是因为4.The reason why I failed to show up is that I had something urgent to attend to.我未能出现的原因是我有急事要处理。5.Please forgive/excuse me
11、for not being able to inform you.请原谅我没能及时通知你。6.I expressed mv deep regret over the misunderstanding between us.我为我们之间的误会表示遗憾。韵味无穷结尾句1.Anyway(用于支持、补充先前的陈述),I feel so sorry for what had happened.无论如何,我对发生的事感到非常抱歉。2.I hope that you will understand and forgive me.我希望您可以理解并原谅我。3.Ill try to make up for my
12、 fault.我将尽力弥补我的过错。4.I apologize to you for all the inconvenience caused.我为引起的所有不便向你表示歉意。5.I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.我真心希望你能接受我的道歉,并理解我的处境。学写满分句1.很抱歉给你带来这么多麻烦。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
13、 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _2.我对今晚不能参加你的派对感到遗憾。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
14、 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _W ednesday满分模板巧用题型微攻略与情分析题型解读写作步骤2016年全国卷I
15、I考杳写道歉信未来高考可能会利用微信这种方式对道歉信进行再考查道歉信是因为自a的过失或疏忽.给别人带来了麻烦或损失.发觉后为r给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。道歉信应该反映出自己具体的过失或疏忽.解释的理由要真实而详细,态度要减息、语言要诚挚.从而取得收信人的谅解第一步:陈述道歉的原因,表达歉意第二步:解释原因.取得对方原谅或布新约定第三步:再次致歉,提出补救措施满分巧模板Dear.Im writing you this letter to show my apology.Im truly sorry that 表明写信的目的。(道歉的原因).The reason why was that (事 件
16、 的 原 因).解释自己过失或疏忽的原因并请求原谅。Therefore its my fault not to(事件的结果).1 will try to makeup for my fault.Once again I do apologize for any inconvenience caused.Would you 再次表不歉意希望对方谅解 please accept my apology and understand my situation?I hope(提出期望).Yours sincerely.模板示范文Dear Anne,Pm indeed very sorry that I
17、didnt attend your birthday party the day before yesterday.I feel awful about itand apologize to you.It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party.I should have come and celebrated the importantoccasion with you,but the end-ofterm exam is around the corner,so I was so busy preparing for the
18、exam thatI forgot the appointment.I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me.Is it possible for you and meto have a private meeting after the exam?I do long for a pleasant chat with you.It is much to my regret that I missed the chance of such a happy get-together.Once again,please acceptm
19、y sincere apology.Yours truly,Li Hua亲爱的安妮,我前天不能参加你的生日聚会,真是抱歉。我对此感到很难过并向你道歉。你邀请我参加你的生日聚会真是太好了,我本应参加聚会和你一起庆祝这个重要的时刻,但是期末考试快到了,我忙于准备考试结果忘了约定。我希望你能理解我的处境并原谅我。考试之后你我单独见面可以吗?我渴望和你愉快地交谈。错过这样一个快乐聚会的机会真是令我遗憾。请再次接受我诚挚的道歉。李华T hu rsd ay考场作文研析试考场好题假定你是李华,在英国培训期间,你因为目击了一场交通事故,抢救伤者并告诉警察事故过程而上课迟到了,你的教师Mrs.Wilson感到生
20、气,批评了你。请你给她写封道歉信,要点如下:1.表达歉意;2.迟到原因;3,请求原谅。注意:1.词薪100左右,信的开头和结尾已给出;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Mrs.Wilson,Sincerely yours,Li Hua(请参考素材3道歉与遗憾”)练考场审题第 一 步 认 真 审 题 组 织 要 点体裁话题人称时态要点书信向老师道歉第一、三人称一般过去时道歉原因:迟到;迟到原因:目击事故、抢救伤者、向警察说明事故过程;再次道歉,请求原谅第 二 步 遣词造句设计亮点1.当我到达银行附近的十字路口时,我看见一辆白车开得很快以至撞倒了一个老妇人。锤炼词汇和句式(非谓语动词)
21、:When I reached the crossing near the bank,I saw a white car sofast that it an old lady.高级句式(省略句):the crossing near the bank,I saw a white car running so fast thatit knocked over an old lady.2.作为证人,我向警察详细描述了整个事件。锤炼词?匚:As the witness,I gave the police a description of the whole accident.高级句式(非谓语动词+短语
