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1、应用文之邀请信练习写作讲评讲义题目假设你是红星中学高二学生李华，请给你的外教Mr. Black写一封邮件，邀请他参加你们年级举行的英语读书会（reading circle）活动。邮件的内容包括：1. 介绍读书活动的相关信息（例如：时间、地点、活动内容等）；2. 说明你发出邀请的原因；3. 询问对方的意向。全文呈现（53字）Im writing to invite you to take part in the reading circle in Grade 3. It will be held in the library next Monday from 3:30 to 5:00 pm. W
2、e are going to read some popular English stories. Could you come and give us some guidance?We are looking forward to your coming.题目简介作为同样考查频繁且模式明确的题型，各位同学在考前必须熟练掌握邀请的写作思路和基本素材。这篇试题的标准答案只有53字，原因在于它并不是一篇“写作范文”，而是最基本的写作要点呈现。也就是说，标准答案里涉及的要点在你的文章里必须有所体现，同时需要扩充其它细节让文章更加成型。所以接下来，我们逐个要点对原文进行改写，让它成为一篇合格的邀请信。
3、开头原文：Im writing to invite you to take part inthe reading circle in Grade 3.我写信是要邀请您参加高三年级的英语读书会活动。改写：Hope this email finds you well. I am writing to invite you to the upcomingEnglish Reading Circleevent.展信佳。我写信是要邀请您参加即将举办的英语读书会活动。如果邀请信的对象是熟人，只要开门见山地使用邀请功能句式表明写作目的即可。注意，在这一段中不需要涉及任何具体细节，只要给出活动名称即可。活动时
4、间地点原文：It will be heldin the library next Monday from 3:30 to 5:00 pm.活动将于下周一下午3:30至5:00在图书馆举行。改写：The event is scheduled to take placein our school libraryfrom 3:30 to 5:00 pmnext Monday.活动定于下周一下午3:30至5:30在学校图书馆举行。时间地点也是标准写法，“活动将举行”的简化版是“it will be held”，复杂版就是“the event is scheduled to take place”，可以
5、任意选择。另外别忘了之前讲到过，先地点后时间，顺序由小到大。活动内容原文：We are going to read some popular English stories.我们会阅读一些流行的英语故事。改写：The theme of the event is“Exploring American Literature”,and we plan tohave a lively discussion about popular American novels.这次活动的主题是“探索美国文学”，我们计划讨论流行的美国小说。就活动内容而言，原文的要点过于简略了，可以从“活动主题”和“具体动作”两方面
6、构思符合题目要求的内容。邀请原因原文：Could you come and give us some guidance?您能来给我们一些指导吗？改写：The reason why I am inviting you is thatyour insights and knowledge of English literature wouldhelp us gain a deeper understandingof the books and the language.I believe your presence would greatly benefitthe discussion.我邀请您的
7、原因是，您对英语文学的见解和知识将帮助我们对书籍和语言有更深的理解。相信您的出席会让讨论更有价值。这部分内容是文章主体部分的重点，篇幅肯定要在文章里占有一定分量。一方面需要掌握表示原因的基本句式“The reason why I am doing sth is that 我做某事的原因是”，另一方面是一系列动词短语和邀请功能句式，作为写作素材需要重点积累。询问意向原文：We are looking forward to your coming.我们期待着您的到来。改写：We would be delighted if you could join us, and we hope that yo
8、u will find it a worthy and enjoyable experience. Would you be interested in this event? Please let me know.如果您能加入，我们会非常高兴，希望您觉得这是一次值得和愉快的经历。您感兴趣吗？请告诉我。文章最后一段就是完整的邀请信交际套路了，如果目前仍然不能随手写出同等档次的内容，建议全部熟记。改写后共计129字，全文如下：Hope this email finds you well. I am writing to invite you to the upcoming English Rea
9、ding Circle event.The event is scheduled to take place in our school library from 3:30 to 5:00 pm next Monday. The theme of the event is “Exploring American Literature”, and we plan to have a lively discussion about popular American novels. The reason why I am inviting you is that your insights and
10、knowledge of English literature would help us gain a deeper understanding of the books and the language. I believe your presence would greatly benefit the discussion.We would be delighted if you could join us, and we hope that you will find it a worthy and enjoyable experience. Would you be interest
11、ed in this event? Please let me know.作文批改这篇文章的问题如下：1、开头的自我介绍没有必要，对方是你的外教，应该知道你是谁；2、“you have any time to attend our ”略显直译，可以改为“you are available for our ”，更加简练；3、“we really needforyour direction”应去掉介词for，改为“we really need your direction”；4、“make English skill usage effectiveness”是混乱的，建议改为“make Engli
12、sh usage more effective 让英语应用更有效”，用到的是“make sth adj”的动词短语结构；5、“share our favourite booksstory”中单复数错误，应为stories；6、“changeour own experience”中动词错误，应为“exchange 交换”；7、“when we readthis book”同样单复数不准确，应为these books；8、尾段“If . We sincerely ”应为同一句话，不能使用句号断开，We也不应该大写，应为“If , we sincerely ”，固定交际套路务必写作准确。全文的完成度非常高，语句也很顺畅，但是出现了一个致命的问题，就是缺失了活动的时间安排。如果没有明确时间，对方如何知道自己能否参加呢？这是邀请信的基本元素，一定不能遗漏。学科网（北京）股份有限公司