22、):the witness,I described the whole accident to the police第三步 美化成文 誉写清晰Handwriting also counts!聿写满分句满分句 I:It was already 8 oclock before I realized I would be late.学写句1:早已经午夜了他才意识到很晚了。满分句 2:When reaching Ihe crossing near the bank,I saw a while car running so fast that it knockedover an old lady.学写句
23、2:当观看篮球比赛时,我注意到一个男生打得很好,没人能比得上他。(equal)F rid a y 新鲜作文集训Writing 1因失约而道歉 2017洛阳统考假如你是李华,你的外教Ms Jenkins约你本周六上午教她制作中国结(Chinese k not),但你因故无法前往,你的朋友韩梅梅将代你去,请写一封电子邮件给Ms Jenkins,说明相关情况。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。Dear Ms Jenkins,Yours,Li Hua(请参考素材3道歉与遗憾”,热点话题二“人际关系”)Writing 2|因丢东西道歉 2
24、017黑龙江吉林联考假如你是李华。你把好朋友Colin借给你的一件非常珍贵的物品丢了。请给他写一封英文短信说明情况。内容包括:1.物品丢失的经过:2.表达歉意;3.提出解决方案。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。Dear Colin,Yours,Li HuaW e e k e n d 循序写作训练从写对句子开始(三)记写作公式写作公式5主语+谓语(及物动词)+宾语+宾补+(状语)在某些及物动词后面.要用一个宾语+补语才能表达完整的意思。可作宾补的有:名词、形容词、副词、分词、不定式等。I f o u n d t h e t e
25、s t d i f f i c u lt.我发现试题很难。琢 W 1 S OT h e t e ac h e r as k e d m e t o h e lp h i m.老师叫我帮他。蠲-We s aw t h e t h i e f c au gh t.我们看到小偷被逑住了。镉丽-W写作公式6 There(+助动词/情态动词)+b e+主 语 在此句型中谓语动词行时可用表示存在的其他动词0 T h e r e w i ll b e mo r e s e r i o u s ai r p o llu t i o n.空气污染将会更严重。如 J i v e,s t a n d.l i e.a
26、 p p e a r t o b e/s e c m t o b e (好像 T h e r e s e e m s t o b e a l a c k o f c o m m u n i c a t i o n.看来是缺乏沟通。有),h a p p e n t o b e (碰巧有).u s e d t o b e (曾经有).T h e r e a p p e a r s t o b e n o d o u b t a b o u t i t.看来这是毫无疑问的了。r e m a i n (仍然)等替换。练写作技能I.以往考生典型病句诊断1.There have many students
27、 talking outside.2.There remain a great many birds are spending the winter here.3.It seems to be something wrong with him.4.There are going to hold two football matches this afternoon.5.You can find many students play basketball on the playground every day.6.The scene left me being in deep thought.7
28、.We must keep the room is warm.8.I think that a good idea to learn English well.n.根据上面句子的正确表达进行一对一再练习1.有很多学生坐在教室里。2.有许多人在争论这个问题。3.这个工程似乎有许多问题。4.下周将有一次英语演讲比赛。5.你会发现许多人在聚精会神地听他讲。6.如此做法让我陷入了沉思。7.我们必须保持我们学校的清洁。8.我认为充分利用现有的时间是一个好主意。川.用“主+谓+宾+补”句型补全下面的道歉信,并背诵成文Dear Tom,Im writing to send you my hearty gre
29、etings on your birthday.It*s a special day today and(我已为你准备好自制的礼物,主+谓+宾+补).Its a Chinese knot,whichstands for friendship,love and good luck.Please accept it,and(你会发现它很有意义,主+谓+宾+补).Im so soiTy that Ill have to be late for your birthday party this evening.My cousin,who lives in Beijing,iscoming to vis
30、it us,and(3)(莪的父母通知我去接他,主+谓+宾+补)al therailway station.But Ell get to your party the moment I take him to my home,so please wait for me to sing thebirthday song for you!Happy birthday and many happy returns of the day!Yours,Li Hua补充练一点用所给动词而展确形式填空,并背诵成文Dear Nick,Im writing to apologize to you for not
31、 having gone to the tea house to have tea with you yesterday evening.I feel very terrible about it and want you to know what(happen)to me yesterday evening.I wasbusy(write)my English composition,which was due today,till late into the night.I just(forget)our appointment!(4)(express)my apology,Id like
32、 to invite you to have supper in a Sichuan-style restaurant with me.The restaurant,(locate)in the main street,is especially famous for its Sichuan food.If you think itsOK,I(pick)you up at our school gate at 5:30 p.m.this Saturday.Once again,I should apologize formy inconvenience caused.Yours sincerely,Li Dong